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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: maria_awan

PART 6

pritha comes into sanyogita lap and sleeps ,now sanyogita is again sitting on the bed again and sanyogita is giving thapki to pritha ,prithvi is watching that his jungilli billi and his sister are so close to each other and he was looking 4 her in the outer world when she was in his own world, prithvi cames out his thoughts when sanyogita calls her and says"bigras rahis kahan kho gay ho tum "
"kuch nahi bas tumko aur pritha ko daik raha tha aur soch rahha tha "says prithvi
"kiya "says sanyogita
"tum pritha ko kaba se janti ho aur itnay nasdek kaisay "says prithvi
"mein itnay nasdek is liyay hoon kay hum ik jan 2 jisam hain , hum suraj aur uski roshni ki tarha hain , hamesha ik dusary kay sath, hum asman aur taron ki tarha ik ki wajah se dusra , hum phool aur uski khusbu ki tarha sath mein hi milan gay jab bhi talash karo gay humein😉"says sanyogita
"matlab"says sanjam
"pritha to tum se bohat hi naszdeek nazar ati hia par kaisay"says pundir
"pritha jis tarha tumari godh mein so rahi hai jaisay who phoolon kay jahan meion ho "says chand
"tum aur pritha bilkul hamary se bhi ziyada ik lag tay ho"says arjun
"sayi kaha hum bohat nasdek hain ik dusray kay "says sanyogita
"mein tumary gurukul janay kay bad hamesha yahan aya karti thi maa kay sath , bari maa aur baba sa bohat akila mehssos karti thi tumaray bina aur mein hamesha unkay sath hoti thi , babasa bohat khush hotay thay hamaray anay se kehaty kay tumaray anay se is mehal mein jan agayoi hai kash tum jaisi ik guriya hmaary pass hoti aur mein kaha ap kay pass bhi ik aisi hi guriya ajay gi aur jab unko prith akay anay ka pata chala to unhon ney humko bohat thofay diyay aur gumaya jaisay kay hum chaty thay kyun kay pita ji humko kahain jany jo nahi daitya thay , aur hum ne babasa se wachan liyay kay is guriya kanaam hum likin gay giving a thapki with a lovingly look to pritha aur who maan gay "says sanyogita
"phir" says prithvi wanna know more about her closeness to his family
"pritha kay paida honay tak hum yahin rahin bari maa ka diyan matlab unko khush raknay kay liyay aur jab pritha paida hui to sab se pehlay humne usko apni godh mein liya aur humney is ka naam is kay ear mein bataya aur sab ko yeh naam bohat pasaand kiya "says sanyogita
"acaha yeh hi naam kyun rakha "says chand
"yeh naam hum ney is liyay rakha kyun baiti ik aisa zariya hoti hai jahan bhi who jay gi ap kay wanch ki rasamon ko agay baray gi aur ikpita kay is se achi baat kiya ho gi aur jab hamari pritha is prithvi pay kisi kay ghar jay gi to who yahan ki rasmon ko agay day gi is liyay mein pritha naam rakha aur waisay bhi tumara naam bhi prithvi matlab zameen aur zameen rasmon kay bina adhuri rehti hai "says sanyogita looking toward prithvi
"hmmmmmmm,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,tum ne sayi kaha "says prithvi not wanna say yes to her but cannot control himself suddenly pritha makes a moves and gets up ,she is rubbing her eyes,when she open her eyes completely she saw her diij sitting with her brothers in his room
"diij hum yahan kiya karay hain humko apny kamray mein hona chay tha "says pritha to her
"gun mein tumaray bhaya se kiya hau wada pura karnay ayi aur kuch dair tum bhi yahan agayi neend mein aur ronay lagi thi aur meriu godh mein akar so gayi phir se aur meintumary bayion se baat karnay lagi "says sanyogita
"wachan matlab who ap kay baray mein sach wala "says pritha
"haan who hi wala "says sanyogita
"sab bat diya ap ne "says pritha
"nahi bas kuch hi batay hai ab unko hamary baray mein jana tha "says sanyogita
"pritha tum nandini ko janti thi aur bataya nahi apnay bhaya ko "says prithvi takinh her into his lap
"hmm ,,,,,,,,bhaya who humne wachan diya tha aur ap to janty ho ik rajput apna wachan nahi thortay "says pritha with innocence and hugs him
prithvi smiles at this and says "yeh to hia ik rajput ka kartavay par wachan kaisa"
"humney diij ko wachan diya tha kay unka sach whi khud batayin gya kyun sach batanay ka wachan unhin ney hi to diay tha par nahi bata payi thi yatra mein"says pritha and goes into sanygita lap
"yeh bhi sayi tha hai "says prithvi
"apko pata hai diij meri har baat manti hai jo mein kehtai hoon bilkul waisay karti hai"says pritha
"acha kiya karti hain ap ki diij"says prithvi looking at sanyogita
"diij ko jab bhi bhulati hoon ati hian holi diwlai har taivar par diij meray sath hoti hain aur kabhi bhi who na nahi karti "says pritha and wucikly hugs sanyogita and says "ap bohat achi ho diij .hum ap se bohat pyar kartay hain "says pritha
"hmmm,,,,,,makan lagay jarah hai diij ko gun ki taraf se"says sanogita
"nahi to ap bohat achay ho"says pritha
"mein achi hoon kyun kay meri gun meri choti si guriya bohat achi "says sanyogita and hold her nose and moves it and then leave it and they bot laugh and forgot they are not alone they are in their own world
and then arjun coughs and says "hum bhi hain yahan "sanyogita says "cahlo ab bohat raat ho gai hai kal jkarain bajkhi ki baatein "and gets up to leave
prithvi says "abhi "like he didnot want her to go
"prithvi who yahin kal bat karklaina"says arjun in his ear but evryone hears this
pritha says "diij hum aisay nahi jayin ap hum ko apni godh mein lay kar jayin "
sanyogiat smile sat it and take her into her lap and ,moves and turn bcak at the door and says " hum yahin hai abhi bohat kuch hai tum sab ko batany kay liay bhimdev se jhura aur bhi bohat kuch . hum kahin nahi jarahay hain is liayay ab aram se so jayo bogray rahis aur inko bhi sonay do" looking at rest of and leaves
next part wiull here soon and i hope u all like it



Lovely update dear..thanks a ton.....Pritha & Sanyo r so cute & innocent!⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: maria_awan

Part 7

this one is specially 4 rumi and kalyaniand shona deari am missing them
sanyogita leaves the room and everyone one in prithv room are lost what does sanyogita said right now ,they all look to each other and then to prithvi who si lost in his thoughts ,suddenly sanjam speaks out "abhi nandini ney kiya kaha bhim dev kay baray mein "
"pata nahi " says chand
"kuch samaj nahi aya "says pundir
"nandini aur bhimdev ,,,,,,,,,,,"says arjun
"jungilli billi aur bhim dev kay bary mein kiay kehan chati thi samaj nahi araha hai who to bhim dev ko janti hi nahi to phir kiya"says prithvi with atense look
"ho sakta hai bhim dev kay baray mein kuch suna ho yatra mein who hi batan chati ho aur kiya ho ga "says arjun
"ho sakta hai "says chand
"haan aisa hi kuch ho ga "says pundir
"waisay.............."says arjun
"ab kiya waisay"says prithvi
"tum nahi chatay thay who jay bohat kuch suna tha usse ya suna tha haal dil"says arjun who is laughin now
"ji nahi aisa kuch nahi hai"says prithvi who is blushing now and sudeenly the whole atmoshphere i schange which was there 2 min ago "achi ji aisa to waisa kiya tha "says pundir who also wana tease prithvi today "tum bhi "says prithvi to pundir
"mein bhi kiya ab to hum sab hain tumko tang karnay kay liya "saya pundir and they have a beautifull smile on thier face
"acha ab so jatay hain subha ko kam bhi hiam mehal mein aur ab koi mazak nahi "says to arjun by putting a hand in his mouth who was going to say something again and everyone went into their room next morning prithvi is doing surya namashkar with his family jaichand , somehswar and anangpal .after completinh their surya namashkar jaichand says" prithvi beta ap ka bahaduri aur talvar bazi kay baray mein bohat suna hai "
"prithvi bohat bahudur hai kabhi nahi harta "says maharaj anagpal
"jo sacha hota hai who nahi harta duniya "says prithvi
"aur waisay bhi kaka jani ik yodha to apni kari sans tak larta hia na aur apni praja ko khush rakna ik rajkumar ka farz hota hai na "says prithvi
"bilkul sayi kaha par bohat muskil hoti is rastay mein par sach ka sath jis kay sath ho who hamesha jeet ahia "says maharaj jaichand
prithvi friends came there and ask them to come 4 pooja as it was going to start .
they are leaving toward the pooja hall. all the friends are with prithvi behind maharajr someshawar and maharja jaichand and anangpal,they enter the mandir first ,a nd prithvi is looking 4 nandini and they hears a beautifull soung from mandir and they came into mandir and saw a beautifull girl doing arti and singing a bajan ,
Kaanha, ab toh murli ki, madhur suna do taan,
O Kaanha, ab toh murli ki, madhur suna do taan,
Main hu teri, prem deewani, mujhko tum pehchan,
madhur suna do taan
,


O kaanha,ab toh murli ki, madhur suna do taan,
Jabse tum sang maine apne, naina jod liye hai,
Kya maiya kya babul sabse, rishte tod liye hai.
Tere milan ko, vyakul hai ye, kabse mere praan.
madhur suna do taan,


O kaanha, ab toh murli ki, madhur suna do taan,
Saagar se bhi gehari mere, prem ki geheraai, lok, laaj,
Kul ki mariyada, saj kar main toh aayee.
Meri preeti se, o nirmohi, ab na bano anjaan,
madhur suna do taan,
O kaanha, ab toh murli ki, madhur suna do taan,
Main hu teri, prem deewani, mujhko tum pehchan,
madhur suna do taan, madhur suna do taan,
madhur suna do taan
the girl that is singing the bajan is none other trhan our sanoygita and evrone is lost in her voice and prithvi is feeling so happy seeing this and when tha bajan is finifhed everyone gives praises to sanyogita 4 her voice ,
"hamari beti kay galay meinto saravati maa hai "says maharaj someshwar
"bilkul sach kaha ap ne kitnya dino baad dil ko sukun aya hai "says maharani kamlavati
"ap k gungun to har cheez mein kamal hai "says maharaj jaichand
and sanyogita is face is getting red after so much praise and says "hum prasad daiaty hian sab ko "
prasad daitay who prithvi kay pass ati hia who is still lost in his thoughts and had a smile on his face ,prithvi friends are enjoying ,suddenly he recives a elboe in his stomach by sanyogita and came back to his world and says "ah ah yeh kiya tha"to her
"kiya hua beta "says maharani naintara lokking at them
"kuch nahi choti maa bas ik jungilli billi agayi thi mandir mein "says and looking at sanyogita
"billi" and smiles and leaves from there
"choti maa kyun hasi"says prithvi to him self
"who tumari samaj mein nahi ay ga bigary rahis"a reply came from the girl standing infront of him witha angry look
"ab tumko kiya hua"says prithvi
"tumko sharam nahi ati hai mandir mein karay ho aur kahain aur hi khoya ho "says sanyogita
"who mein to tumari ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,kuch nahi as he not wanted to let her know the truth
"mein kiya ab kiya hau"says sanyogita
"kuch naahi"and sanyogita leaves from there
"kiya hua"says arjun who is again in a teasing mood like ever
"kuch nahi"says chand
"nahi to kahan thay tum"saya pundir
"mein aur kahan yahin to tha "says sanjam
" yahn aur tum mandir mein ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,bigray rahis"says arjun looking at prithvi
"kiya"lokking back at them
"yeh sab kiya tha "says arjun
"kuch nahi "says prithvi
"sach kyun nahi kehat y usse har bar jhoot bol kar baat taal daitay ho "says sanjam
"tum phir shuro ho gay "says who is looking 4 a excuse to rum from there other wise they r not goingto leave him today
everone is on the their seats waiting 4 breakfast and ladies are coming from kitchen and the food is been serve and everyone is busy in eating the food and after firts bites everyone says "nasta to bohat mazay ka hai aj koi khas baat kisnay bany hai"
"aj nasta hmari gungun ney bany hai "says maharani kamlavati
"gungun ap ne "says maharaj somehswar looking at sanyogita lovingly and comes to her and take her hand s in his own hand and says "ap ne nasta banya par ap abhi bohat choti hai rasoyi kay liayay agar ap ka hath jal jata to"who is tears in his eyes
seeinh this sanyogita says"baba sa hum ko kuch nahi ho ga ap hona hamary liyay aur ap kay liay nashta bana kar humko bohat khushi milti hia "
"ap ney kyun bany diya gungun ko "says maharaj to maharni kamlavati
"gungun ki icha thi aj sab kam who hi karay gi ap kay "says maharni kamlavati
"par agar ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,he stops as sanyogita put her hand on his mouth and says "babasa hum tik hain aur kuch nahi ho ga aur agar ap nay ansun bahay to hum wapsi chail jayin gay "says sanyogita
"nahi diij ap maat jana hum ap kay bina nahi reh saktay "says pritha who is sitting next to his brother heras this and comes runnigly to her and hugs her
"ab juch nahi khain gay aur ab ap kahin nahijany ki baat karin gi "says to sanyogita and hugs her both daughters and says "ap dono kay bina to hum kuch hain hi nahi "
Sanyogita "baba sa"
"ap dono baatein hikarin gay ya nasat khatm bhi karin gay"says maharaj jaichand who is happy to see this he is a part of this faimly where her daughter his the bigget priority 4 everyone
"ji ji "says maharaj someshwar and goes back at their seat and finishes his braekfast
prithvi and his friends are nit beliving they watche maharaj somsehwar so emotional 4 the first time for some one and sanyogita turns aroung and sees tjhey are looking at her .she got tears in her eyes and tried to go from their when ptitha stops her and says"ap nahi jayop gi na diij"
"nahi par aur kuch nahi bolo gi pewhlay nasta khatm karo phir bahir garden mein chailin gay hum "sasy sanyogita lovingly to pritha who finihes her breakfast
this is it 4 this time next part will here soon until the enjoy😳
i hope u all will like it and do comment plz all of u iam waiting 4 ur comments😊



Wow Lovely dear..Very well written & executed!⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: maria_awan

yah dear very soon nexr part is coming but iam waiting 4 my other india forums friends comments 😊

Ok maria.I'll wait😳.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
thanks megha 4 ur reply i was missing ur comments😉 where were u these days bilkul maza nahi ayi ap sab kay bina (rumi ,megha,kalyani.shona, niyati)😊thanks u r back
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Ok maria.I'll wait😳.

thanks rakhi next pat will be here on wed😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: maria_awan

thanks rakhi next pat will be here on wed😉

Welcome maria.Ok dear😳.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi everyone here is the precap 4 next part

😊Precap😊

sanyogita is worried about something and she doesnot want to tell to anyone but prithvi got to know why she is tense .is bhimdev the reason of sanyogita worriedness and if yes what will prithvi and his friends will do to take sanyogita out of it
Edited by maria_awan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
Wonderful and interesting precap.Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: maria_awan

Hi everyone here is the precap 4 next part

😊Precap😊

sanyogita is worried about something and she doesnot want to tell to anyone but prithvi got to know why she is tense .is bhimdev the reason of sanyogita worriedness and if yes what will prithvi and his friends will do to take sanyogita out of it



Thanks for the precap waiting eagerly for the update sweetie!😳😃

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Part 8

everyone is finished with the breakfast and leaves 4 their propective work .prithvi looks around but there is no sign of sanyogita and pritha .arjun says"who yahan nahi hain "
"haan ,,,,,,,,kiya kaha"says prithvi
"rajkumari sanyogita yahan nahi hain bahir ja chuki hain"says arjun "chalo hum bhi bahir chaltay hain yahan ab kuch maza nahi ay ga kisi ko"says sanjam
"kyun ,,,,,,,maza matlab"says pundir looking at sanjam who didnot get anything and then he recive a elbow from chand standing next to him "ah,,,,yeh kis liyay"says pundir with a grinning look to chand
"baat ko samjo bewaquf rajkumari yahan nahihain to.........."says chand in a wishper to pundir
"ah samaj gaya chalo chalo mujay bhi bahir jana hai"says pundir looking at prithvi
"kiya kusar pusar ho rahi hai tum dono mein "says prithvi feeling little irritaed now
"kuch nahi chal na yaar bahir chaltya hain warna mujay [hir bhuk lag jay gi "says arjun witha wicked smile toward the fruite on table and they went outside they are just having a walk into theplace and saw pritha playinmg with her friends but no sign of sanyogita ,they feel lilttle weird they went to pritha ,
"arre bhaya ao sab yaahan "says pritha who look at them standing there now
"meri guriya khel rahi hai ap sakiyonkay sath "says prithvi bending toward her
"ji bhaya ap bhi kehlo na meray sath "says pritha witha innoicne
"nahi ap khelo apni sakiyon kay sath ........taking abreak of two min he says
"ap ki diij mera matlab sanyogita kahan hai "says prithvi
"who diij to pata nahi kahan hai "says pritha to him
"pata nahi matalb "says prithvi witha worried look
"who diij keh rahi thi kuch dair kay liyay who bahir baaag mein baitna chati hain aur hum ko khelna tha to who hum ko khelnay kay yahan chor gayi "says pritha to prithvi "tik hai "says prithvi witha little relax look
"par bhaya who diij kuch "says pritha
"kiya diij ...........agay bolo"says prithvi who is again worried now
"diij kuch parishan lag rahi thi hum nay pucha kitni baar par unho nay bataya humko bas kahan kuch nahi bas zara si thak gayi hai"says pritha to prithvi with little worriedness
"haan kannoj se ajmer ka safar kar kay ayi hain kuch thak gayi tum khelo mein un se mil kar ata hoon"says prithvi who lied to her sis to make her happy and himsel got worried and goes out to look 4 her
in way arjun says"nandini aur thakan"
"aisa ho sakta hai kiya"says pundir
"kuch to hai jo usee kay aliva kisi ko nahi pata "says sanjam looking toward prithvi
"koi baat hai jo usay parishan kaarhi hai who aur thakn nahi ho sakti janat hon mein usko "says prithvi as he knows her better than anyone in this world and they are reached the garden and saw a girl sitting near a white witha paiting on pounds sides making its so beautifull and pound filled with water makes it some special gift 4 anyone who wants peace ,sanyogita one hand is in pound and she is looking into the water but lost in her some thought didnot knew that some one is standing near her
prithvi coughs and she turn aroung and stand quickly looking a like apuzzled game which is not finished but yet not started likea game is
"tum sab yahan kiya hua "says sanygita
"yeh hi hum puch nay ayay hain kay kiya hua "says prithvi
"kissiay kiya hau "says sanyogita
"yahan to tumary aliva koi parishan nahi lagat kisi ko"says prithvi lokking at her in her eyes
"aisays maat daiko humein kuch nah hai"says sanyogita to them
"kal raat kisi ne mujay kaha tha kay dost ka sath kabhi nahi chorti to aj khud muksil mein doston se dur ho rahi hai "says prithvi to her
"prithvi who ..........."says sanyogita
"bat kiya hai batao na hum hain sab tumaray sath phir kis baat ki chinta "says prithvi
"prithvi baat yeh hai ........... kal raat ko humein ik sandesh mila tha kisi ka aur us mein "says sanyogita who get quiet now
"sandesh"says all of them together looking at her
"haan humko ik sandesh mili tha kal raat ko jab hum tumse mil kar gay thay ,us sandesh mein likha tha tum kis se ziyada pyar karti hoon ap doston se ya apnay kartavay se "says sanyogita
"kiya is ka kiya matlab"says chand
"aur likha tha ap ne dosto se duur ho na tum ap kiya karo gi unko bacnahay kay liay kisay qurban karo gi tum rajkumari "says sanyogita tears are falling from her eyes
"tumarya kis dost ki baaray mein likha hai "says prithvi wiping her tears
"meri to sirf vaishali aur chamki aur ruplai hain dost inkay laiva koi nah hia"says sanyogiyta
"vaisahli"says chand ."chamki "says sanjam and "ruplai kaun hai"as chand and and sanjam love them but zaihr nahi kiya kabhi
"kahan hai is waqt who sab yahan bhula lo apni nazaroin kay samany "says prithvi
"mein sandesh baija jai unko unki ka to intazar karahi thi mein"says sanyogita still tears rolling down
prithvi wipes her tears and says "tum chinta maat karo sandesh to kab milay ga unko aur kab who ayin gay is ka intazar choro hum sab abhi ja kar unko lay kar atay hain"looking toward her friends who have put their hands on their swords and says "hum tumary sath hain chalo "
"par"says sanyogita
"kuch nahi honay day ap ki skayomn ko"says pundir
"haan hum hain ap kay dost"says chand thinking about vaishali
"hum kuch honay nahi dain gay"says sanjam thinking about chamki
"ap chinta maat karin hum ja rahy hain"says arjun who is reading to fight now
"tum sab hamary sath ho yeh to hum jantayu hain pat hum bhi jayin gay tumaary sath hamari kartavay hamaary doston kay parathi bhi aur kuch maat kehna ab humjaaray hain bas"says sanyogita looking at them and they leaves from there
this is all 4 now i hope u all like it waiting4 ur comments 😉
Edited by maria_awan - 15 years ago

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