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Sorry gals to have keep u waiting..Kalyani, Rumi & Shona dear pakka kal tak update kar doongaye!😳😃
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its ok megha di....take ur time...will wait!!.....par kya karoo ab intezar nahi hota!!

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its ok megha di....take ur time...will wait!!.....par kya karoo ab intezar nahi hota!!



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Ok Gals below is the Next Part of the Future Track Story Line....😳This one is a short update the next one would be a long one I promise!😳 I hope U All Enjoy reading it !😃

Recap:

Sanyo & PRC keep playing their aankh macholi......while Vaishali starts playing with Veer & Pundir standing in one corner keeps staring at her......thinking to himself...kitni sundar hai...aur kitni masoom bhi....Vaishali 2 keeps sneeking at Pundir ..... thinking to herself as to why is he staring at me like this......😆


Next Part:

After a short while when PRC & Sanyo are busy in their aankh macholi khel....Pundir begins to walk towards Vaishali lost in his own world of love for Vaishali.....& he bumps into a phool dan & he drops it on the floor ..Due to this PRC & Sanyo break their eye contact...& stare at Pundir & Vaishali laughs at Pundir's actions ..PRC walks upto Pundir & asks him tum theekh toh ho nah....At this Pundir stammers haan PRC mein bilkul theekh hoon but PRC cuts him off & looks towards Vaishali & says mujhe nahi lagta ki tum theekh ho..Chalo chalkar apne kamre mein thoda aaram kar loo ...PRC & Pundir leave.... Sanyo & Vaishali are now alone in the room ....Sanyo smiles at PRC 's words knowing what he meant ...when he looked towards Vaishali & told Pundir that he is not in his senses...Seeing Vaishali smile Sanyo quickly asks Vaishali kya baat hai Vaishali aaj tumhe kuch jyaada hi hasi aa rahe hai....Vaishali smiles at Sanyo shyly & says nahi toh aisa kuch nahi hai Sanyo....Sanyo then walks upto her & says acha sach mein aisa kuch nahi hai! Vaishali thens smiles at Sanyo & says Sanyo kya tum bhi....Woh aur mein.... Its late evening time & PRC has just finished practising his talwarbazi with Pundir....& on the other side Sanyo has dirtied her clothes while making PRC's favourite dish for dinner .... Both head towards the bathing room....Sanyo enters the room not knowing that PRC is already present in the bathing room....She closes the door & puts the latch of the door....but unfortunately the latch breaks & Sanyo gets stuck...in the bathing room..She thinks that she will bang the door later & get it opened once she has finished bathing & dressing herself up....She smiles to herself & moves towards the pond of water.....which is full of rose petals....As she takes a few steps near the pond of water she spots PRC splashing water on himself.... She as usual like a Junglee billi calls him out & says tum yaha iss waqt....PRC who is busy bathing turns & finds his Sanyo with all spots of atta on her cheeks & forehead....He smiles at her & replies haan woh Talwarbaazi karke bahut thak gaya tha....Isse liye yaha snaan karne aa gaya...par tum yaha kya kar rahe ho.....saying this he moves out of water & walks upto Sanyo & touches her forehead with his fingers...& says...ohh acha ab samjha....lagta hai tum rasooye mein thai .....tabhi tumne apni aise haalat bana rakhi hai.....at this Sanyo retaliates & says aise hallat maltab....PRC calls her Junglee billi....& holds her by her waist & says matlab......Sanyo has goosebumps at PRC's actions & says..yeh kya kar rahe ho tum PRC...kuch khaas nahi jaan...sirf pyaar kar raha hoon..apne junglee billi se...Wasie toh tum itne aasaani se humare paas nahi aati ho...aur aaj jab mujhe ek bar aur mauka mila hai tumhare kareeb aane ka toh tumhe kya lagta hai ki mein tumhe itne aasani se jaane doonga.....Sanyo shyly lowers her head & eyes hearing PRC's words....PRC picks up Sanyo in his arms & takes her inside the water....He puts her down gently....& takes upttan kept in a bowl.....near the pond & applies it on Sanyo's arms...gently..Sanyo begins to loose her control over herself..on PRC's actions....PRC rubs the upttan on Sanyo's neck & kisses her softly on her shoulder from the back....Sanyo suddenly turns towards PRC & puts her hands on PRC's shoulder's...She slowly brings her fingers down on his chest.... breathing heavyly...PRC smiles naughtily at Sanyo's & quickly takes this opportunity & kisses her on the lips.....Sanyo breaks aways from the kiss after a while & pushes PRC away...She moves in water to the other side of the pond & looks at PRC ...& smiles cheeckily at PRC for the way she pushed him away when they kissed each other...At this PRC gets more close to Sanyo.....by moving towards her on the other side of the pond ..This time he holds her really tight..Sanyo tries to free herself from PRC's grip but is unable to do so.....At last she gives into PRC .....PRC again kisses her on her lips for a long time...This time when they break from their kiss...Sanyo starts splashing water on PRC playfully & so does PRC calling her Junglee Billi....In Chittorgh Samar in his room is pacing around here & there... He calls out for the gaurd outside his room & enquires about Pratha...Kya Maharani Pratha pooja se laut aaye hai..The sainik answers nahi Maharaj...abhi tak Maharani ji nahi lauti hai..Samar tells the sainik....Theekh hai tum jao... The sainik leaves....after a while Pratha enters & Samar looks at her with a sigh of relieve...Pratha aap aa gaye...Kaha reh gaye thai..pata hai aapko hume aapki kitni chinta ho rahe thai...Pratha keeps smiling at Samar's restlessness...Bataye nah kaha thai aap....itni dair kaise lag gaye aapko....Pratha puts her hands on Samar's mouth & says bas Maharaj....itni chinta mat kiya kijeye aap...Bhala aap ke rehte hume kuch ho sakta hai kya....Hum Mandir mein hi thai..bas pooja dair tak chali isse liye hume aane mein dair ho gaye...Samar then tells her aap jaante hai nah hum aapke bagair apne aap ko kitna adhoora mehsoos karte hai....Aap jab humare paas nahi hoti toh humare mann bahut vitchitra ho jaata hai...galat galat khayal aa jaane lagte hai..humare mann mein.....At this Pratha has a drop of tear in her eyes & she hugs Samar & says hum bhi aap se bahut pyaar karte hai Maharaj...apni jaan se bhi jyaada....Samar 2 smiles at Pratha & hugs her back.....Back To Kannauj Mehel...Sanyo is busy dressing herself up...She tries hard to tie the 1st dori of her choli but is unable to do so..when a pair of hands come & touch her back very lovingly....Sanyo quickly turns around to spot PRC changed in his night dhoti & daushala...she shys away from him & says ki hum kar lengaye PRC...PRC naughtily smiles at her & says sach mein tum kar lo gaye...itne dair se koshish kar rahe ho...par...agar tum kaho toh mein tumhare madat karoon....Sanyo begins to stammer & says nahi..woh hum...woh hum....PRC starts to run his fingers on Sanyo's arms...gets close to her ears & says agar tumhe sharam aa rahe hai toh mein....dori ko bandhte waqt apne aankhein bandh rakhoonga....mein wadah karta hoon....Sanyo this time looks into his eyes & then turns around so that PRC could tie all the dori's of her choli....PRC closes his eyes & begins to tie all dori's....After he ties the 1st dori ..Sanyo says...PRC tum chaho toh apni aankhen khol sakte ho..at this PRC opens his eyes & looks at her confused...He asks her kyun kya hua Sanyo..She nods her head shyly & says kuch nahi....PRC smiles at her...They both keep exchanging lovey duby looks through the mirror infront of Sanyo ....Outside the bathing room....near the mandir...Vaishali is carrying a Thal of flowers for pooja when she bumps into Pundir....She drops the Thal & lands up again in Pundir's arms....They both get lost in each other's eyes...but after a while Vaishali asks Pundir to leave her..Pundir leaves her & they both knee down on the ground to pick up the flowers on the floor..As vaishali begins to place the flowers back in the Thanks ...Pundir 2 starts picking up the flowers & puts them in the Thal....He keeps staring at Vaishali & apologises for banging into her..He says hume maaf kar dejeye... woh hum kuch soch rahe thai..aapko kahin chott to nahi lagi nah..Vaishali smiles at Pundir's gentle behaviour towards her & nods her head with a smile & says says nahi toh...While Pundir & Vaishali are putting the flowers back from the ground on the Thal..Pundir's hand touches Vaishali's....They both again exchange lovey duby glares at each other..This time Pundir doesn't stop himself & he holds Vaishali's hand & says aap bahut sundar hai....Mujhe aap se pehle nazar mein pyaar ho gaya hai....Vaishali lowers her head & smiles at Pundir's confession...Vaishali frees her hands & runs away with the Thal of Flowers saying Rani Maa humara intezaar kar rahe ho gaye..Sandhya Pooja ke liye dair ho rahe hai..But as she leaves she turns around & looks at Pundir & smiles shyly at him.....Back in the bathing room...PRC has finsihed tieing Sanyo's dori's ....Sanyo turns around looking at PRC ..she hugs him & tells him humse itna hi pyaar karte rehna PRC...PRC smiles & says humesha karta aaya hoon aur karta rahoonga Sanyo..Humesha...Jaise jaise waqt beetega mera pyaar tumhare liye aur badhe ga..par iske liye tumhe hume kuch dena hoga..Sanyo breaks from the hug & says kuch dene hoga matab....PRC again naughtyily smiles at Sanyo & runs a finger across Sanyo's cheeks to her lips...Sanyo smiles shyly & digs her head into PRC's chest....& says PRC tum bhi nah...kuch bhi keh dete ho...PRC hugs her back & says acha abb yaha se bahar nikalne ke baare mein soche.Sanyo then suddenly remembers that the latch of the door broke when she closed the door.She tells this to PRC & they both head towards the door to get it opened by someone..😳😃


Precap:

Kannauj sainiks & Maharani Nayantara open the Bathing door....PRC & Sanyo embarressed infront of Maharani Nayantara at the Bathing room situation.....Vaishali Confesses her Love for Pundir before Pundir returns to Delhi ...PRC Sanyo returning to Delhi with Rajkumar Veer & Rajkumari Kushboo...PRC remembering all moments spent with his father Someshwar! Chand & Karnataki confess their love....& Arjun & Maya return to Delhi after the yatra & have a Funny moment with Veer & Kushboo in Delhi! Chand & Pundir's wedding fixed with Karnataki & Vaishali! Veer & Kushboo angry on PRC & they both kicking PRC in his chest...Sanyo singing Lohri to the kids to make them sleep....PRC 2 along with the kids sleeping hearing the Lohri from Sanyo....!
Gals Pls. donot continue as I have still a lot of story telling left..Well the Next Update will be on coming Sunday 14th June'09 by 1:30 AM mid-night !😳😃
Edited by meghaparti - 16 years ago
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Gals I have completed the Update for this week...Pls. read & Comment!😳😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: meghaparti

Ok Gals below is the Next Part of the Future Track Story Line....😳This one is a short update the next one would be a long one I promise!😳 I hope U All Enjoy reading it !😃

Recap:

Sanyo & PRC keep playing their aankh macholi......while Vaishali starts playing with Veer & Pundir standing in one corner keeps staring at her......thinking to himself...kitni sundar hai...aur kitni masoom bhi....Vaishali 2 keeps sneeking at Pundir ..... thinking to herself as to why is he staring at me like this......😆


Next Part:

After a short while when PRC & Sanyo are busy in their aankh macholi khel....Pundir begins to walk towards Vaishali lost in his own world of love for Vaishali.....& he bumps into a phool dan & he drops it on the floor ..Due to this PRC & Sanyo break their eye contact...& stare at Pundir & Vaishali laughs at Pundir's actions ..PRC walks upto Pundir & asks him tum theekh toh ho nah....At this Pundir stammers haan PRC mein bilkul theekh hoon but PRC cuts him off & looks towards Vaishali & says mujhe nahi lagta ki tum theekh ho..Chalo chalkar apne kamre mein thoda aaram kar loo ...PRC & Pundir leave.... Sanyo & Vaishali are now alone in the room ....Sanyo smiles at PRC 's words knowing what he meant ...when he looked towards Vaishali & told Pundir that he is not in his senses...Seeing Vaishali smile Sanyo quickly asks Vaishali kya baat hai Vaishali aaj tumhe kuch jyaada hi hasi aa rahe hai....Vaishali smiles at Sanyo shyly & says nahi toh aisa kuch nahi hai Sanyo....Sanyo then walks upto her & says acha sach mein aisa kuch nahi hai! Vaishali thens smiles at Sanyo & says Sanyo kya tum bhi....Woh aur mein.... Its late evening time & PRC has just finished practising his talwarbazi with Pundir....& on the other side Sanyo has dirtied her clothes while making PRC's favourite dish for dinner .... Both head towards the bathing room....Sanyo enters the room not knowing that PRC is already present in the bathing room....She closes the door & puts the latch of the door....but unfortunately the latch breaks & Sanyo gets stuck...in the bathing room..She thinks that she will bang the door later & get it opened once she has finished bathing & dressing herself up....She smiles to herself & moves towards the pond of water.....which is full of rose petals....As she takes a few steps near the pond of water she spots PRC splashing water on himself.... She as usual like a Junglee billi calls him out & says tum yaha iss waqt....PRC who is busy bathing turns & finds his Sanyo with all spots of atta on her cheeks & forehead....He smiles at her & replies haan woh Talwarbaazi karke bahut thak gaya tha....Isse liye yaha snaan karne aa gaya...par tum yaha kya kar rahe ho.....saying this he moves out of water & walks upto Sanyo & touches her forehead with his fingers...& says...ohh acha ab samjha....lagta hai tum rasooye mein thai .....tabhi tumne apni aise haalat bana rakhi hai.....at this Sanyo retaliates & says aise hallat maltab....PRC calls her Junglee billi....& holds her by her waist & says matlab......Sanyo has goosebumps at PRC's actions & says..yeh kya kar rahe ho tum PRC...kuch khaas nahi jaan...sirf pyaar kar raha hoon..apne junglee billi se...Wasie toh tum itne aasaani se humare paas nahi aati ho...aur aaj jab mujhe ek bar aur mauka mila hai tumhare kareeb aane ka toh tumhe kya lagta hai ki mein tumhe itne aasani se jaane doonga.....Sanyo shyly lowers her head & eyes hearing PRC's words....PRC picks up Sanyo in his arms & takes her inside the water....He puts her down gently....& takes upttan kept in a bowl.....near the pond & applies it on Sanyo's arms...gently..Sanyo begins to loose her control over herself..on PRC's actions....PRC rubs the upttan on Sanyo's neck & kisses her softly on her shoulder from the back....Sanyo suddenly turns towards PRC & puts her hands on PRC's shoulder's...She slowly brings her fingers down on his chest.... breathing heavyly...PRC smiles naughtily at Sanyo's & quickly takes this opportunity & kisses her on the lips.....Sanyo breaks aways from the kiss after a while & pushes PRC away...She moves in water to the other side of the pond & looks at PRC ...& smiles cheeckily at PRC for the way she pushed him away when they kissed each other...At this PRC gets more close to Sanyo.....by moving towards her on the other side of the pond ..This time he holds her really tight..Sanyo tries to free herself from PRC's grip but is unable to do so.....At last she gives into PRC .....PRC again kisses her on her lips for a long time...This time when they break from their kiss...Sanyo starts splashing water on PRC playfully & so does PRC calling her Junglee Billi....In Chittorgh Samar in his room is pacing around here & there... He calls out for the gaurd outside his room & enquires about Pratha...Kya Maharani Pratha pooja se laut aaye hai..The sainik answers nahi Maharaj...abhi tak Maharani ji nahi lauti hai..Samar tells the sainik....Theekh hai tum jao... The sainik leaves....after a while Pratha enters & Samar looks at her with a sigh of relieve...Pratha aap aa gaye...Kaha reh gaye thai..pata hai aapko hume aapki kitni chinta ho rahe thai...Pratha keeps smiling at Samar's restlessness...Bataye nah kaha thai aap....itni dair kaise lag gaye aapko....Pratha puts her hands on Samar's mouth & says bas Maharaj....itni chinta mat kiya kijeye aap...Bhala aap ke rehte hume kuch ho sakta hai kya....Hum Mandir mein hi thai..bas pooja dair tak chali isse liye hume aane mein dair ho gaye...Samar then tells her aap jaante hai nah hum aapke bagair apne aap ko kitna adhoora mehsoos karte hai....Aap jab humare paas nahi hoti toh humare mann bahut vitchitra ho jaata hai...galat galat khayal aa jaane lagte hai..humare mann mein.....At this Pratha has a drop of tear in her eyes & she hugs Samar & says hum bhi aap se bahut pyaar karte hai Maharaj...apni jaan se bhi jyaada....Samar 2 smiles at Pratha & hugs her back.....Back To Kannauj Mehel...Sanyo is busy dressing herself up...She tries hard to tie the 1st dori of her choli but is unable to do so..when a pair of hands come & touch her back very lovingly....Sanyo quickly turns around to spot PRC changed in his night dhoti & daushala...she shys away from him & says ki hum kar lengaye PRC...PRC naughtily smiles at her & says sach mein tum kar lo gaye...itne dair se koshish kar rahe ho...par...agar tum kaho toh mein tumhare madat karoon....Sanyo begins to stammer & says nahi..woh hum...woh hum....PRC starts to run his fingers on Sanyo's arms...gets close to her ears & says agar tumhe sharam aa rahe hai toh mein....dori ko bandhte waqt apne aankhein bandh rakhoonga....mein wadah karta hoon....Sanyo this time looks into his eyes & then turns around so that PRC could tie all the dori's of her choli....PRC closes his eyes & begins to tie all dori's....After he ties the 1st dori ..Sanyo says...PRC tum chaho toh apni aankhen khol sakte ho..at this PRC opens his eyes & looks at her confused...He asks her kyun kya hua Sanyo..She nods her head shyly & says kuch nahi....PRC smiles at her...They both keep exchanging lovey duby looks through the mirror infront of Sanyo ....Outside the bathing room....near the mandir...Vaishali is carrying a Thal of flowers for pooja when she bumps into Pundir....She drops the Thal & lands up again in Pundir's arms....They both get lost in each other's eyes...but after a while Vaishali asks Pundir to leave her..Pundir leaves her & they both knee down on the ground to pick up the flowers on the floor..As vaishali begins to place the flowers back in the Thanks ...Pundir 2 starts picking up the flowers & puts them in the Thal....He keeps staring at Vaishali & apologises for banging into her..He says hume maaf kar dejeye... woh hum kuch soch rahe thai..aapko kahin chott to nahi lagi nah..Vaishali smiles at Pundir's gentle behaviour towards her & nods her head with a smile & says says nahi toh...While Pundir & Vaishali are putting the flowers back from the ground on the Thal..Pundir's hand touches Vaishali's....They both again exchange lovey duby glares at each other..This time Pundir doesn't stop himself & he holds Vaishali's hand & says aap bahut sundar hai....Mujhe aap se pehle nazar mein pyaar ho gaya hai....Vaishali lowers her head & smiles at Pundir's confession...Vaishali frees her hands & runs away with the Thal of Flowers saying Rani Maa humara intezaar kar rahe ho gaye..Sandhya Pooja ke liye dair ho rahe hai..But as she leaves she turns around & looks at Pundir & smiles shyly at him.....Back in the bathing room...PRC has finsihed tieing Sanyo's dori's ....Sanyo turns around looking at PRC ..she hugs him & tells him humse itna hi pyaar karte rehna PRC...PRC smiles & says humesha karta aaya hoon aur karta rahoonga Sanyo..Humesha...Jaise jaise waqt beetega mera pyaar tumhare liye aur badhe ga..par iske liye tumhe hume kuch dena hoga..Sanyo breaks from the hug & says kuch dene hoga matab....PRC again naughtyily smiles at Sanyo & runs a finger across Sanyo's cheeks to her lips...Sanyo smiles shyly & digs her head into PRC's chest....& says PRC tum bhi nah...kuch bhi keh dete ho...PRC hugs her back & says acha abb yaha se bahar nikalne ke baare mein soche.Sanyo then suddenly remembers that the latch of the door broke when she closed the door.She tells this to PRC & they both head towards the door to get it opened by someone..😳😃


Precap:

Kannauj sainiks & Maharani Nayantara open the Bathing door....PRC & Sanyo embarressed infront of Maharani Nayantara at the Bathing room situation.....Vaishali Confesses her Love for Pundir before Pundir returns to Delhi ...PRC Sanyo returning to Delhi with Rajkumar Veer & Rajkumari Kushboo...PRC remembering all moments spent with his father Someshwar! Chand & Karnataki confess their love....& Arjun & Maya return to Delhi after the yatra & have a Funny moment with Veer & Kushboo in Delhi! Chand & Pundir's wedding fixed with Karnataki & Vaishali! Veer & Kushboo angry on PRC & they both kicking PRC in his chest...Sanyo singing Lohri to the kids to make them sleep....PRC 2 along with the kids sleeping hearing the Lohri from Sanyo....!
Gals Pls. donot continue as I have still a lot of story telling left..Well the Next Update will be on coming Sunday 14th June'09 by 1:30 AM mid-night !😳😃

Wow megha di,It's superb update👏⭐️👏.Prithvi is very naughty 😳😆😉and sanyo bechara😳.Idhar pundir ki bhi lovestory start ho gayi😃,wow.The moments between Samar and pratha are so cute and nice😳😊😳 .U wrote every portion is very very well👏👏⭐️.Now,I'm waiting for next part.😳😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
wonderful update megha...sorry 2 reply so late bt i hve been vry bsy lately...cnt give my times on forum also...anyways cmg back... wat i liked most is prc gettg naughty day by day...i liked the bathg scene a lot n the choli one....the latter was very mushy...its so romatic...n punder n vaishali luvstry luks interestg,,,hope u will add sme mushy romance in thre 2!!!well dne...n will b waitg!

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