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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice precp dhanya.Please update soon.
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Originally posted by: Renu111

interesting update di ...bt i m confused little bit... 😕 what happend at stable...plz update soon... 😛


Thanks renu... coming soon 😃
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Originally posted by: manissha

nice precp dhanya.Please update soon.



Thanks manissha 😃 soon
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part 2


Sumitra motioned chandu to follow her to her room as soon as chandu entered the hall... 'what is it ma?' chandu asked , concerned ... sumitra told him about the saree incident n her conviction that pratigya is innocent ... 'i know it that krishna is madly in love with her ...but haven't admitted it to himself...he won't...! he is stubborn!..' said sumitra affectionately ...'... but i can see that the girl is literally swept off her feet ... there's no turning back for her... she is so in love with him!... n u can't even imagine how happy i am... she is perfect ... she will take care of my son all her life...she will keep him happy always '... sumitra said, tears in her eyes ... chandu nodded , listening , his eyes happy ...'i knew it... i knew it from the start that she is a good, innocent girl... yes! Ma don't worry ... i have already asked a friend of mine to find out what's going on in minister's house ... it looks like she is under some pressure ... n many things she don't even know! May be its all her father's n that durjjan's plan... they may be after the files!... once this ridiculous case gets over , we will move ahead with our plan n get some info about what's going on...' ... sumitra nodded ...'we must find out n tell krishna about it... he has ill-treated her many times... its time he knows her true self n may be that will help him acknowledge his love for her... although the girl seems to have forgiven him for all the atrocities he ever did to her , but i want my son to properly apologise to his soulmate , his life partner ...n respect her n love her ...' she said , wiping her tears... chandu nodded , feeling lighter in many days ... he was feeling so happy ... finally! There's someone to control his dear brother! ...

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pratigya folded sumitra's sari neatly , after washing her face n neck thoroughly ... her tears had dried up , but her eyes still carried the just-cried' look ... she stared at her image in the mirror, taking a deep breath ... her lips were still swollen , n her neck bore his marks of passion , although not clearly visible ...but visible to those who know what n how to look for ... n it wasn't helping that she was constantly blushing ... not to mention her heart beating like drums... relax, pratigya...! its only maji whom u would be talking to... n u have a full dinner to be cooked ...she looked at her reflection again wondering if he would like her in the peach color sari that she was now wearing ... well, first she will make dinner... then she will worry about her appearance , she thought , tensed ... she carefully took sumitra's sari is her hands n went downstairs ... she saw chandu coming out of sumitra's room , his face happy ... he smiled at her warmly n she smiled back, feeling happy ...chandu looked like as if he wanted to say something to her but hastily walked away , attending his phone... 'ahem...ahem..' sumitra cleared her throat unnecessarily as she took the sari from her hands , caressing her right cheek, her eyes lingering over her sore lowerlip ... 'so i take it that he enjoyed the kheer...?' sumitra asked, not bothering to keep the tease out of her voice ... pratigya blushed crimson... n then sumitra noticed her eyes ... the girl cried? ... why? Her cheeks n nervous hands n her lips n neck were telling a different story ... why did she cry? What would have happened? ... 'did he say something to hurt u? or did he...' she began but stopped as she saw pratigya's alarmed eyes ...' no maji...no ...he...' pratigya began, averting her eyes ... u could tell maji! ... she may b able to help! ...'r u sure beti...?' sumitra asked , gently placing her hand over pratigya's shoulder ... pratigya could feel her heart brim...



she made to open her mouth to tell about her mother to sumitra when chandu knocked on the door... 'er...sorry ma ... but krishna told me to tell pratigya to bring his dinner to the stables...' he said , not looking at pratigya ... every thought of telling sumitra about her situation flew out of her mind as pratigya got all tensed up ... sumitra smiled , squeezing pratigya's shoulder 'oh! Tell him that his dinner will be served on time..'... chandu nodded, smiling n went away ... 'hmm... first kheer... n now dinner ... looks like u r in deep trouble' ... sumitra giggled, pushing pratigya forward towards the kitchen ...'wh..what?' pratigya stammered , feeling feverish ... 'well, his demands r only going to increase ...' sumitra winked at pratigya, pinching her upper arm teasingly ... pratigya blushed , feeling nervous ...


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krishna played golf for the better part of the evening with chandu n iqbal n it was only past 7 pm when he ordered the lights of the golf course to be turned off n walked towards his ranch... he was purposefully delaying to go to the stables as he wasn't able to concentrate fully on the golf game as his thoughts were full of her ... so he kept hitting carelessly n killed time... he don't want to go up to his room to check the cabinet or to go to surveillance room n gaze at her n his mother in kitchen ... he found that he actually dreaded what he would see if he opened the cabinet ... as much as he wanted to know what did she do with the PIN... but u must krishna! Otherwise how will u know? How could u trust her?... u gave her the bait! Now check it! ...alright! i will be at the stables shortly ...' he said curtly to iqbal n walked towards the haveli ... chandu looked at his retreating back , debating whether to tell him about pratigya being innocent ... well, he must wait till he knows what is going on in her house !... something is forcing her to do all this or even she isn't even in the loop! First he needs to make sure what exactly is going on... then he will tell krishna...! yes!...



krishna saw maids n servants who would usually be in kitchen roaming around the hall n courtyard n guessed that she will be in kitchen... he struggled with himself not to go to the kitchen corridor n went straight to his room... he could feel his heart beating in his mouth as he opened the file cabinet... a quick look told him that all the files were intact ... he closed the door n sighed as relief n happiness chased across his heart n mind... he smiled stupidly against the door, resting his forehead against it ... her words i love u krishna' reverberated through his every cell... she has passed the first test !... he could feel his heart n body jumping in joy! Take her! As yours n yours only! End the torture! Yes! ... no! ... not so soon! Women r treacherous krishna! Don't believe them blindly, early ! wait for some more time! ... what if she is biding her time? Krishna fisted his hands , as his body n heart protested , but his mind remained firm... wait! A bit more! Give it 2 days time ! no! ... I ...WANT ...HER... NOW... ! he felt his heart n body screaming ...alright! 1 day! ... just one more day! This one night n the next day! Tmw night u will be making her urs in every way known to mankind...! yes! His body n heart wasn't particularly happy with the decision of his mind... just this one night n day , KST! U won't be needing cold showers or ice cubes beginning with tmw night! U won't be having nightmares n begging her to just stay with u, take care of u, from tmw night! ... bec she won't be leaving ur side ever ...never ever... she will be urs forever ! as ...as a friend! As a mother! As ...as ..a wife! As a mistress! As a maid!... a...sister! ...a...a daughter? What? Daughter? Where did that come from? ...whatever! ...ur ...ur everything! ...yes! mine! My everything! Her!... he took a deep breath n headed to the bathroom... he can't wait for the next day... but before that he need to get relief from the kind of ache in his groin ... he has never felt so lustful, so needy, so longing... the fact that she passed his bait was slowly breaking up his mental barriers ...


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pratigya was a nervous wreck ... she was precariously applying belan on the dough to make rotis n so far she has only managed to get one in almost circular shape ... she closed her eyes in tension as the shape slowly started getting distorted ...it wasn't helping that her fingers trembled like leaves in wind... 'u r ruining my rotis, do u know that?' she heard him whisper in her left ear , n felt his arms hugging her along her belly n waist , her back against him... she jumped about a feet in the air n her wild gasp as she turned her face towards him was stifled in his searing kiss n the belan fell from her hands as her flour filled palms flew to cup along his right jaw n hair ...'what happened beti?' sumitra asked , looking around at her , washing the vegetables ... 'no...nothing!' pratigya squeaked , her voice high pitched as she blinked... he was no where to be seen ... u imagined him u fool! Chided her thundering heart ... she picked up the belan n came to wash it , red all over ... sumitra hid her smile ... pratigya turned to walk towards the counter n she almost dropped the belan again as she saw him smirking at her , sitting on the counter, his right cheek n a bit of hair covered in flour... she gulped down as he munched on an apple, his eyes naughty , locked on to hers ... she looked nervously at sumitra , who was now cleaning the chopping bar... hurry up, i am starving!' he said , not bothering to keep his voice down ... pratigya looked frantically at sumitra, gesturing him to lower his voice n go away but oddly maji didn't seem to hear or notice him...'u want something beti?' sumitra asked , keeping the bar for drying ...'no...no maji' pratigya stuttered , walking towards the counter , his eyes following her...



she took a deep breath n closed her eyes n opened them , starting to make the rotis, fighting with herself not to look up... it seemed that he had gone... she sighed in relief n a bit disappointment ... why did he have to go so soon? ...' its a square...' she heard him complain n looked up eagerly ... he was sitting on top of the counter , just left of her , looking in distaste at the disfigured roti... pratigya opened her mouth to retort that its her first time n she will be getting better with experience n if he want her to cook, then he will have to eat it the way she gives him... but she pursed her lips, darting a glance at sumitra ...but he seemed to have understood what's in her mind n he chuckled ...'alright! Why r u scolding me? I just said i would prefer round rotis..!' ... pratigya removed the disfigured roti n took a new roll of dough , sighing n rolling her eyes ... 'that's my girl!' he chuckled again , throwing away the stump of the apple n jumping down , quickly hugging her from behind ... pratigya gasped softly n made to shake him off her, frantically gesturing towards sumitra ... but he seemed oblivious to her efforts as he placed his chin over her left shoulder n caressed her cheek n ear with his stubby cheek ...'shh... u don't want to alert ma about me being here... go on , i am not interfering in ur job... i am just watching u make rotis for me...' he murmured , inhaling her n gracing his lips over her cheek n jaw line, his hands tightening over n around her belly over the sari ...pratigya could feel her heart beat escalating exponentially , goosebumps erupting all over her ...



she resumed making rotis n he resumed what he was doing, kissing n licking n nibbling n nipping at her leftside of jaw n cheeks n neck n ear , humming in desire n naughtiness ...pratigya scrunched up her face against the giggles n moans fighting to escape her throat , her eyes stinging in an effort not to close them in ecstasy n not to pant in an effort to breathe ...'uff..' she panted out a gasp as he munched her cheek naughtily , his hands tightening around her ...' what happened ? did ur hand get hurt by the belan ...?' asked sumittra , concerned ... 'no...' pratigya gasped out, he was not to be seen anywhere ... he is killing her inch by inch! ...'bring the rotis beti... the pan is heated enough ...' said sumitra ... pratigya nodded clumsily, her body tingling as she looked down at the roti ... it was a perfect circle ...

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krishna ruffled the mane of pavan as he finished a sec round around his grounds n slowed down as he watched pratigya walking towards the stables from a distance ...even from the distance he could tell that she was shivering ... 'walk..' he told pavan, gently patting him on the shoulder , his eyes on her back ...pratigya , shivering from anticipation n shyness n nervousness , looked around once she reached the stables , carrying his dinner ...the guards were standing like statues , none even acknowledging her or even the wind , it seemed ...she saw a medium sized lawn inside the stables with sofas n a teapoy n placed the trays down on it... she looked around for him, her heart beating in her mouth ... krishna stopped pavan just outside the stables as he ordered 'leave us!'... the guards bowed n left quickly , not even glancing at each other , being true professionals n loyal... 'iqbal! Remove the men from the grounds ...now!' krishna said , turning pavan towards the right n kicking him gently to pick up speed ...'yes sir!' iqbal said , fishing out his phone as he walked back... krishna? What r u doing? I told u to wait a bit more... don't be a despo! ... i just want to enjoy with her! Now shut up! His heart bellowed at his mind... pratigya , who sat precariously on the edge of one sofa , stood up hearing the hooves ... she could feel her breath hitching in her chest as she found herself walking towards the entrance , leaning her neck to look for him... the stables n the grounds were lit with sodium lamps n the sky looked beautiful with stars n moon... the cold night air caressed her shivering body n she sighed , closing her eyes n opening them , hugging herself ... she barely has time to jump startled with a shocked cry as she heard hooves behind her n the strong force of wind closing in on her n felt his hands along her waist , jerking her up ...'aaah...' she cried out, clutching at the animal's mane , her legs frantically trying to straddle the huge back instinctively , her back pressed against his hard male body , his one hand expertly handling the rein n the other securing her against him along her waist ...



' shhh...' he whispered in her right ear, his face buried in her bellowing hair ...'krishna!... i ...am scared.' she held on to his arm around her waist for dear life, shuddering , turning her face towards him , away from the wind, her legs clumsily straddling saddle, her saari drawn up to slightly near her knees , their legs caressing intimately ...'don't be... u r with me... relax...' he said , burying his face further into her sweet smelling hair , kicking pavan to go faster ...which pavan didn't feel like doing... he was not liking this new passenger on his back , other than his master ... 'krishnaah..' her voice broke , as she closed her eyes tightly , heart beating like drums in her mouth , her palms tightening around the mane n his hand around her waist as Krishna urged pavan to run faster ...krishna was enjoying thoroughly ... he buried his face further n further into her nape, relishing the feel of her hair over his face , her scent filling him... n sure enough , pratigya gasped out as she felt his arousal against her back...n her body exploded in shy goosebumps , effectively driving out the fear n panic of finding herself on top of a horse , to be replaced by a diff kind of panic , delicious nonetheless... she inhaled his masculine scent n felt that curious ache coiling in her abdomen as his lips started to trace her nape n her left shoulder ... she threw her head back against his shoulder with a strangled moan as he sucked at her earlobe , murmuring 'can u feel the wind against ur face ?...' ... pratigya giggled shyly , nodding ...what a stupid question, both thought simultaneously as Krishna freed his face from her hair n pratigya turned her face , angling to meet his eyes ... Krishna could feel his body heating up a few more notches , as he encountered her shy n curious orbs... n pratigya tried her level best to stay on top of the horse as she struggled not to faint as the kind of naked desire dancing in his eyes ... Krishna made to close the distance between them but pratigya turned her face the last moment , breathing heavily n clutching at his hand along her belly n waist ...


night air blew more faster , n Krishna chuckled as she shivered in his arms , leaning into caress her red right cheek with his stubbly left one , angling his face to gaze at her closed eyes , bringing their bodies more n more closer... 'open u r eyes pratigya ... the night is so beautiful ...' he whispered huskily, enjoying her hair all over his face ... she opened her eyes , slowly ...it was indeed the most beautiful night in her life , yet ...the grounds bathed in moonlight n the stars shone down ...' pavan...slow down...' Krishna murmured , gently kicking the animal with the side of his boot n pratigya inhaled , as krishna's leg grazed over her naked lower right leg , as the saari had drawn upto almost her knee ... Krishna wasn't noticing as he had sensed that pavan wasn't liking the new addition over him... Krishna chuckled in a friendly manner , leaning a bit forward , making pratigya's heart beat soar , as he said 'nothing doing pavan... she is mine... n u r going to accept it...' ...pavan whined in absolute envy but slowed down , obeying him... pratigya , red all over , bit her lower lip ... 'she is mine' did he just say that ! ...' good boy!' Krishna smiled , loosening the reins ... 'he is my fav ... n me his... isn't he cute?' Krishna asked pratigya, angling his face to gaze at hers ... pratigya nodded , shyly meeting up his eyes , feeling happy ... for the 2nd time , he was asking her opinion! ... Krishna seemed to realise it too... he just stared in to her eyes ... he would kill anybody who dared to climb pavan! Pavan won't let anybody else to touch him either ... N he generally don't talk about his likes n dislikes to anybody! ... n here he was! Letting her to ride his pavan! Telling her what he liked ...from pets to food to the color he would like to see her in! ... speaking of which , peach really suited her ... n he found that he liked her in it ! n thinking of peaches , she is sweet , delicious n ... ought to be ravenously juicy... well, he will find out ...soon! ...



desire spread like wild fire through his veins n his eyes turned to dark coals ... pratigya who had already drowned herself in his eyes , shivered as her body reacted to his gaze n the slow , cold breeze... her lips trembled , inches from his, their noses touching as their eyes drank each other ... Krishna let go of the rein, literally n figuratively ,his hand around her belly tightening as he hugged her further to him , n ran the back of his right forefinger along her left jaw line , pushing her face up so that her mouth was level with his ... the sky rumbled in a thunder as lightning lit up the grounds around them as their mouths were sealed in a passionate kiss ... Krishna feasted on her mouth even as she shyly kissed him back, her eyes half closed in ecstasy , her neck bending back as he intensified the kiss ... he moan as she granted him entrance to her wet hot cavern echoed around the grounds as rain poured in buckets from above ...pavan moved n pratigya, trembling n writhing in his arms as she fought for breath , feeling his tongue licking her intimately , broke the kiss in panic , her body twisting away as the horse sprinted towards a tree for shelter... Krishna blinked , his grip on her relaxing , even as his mouth nibbled n nipped at her jaw n cheek , snuggling his nose in her wet hair ...he could hear her ragged n panting breathing even as he climbed down , still holding her by waist ...


it was then he noticed ...her legs! Damn! ... before he knew it, his greedy fingers were tracing n caressing her beautiful white ankle n up... patigya hissed , shuddering as she jumped down to the other side, jerking her leg out of his grip ... she stumbled backwards , hugging herself , a sense of electricity passing up her legs n spine , as he swatted away the horse n stepped forward , his eyes predatory ... he licked his lips , savouring her taste , grinning slyly as he saw that adorable panic in her eyes , like a petrified dear ...pratigya could feel her body heating up , just by his mere gaze ... she panted as if there was an acute shortage of air n jumped wildly as her back hit the tree trunk ... her eyes were staring to get red as desire n shyness n a delicious fear n excitement raged a war inside her... she felt his eyes over her shivering , sore lips n then down to her neck ...further down to her heaving bosom ...she inhaled ... she could only guess the kind of image she was presenting of herself to him...' i have waited enough !'.. he whispered huskily, their eyes locked fiercely ...pratigya plastered herself against the tree trunk, trying to remember how to breathe , unable to look away from his eyes... 'i need u ...now!' he growled , the need crystal clear in every syllable n relished the feel of seeing her hands fisted , her body twitching sensuously ... he brain stopped thinking ...she felt her heart stop beating ... he pulled her to him n in one swift motion , he had slung her trembling form over his shoulders , ignoring her cry of surprise n nervous panic... he walked towards the stable , shaking his head to clear away the wet hair out of his eyes , as the rain continued to pour heavily ... he had plans for the night ... elaborate , naughty...


meera , turned from near a bush, her eyes full of murderous jealousy n loathing ...


Hope u liked it 😳


Edited by dhakarn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting update di...hope chandu will find out the truth soon and loved the way u describes k feelings...so k cant control himself 😆 ..update soon di 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice Romantic Update Dhanya😳

Liked how both Chandu and Sumitra realized that P is genuine and suspect that she is being forced to do things.

Love how you wrote the inner conflict of K, his mind trying to caution his heart until he is sure. But his heart has a mind of it's own😆 His desire and love for P is so strong, don't know how much longer he will be able to control himself.😳

This Meera😡 don't have good feeling, she is probably going to disrupt their time together

Thanks for the PM😛

Looking forward to the next update😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Super update dhanya ,I want more. Hope chandu will find the truth . Waiting for a romantic update.Please kill that meera...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Renu111

interesting update di...hope chandu will find out the truth soon and loved the way u describes k feelings...so k cant control himself 😆 ..update soon di 😳

Thanks dear 😃
next update could take time as i am having an exam Embarrassed
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very well written and the horse ride of them both was intense i could visualise it all excellent 👏
update soon please.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekrn

Nice Romantic Update Dhanya😳

Liked how both Chandu and Sumitra realized that P is genuine and suspect that she is being forced to do things.

Love how you wrote the inner conflict of K, his mind trying to caution his heart until he is sure. But his heart has a mind of it's own😆 His desire and love for P is so strong, don't know how much longer he will be able to control himself.😳

This Meera😡 don't have good feeling, she is probably going to disrupt their time together

Thanks for the PM😛

Looking forward to the next update😛




Thanks rekha...

Correct ... kst won't b able to control himself this time... 😉

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