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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekrn

Dhanya what a precap😲

I know K will come to P's rescue, but until I see it in your update I'm going to be scared for P😛

I hope that Angad and Meera get what coming to them from K.

Update soon😛


thanks dear 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2
sorry , didn't have much time n so posting only a bit now ... will post the rest in the next chapter which will be fultoo romantic n playful 😳


'no... i...' pratigya squealed , half giggling n in half panic as krishna lunged at her n started to run... but krishna's hand had closed around her waist n he pulled her to him, almost half hoisting her from the ground , laughing ...'u can't escape now!' he whispered in her ear, holding her writhing body against him with his left arm around her waist, her feet on air , n his right arm securely holding the bhang bottle ... 'yeah... get her ! n thakur sahaib, make her drink! Don't let her escape ! she has been fooling us for long!' shouted her friends, drunk ... 'krishna ...pls... I don't want...' pratigya protested , writhing out of his grip, half giggling n half shy as her breath escalated at his warm breath along her ear n neck ... She tried to run as soon as her feet hit the ground but her feet caught in her sari n she tripped n fell, still giggling ... Krishna fell on top of her , his left hand automatically going behind her to support her back as he straddled her , his knees on either side of her over her hips as pratigya tried to sit up in an awkward position , trying to push him off ,but playfully as she was laughing n giggling alike...they didn't notice that many people had turned to watch apart from her friends n angad n meera, their mouths agape... krishna n pratigya were oblivious to the world around them as suddenly their world only seemed to consist of each other...their bodies complimented each other in an alarming manner...the raw sexual tension emanating from them was making people feel embarrassed to look at them but they couldn't look away either, awed...their eyes met n she felt a delicious shiver running across her spine even as krishna smirked at her in triumph ... her cheeks flushed red as krishna bit the fork of the bottle n pulled n spat it out , his other hand which supported her back over a leaning position from the ground pulling her more to him n her hands automatically came up to clutch at his upper arms ... krishna brought the bottle to her mouth , chuckling, n she fought for one last time , stammering 'krishna ...I really don't think...' she couldn't finish her sentence as krishna forced the tip of the bottle into her mouth n tilted it , laughing as he said 'don't u dare spill even a drop out , pratigya ... or u will have to drink one full bottle more ...' pratigya's eyes went wide n then closed tight as she gulped down instinctively , her throat burning at the taste ...



her hands clutched at his arms for support as she drained almost 3 n half of the bottle , finally ungluing her mouth from it , panting n still giggling 'krishnaa... en... enough...' She half moaned n half hiccoughed ... Krishna watched her flush face in amusement n desire n giggled manly... he stood straighter over her n drained the rest of it in one go , smacking his lips n throwing away the bottle n leaned down over to her , enjoying her panting n red face ... 'how's it?' he enquired , his face just inches from hers , his eyes on the dribble of bhang down her lips n chin... she grimaced , pushing him away as she slurred , her eyes closing n opening ...'eew... is this something to drink?...' ... Krishna caught hold of her , laughing as she stumbled while getting up , her legs unsteady ...'what did u expect? Orange juice?' he asked, his voice too slurring due to the effect of bhang... pratigya giggled, clutching on to him as she sagged against him, her feet unsteady ... they looked around , trying to focus as many people broke into nervous giggles n whistles ... Pratigya smiled in a silly manner, still clutching at krishn'a collar, at her friends who were openly gaping at her n giggling ... angad n meera stood like as if they have been roasted alive , burning in the fire of anger n jealousy n loathing... meera couldn't believe her eyes... malik is so into that bitch! He has allowed her so much freedom! He talks to her! Laughs with her! N ...n he hold her in her arms ! ... I will kill that bitch!... meera thought fuming... angad could feel his hatred towards krishna increase ten fold even as his lust towards pratigya increase as much ... How come that bas***d always gets what he wants? ... The way his hands r around her! The way his hungry eyes r looking at her! He will be ravishing her any moment ! ... no! he won't let him! ... she is his , atleast for today! Angad seethed , nudging meera on her elbow... 'go! N get her somehow away from him! i will be waiting in the store room... !' he looked around in loathing at krishna , who didn't seem to mind the crowd n was hugging pratigya more closer to him n running his nose along her colored cheek... Angad gritted his teeth as he saw pratigya giggling n pushing krishna's face away playfully ... 'quick!' he snarled at meera who was watching pratigya in hatred n went away...gayatri glared at krishna n pratigya in hatred n panic , her face sour...many girls eyed krishna , drooling shamelessly , n many men openly gaped at pratigya , throwing jealous glances at krishna...



'u two r made for each other , u know that?!' gushed malini, her voice drunken as she n others came n stood next to krishna n pratigya ... pratigya smiled in pride n happiness n automatically turned her face towards krishna more as he brushed his lips across her cheek lazily, his eyes closed ... 'er... I think we should go now...' said akash awkwardly , as all looked away , shifting from foot to foot in drunken way , their faces embarrassed... 'going? So soon...?' slurred pratigya , trying to keep standing n krishna looked up , smiling at them... that's right! leave soon so that I can have her , all for myself!... he thought , desire spiking its head again... but he was feeling happy as they made the day more enjoyable ... 'yeah, we have too leave... have to reach mumbai!...' ... Said malini, her voice cracking as she swayed ...' er ..excuse me , sir... Ur father calls for u...' shiv interrupted , polite, his head bowed ... krishna looked around , not looking forward to leave her alone even foe a sec...'tell him I will be busy' he said , hugging pratigya more to him... 'he says it urgent...' shiv said , his eyes on ground...' right!' krishna nodded, irritated , indicating him to wait... 'so , It was so pleasing to meet u again...' He said, smiling at her friends , his hands still around pratigya , who was trying to keep her eyes open , smiling in a silly manner at her friends...'oh yes, thakur sahab... It was our pleasure , actually... thank u for letting us be here...' said anwar politely...'so will see u again , may be soon!' krishna shook hands with akash n anwar, releasing his hold over pratigya n she swayed alarmingly n maya caught her, laughing as she said 'oh yes! ...do come to mumbai soon... n this time pls let Pratigya stay with us all day...' all nodded in hope as they looked at krishna ...'ofcourse .' krishna smiled ... 'yeah, ofcourse...' pratigya repeated smiling stupidly , bhang effect deepening... All giggled n krishna looked at her in half desire n half love... Her voice! So sensuous! ...'er...so see u soon pratigya!' Reshmi smiled n all the girls hugged pratigya...she watched them leave , her feet unsteady ...



Krishna pulled her to his arms again , sighing against her neck ...'wait here for me... I will be back in 2 mins...' ... 'krishnaa...don't leave me alone...' pratigya said , her voice shaky , her eyes dreamy as she clung to him, looking up to his eyes...krishna gazed at her , his eyes turning darker...'tell bauji that I will come later..' krishna said to shiv, looking around at him... shiv shifted on his legs, still looking at the ground...'he said its urgent... some ministers r with him...they r waiting to see u before they leave...' shiv said, tensed...krishna gritted his teeth n gazed back at pratigya , his right hand cupping her left cheek...' I will be back in just 2 mins, pratigya...here' he made her sit near the fountain even as she groped n clung to him like a child would do to mother, saying 'no...pls ... don't leave me alone... krishna pls...' she whined like a child, her voice slurring...krishna took a deep breath , n slowly prised off her fingers from his kurta , assuring her...' look at me , pratigya...' he said , his voice staring to drawl from the effect of bhang, n she looked up into his eyes , her eyes drooping n sensual... 'I will be back in 2 mins, I promise...till then sit here ...n don't u dare move an inch from here'... he said n she shook her head from side to side like an obedient child...'just 2 mins...' he said again, his eyes glazing in desire as he watched a slight pout of her lower lip , n caressed his palm along her left cheek sensually... 'hmmm...' she pouted more n sat straighter , turning her face away in a huff...it took all his self control t stop himself from ravishing her then n there...'It had better b some important thing , shiv' he said, his voice low, as he turned to walk ... shiv gulped down as he followed him ... meera leered in triumph , watching krishna leave ...



pratigya seemed to realize that he was not near her n she groped for him , arms extended in drunken stupor krishna...where r u going?' she whined , sad... meera waited for some more secs n then approached pratigya ...'malik wants u to go to the haveli n wait for him in the store room... come..' meera said , trying to pull pratigya by arm... 'no! ...' pratigya shook her head vehemently, staying put n snatching her arm from meera's grip...'krishna told me to sit here ...n not move from here ...u know, not even n inch!' she giggled like a teenage girl , her eyes twinkling... meera looked at her in anger n jealousy... The bitch calls malik by name? ! ... She smiled sweetly...' oh no pratigya! mailk wants u to wait for him at the store room... u know, malik told me to call u... malik has some surprise for u...' ...'surprise...?' gasped pratigya , her eyes wide , her face radiant ...'hmm yes! Come with me... U know malik don't like to be kept waiting!' sneered meera n pratigya stood up , adjusting her hair unnecessarily , giggling... The guests were starting to leave one by one , n pratigya smiled at many who waved at her , meera holding her straight as her feet were wobbly ...


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Chandu stood at the entrance of shailendra's house , checking his watch ... 'happy holi , mr chandu' smiled geetha n she threw green color on him ... Chandu smiled , blinking ... oh no! he didn't bring any color ! what a fool he is ! ...'yeah , happy holi , mr chandu ...' Dinesh repeated , swaying alarmingly in the effect of bhang , his hands around the young girl kavya , the new recruit ... 'ha yes, happy holi..' chandu smiled n looked sheepishly at geetha , who was looking at him in expectation n seemed disappointed for some reason ... 'er... I mean ...' chandu stuttered n took some color from his face n smeared in over geetha's face , repeating 'happy holi...geetha...' geetha turned red n she tuned away quickly , pretending to remove excess color ... 'so ... Tell me, what did u do?' geetha took deeps breath n said ..'we demanded interview with the defense minister n well... dinesh here has managed to place a hidden camera inside the house ...' chandu raised an eyebrow ... 'ok , so when will u be able to get it back?' he asked , his face serious ...'er... we will have to think about it...' meera said , her voice low ... chandu looked at her in exasperation ... 'what? What if somebody finds it out?' ... 'no they won't ... we had hidden it thoroughly ... don't worry... We reporters know what to do in these kind of matters ...' geetha said , her voice assuring ... Chandu nodded ...'u better know... n thanks geetha...' He said , his face softening a bit... geetha smiled n chandu smiled back...


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Lakhan , durjjan's son gritted his teeth , his eyes blood shot with too much bhang ... 'that chic with that photographer dinesh ... ! I want her ... now!' he uttered drunkenly to his brother manu ... 'yeah ... me too want her... we must find her n bring her here ...' Manu said n they stood up , tottering along the garden ... they saw dinesh n kavya laughing n teasing each other n they sneered at each other ...it will be easy to get that worm away ! they thought , their eyes on kavya...


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Krishna stood hiding his irritation as the ministers n many others hugged him in bhang induced mirth n he glared at sajjan , who shrugged ... he escaped somehow n went straight to the fountain , n looked around in confusion, not seeing her... He cursed , even as he felt concerned , n turned around aimlessly , his eyes searching for her... where the hell was she? Didn't he tell her not to move an inch from here? She is going to pay!... he thought in desire n anger n concern... 'hey thakur sahib! U r here! When ur newly wed bride is inside the house , probably waiting for u n u r still pacing in the garden!' giggled a middle aged woman , who was passing by n her friends laughed n giggled , their faces red ... 'what she is inside the house?' krishna exclaimed , his eyes darting towards the haveli, glazed ... the women giggled more , hands over their mouths...' u r such a naughty boy, aren't u thakur sahib! I am surprised u r still here when I thought u two will be in dire need of a room just moments ago...u like to keep ur wife drunk all the time or was it just holi?'... All giggled more horribly n krishna felt heat rise to his face ... He turned n ran towards the haveli , his mind conjuring up extremely naughty images ... He reached inside , his head feeling abit heavy with the bhang n saw her turning towards the courtyard , some maid with her ... where is she going ? ...


'there ... go straight along that sec corridor ... at the far end is the store room ... malik is waiting for u there ...' meera hissed in her ear n pratigya giggled , lurching forward ... there were still many servants n maids cleaning the courtyard n meera didn't want any of them to get suspicious after seeing her with the girl ... bec whatever angad does will be know by tmw morning n if any servant or maid spilled that she took pratigya to store oom , then malik will be roasting her too along with them... She watched in increasing tension , from the eastern end of the courtyard , pretending to check the maids who were taking all the residual colors n water pipes to the room just before the store room... She saw pratigya stumbling n falling down n getting up chortling , her eyes opening n closing ... That bitch! She will ruin everything ! meera though in tension as one of the maids asked pratigya ...'where she was going , choti malkin ?' ... 'surprise !' whispered pratigya dramatically n continued to giggle , her hands extended as she sauntered along ... meera looked around startled as ma sahib called her...' what r u doing here ? meera ? ... Go! The dancers r waiting to get their fees... Go now!' gayatri snapped at her ... Meera went away , tensed... Gayatri barked at the servants n maids ...'finish it fast ! u need to clean up the grounds also... !' many servants n maids instantly left the courtyard n gayatri turned away n went back to the grounds ...



Krishna entered the courtyard through the southern side , not wanting to hear some more horrible things from anyone ... he had seen her going to the side of the ... er ... Store room he thought ... yes! ... He ran along the corridor his eyes on her swaying back ... a maid was trying to lock up the room near the store room after placing the remainder of the holi colors n pipes inside it when she heard pratigya's giggling voice 'krishna... ? where r u...?' the maid looked up startled n saw pratigya coming towards her n ...oh no! chote malik behind her ... heat rushed to her cheeks n she dropped the keys in shock n embarrassment n just ran , plastering herself along the walls of the corridor ...neither pratigya nor krishna too any notice of her ... pratigya's gaze was fixed on the storeroom n krishna's eyes were on her back ... N her voice ! ... the way she said his name! ...' krishna ! ...' pratigya hiccoughed , her feet fumbling n she lost balance again ... strong hands caught her along her waist n pulled her to the unlocked room , her startled gasp echoing along the corridor , even as the door closed shut ......


Hope u liked it 😳


Edited by dhakarn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Take yr time..as we know that u won't disappointed us. ...waiting for full masti kriya holi...
Such a nyce update...omg .now what is this maid connection...so is angad feasting on her..
Holi is round the corner...pls update asap...
Just missing kriya on this holi.
Edited by simmi.friends03 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful update Dhanya👏

Kriya so naughty and your description is so well written that I can visualize what they are doing. So K and P are in the room next to the store room, glad that K got a hold of P. 😳

Looking forward to Kriya enjoyng holi. Take your time with the next update it will be worth it. 😛


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: simmi.friends03

Take yr time..as we know that u won't disappointed us. ...waiting for full masti kriya holi...

Such a nyce update...omg .now what is this maid connection...so is angad feasting on her..
Holi is round the corner...pls update asap...
Just missing kriya on this holi.

thanks dear 😃
hey no no... the maid was ust putting the remaining colors n pipes into a room next to the store room... she saw pratigya n krishna together , that's all... the fact that she saw them will come to play later 😉
me too... that's why i included holi here 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update dhanya/ Waiting for the next part. Me too missing our kriya. Thank u for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekrn

Wonderful update Dhanya👏

Kriya so naughty and your description is so well written that I can visualize what they are doing. So K and P are in the room next to the store room, glad that K got a hold of P. 😳

Looking forward to Kriya enjoyng holi. Take your time with the next update it will be worth it. 😛


Thanks dear ...
trying to wite a fultoo romantic chap... dunno how it will come out Embarrassed
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice update 😃😃😃
and the romance is full on😳 i'm excited for the next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful di... 👏 waiting for next romantic one bt its only kriya haa no angad plz...and thanks for the pm... 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhakarn

Thanks dear ...
trying to wite a fultoo romantic chap... dunno how it will come out 😳



It will be wonderful Dhanya I have no doubt about that😛

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