OS - Amarprem - Chapter 20

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Latha.I

@Latha.I

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

wow...nice update...👏

How can K take P back home so soon...😕 action on the way??? or something happens in KST house...hmm...eagrly waiting for next update...

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dhakarn

@dhakarn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Latha.I
wow...nice update...👏

How can K take P back home so soon...😕 action on the way??? or something happens in KST house...hmm...eagrly waiting for next update...

whoa ... u summed it much pretty well 😉

they r going to fight their feelings , as usual, egos come into play...n I will give a hint, specultae on 😉 ... there is going to be a twist, a trigger to a huge misunderstanding on the way...

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dhakarn

@dhakarn

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Hope2

How do I know they're headed toward the inevitable?
Youre doing a great job of describing their feelings and how they react to each other...

thanks di... they r going to realise that they r attracted towards each other... much to the anger of both 😆

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Khushi96

@Khushi96

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

excellent part i am just catching up with this OS again and its become addictive i love how you have portrayed 'Pratigya' that she confused as what she feels for Krishna its so good. 😃

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868037

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Khushi96
excellent part i am just catching up with this OS again and its become addictive i love how you have portrayed 'Pratigya' that she confused as what she feels for Krishna its so good. 😃

Where is your ff? 😊

Edited by Hope2 - 12 years ago