FF **LoVe QuAdRaNgUlAr** Part 12 updtd on PG 95*

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Part 9 : Page 82
Part 10 : Page 86
Part 11 : Page 90
Part 12 : Page 95
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Edited by PiE-ChUcKeR_AmI - 13 years ago
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This Part is dedicated to my Prashu dii (prash_t)😊😊


Krishna was fuming with anger after seeing Pratigya and Amit pictures.


Vikram evily smiles after seeing krishna's angry face and purposely passes a comment loudly

"Baar Baar Dekho, Hazar Baar Dekho, Ke Dekh Ne Ki Cheez Hai Hamari Dilruba, Taali Ho, Taali Ho.."

After listening vikram's comment everyone laughs loudly.

After sometime a teacher comes in into the class,as soon as teacher saw vikram,she became angry and shouts on Vikram.

Teacher: Vikram tum yahan kyun aaye ho tumhe pata nahi hai kya ki tum 3 dino ke liye suspend ho toh phir yahan kyun aaye ho jao yahan se abhi turant warna mujhse bura koi aur nahi hoga.


Vikram: mam mujhe pata hai main 3 dino ke liye suspend hun aur 2 din baki hai mere suspension order ki validity khatam hone mei,
par mujhe mere dost ne bataya ki college mei Ek Romantic movie ki Poster lagi toh main usse hi dekhne aa gaya Mujhe kya pata tha ki college mei bhi romantic poster release hoti.Ab main chalta hun.

The lecturer was shocked to see Pratigya and Amit pictures, which was posted on wall pictures.She asked from Amit and Pratigya about the pictures with a smile on her face.

When Krishna notices teacher's smile and began to think deeply about the incident, as his heart was not accepting, that his friends could betray him. While Amit and Pratigya were not able to answer everyone's question and because of this Krishna again became suspicious about them.

Mean while at Vikram's house


Vikram came back home happily and goes towards his sister's room ..

Vikram : " di kaam ho gaya,maine undono kaa band baja dala"

Tanu : wah kya baat kahi Vicky ..u made my day ..

Vikram : achha aab agee kaa plan kya hai ..

Tanu : abb tum Krishna se dosti karo aur usko Amit ke khilaff brain wash karo 'phir dekhna mazzaa 'is se saanp bhi marr jayega aur laathi bhi nahi tutegi '

Vikram : thank you di abb mai yahi karunga ..

They both hug each other and Vikram smiles evilly.

At Coffee shop in Lunch Time ..

All the students were enjoying their lunch. Amit and Pratigya were sitting together in a table, where as also Krishna and Muskaan were sitting together in a different table.

Pratigya glares at Krishna,who was busily enjoying lunch with Muskaan. She again look at Amit,who was noticing Muskaan and then few minutes later Muskaan glare at Amit, who also was enjoying his lunch with Pratigya '

Krishna : hame khush hone kaa natak karna padega Muskaan '

Muskaan : ok Krishna ..hum inko jab tak ignore karenge jab tak inhe apni galti kaa aihsas naa ho

Krishna : hmmm..

Pratigya thinks that Krishna is busy with Muskaan and he has'snt been bothered about her 'she became sad ..

Pratigya : Amit !! hame achha nahi lag raha Krishna aur Muskaan humse itna durr baithe hain'

Amit: haan hame bhi achaa nahi lag raha '

They both notices that Krishna and Muskaan were sharing their lunchbox together and they looks happy together ..

Amit : chaloo hum unke pass jakar baith jate hain vahi hum apni sari misunderstanding clarify karlenge ..

Pratigya : haan ye thik rahega Amit'

As they both move towards Krishan and Muskaan's table, and closer to the table

Krishna stood up and tells Muskaan : "chaloo hum kahin aur chalte hain ,yahan log hame thik se lunch bhi nahi karne denge"

Muskaan : haan chaloo Krishna hum chalte hain ,,yahan hamari kisi ko parvaa hi nahi hai (she stares Amit and leaves)

Pratigya and Amit were both shocked to see such reactions from Krishna and Muskaan ..

Pratigya (thinks) : Krishna ne ham eek bhi baar mud ke nahi dekha aisa kaise ho sakta hai ??? kahin Krishna ,Muskaan ko chahne toh nahi lage hain??? She looks confused '

Amit (thinks) : abb mai kaise smajhau Krishna aur Muskaan koo 'he looks sad ..

AT PUB'

Krishna was fully in drunken state nor can stand properly on his feet, with bottle of wine on his hand in Devdas style.shouting on himself again and again :
"kaun Bardast karne ke liye peeta hai, Hum toh aaj peeye hai sirf Amit aur pratigya ji ke love story ko bardast karne ke liye"

suddenly a group of some goon guys came close to Krishna and demanding some money from him '

Goon guy: abe bewda kya chilla raha hai chal kuch paise nikal warna tujhe yahi dafan kar denge abe tu sunn raha hai ki nahi.


Krishna(In fully drunken state) : kya bhai saab ab aap mujhe shanti se peene bhi nahi denge kya aap mujhe peene se nahi rok sakte chalo jaaye yahan se warna. ..

Goon guy: warna kya ?? abe tu hume darata hai teri toh ruk tujhe hum batate hai tu kisase panga le raha hai.


Then they started fighting with krishna.
krishna wasn't in any state to fight with them, some how he start beating them but they all four started beating him like hell '


suddenly a bike came and stops in front of them. a man came out from his bike and stood infront of those goons . then that man says in angry tone :
Ye kya ho raha hai,kyun ye bechare ko pitt rahe ho (
The bike rider is none other than Vikram)
(Vikram didn't notice that they are beating krishna who was lying unconscious on road facing other side)
Goon guy: abe ab tu kaun hai be iskaa bhai hai,dost hai jo ye puch raha hai chal ab tu bhi paise nikal warna aise hi pade rahega isake jaisa.

Vikram (in funny mood) : Riste me toh hum tumhare Baap lagte hai Naam hai Vikram The Rathore woh bhi Ranjhod ka Rathore

Goon guy:
abe nautanki baaj ruk Tujhe batate hai .

Vikram : abee ohh LAPHAR- JHANDISS tujhe mai abhi batata hu '.


then they all started attacking Vikram and start beating him .

Vikram too started beating them but he was trown away,after then Vikram took out his gun from his pocket and pointed towards the leader of the goon.

Vikram: ab bas bahut ho gaya chalo bhag jao yahan se warna yahi pe puri golli khali kar dunga


seeing Vikram's anger with gun they all started running away away.
after that Vikram helps injured Krishna(still unaware that man who was lying was Krishna)
Vikram:Arre bhai uth jaa vo gunde Bhag gaye.
Krishna slowly getting back his consciousness now but he was badly injured and he turned his face towards Vikram.

They both look each other in shocking manner
Vikram:abe tu yahan kya kar raha tha itni Raat mei '
Krishna wasn't able to speak anything,

After seeing that man was Krishna.Vikram gets annoyed and shouted
"oh God maine ye kya kar diya iss krishna ki help ki maine ab mujhe yahan issi waqt isse chodkar chale jana chahiye"

Vikram was about to go leave injured krishna alone there.but his mind was diverted by some inner voice coming from his heart.

"vikram tumhe isse aise chodkar nahi jana chahiye ,yahi maukaa hai isse friendship karne kaa 'jo dii nai kaha tha mai vahi karta hu ..aaj mai iski jaan bacchakar isse dosti karta hu aur dosti karne ke baad mai isi ko Amit ke against karaunga"

He gives an evil smile '

he decided to help krishna and took him to the near Hospital for his treatment

Krishna got admitted and Vikram leaves from there '

To be continued ...

Precap :


Amit to Pratigya

Amit : jaldi chalo Krishna hospital mai hai ..usko Vikram nai badi behrami se maara hai ..

Pratigya looks shocked '



Editing Credit : Priya (Toofan Express)😆😆

Edited by PiE-ChUcKeR_AmI - 13 years ago
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It was a beginning of a new session in Gurukul's college of Science and Technology .

Look at the outer look of the college


many students from various parts of India have taken an admission in this college for their higher education. There was'nt any strict discipline in the college . the college was full of masti and drama and the passed out students used to tell their juniors that this college provides independence to all the students 'means anyone can enjoy and do whatever he/she want to 'without anyone's pressure and fear '.

Now it was a day where a new session was about to begin with new students attending there first day in there college 'it was a bright sunshine 'and many students have already made into there class '

Look at their Classroom


Amit enters into the class,he was looking nervous and at the same time he was looking excited to make new friends .

Amit: (saying to himself) ye kya hai ..itna bada college aur upar se itne sundar sundar ladkiyaan 'yahan toh mauj hai rajjja".

Amit was bit naughty from his mind 'he always used to mean his business ..he was little bit weak in studies but he ranks himself high for judging and looking out for girls '.he respects every girls and may be he's out for girlfriends as he does'nt have any uptil now.

Amit takes up his seat '

After a while ..there enters a Beautiful Girl whose name was Muskaan (her eyes were so beautiful,with long hairs all in all she was looking pretty) she enters into the class ..as soon as she enters into the class ,she murmured "uff mai kaha seat luu 'sab seat full hain except last benches .."and she noticed that a boy was sitting alone with a seat on left corner on his side was vacant 'she took that seat'fortunately that boy's name was Amit '

Now after a while ,a guy with Hat on his head,was wearing sunglasses and chain on his arms enters into the class 'he looks so naughty and his expressions signifies that his ultimate goal of taking admission in this college is not for education ..as soon as he enters into the class 'he started whispering and was he suddenly took out his glasses and and he looks here and there '.his attitude was showing that he's from a big rich family 'and he is here for doing dabnagai in this college 'his name was Vikram. He took his seat at last boletoh backbenchers'

Now enters a stylish and Handsome boy Krishna,he was so smart and dashing that as soon as he entered into the class room ..all girls were giving a wide stare towards him 'all were so impressed with Krishna 'his dress,body expressions were all mindblowing 'all were impressed except Vikram who was sitting at the last ..Vikram passed a comment "ye kaun hai bee 'kuch kuch hota hai kaa SRK" all of there classmate started laughing after hearing such comments passed from Vikram 'there was no seat left for Krishna so he decided to get himself seated with Vikram ..as there was no front seats left '

After a while here enters ..a Beautiful and dashing Girl with all those attributes which every boy wants in his Girl 'she was looking so hot with her makeup 'her eyes was mindblowing with short hairs 'she looks stunning and as soon as she enterted into the class 'all those boys who were seated were staring at her 'and the Girls who were present there were feeling jealous after seeing her beauty ' Krishna was'nt showing any attention to her but that naughty boy Vikram was so impressed with Pratigya's beauty that he again passed one comment " yee loo aa gayi hamri chamak challo" '

After hearing such words from Vikram all classmate strated laughing and Pratigya was feeling insulted and was uncomfortable with those words ..Krishna who was sitting beside does'nt like that comment and in anger he told Vikram that "agar kisi ladki kii khubsurti kki tarrif nahi kar sakte toh uska majak mat uadaya karo " '

Vikram ( in anger) : abee tere ko itni mirchi kyu lag rahi hai teri girlfriend lagti hai '

Krishna : jawan sambhal ke baat kar ..ladki ki ijjat hi uski sabse bade cheej hai '

Vikram : tere ko kya karna hai 'bahut uchall kudd raha hai ladkiyoon ke mamle main..

Amit comes into support Arhaan

Amit : sahi keh rahe hai ye sahab ..ladkiyo ko "chamak challo" kehte ho ,tumhe sharam nahi aati 'ladkiyoon ki ijjat karna sikho beta ..

Vikram : abbe tu kya iiska chamcha hai jo ye bolega vahi sach hoga '.tum dono mujhe nahi jante ho ..mai kya kya kar sakta hu 'ye tum aone 7 janam mai bi nahi soch sakte '

Krishna becomes more angry ..

Krishna : haan baata kya karlega '.

In the meanwhile Pratigya and Muskaan were impressed to see Amit and Krishna fighting against Vikram 'they both were happy to see the amount of respect they had for girls '

Vikram : dekkhh mai abi tujhe batata hu ..

Vikram grabs the Krishna's collar 'and started hitting him hard '..

Amit comes in support of Krishna but he too get kicked by Vikram ..and Amit's head got hit by iron nails and bleeding started '

And in the meanwhile Krishna was also geeting harsh beating from Vikram 'he was'nt able to beat Vikram as he was strong and powerful person '.suddenly Krishna too got some injuries and fight continues '

Suddenly a Teacher came into the class ..and he shouted to what was going here 'suddenly fight stops '


to be continued...

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Next day at the college '


Vikram came to college along with his Project synopsis, he was looking for Ankita

He looks here and there but could'nt foind her so he decided to move to the canteen to look out Ankita'

Vikram reached Canteen and sat at on of the chairs ..he was waiting impatiently for Ankita ..he continues to stare the canteen main entry door ..

He wonders "ye Ankita abhi tak ayii kyu nahi hai?? "'

he started reading synopsis ..

After 1 hour later Ankita came and sat in front of him '


Vikram: aap kahan thi last 1 hour se yahan par aapka intezar kar raha hun coffee peeta reh gaya

Ankita got angry and in anger she shout on Vikram:

"achha tum 1 hour se intezar kar rahe ho toh tumhe gussa aa raha hai ? aur maine kal tumhara pura din intezaar kiya uskaa kya? kahan the kal tum jab maine kahan tha ki morning 10:00 bajemilna kyunki hume project kee bare mai discuss karna tha ' par tum toh aaye hi nahi kyun?? samjhte kya ho tum apne aap ko VIP ho jo tumse milne ke liye tumhara intezar karte rahe bas aur tum aao hi nahi.agar tumhe mere sath project nahi banana hai ya mere sath koi problem hai toh bol do main at least main tumhara intezaar toh nahi karti rahungi.bolo kal kyu nahi aaye ?"


Vikram think in his min: ."arre baap re ye toh Durga maa nikali yaar jo mere uper hunter barsaye hi jaa rahi hai beta Vicky agar ise pata chalega ki main kal ghar pe sho raha tha toh mera toh keema hi bana dalegi. hey bhagwan mujhe bacha lo aaj isase ya kuch idea do jisase main bacha lun apne aap ko."

Ankita: maine pucha kal kahan the ' toh bolti band kyun ho gayi kal aaram farma rahe hoge janab ..aab ye kya denge jawab '.bolo naa kyu nahi aye ??

suddenly Vikram got an idea to save himseft from ankita and started doing his nautanki.
Vikram in crying tone "vo vo kal main hospital mei tha dad ko minor attack aya tha isliye".
as soon as she heard Vikram's dad was in hospital her anger vanished she asked him in soft tone:

"abhi kaisi tabiyat hai uncle ki aur tumne mujhe pahle mujhe kyun nahi bataya ye baat?? khamo khao main tum par chillati rahi."


Vikram to himself "bach gaya beta main akhir mera nautanki ne mujhe bacha hi liya".


Vikram: abhi dad thik hai aur aap toh mujh par hunter barshaye hi jaa rahi thi mujhe bolne ka mauka hi nahi diya toh kaise bolta.
Ankita: i'm really sorry vikram mujhe aise tumse baat nahi karni chahiye thi par kya karu jab main gussa hoti hun toh bina kisi ki sune kuch bhi bol deti hun please mujhe maaf kar do please.

Vikram: Its okay sorry kahne ki koi jarurat nahi hai aapke jagah agar main hota toh main bhi yahi sab kahta.
then he handed synopsis to ankita " aap isse dekh lena main iss subject pe bahut pahle se research kar raha hun toh main chahta hun ki kyun na issi subject pe hi project banaye, ab main chalta hun kuch puchna hoga toh puch lena kal milte hai. bye ".


saying this he was about to leave when ankita called him

Ankita: arre Vikram suno tum apna cell phone number de do taki kuch doubt ya help chahiye hogi mujhe toh tum se direct puch lungi.


Vikram says to himself "abey ab isse mera number bhi chahiye chal ghar ka number de deta hun"
"okay aap mere ghar ka number le lijiye main mobile nahi rakhta hun aap mere ghar pe call kar lena jab bhi aapko koi bhi doubt ho."

Ankita: okay bye kal milte hai".



It was Krishna's birthday '

Pratigya was busy to give a surprise to Krishna .. she decided to reserve a hotel for Krishna's birthday '.. moreover she decides to take help from Muskaan and Amit '

Krishna was trying to call Pratigya ..but her cell was switched off '

Krishna became tensed and he decides to go college to look after Pratigya '

Krishna reached College ..

As soon as he entered into the college's main door ..he sees Vikram there '

He stops Vikram ..

Krishna : kya tumne Pratigya ko dekha hai ?

Vikram : haan dekha tha ..vo subah Amit aur Muskaan kee saath ke saath bhaar ja rahi thi 'par abhi college mai nahi hai '

Krishna again got tensed and says to himself "ye Pratigya kahan chalii gayi bina bataye??? "'




At Hotel '

Pratigya was busy in her decorations ..she tells Muskaan that Krishna should'nt been knowning about this surprise ' Muskaan was in deep thought '

Muskaan thinks " aaj hum kisi bhi haal maii Amit koo apne dill kii baat bata kar hi rahenge ..hume is din se accha mauka nahi mil sakta " '

Pratigya shouted loudly "aree Muskaan kya hua?? ".

Muskaan : kuch nahi Pratigya '

Pratigya : accha hum tumse keh rahe the kii is surprise ke bare mai Krishna koo maat batana ..

Muskaan : thik hai '

Muskaan looks sad '


Krishna was riding his bike ..he was tensed ..

He thinks :
:kaise pratigya bhul sakti hai ki aaj humara janam din hai aur ek baar bhi phone kar hume happy birthday bhi nahi kahan aur hum soch rahe the aaj mera janam din khas hoga kyunki iss bar hum apna janam din pratigya ke sath manayenge par pratigya ko toh yaad hi nahi raha ki aaj hamara bairthday hai." ..



At Hotel '

It was an evening and Pratigya was almost done with her preparations '

She notices Amit '

She goes towards him ..

Pratigya : Amit sab taiyarri hoo gayi naa??

Amit : haan sab taiyaari ho gayi ..

Pratigya : accha humne Krishna ke sabhi doston ko bula liya hai including Vikram ..

Amit : (in anger) us kamine Vikram ko kyu bula liya ?

Pratigya : aree usne Krishna ki jaan bachai haii toh uske bhi bulana bhi jaruri tha naa'.
usse bulana hi padega ..akir Krishna bhi toh use dekhkar khush hoga naa ..

Amit got annoyed and he leaves from there '


Pratigya rings to Krishna 'who was busy sleeping in his bed '

He woked up and picked up his call ..

Krishna : kahan thi tum Pratigya hum tumhe subah se phone kar rahe hain ..tumhara phone switch off bata raha tha ..

Pratigya smiles 'and then she started doing her nautanki '.
Pratigya : hum bahut badi musibaat mai hain 'kuch gunde hume yahan utha kar le aye hain '.please Krishna hume bacha loo '.

all of a sudden Krishna got up from his bed 'he looks afraid '

Pratigya : gunddo nai hume is hotel ke kamre mai band kar rakha hai ..please hume bacha loo '

Krishna: hum abhi ate hai humare hote huye tumhe koi hath bhi nahi laga sakta hum aa rahe hai pratigya '

Krishna cuts that Phone 'and all of a sudden he rushes to that Hotel '

Pratigya cuts her phone with a smile on her face '



Krishna reaches that Hotel 'as soon as he reaches there ..he notices that the whole hotel is in dark ..
suddenly a piyano gets into play " happy birthday to u" '

Krishna gives a lovely smile 'suddenly lights takles on ..and he sees Pratigya who was playing with a piaono '

Krishna gets happy ..he got overjoyed ..and he comes closer to Pratigya where she was playing with a piaono '

Krishna : aab hume samajh aay kii tumne hume Birthday wish kyu nahi kiya '.

Pratigya : HAPPY BIRTHDAY Krishna 'tumko hamari bhi umaar lag jaye '.

Krishna puts up his finger into Pratigya's lips ..

Krishna : chall aisa nahi kehte ..

Krishna : I LOVE YOU pratigya ..

Pratigya : I Love you too Krishna .,.

Krishna was about to kiss her ..but was interrupted with peoples who were gathered there '

Everyone wished Krishna '

Krishna cuts his Birthday cake 'along with Pratigya ..




the two couples started feeding cake to each other with their eyes lock 😉

Krishna notices Vikram '

Vikram: happy birthday bhai ..

Krishna : thanku Vikram ..

Krishna says to Pratigya that " hum tumhare bahut abbhari hai kii tumne Vikram koo hamare janamdin par bulaya 'thankoo Pratigya "..

Pratigya : humne toh sirf tumhare liye ye sab kiya taki tumhe acha lage aur tum hume thank u sukriya mat kaho ye toh hamara farz tha ki aakhir hum apse pyar karte hai aur pyar ke liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte kya ..

Krishna started looking itno Pratigya's eyes ..

Pratigya too notices Krishna and she too started staring his eyes '

They both got busy in their eye lock '


Vikram plays some music ' and after then Couples startred their dance '

Krishna and Pratigya started dancing ..with both of there eyes goot locked '

Muskaan feels annoyed and started staring Amit who was busy in drinking soft drink '

Muskaan says to herself " aab yahi sahi samay hai Amit koo apne dill kii baat batani kii "

She goes near Amit ..

Muskaan : Amit kya um ekk minute ke litye hamare saath akale mai baat kar sakte ho ?

Amit : haan kyu nahi Muskaan ..

They both decides to move outside the Hotel '

Meanwhile Pratigya who was dancing with Krishna notices Muskaan and Amit who were leaving that hall '

Pratigya says to Krishna : ye Amit aur Muskaan kahan jaa rahe hain bhaar ..sab kuch thik toh hai naa ..

Krishna : aree tum kyu fikaar karti ho ..tum idhaar dekho hamari annkhoon mai aur kho jayo ..

Pratigya : nahi Krishna ..hume dekhna chaoye akhir vo dono bhi hamare dost hain '

Krishna : thik hai hum chalke dekhte hain '

They both followed Amit and Muskaan ..


Outside the Hotel '

Amit and Muskaan came near the parking ..

Muskaan : humee ekk jaroori baat karni hai tumse ..

Amit : haan bolo Muskaan ..

Muskaan started thinking "hum ye kaise bataye iskoo " ..

She started thinking ..

Amit : ohh madam kahan kho gayi '

Muskaan : arre kuch nahi '

Amit : toh phir kyu bulaya ..

Muskaan : Amitt 'hum ..

Amit : kya hum '

Muskaan : hum tumse pyaar karte hain ..I Love you Amit ..

Amit looks shocked 'somehow he controls himself

Amit : kyaa???

Muskaan : haan Amit ..hum tumse pyaar karte hain ..tum hamare din raat khayalonn mai aate ho aur tumhare bina nahi jee sakte ..

Amit : lekin mai tumse Pyar nahi karta '

Muskaan looks heart broken 'tears comes from her eyes '

Muskaan : thik hai toh khao hamari kasam kii tum hamari itni sib hi kadar nahi karte aur tum hum apne dost se kuch nahi smajhte ..

Amit got perturbed' he was about to cry as he too feels something for Muskaan ..but he was hesitant to say her ..so he decides to avoid her '

Amit : nahi '.(he stops himself from answering Muskaan further)

Muskaan: kyu aab kyu chup ho 'khao naa tum hamari Kasam 'yaa phir tum bhi hum see..

Amit interrupts Muskaan in between ..

Amit : aisaa haii ..tum jyada bakaitii naa karo 'aur hume jane doo '

Amit leaves from there '


Muskaan looks sad and she says to himself " Amit hum jante hain kii tum hum se pyar karte hoo ..parr tumm ek baar keh nahi paa rahe ho 'huum jaldi hii tumse kabool karva kar rahenge" ..

From Behind Krishna and Pratigya sees all this drama between Amit and Muskaan ..

Both looks shocked ..

To be continued ..


Precap :

Amit was lifting dumbles at a college gym 'Muskaan was also there who was also doing her physical exercise '

Muskaan started staring Amit 'who was busy lifting in heavy dumbles '

Amit notices her stare and accidently one dumble falls into his left foot '

Amit started shouting in pain '

Muskaan notices it and quickly rushes to Amit for medical help '

Muskaan : kya hu amit ??

Muskaan started crying 'and asks for help '

Amit in pain nbut he was also noticing her tears '



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Inside a ClassRoom

A Teacher came inside the class room and told everyone about minnor project and he decided to divided all students in groups for this minor project …

He told everyone that a single group will consists of 2 students composing of one boy and a girl


He started announcing groups …

group one : krishna and pratigya
group two : Amit and Muskaan
Group three : Vikram and Ankita …
and followed by all the various other groups …


Krishna and pratigya looks so happy as they both will be handling a same project …they both stares each other …

Pratigya smiles at him at the end ..and Krishna looks happy …


whereas Amit and muskaan looks happy ..Muskaan stares at Amit who was busy looking here and there …Muskaan started smiling and as soon as Amit looks towards her ..Muskaan started looking here and there …Amit too smiles at her but she was'nt looking at him ….at the end both looks very happy …

whereas Vikram was unhappy with that grouping system …due to that he got annoyed and stands up ..and says :

" sir kya group mei sirf one boy and one girl hi honge?? aisa nahi ho sakta ki boys aur girls separate project kare??."


Teacher: mujhe pata tha ki ye question koi na koi puchne wala jarur hoga, agar group mei sirf boys rahenge toh project banega hi nahi bas masti hoga isliye maine iss bar boys and girls ko combine karke hi group banaya hai taki koi masti na ho aur project time par finish ho jaye aur jiska project sabse achha hoga usse award milega management ki taraf se ".

So u all now free to ask anything related to your project and be ready to give me details about your project within a week …

So I wish all the very best to all of you for your projects and by saying this saying this he left that class.


Everyone moves towards their groups members to discuss about their project model.


meanwhile Pratigya goes near to krishna for their project … and tells him

"Thank god krishna ki hum dono ek hi group mei hai ab dono sath milkar project work karenge"
Krishna: haan par hum dono ek group mei hai toh aap god ko thanks kyun kah rahi hai

Pratigya(smiling): Tum nahi samajhoge ...
Krishna: kya nahi samjhuga main? aur aap muskura kyun rahi ho?
Pratigya: kuch nahi achha ye batao ki tumne kuch socha hai ki hamara projct kaisa hoga
Krishna: nahi pratigya ji abhi toh kuch nahi socha hai chaliye canteen mei baithkar discuss karte hai uske baare mei"


then they leaves for canteen...

Vikram was about to leave but Amit came in there and start laughing at him
"kya Vikram ab kaisa lag raha hai tujhe, kuch bhi ho tujhe iss halat mei matlab aise langdate hua dekhkar mujhe toh bahut maza aa raha hai ,ye teri saza hai tu ne hi mere dost Krishna ko peeta tha naa toh aab durr rehna hum logon se .."


by saying this Amit leaves from, there , Vikram was evily smiling
and says to himself "beta amit tu bahut asmann mai ud raha tu uddta rah jis din election finished uss din tujhe asmaan se narak mei speed post kar dunga ".
suddenly Ankita came there and asked him

"hello vikram ye aapki aisi halat kaise hui hai?"


Vikram got disturbed by Ankita's presence he was silent for a while after then he replied her "arre kuch nahi bike se accident ho gaya tha isliye par aap yahan kya kar rahi hai"


Ankita: Main vo project ke bare mei aap se discuss karne aayi thi hum dono ek hi group mei hai na isliye par maine aapki aur uss ladke jiske sath aapki kuch samay pahle baat ho rahi thi dono ki baat suni.toh aapki iss halat ka zimmedar vo ladka hai na? ussi ne aap ka ye haal kiya hai na? toh aapne police mei report kyun nahi karai uske aganist usse toh saja milni chahiye thi iske liye taki vo kisi aur ke sath aisa na kar sake."


Vikram got irritated by her bhashan and replied her camly.
"Aap project ke bare mei bat kar rahi thi na toh ussi ke bare mei baat kariye ye fizul ki baate chhodiye aur haan jahan tak project ka sawal hai vo main khud kar lunga aapko kuch karne ki ya pareshan honi ki jarurat nahi hai."

Ankita: aise kaise aap kud akele hi kar loge main aapke group mei hun toh dono milkar karenge.aur aap kal mujhe college canteen mei miloge thik 10 baje phir hum dono mil kar project decide karenge.ok bye kal milte hai "

by saying this she left that place and Vikram looks confused and thinks "ye ajib ladki hai yaar ab mujhe iske sath project banana padega kya oh god mere sath kya kya ho raha hai pichle kuch dino se ab kuch bhi ho Vicky beta ye project perfect hona chahiye bas chahe kisi ke sath bhi banana pade."

Then he leaves from there ..

Meanwhile Muskaan comes near to Amit who was sitting on a bench …he was thinking deep and looks sad … Muskaan notices his sadness .

Muskaan : Amit …tum kyu sad ho haan ??? hame toh batao ki kya baat hai ??

Amit : kuch nahi bas ………huhhh rehne do

Muskaan comes near to him ..

Muskaan : dekho hum tumhare dost hai naa …toh chalo hume jaldi hame batao ki kyu sad ho ?? tum hame accha friend mante ho naa ..toh plzz batao

Amit : haan Muskaan ..ek tum hi toh hoo jo hame acche se samjhti ho..baki koi nahi hai jo hame samajh sake …

By listening to his words she puts her hand on Amit's shoulders …and started showing her concern ..

Muskaan : nahi Amit …aisi baat nahi hai …chalo sad mat ho …hum hai naa tumhare saath ..tum hame dost mante ho toh ..hame toh bata sakte ho naa…

Amit : yaar tum janti ho naa kii Vikram nee Krishna koo us din kitna maara …

Muskaan tried to stop Amit as she knows that it was'nt Vikram who beats Krishna …

Amit continues…

Amit : toh usi kaa badla lene maine Vikram koo kaal maara ..par ajj Krishna hum se naaraz hai …vo kehta hai kii Vikram ne usko nahi marra …abb tumhi batao Muskaan ..ab isme hamari kya galti hai …aur Krishna hum par gussa ho raha hai

Muskaan : dekho Amit ..hum tumhari baat ko acche se samajh sakte hain …chaloo chodo hume aajse apne Project ki tayari bhi toh karni hai …chalo hum dono canteen chalte hain ..vahin par hi hum discuss karnege

They both moves toward Canteen …


At Canteen


Krishna and pratigya were discussing about their project

Krishna: pratigya ji aap ko kuch idea ho toh bataye ki kis type ka project hona chahiye?

Pratigya: kya ye tum" pratigya ji pratigya ji" kahte rahte ho sirf pratigya kehne mei koi problem hai kya?

Krishna: nahi koi problem nahi hai par aaj kal toh parle ke biscuit ke sath bhi ji lagate hai toh main aapko pratigya ji kahkar respect deta hun bas.


Pratigya : par mujhe koi respect nahi chahiye mujhe aisa lagta hai ki main budhi ho gayi hun isliye pls pratigya bola kijiye. (she smiles)


Krishna: hahaha ok ab se pratigya hi bolunga ab khush na chalo kuch khate hai bahut bhukh lagi hai.

Pratigya: haan bhuk toh bahut lagi hai sach mei kuch khaya jaye.
Krishna: thik hai main order karke ata hun aap rukiye

Krishna went to order something but suddenly he saw Amit ..he became angry


KST style he went to Amit and stand in front of him and grabed his collor ..and says
"teri himmat kaise hui gayi bey Vikram ko marne kii tu samajhta kya hai apne aap ko ki tu kisi ko bhi marega peetega vo bhi bina kisi ke kasoor ke"


Amit: krishna tu uss vikram ke liye apne dost ka coller pakad raha hai jisne tere sath mar peet ki ussi ke liye tu ab mujhse lad raha hai.


soon everyone gathered there …

Muskaan and pratigya also came there ..

Muskaan: krishna ye kya kar rahe ho tum chhodo Amit ko.

Pratigya: Krishna chhodo Amit ko ye tum thik nahi kar rahe ho Amit tumhara dost hai aur tum usske sath aisa kaise kar sakte ho chhodo usse.

Krishna: bhad mei gayi dosti ye dost kahlane ke layak nahi hai ise toh main nhi chodunga isne bahut galat kiya hai mere sath….

Vikram was also seated there ..he was enjoying his entertainment full of wrestling …

Krishna slapped Amit ..and Amit fells down

Muskaan started crying

Krishna picked up one of the chair and was going to hit Amit with that but …

Muskaan comes in between and says to Krishna :

"ye kyaa laga rakha hai Krishna..hum saant hai toh iska matlab ye nahi ki tum hum pe kuch bhi karoge "

Krishna was boiling in anger … he tells Muskaan :

"tum haato yahan se , aaj isko mai dekh hi leta hu"

Amit stood up …

Pratigya comes in between and tells Krishna to calm down his anger ..

Krishna shrugs them off …and he was again going to hit Amit with that chair ...

Pratigya shouts on Krishna :"Krishna abb bas bhi karo,hamare liye tum Amit chorr do ..tumhe hamari kasam"

Krishna : nahi aaj hame koi nahi rok payega ..

Pratigya looses her cool and shouts on Krishna again :

"thik hai Krishna tum khubb marro Amit ko ..aaj humne dekh liya ki tumhare kiye hum nahi Vikram jyada important hai "

She too started crying

Krishna notices her tears …

Krishna throws that chair onto the floor …

Vikram got annoyed

Krishna comes nearer to Pratigya and says :

"Pratigya please aab tum matt roo …thik hai hum tumhare liye ye maarpit nahi karnege"

He started wiping her tears

As soon as Krishna touched her face …she felt little bit uncomfortable and started looking into his eyes

They started starring eachother ….

After 2-3 mins ..someone from behind does "Ahem Ahem"

Pratigya and Krishna both got distracted ..and started looking down and both smiles looking eachother

and then they leaves from there ...


meanwhile Amit comes near to Muskaan ..who was crying

Amit : tum aab kyu ro rahi ho …

Muskaan : Amit tum …(she started wiping her tears) tum thik toh ho naa …

Amit : haan mai thik hu ….

Muskaan was'nt able to control her tears as she can't see Amit getting insulted and beaten like this ..so she decided to go from there …

Muskaan: (by giving fake smile) ok Amit …mujhe jana hai ….humm kall milte hain …

Amit : arree suno toh ….

Amit was trying to say something but Muskaan leaves from there …

Amit got confused ..and thinks:

"yee Muskaan koo kya ho gaya ..hame sirf ek thapad hi pada that par vo itna rone lagi aur apni parva bhi naa karte hue hame bachane ke liye beech mai aa gayi …aakhir baat kya hai ?? ..kaahin vo toh nahi jo mai soch raha hu …." He got confused and after sometime he leaves from there.

Vikram who was seated there looks annoyed and perturbed ..he thinks :

"yee sasuri Pratigya hamesa beech mai aa jati hai …pura bana banaya plan bekaar kar diya ….salla pura mazza kharab ho gaya in sab ki prem kahani ki vajah se ….chalo Vikram babu kuch aisa karna padega …jis se ye aag jo bujh gayi hai …phir se jaal jaye ….Amit tera samay sahi chal raha hai …aaj toh tub ach gaya ..par mai apni is halat kaa badla toh lekar rahunga …"

Vikram looks angry and he leaves from there


Precap :

Pratigya is getting ready to propose Krishna ..she says to herself "aaj hum Krishna ko apne dill kii baat bata kar rahenge" ..

and an another flash back where Muskaan gets up from her bed and says to herself "kya hamee Pyar ho gaya hai? "


to be continued ...

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Hey Friends ,i have decided to include some names of Forum members in this FF😛😛

Lead Roles:

Krishna




Pratigya





⭐️All Creations by Vikram bhai
⭐️

Members who have given me there names are :

Amit (myself)
Vikram
Muskaan
Meena
Priya
Tanu
Ash
Simmie
Ramona
Lipsa
Gees






Amit : a boy who loves Pratigya but he has a softcore for Muskaan too,he likes to make friends.

Vikram : a spoiled brat who always wants to make people suffer from his deeds,a very hard and strong person to face.

Muskaan : who likes Amit but has a softcore for Krishna,she too likes to make friends.

Priya : a student who always gives importance to her studies and had always supported the truth

Tanu : she is Vikram's sister,she gives tips and various ideas to Vikram for outsmarting his opponent,mainly she is responsible for Vikram's bad attitude.

Ramona : Pratigya's room partner.
Meena : Krishna's sister
Ankita : She is an innocent girl and would start liking Vikram.
Shweta: she is flirty girl and a best friend of Ankita.
Simmie : Amit's school best friend.



Enteries still to come :

Ash
Lipsa
FaisA
Gees


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**PART 5 PROMO**

Pratigya noitices that Krishna is ignoring her while Amit notices that Muskaan is not talking to him or seeing towards him ...


Pratigya senses that there is something going on between Krishna and Muskaan ...she becomes suspicious about them after seeing their closeness ...

Pratigya says to herself "Kahhinnn Krishna ,Muskaan ko chahne toh nahi laga..."😲😲
she looks tensed



PS: Sorry Guys for delay was busy with my college work ..
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This Part is dedicated to my sweet : Ramona😉😉

Vikram was giving an Evil smile 😈 and went straight to his house

look at his house where he lives


As soon as Vikram enter in his house his father shouted on him

his father was an MLA Rohit Rathore a reputed man of the society

Rohit: Nalayak aaj tune mera muh Society me sharam se nichaa kar diya kya jarurat thi college me fight karne ki

Vikram: Dad toh isme kaunsi badi baat hai maine aisa kyaa kar diya jo aap mujh par intnaa bhadak rahe ho

Rohit: Kaunsi badi baat tere😡 tere yahi Ravaiyye ke kaaran mujhe hameshaa sabhi se mafi magni padti hai kabhi ek kaam toh ijjat wala kiya kar 3 din ke liye suspend ho college se sharam aani chahiye tumhe ab dekh kya rahe ho jao yahan se

Vikram moving towards his elder sister Tanu's room

his sister always support him whether he is wrong or right always stand for him

Tanu: kya hua vicky dad se daat padi kyaa?

Vikram: unka kaam hai hi kya mujhe Daatne ke alawa khabhi mujhse pyar se baat nahi kar sakte kya?

tanu: koi baat nahi main hun na tere sath toh tumhe fikar karne ki jarurat nahi hai ab kya karna hai tumhe main batati hun

then tanu makes a solid politics plan jisase Saap bhi mar jaye aur lathi bhi na tute😆😆 then both giving an Evil smile 😈😈

after making solid plan Vikram inquired about Krishna and Amit current place 'he got news from some of the students that they all four are enjoying at the cafe

Vikram again gives evil smile😈 and says to himself "Chall DON beta Kuch action karne ka time aa gaya hai"

At the Cafe '

They all four were enjoying there coffee '

Amit : challoo hum kuch kahane ko bi order karte hain..

Pratigya : haan u r right amit,bahut teej bhuuk lagi hai ..

Muskaan : par mujhe bhuk nahi lag rahi '

Amit : (suddenly says) arree khaa loo naa kahe kabab mai haddi ban rahi ho

Pratigya : kabab mai haddi matlab (she gives flirty smile to Amit)

Amit : (he gets uncomfortable) arree hamre matlab hamare khane mai haddi :P

Krishna : chaloo tum log jaldi order karbo humko bi bhuk lagi hai '

When they were about order ..they notices the presence of Vikram ..

Krishna : yee saala aa gaya phir 'phir kuch naya tamasha karega ..

Amit : hame zara savdhanni baratni hogi ..

Vikram came near to there table ..

Vikram : I am so sorry guys hame aisa nahi karne chaiye tha

All were surprised to see such behavior from Vikram..

Amit and Krishna stares at each other ..

Krishna : tumhe maafi hamse nahi Pratigya jii se magni chaiye

Vikram : (to Pratigya ) hame maaf kardo ..humo se galti se ho gayi ..

Vikram (thinks ) : eehh saala chudaail se maafi magni pad rahi hai dekho mai kya karta hu in saab ke saath ..

Pratigya : it's okay..

Vikram then goes from there by giving and evil smile ,may be it was part of his plan'

Now all were inside the cafe

Suddenly it started raining '

It was raining for the last 6 hours from now on 'and the caf manager told student to leave as it was a time for the caf to be closed down'

Amit: abb kya karein hum kaise itni teej bearish mai apne aap ko bhegne se bacha sake..

Krishna : chalo hum apne class room mai chalte hain 'vahan sayad hame koi jagah mil jaye ..

They all run toward their class room ..

Class room was empty as all the students had already moved to their respective home '

Amit and Pratigya moved to their class room no.1 ,while Krishna and Muskaan moved to the classroom No.2 which is next to their actual classroom no.1 (where Amit and Pratigya were there)..

At class Room no.2

Muskaan : uff mai toh puri bheeg gayi ..

Krishna : mai bhi pura bheeg gaya ..pata nahi kab tak ye baarish chalegii'

At class room no.1

Pratigya : yee baarish bi naa ..aab kya karu mujhe toh thand lag rahi hai ..

Amit (thinks) : ye badiya mauka haii 'apna impression jamane kaa

Amit : (pulls out his jacket) yee loo hamri jacket tum pehen lo tumhe thand nahi lagegi '

Pratigya : nahi phir apko thand lagegi naa

Amit : aree tum meri chinta mat karo 'friends ke liy itna toh banta hai naa

Pratigya : parrr..

Amit : parr parr kuch nahi, lo aap meri jacket le loo '

Pratigya : thanxx '

After a while ago ,

Amit was too feeling the cold '.Pratigya notices about ..

Pratigya : loo apko bi thand lag rahgi hai

Amit : aree kuch nahi mai thik hu

Pratigya : nahi aap bemaar pad jayenge ..

Amit : nahh it's okay ..

Pratigya comes closer to Amit and tells her to take his jacket his back ..

Amit : aree phir apko bi thand lagegi naa

Pratigya : achha hum dono ek hi jacket see apne aap ko cover kar lete hain ..

Amit : (becomes uncomfortable) haan thik hai '.

Pratigya : aree aap kaanp kyu rahe hain?

Amit : nahi mai thik hu ..

Pratigya touches Amit's shoulders and she picks out that jacket and coverd herself and Amit'body with it..

Amit was feeling bit incomfortable and so as Pratigya..

Amit and Pratigya stares each other ..

Amit realizes that it's bad to be with a girl alone in a room'

He tries to free himself from Pratigya '

And tells Pratigya that we should'nt be like this alone '

Pratigya says thanxx to Amit for such advise '

After a while they saw somebody near the door '.it was Vikram '

Vikram suddenly locks the door from outside 'and then ran away'

Amit and Pratigya luks bit scared 'they tried to ring Krishna and muskaan but network was'nt there due to heavy rainfall and scary thunderstorms'

Due to these scary thunderstorms ..Pratigya was looking bit scared ..

Amit was also standing beside the door ..luking for help '

Then he came closer to Pratigya and asked "Pratigya tum itni kyu darr rahi ho"

Pratigya : jab bijli kadak thi hai toh hame ajib saa darr lagta hai

Amit : hahahaha is me kaisa darr .. are mai hu naa toh darne ki kya baat

Pratigya : tum haans kyu rahe ho 'lo mai tumse baat nahi karti '

Amit : aree baba lo sorry ..aab nahi haansta abb khush

Pratigya : achha thik hai (she smiles but looks tense)

Suddenly another noisy lightining occurs '

Pratigya gets scared with the noise ..

She quickly moves towards Amit and hugs her ..

Amit looks shocked '.and bit uncomfortable '

Pratigya : please amit hame bahut darr lag raha hai 'she hugs him tightly '

Amit was so shocked and uncomfortable that he was'nt able to hear to what Pratigya was saying to him..

Pratigya : plzz bahgwaanji ye baarish rok do '

Amit did'nt put up his hand on Pratigya's shoulders '

After sometime Vikram comes from behind and he was ready to take pictures of Amit and Pratigya hug.

When he was taking their pictures ,Krishna from the window of that class no.2 sees him taking some pictures '.

Krishna becomes suspicious and notices that something is happening wrong (Krishna did'nt saw Amit-Pratigya hugging eachother) '

In the meantime Vikram picks out some photographs of Amit and Pratigya and then he tried to run away ..

Krishna shouts at him but some how Vikram was able to escape from their ..

Now Krishna comes back and Muskann was also present there and they decided to see to what was going there in class room no.1 ..

they both were fully soaked due to heavy rainfall

As soon as they enter into the class room 'they saw Amit and Pratigya who were still enjoying their Hug '

Both became shocked ..

To be continued'


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Krishna to Police Officer : nahi sir mujhe Vikram ne nahi mara aap sab ko galat faimi hui hai . Balki Vikram ne toh mujhe un gundoon se bachaya hai aur mujhe hospital mei lakar admit bhi karaya hai. Mujhe toh usko dhanyawaad dena chaiye


Pratigya :
krishna tum ye kya bol rahe ho?? tumhe toh Vikram ne mara hai toh police ko sach bata do police usse jarur saja degi.



Amit : (in anger) krishna tum ye kya bakwas kar rahe ho mujhe pata hai ki tumhe Vikram ne hi mara hai toh kyu tum usko bacha rahe ho?? aur uska ehsaan maan rahe ho?? .kahin tum Vikram se darr toh nahi gaye na?



Krishna gets angry by Amit's comments and in anger he shout on Amit


"Apni bakaiti band karo
,tumhe jab kuch pata nahi hai toh kuch bhi mat bola karo, kya tumne apni aankhon se dekha ki meri kiske saath ladai hui thi ?? jab nahi dekha toh bina kuch jaane aur samjhe kuch bhi mat bola karo".

Muskaan got frustrated as she can't see Amit getting insulted like this.


She was about to speak something ..but suddenly Amit leaves from there with his angry face,so she remains Quiet.


Muskaan and Pratigya were both shocked



Amit moves out and thinks "Krishna tum Vikram se darr gaye hoge par main us se nahi darta ab main hi usko achha sabak sikhanunga".



now back to Hospital's Room .



Police officer : thik hai Krishna haab aapke statement se ye saaf ho jaata hai ki Vikram ne aapke sath koi mar peet nahi ki iss ke alava unhone aapki jaan bhi bachayi hai toh iss se aapki bahen ke FIR file complaint galat sabit hoti hai toh phir hum Vikram ke against koi case file nahi kar sakte.Ab hum chalte hai.

Police Office leaves from there.



Krishna shouted on Meena :


"Tumhari himmat kaise ho gayi police station mai jakar Vikram ke against FIR karane ki, vo bhi bina kuch jaane. arree us ne toh meri jaan bachayi hai, aaj hum yahan thik salamat hun toh sirf usii ki vajah se warna humare marne ki khabar mil jati aap log ko."


Meena was crying and was about to say sorry .


But again Krishna in high pitched voice.


Krishna : Arre aap sab socho... agar Vikram ko pata chalega ki maine uske against police mei complaint ki hai toh usee kitna bura lagega aur kya sochega humare baare mei ki humne uska ehhsan manane ke alawa police mei uski hi sikayat kara dee.



Meena: bhai hume toh amit ne bataya ki aapko Vikram ne peeta hai toh hum kya karte chale gaye hum police station.

Krishna : kum se kum mere hosh mei aane tak kaa toh intezar kar liya hota par nahi aap sab ko toh apna dimag chalana tha, ab jao yahan se sab mujhe akela chhod do kuch samay ke liye.

All leaves from there except Pratigya who was crying ..

Krishna : aab tum ko kaa ho gaya ?? "Amit par chillaya toh apka bahut bura laga kya"?


Pratigya got hurt after hearing such words from Krishna


Pratigya : abb chahe tum humko kuch bhi keh loo par hame ye bata do kii tum aab kaise ho??


Krishna : kahe itni fikarr kar rahi ho haan ?.jao tum Amit ke pass vahi uske saath aur aish karo ?humko kauno matlab naina


Pratigya :
please hume yaahan rukne doo, hume pata hai kii tumko hamari jaruraat hai


Krishna : arree nahi hai tumhri jarurat .. humri amma aur bahein abhi dono jindaa hain ,vo hi hamara khayal rakh lenge


Pratigya becomes hopeless and she leaves from there


Krishna (thinks) : hame maaf kardo Pratigya
,tumharii ankkhoon mai hum annsu bardast nahi kar sakte parr hum kaa karein ,us Amit nai toh hamara jeena haram kar diya hai) he fumes in anger

Doctor enters and told Krishna to take rest for a day here
and after that he will be discharged



Vikram's Bedroom



Vikram was lying on bed and was in deep thought.
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Tanu enters into his room
and asked him
"vicky kya hua tum itna kya soch rahe ho?



Vikram suddenly got disturbed by Tanu's interference :


He told Tanu :
"haan dii hume dad ne jo aaj subah baat kahi usii ke baare mei soch raha hun ..


Mai soch raha hu ki kaise dad ke instruction follow karu?
.mujhe kuch samajh mai nahi aa raha hai.mere toh bahut saare dusman hai ? log mujhese ulajhne kaa bahana khojte rehte hain ..agar unko marunga toh mujhe Dad nahi chhorrenege aur agar dushmanno ke samne bhangunga toh vo mujhe Fattu kahenge


Tanu: main samjh sakti hun par kya kare ??
tum toh dad ko jante ho na unhe samjhana bahut muskil hai aur tumhe ek bodygaurd ki jarurat hai, ab toh tum kisi se dosti kar lo sirf kuch dino ke liye. waise tum vo krishna ke baare mei kah rahe the na ki tumne usse bachaya hai goondo se toh ab vo tumhara aisaan kabhi nahi bhulega ki tumne usse bachaya hai.yahi mauka hai usake taraf dosti ka hath badane ka tum aaj hi usase milne jao aur apni meeti meeti baato mei fasa kar dost bana lo.
Vikram: Rocking idea love u dii ab main abhi jata hun usase milne.

He leaves from there




At Streets



Amit was walking alone in the corner of the streets
,and suddenly he noticed Vikram who was riding with his Bike

Amit (thinks) : yahi mauka hai is Vikram se apne dost Krishna kii pitai kaa badla lene kaa


Amit stands in between the road
..Vikram notices him and stops his Bike

Vikram : kyuu beyy tuchheee yahan kya kar raha hai bey ..chal hatt nikal yahan se


Amit : mujhe hatayega ..ruk aaj tujhko mai yahan se hata tha huu


Vikram : abbe tu kya hateygaa ?tu bhul gaya kya uss din kii pitai .. jo dubara pitne wapas aa jaya


Amit came closer to him, grabbed his collar and gives him a tight slap


Vikram was about to give a strong reply to Amit but he stops and thinks "Dad ne kaha tha maarpit naa karne koo ..chaloo aaj mai maar khaunga aur phir Krishna se jaunga milne ?toh iss se Amit aur Krishna kee becch aur jyada problems hogi aur mazza dekhunga maii phir iss se saanp bhi maar jayega aur laathi bhi nahi tutegiii?.wah kya baat hai Vicky tu toh badia smajhdaar nikla
..he gives evil smile

Amit kicked him and Vikram's falls into the ground with his Bike


Amit hits him hard in his head . Vikram was feeling the pain


due to pain Vikram got angry but was trying hard not to show it on Amit and saying himself "control Control vikram apne gusse ko control kar isse toh kabhi bhi peet sakta hai" by this he was getting cool


Amit suddenly notices a Sports shop and from there he brings Hockey stick from there


Vikram got scared


Vikram : arree bhaaii yee kyaa kar rahe hoo ?? jaan se maroge kaa?


Amit : haan jaan se maar dunga tujhe


Vikram : par bhai maine kiya kya hai?


Amit : abee tu kya keh raha hai ..tu janta nahi kii tune kyaa kyaa kaand kiye hain..


Amit hits him hard in his left foot "yee lee hamri Pratigya ji koo "chammak chaloo " kehne kee liye


He again hits him in his Right foot and again in Left foot " yee lee hamri aur Pratigya kii photo kheechne ke liye "


All of those peoples around forms a hurdle and were trying to stop Amit ..

Amit : haayee kisi kii himmat aye yahan Vikram jaise gundee ko bachane kee liye ..vo khud hamri stick kii chapeit mai aa jayegaa


All peoples got scared


Vikram was crying in Pain


Amit :
kyuu abb achha lag raha hai naa ..yahi dard tune mere dost Krishna ko diya tha naa ?


Toh lee ..

He hits Vikram on both of his foots again and again


Vikram was crying in pain


Vikram tolds to himself " maar lee tujhe jitna marna hoo bas dad ke elections khatam ho jane dee phir teri puri picture banaunga aur puri duniya dekhegi "


Amit drops that Hockey stick and left from there...with all his shirt button opened showing his 6 packs


Some people gathered and helps Vikram and took him to the Hospital



In Hospital



Krishna was lying on bed and was completely fine now


Muskaan telling meena and her mother to take some rest in her own house.


but Krishna's mom refused it by saying " beta aap sab ka bahut dhanyawad ki aap sab ne mere bete ke liye yahan aakar uski madad ki,main aap sabhi ki abhari rahungi,"ab aap ko apne ghar chale jana chahiye shaam ho gayi hai".


Muskaan :
nahi aunty hum tohdi hi dair mai chale jayenge



After sometime ,some group of peoples came shouting inside the Hospital to help the victim Vikram who was seriously injured


As soon as they passed through Krishna's room door .. Krishna got the sight of Vikram getting injured


He gets up in shock


And told Muskaan : yee kaa kaa hua Vikram ko


He was about to get up but Muskaan stops him and told him that she herself will go and see Vikram there


She moves out from that Room ..

After some time she came back ..

Krishna : kaa hua Muskaann ..kaa hua Vikram kooo??


Muskaan :
vo Amit nai usko badi behrami se marra hai


Krishna Fumes in Anger


Krishna says in high pitched voice :

Yee Amit kahe hamree peche pada hai?? Dekh lunga Amit ..tujhe bhi?


Muskaan was too shocked ..she thinks "Amit aisa kaise kar sakta hai ..hame jis baat kaa darr tha vahi hua" she looks tensed


Krishna asked Muskaan and his parents to allow him to see Vikram's condition as he is well now


Muskaan and his parents allowed him to do so

Krishna went to Vikram's Room where he was geeting treated by a Doctor


Krishna : " kya hua Vikram ?ye kaise hua??


Vikram in pain " ahh doctor zaraa arram se karo..bahut dard ho raha hai ..salle ne Hockey Stick se marra hai "


Vikram(in anger) : achha toh tum ye dekhne aaye ho ki main zinda hun mara nahi.aur khud hi bheja tha
Amit ko ,tum toh aise behave kar rahe ho jaisi tumhe kuch pata hi nahi.

Krishna : ye tum kaisi baat kar rahe ho main hum tumhare baare mei aisa kaise soch sakta hun sach mei mujhe kuch nahi pata.


Vikram :
Arre rahne do yar pahle toh kuch chot pahuchao aur phir jhooti hamdardi ka nakat karo ye achchha hai


Krishna: sach mei mera yakin karo ,main koi jhooti hamdardi nahi jata raha hun


Vikram: Ab bas karo yaar aur jaao yahan se hame tumhari jhooti nautanki nahi sunani hai.

Krishna: thik hai vikram hum jaa rahe hai lekin hum tumhara vishwas paa kar rahenge ki hum jhoot nahi bol rahe hai.

Krishna fumes in Anger ..he says to himself in loud voice (In KST tone) " Vo saale dui kaudi Amit ki intii aukaat ho gayi ki Vikram ko mar dis ab sasure ko hum batate hai."

Vikram looks into the eyes of Krishna and said to himself ...
"ab tera kya hoga rey Amit, ab krishna se peetega phir election ke baad mere se hahaha beta tera ab bura din chalu ho gaya hai"
and gives an evil smile


To be Continued ...

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