Kriya OS: The Gift

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Krishna is standing beside the window...Its late evening and Pratigya's absence is making his mood darker...
Soon then, Pratigya enters the room and sees him standing there...She hugs him from behind and says-"What my Thakur sahab is doing here..?? Umm..?? Come..lets have the dinner...all are waiting for you Krishna.."
Krishna-"Oh..really..so now my wife has remembered that she is married to me..??"
Pratigya smiles and says-"Yes..my dear man...I got it..Now come..I am very hungry..After the dinner I will give you a surprise.."
Krishna-"What surprise...??? What surprise my dear wife wants to give me..??"
Pratigya-"You will come to know very soon..."

Both move to have the dinner...

At the table, Pratigya keeps on telling him about the surprise through her body language and lips..Krishna is totally confused now...
Pratigya still giggling..

Krishna moves to the room hurriedly and lifts Pratigya up...
Pratigya-"Leave me Krishna...Please..."
Krishna-"Why..?? Where is my surprise..?? First show me..then I will leave you.."
Pratigya-"Ok..ok...First leave me then..."
Krishna puts her down...
Krishna-"Show me the surprise now.."
Pratigya-"Umm...Actually..I cant show you Krishna...It cant be seen..."
Krishna still confused-"What..???"
Pratigya-"You can see it only after some months.."
Krishna_"means..??"
Pratigya-"Right now you can only feel it.."
Krishna's eyes are now stuck on her face..
Pratigya-"Feel it Krishna..here it is..."
She gets closer to him and removes a part of her saree covering her stomach.."
Krishna is now totally mad at this-"Really...??? I mean is it..??"
Pratigya-"Yes..Krishna...i am..I am... Pregnant..."
This sentence changes Krishna's world...
Pratigya says keeping her hand on her stomach: See your papa is so dumb..he cant still believe that your mumma is carrying you..."

Both smile and they hug each other..
Pratigya is still in Krishna's arms and says-"Krishna...You liked the surprise na..??"
Krishna-"Liked..?? I just loved it dear..Thank you so much for this..You made my life darling..I love you.."
Pratigya-"I love you too..And yes..now from today..for 9 months..you are booked for me and my kid...Got it..??"
Krishna-"yes madam...this man is always there for you..Lets start from now only.."
He lifts her up and places her carefully on the bed...He kisses her forehead and their eyes thank each other...
Edited by kriya...arja - 13 years ago

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Ladybug10 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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GREAT GREAT GREAT continue...
And do PM me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jenniferlover

GREAT GREAT GREAT continue...
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Thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sweet surprise.. how gud to even read it...😉
thank U Muskaan for the lovely surprise... truly wonderful



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: babithaj

sweet surprise.. how gud to even read it...😉
thank U Muskaan for the lovely surprise... truly wonderful




Thanks Di..Glad you liked it...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely! 😳 How long will we have to wait for the baby track to begin? 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great os...loved it...
Thanks for sharing...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mags10

Lovely! 😳 How long will we have to wait for the baby track to begin? 😕


Thanks dear...😊
Till cvs decide to show it...😔
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhishek_kriyaa


Great os...loved it...
Thanks for sharing...


Always my pleasure...😊
Glad you liked it...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Waooo lovely OS...
MUskaan continue it...🤗

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