FF: Krishna's treatment...last part updated...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kriya upcoming OS general points to be noted'

1. This is my first attempt to write a long OS'so please bear with me'..😊

2. Since it's based on Krishna's treatment, I have not mentioned the name of the problem nor the treatment procedure'(I am a student of Economics..😆.)

3. Enjoy the OS...Please feel free to PM me if anything is found unacceptable'.🤗

4. So...here it starts'..

Krishna's treatment Part1

Plot: Pratigya and Kesar manage to get back the lost property from Shakti'..Now Pratigya's only agenda was to find out the cure for Krishna's problem'.She went out for an in-depth research on the issue and met many doctors and experts to talk about this'.She kept Krishna unaware about this because she knew this would make Krishna upset and feel guilty'.

Krishna in the bedroom'

Pratigya-"Krishna, hum tumse kuch kehna chahte hain.."

Krishna-"Haan..Bolo.."

Pratigya-"Pehle waada karo ki tum bura nahin manoge.."

Krishna-"Arre yaar Babu, humse baat kehne mein itni jijjak kaahe hain..khulke bolo jo kehna hai.."

Pratigya takes Krishna's hand in her hand and says-"Dekho Krishna, hum chahte hain ki humara bachha, humari pyaar ki nishaani iss duniya mein jaldi aaye.."

Krishna shocked at this and leaves her hand'

Krishna-"ee'tum..kaa'."

Pratigya-"Haan..Krishna..hame maaf kar dena lekin pichle kaafi dino se hum tumhare liye bahot saare doctors se mile hain aur hame yeh pata chala hai ki tumhara ilaaj ho sakta hai.."

Krishna-"Bass'ab bass karo yaar..humri taklif kaa majak banana bandh karo yaar babu.."

Pratigya shocked but handles herself and says-"Majak'?? Krishna, tumne yeh soch bhi kaise liya ki hum tumhara majak banayenge..?? Kya tumhari taklif hamari taklif nahin hai..??

Krishna-"Dekho, ab hum iss bare mein kaunu baat nahin karna chahte..tum jaao yahan se aur humka akela chod dyo.."

Pratigya-"Krishna..Please.."

Krishna-"Jaao babu'warna humne kuch keh diya gusse mein toh tumhe bura lag jaega.."

Pratigya leaves'.

Will Pratigya be able to convince Krishna for the treatment..??

Will Krishna agree..??

Catch the next update'.😊

Edited by kriya...arja - 13 years ago

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abhiloveriya thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yes.im ready to wait 4 ur next update...n thx 4 sharing this lovely os...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waooow
girl u are vry talented..😊 os,,advertisemnts,,now ff😆...i think u were waiting fr uor exam to be end...😆

infact its very good concept fr os😛...nd u rocked with frst part..
we knw prats will cnvince krish fr treatment😳...lets see hw u will show it to us..waiting fr nxt update...😊
Edited by teeena - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhishek_kriyaa


Yes.im ready to wait 4 ur next update...n thx 4 sharing this lovely os...

Thanks...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for this..waitin for ur next update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: teeena

waooow

girl u are vry talented..😊 os,,advertisemnts,,now ff😆...i think u were waiting fr uor exam to be end...😆

infact its very good concept fr os😛...nd u rocked with frst part..
we knw prats will cnvince krish fr treatment😳...lets see hw u will show it to us..waiting fr nxt update...😊


Thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Krishna's treatment part2

Pratigya still thinking how to convince Krishna about the treatment…She decides to anyhow do this…She goes to see Krishna…Krishna is still sitting silently in the bedroom..Pratigya sits beside him and says-"Abhi tak naraaz ho humse..?? Apne Babu ko maaf nahin karoge..??"😳

Krishna-"Hum kaahe naraaz honge tumse..?? Humka uss bare mein baat nahin karni…"

Pratigya-"Accha baba thik hai…toh koi aur baat karenge…Accha yeh batao..tumhara restaurant kaisa chal raha hai…??"

Krishna-"Baat nai badlo Babu..hum jaante hain ki tum yeh sab hum pe taras khai ke kar rahi ho.."

Pratigya thinks this is the limit and breaks out…

Pratigya-"Acchaa…isliye Krishna hum nahin chahte the ki tumhe sach pata chale…Jab humne jhoot bola tha ki kami humare andar hai to kya tum hamari daya nahin kha rahe the..?? Kyun tumne hamari purani tasveerein kamre mein laga kar hume khush karna chahte the..?? bolo..??"

Pratigya finally breaks and starts crying…

Pratigya-"Dekho, Krishna hum jaante hain ki bacchhe ki zyada tadap pehle se tumhare dil mein thi aur abhi bhi hai..aur hum tumhe aisi halat mein nahin dekh sakte.."😳

Krishna can't bear tears in his Babu's eyes and hugs her tightly…😳😳

Pratigya too hugs him back firmly and they hold each other for about a long time reducing the burden of their hearts…

Krishna-"Kaa chahti ho Babu..??"

Pratigya-"Krishna, doctor ne hume kaha hai ki tumhari problem ka ilaaj hai par…."

Krishna-"Par kaa..??"

Pratigya-"Hume ilaaj ke liye Mumbai jana hoga…Allahabad mein yeh mumkin nahin hai.."

Krishna-"Babu, tumka sach mein lagta hai ki hum…baap bann sakenge..??"

Pratigya-"Kyun nahin Krishna..?? Tum aisi baaton ko soch kar apne aap ko taklif mat do.."

Krishna-"Toh thik hai babu…tumri khushi ke liye hum kuchho bhi karenge.."

Pratigya-"Sirf hamari nahin Krishna, hum dodno ki hushi ab sirf ek baat mein hai..aur who hai…hamara bacchha…"

Kriya again hug each other……but this time smiling…..🤗

Kriya move for Mumbai….🥳

Catch the next part to find out about Kriya's urge for the treatment….

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Posted: 13 years ago
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lallantop part 2...

kriya mumbai..😳
.holllymooon part 3😆

nd ya nt nly kriya here all forum members eagerly waiting fr kriya baby...

abb to beta hamri babu mumbai se khushkhabri leke he aayegi...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I DOnt think that krishna treatment track will come becoz its was just a male infertilty message first they show that their is no cure than arushi find the cure and disscuss with pratgya
male infertilty message has been given
and the problem solution also has been given by pratgya tto krishna that there is a cure
all the message has been givren
but iam not sure about the treatment track
now days are just menka menka and her mom
Edited by Devil86 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely Muskaan 😛, u r juz rockin 👏

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