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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kEEnkEEn

girl you must be busy!
Or is it that you just got up off the floor after reading Suk's recommendation!!!😆
PS you any good at BJs? Good to know the competition!
Humi is rumoured to be pretty good at them, ban jaye's I mean!😃

yeah...i was busy practicing my BJ 😳 ...
🤔 sorry.. can't divulge my level of expertise... all you need to know is that i'm on top of it and if there's a competition, i'll blow the field 😎 😆
ha! top that 🤣
Edited by yemi3006 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Well well Dii finally read all the chapters brilliant awsome superb ff Dii 👏 I regret as where was I that I did,my read this 😕 bt now finally I read and knew the story mindblowing just loving He and She they rockx as u tooo rockxx dii 👍🏼 👍🏼 😳 Dii update next waiting for it 😍 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello All!😃

I know its been ages but I can only say in my defence - I have been without inspiration so long that I couldn't possibly subject you to any more drivel than we are already having to suffer on TV.🥱

I've been stuck for ages - unmotivated and without inspiration - but I don't quit that easy!!!😉

Its been months - 5 to be exact! - but I've managed to finish the Chapter to be honest I was uninspired to finish. When I'll update next will be time and inclination permitting - but hopefully not as long as this!
This story will take a new twist to what I had originally anticipated - lets see what journey it takes us on.

I dedicate this Chapter to all my lovely MKAP friends and those who never tired to PM me and encourage me (God knows why!!) to continue even though I really didn't feel like it - you know who you are!

So heres to you guys!!!! Here's to our MKAP Forum and die hard members and all their love and support!👏

Chapter 18

Flinging his bag on the sofa, He headed straight towards his bedroom without so much as a second glance at his apartment. As He fell backwards into the depths of his bed, his head cushioned from the fall by the pillow, He drew his breath long and deep, shutting his eyes tightly as His mind fought with heart.

It had been weeks but still His own space, his flat, his bed, no longer felt like his own anymore. His place was no longer His sanctuary.

Try as hard as He might, his quiet, familiar surroundings provided no comfort or respite whatsoever from the dull but persistent ache inside him.

"Nothing is right with me anymore" He thought darkly

Turning over to his side, he opened his eyes. Who was He kidding? He knew exactly what that something, or more precisely someone, was to make everything feel right - that missing element to his peace of mind, the salve that was needed to ease his inner turmoil.

The whirlwind of happiness he had felt for those few days had somehow managed to evaporate as quickly as it had come, and in its place came long, crazily busy and lonely weeks during which time it felt like He had hardly seen her.

Their schedules had been so unfairly hectic, so many commitments, not just on their production but external ones too, that caused their bubble of bliss to burst.

The scheduling was cruel to the extent that they had both stopped apologizing for not being able to keep dates arranged, times together, or to simply exchange moments of tenderness. The longer it went on, the harder it became for them to be intimate - even if their eyes met, their eyes did not reflect warmth but a sort of troubled embarrassment, an awkwardness where before one glance would speak volumes.

Neither of them seemed to be able to take that first step to bring them both back to their senses, to be together, where He felt, even now, they both belonged.

Everything had changed now

Everything began to change when She decided to go back to her flat and He got that weird phone call.

It was from some nutter who appeared to know a heck of a lot about Him and Her and how much time they had been spending together recently.

He didn't recognize the voice -why should He?
He did remember it though to be gritty; mocking -it was clearly an attempt to disguise whoever the caller was. What He was struck by was that it was clearly a man who had access to a lot of information - and this was the precise reason for why He didn't dismiss him as some regular crazy..
No, this one was much more sinister and also seemed confident that He would take him seriously

"Stick to your Ex, leave Her alone. "

"Trust me -you will get nothing but pain. If you choose to be stupid and ignore this warning I guarantee it - not only will you feel pain but She will too. And by the way - don't even think of informing your friendly neighbourhood police."
"Dont ignore this warning - because if you do, I personally guarantee it, She will be made to feel pain more than you can imagine -and you've already had a taste of how close I can get to her -haven't you?"

He was speechless at the time with rage that someone could so much as dare to dream of hurting her, but in the time that he was seething the nutter rang off, leaving Him feeling utterly hapless, unable to do anything to him.

He thought to ring Her straight away but there was no answer at the flat. Her mobile went straight through to her voicemail which just fuelled his frustration more.

After what seemed like an eternity, but was probably no more than half an hour later, He received a call from her having, no doubt, seen about five missed calls from Him

"Where the hell were you?

His voice was seething with rage "Do you have any idea how bloody long Ive been trying to get through?"

"What's up? What's the problem?" She wondered what had happened to Him and felt a little irritated at his tone of voice.

Didn't you have your phone with you? I couldn't get hold of you for God's sake and you-"

"Why are you biting my head off yaar- I've been on the phone to my folks at home! What's so urgent that you didn't even leave a voicemail?"

Now She was angry with him

He felt a little contrite now, realizing how rude he must have sounded. Changing his tone somewhat, he tried to appeal a little more

Look I was just worried - I just wanted to make sure you were OK."

"Is that it? Is that what you ripped my head off for? Well you don't need to keep worrying OK? I'm a big girl and looked after myself perfectly well before and can do so now! For feck's sake!!!! "

Her voice stung in his ears and her anger with Him was clear

Just remembering the conversation caused Him to wince even now.

It totally backfired -he didn't mean to shout at Her -He was just concerned but it came out completely wrong.

From then on it was as if the stars just didn't want them to be together, always some reason why they couldn't quite pull it off and spend even a few sweet moments together. Even the current scripts didn't require them to come close to one another, just a moment when He could use work as an excuse just to hold her close, breathe in the scent of her, feel her softness...

Just at that moment his mobile rang. Half expecting it to be her, He quickly turned to answer it without even checking until He heard another familiar voice

"Hi," His heart sank a little with disappointment. He looked at his phone to double check it was who He thought and the phone confirmed it.

"I didn't disturb you did I? I'm really sorry -I"

"No," He sighed and ran his hands through his hair as He sat up on his bed.

"You're alright, I wasn't asleep anyway. You OK? What's up? Everything good?"

"Not really. Well, I'm actually downstairs in your parking lot. I just thought I'd call to see if you had some time for a friend that needs it, but"

He groaned inwardly and slowly sat upright. Shit..He thought. What the feck now?

"Erm, well ..." He began before being interrupted

"Look I'm sorry - don't worry - I'll"

"No, no - its OK. Come on up. I'll speak to the security guard to let you in."

About five minutes later, His buzzer rang and he went got up to open the door. She looked pale and had clearly been crying.

He motioned to her and ever so slowly, His Ex walked in.

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Posted: 13 years ago
🥳 I am literally jumping Kulvi dear... Now lemme go read... no patience... Muahs... Hugs... pls bear my torture of love for this... hahaha
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: babithaj

🥳 I am literally jumping Kulvi dear... Now lemme go read... no patience... Muahs... Hugs... pls bear my torture of love for this... hahaha

😆OMG!
Babs read it first !- it might be the biggest anti climax and you you might hate it!!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
I still can't believe u hav updated...


Just one word ...wonderful...
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Posted: 13 years ago
You and me on at the same time! 😲

You've messed with destiny now... 🤣
Be prepared.


Huge fan ... Loved it!!

Keep forgetting to ask... Why am I kanjoosila?
Hmmm on 2nd thot you might wanna PM the answer to that.
Edited by meanreds - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow...just a superbbb update as usual...!!!
I loved it...

To be honest...i have lost every single touch with one of ma fav ffs...n i had to read da prev part after reading the begining of dis prt... 😆 ...not my mistake...its been 5 long months...n u knw ryt...my memory power...lol...dats why i askd u to bring dis thread to da front page...remember my pm??😉

N ifinished reading it yest itself but got time just now 😆 ...sorry abt dat dii...
Wonderful update as usualll!!And yes...an unespected twist at the end...now i am afraidof you words of this being the 'DARKEST FF' 😕 😲 😭 ...but yea...we know our kulvi kulvi kulvi dii...she'd do what we want na?;-) 😉 😆 ...


Now update asap dii...pslsss update asap!!
Edited by ArjaAddict - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i so excited...
one word for update...wonderfulll...
waiting for the next update...heheheheh...afteralll we al r greedy...update sooonnn...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: corvette

😆OMG!
Babs read it first !- it might be the biggest anti climax and you you might hate it!!!😆

I know... 😭😭😭but still i '' hv to accept it... There r lot more true loves did not end up happily... so...
*****SIGH******* anyway thanks for the caution, so sweet of u...🤗



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