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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriya2011

Awesome and very romantic,Dhanya plz update soon.




Thanks dear 😃 will
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: KriYa_life


Dhanya.. What had P worn?? Why was K shockd?




U will find out soon 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishtigya

😳Aww..Superb..Did u have to end it here ..God update soon...Cant wait for the next update by this immensly talented writer..



thanks yaar for the kind appreciation 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kriya_Arja

DHANU CHECHIII...EM SOOO SORRY FOR BEING SOOO LATE TO COMMENT...I SWEAR I READ DA UPDATE ON DA DAY U UPDATED...IT WAS LALLANTOPPP...PLSSS CHECHI...Y R U DELAYING IT???ITS GONNA BE ONE WEEK DIS SUNDAY SINCE UR PREV UPDATE...Y DO U WANNA MAKE US WAIT SOOO LONG TO 'READ N IMAGINE' SOMETHING OF KRIYA...;) OMGGG...U STOP AT SUCH SITUATIONS FROM WHERE ITS IMPOSSIBLE TO WAIT...PLSSS UPDATE SOON...PLSSS...ATLEAST LET US BE HAPPY BY READING DIS...ASLI SERIAL MEIIN TOH ITS 'KRIYA SCARCITY'...!!!ONCE AGAIN...AWESOME FANTABULOUSSS!!!M DAT LAST LINE...HMMM...WAITING TO READ DA FIRST LINE OF UR NXT UPDATE!!!DIS BEHOODI IS EXPECTING A LOTTT MORE BEHOODAPAN FROM U CHECHI;)!NECHU




arrey yaar 😃 sabar ka phal meetha hota hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
Updating in 5 mins 😃

i have tried to be as behoodi as possible 😳 the scenes have been ripped off/inspired from certain films , so excuse me if someone find resemblance 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Update :

Krishna couldn't believe what he was seeing ………….true he had seen his beloved wife, his love in all her womanly glory but she had never ever worn something like this without him saying her to wear it………..pratigya sensing his gaze , closed hr eyes in coyness , her sore lips trembling ………..krishna's eyes raked the beauty of his wife , his eyes turning opaque with desire ……….she was wearing the sari he had gifted her when he first got a big profit from his restaurant ………….light blue in color , n silky soft , it clung to her body , tracing out her womanly curves ………….he had seen her in that sari many times , but tonight she looked different ………she wore the sari as one layer over her chest, just revealing to his eyes what lay underneath as the nearly transparent material clung to her ……..he could see the starting of her cleavage along her chest , her blouse covering her frantically heaving chest n her sensuous belly …..she wore a thin diamond necklace he had gifted her on her last birthday , her era rings glowing in the candle light , lighting up her red cheeks, her beautiful hair lying loosely , as usual over her back…...……


pratigya could sense his gaze over her body n she loosened her grip on his neck , a new coat of blush spreading over her body the sudden movement of her hands brought K's attention to her hands …..his eyes moved on to her shoulders n he inhaled …….. she was wearing a sleeveless blouse , with only thin strips of silk, her beautiful arms n shoulders exposed to tease him … ….he remembered caressing her arms n shoulders in his way up her neck when he kissed her , but didn't realize that he was touching her bare skin , he was so involved in her mouth………..he looked up her into her eyes , which now looked like a sea of coyness n he said , his right hand caressing her right cheek n he whispered ' I think we should hang the 'Today Holiday' board outside '………. His hand traveled down her neck to her right shoulder , now tracing the thin strap of her blouse , down to her collar bone ……..


pratigya was breathing heavily n she shivered , squirming in his lap as his fingers caressed her collar bone ………she saw the all too familiar glint of carnal desire in her bhoothnath's eyes , n her breath hitched in her throat , as krishna tried to lower his face to the right side of her neck ……….she scrambled up from his lap , gasping , a bout of shyness over powering her ……….'stop behaving like a newly wed bride!' she chided herself even as she tried to compose herself n tried to run to the nearby window , trying valiantly to calm her thundering heart ……………but krishna had caught her hand , his face lit up in a sly smile………krishna was still sitting in his chair n pratigya stood panting for breath a foot away , her right wrist firmly clasped in his hand, her chest heaving up n down………..


krishna looked at her , his eyes taking in her trembling form n he slowly stood up , showering feather light kisses on the back of her hand , up to her lower arm , his hand now moving up her upper arm…………pratigya , her left hand fisted in her pallu of her sari , sighed audibly ……………krishna's mouth turned passionate as he neared her shoulder n he snaked his other arm around her waist to secure her in position bec now pratigya was writhing in his embrace a sensuous moan escaping her throat ,as his hand on her shoulder pressed down her hand near her shoulder while his mouth kissed n suckled at her bare shoulder………..pratigya gasped his name , turning n burying herself in his broad chest , when krishna slightly nibbled at the portion where her neck met her shoulder ………..krishna let her be there , his hands now hugging her securely to him , smiling at her shyness………..


pratigya stood , trembling in his embrace , her hands clutching at his shoulders……they stood like that for some moments , both saying nothing…… krishna slowly loosened his embrace n lifted her chin , forcing her to look at him in his eye……pratigya gazed up , her red face turning even redder as she encountered his eyes……….…'well , u lure me here , n u offer me everything I want , n u run away when I intend to take it? Do u think it is a right thing to do?'………….krishna said , his right hand on her chin n his thumb caressing her sore lips……….pratigya parted her lips , sighing , her hands tightening on his shoulders…………..'tell me' krishna teased , bending n brushing his nose roughly over her nose……pratigya , giggled n moved away from him to the near by window, her hands clutching at the curtains ………….krishna looked at her , his eyes feasting on her back , as pratigya turned her face sideways to the right , looking at him out of the corner of her eye n whispered seductively, her voice cracking due to longing n shyness …'why don't u find out urself?' …………she lifted her left hand n slowly brushed her thick black hair off to her front along her left shoulder, revealing her flawless back to him………….


krishna stood transfixed , his mouth gaping open , as he saw her sensuous back , a thin strip of silk running along it with a single knot , waiting to be opened by him………..pratigya trembled , shivering as she sensed the intensity of his gaze on her back…………krishna walked to her his eyes raking her almost bare back , moving up from the point where her spine met her hips to her neck……… pratigya could feel his ragged breathing on her back n she leaned towards the window , shy ...krishna lifted his right forefinger n slowly caressed her lower waist where her spine met her hips, brushing the back of his finger on her skin……..pratigya , whimpered , her one hand groping at the window pane to stand straight as her legs felt like butter now………..krishna , moved his hand up , feeling her flawless skin under his fingers , making her squirm , her body pressing more to the window, biting her lips to muffle her sounds of pleasure…………..krishna circled his other hand around her belly, caressing her there , his hand sandwiched between her body n the window, making her throw her head back , digging into his shoulder , her lips opening up in a sensuous moan , as he clutched her hand at the window , pressing his body to her back , his mouth descending on the exposed back of her neck , kissing passionately …………..pratigya, writhed , a bundle of nerves in his arms, her breathing turning erratic ………….

krishna , stopped kissing her neck n whispered in her ear, his voice hoarse ' I think we should eat first……… for I assure u, we r in for a long night ……….'………..he turned her roughly to face him………..'n dawn too………. 'he finished , his eyes boring into hers………….. pratigya , blushed scarlet…………he loosened his hold on her body n said , love brimming in his eyes, '…….and I know u haven't eaten anything either since morning…..' pratigya smiled shyly ……..


krishna led pratigya to the dining table……..he made her sit on a chair n sat down opposite her ………..when pratigya started to serve him , he caught her hand saying 'No , tonight I will serve u babu…..' he smiled lovingly ………….pratigya looked at him, surprised n happy ……she nodded her head , her face lit up in a brilliant smile………..she was finding it difficult to string two words together , after his passionate kissing and her body still hummed in pleasure……….. krishna asked , suddenly business like, standing up from his chair…..'so what would u like eat , madam? ' pratigya caught the naughty glint in his eyes n unglued her mouth with a naughty smile playing around her lips' what do u have here?' ……………..krishna gazed down at the table n said 'we have rotis n daal n special fav of the owner , kheer……….' Pratigya said 'first I would like to have rotis…….n daal…' 'OK, as u say , madam' krishna bowed n started serving her rotis on a plate ……….pratigya gazed at him , her eyes full of love n devotion………..krishna , sat down in his chair n served himself rotis n daal…...he poured orange juice for both of them n looked up at her , smiling ' shall we start?' ……….pratigya looked around n said in a dissatisfied tone 'but something is missing….is this how u serve food to ur wife…..?' krishna looked around n all over the table, bewildered ………'what? Nothing is missing……everything is there , food, candles , u , me….what else?'………..pratigya stood up , turned her back on him n walked to the left corner of the hall………..krishna looked at her , confused………


If u liked it will continue 😃 😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
wow what a perfect christmas gift by u to us superb romantic n superb imagination by u pls continue
Edited by vikram0669 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
☺️☺️😍😍...Dhanya i seriously hav no words 2 describe dis romantic n sensuos update😳...Brilliant job dear👏
Edited by Eden_luvsKriya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i know... MUSICCC
Dhanya... me all... RED...☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago
dhanu chechiii...what did i read just a feq mins ago...omggg...entha kollanano udheshammm...omg...nw em alll red...dnt understand y u have to stop at such situataions...n d worst part is dat u vl be bck ole aft 4-5 days...em sooo gonna miss u my chechiii!!!hmmm abt da os...hmmm what shud i say,...em just wondering and wondering and wondering wen dey vl show atleast 1/4th os dis...hmmm...hopefully someday dey vl show disss
Dis is d best christmas gift for me...lubyuuu fr dat chechiii!mwaaahz!
Have a veryyy happy holidayyy!n a lallantoppp xmas n ney yearrr!
Nechu

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