The perfect gift... for Arhaan

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this Oneshot is dedicated to my Arhaan on his special day.

The

perfect

gift





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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 1


'Im waiting'

Krishna smiled as he received a text msg. Yes.. It was a rare sight to watch Krishna Singh smile. The man who always roamed with a frown was actually smiling. The reason being his Baby doll, His precious and most priced possession.

The honking of the cars bought him back to reality & he got frustrated again. The 15 min drive from Nariman Point to Singh Mansion was always a pleasure, But today is was no less than a nightmare.

"Damn!!"

He let out a frustrating sigh. The whole way he kept cursing the traffic, and why not, afterall it ruined his plans. How he wished to be with his Baby doll. It was a special day he had planned a lot of things.

After a while, he received another text. But this time a sad emo. :- (
Krishna laughed at her desperation. He texted back ;-)


After 2 hrs of frustrated driving, he finally reached Singh Mansion. The guards rushed to open the gates as their Master arrived. The Singh Mansion was a huge structure. Spread over so many acres of land, the Mansion was a rare piece of art. It was the most beautiful Mansion.

When his Princess heard the sound of the engine, she ran towards the balcony & peered over the railings. She watched in awe as he walked in with his infamous cold attitude. He knew he was being watched by her, but he didnt react & took his seat. The servants hurried to get him a cup of steaming coffee. The mansion was sparkling clean. Everythng was just perfect and that's the way he liked it. He was a sucker for Perfection.


Back in their room Pratigya waited anxiously for him. She wore her favourite pink saree with an halter neck blouse. She had left her silky hair loose just the way he liked it. She sat infront of the mirror and was applying mascara when he entered.




Edited by KriYa_life - 14 years ago
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Part 2



She looked at him & smiled. He slowly walked towards her, His eyes focused on her. She was looking no less than an angel descended from heaven. He just gaped at her beauty and lovingly caressed her face.

"Welcome home Honey", she greeted with a peck on his cheek.

Krishna snapped- "Am I dreaming? My wife just kissed me."

Pratigya shot back- "what are you trying to say
Mr. Singh?"

Krishna- "Ahh.. Forget it. btw, You owe me something"

Pratiya was confused- "Really??"

Krishna jerked her into his arms- "Should I remind you?"

Pratigya struggled to free herself from his grasp.

Krishna- "Why do you always try to move away when u know I wont let u escape."

Pratigya looked annoyed- "Let me go. Im sleepy."

Krishna was amused- "Excuse me Ma'am. You've been home all day. Besides, its me who should complain."

Pratigya- "Krish.."

Krishna- "Na.. U're gonna stay here until I change my mind."

Pratigya gave him a confident look- "I dont think so".

Having said that she put her arms around his neck & blew him up with a kiss. Krishna was taken aback, he continued kissing her and slowly loosened his grip. Pratigya took her chance & pushed him. Poor Krishna lost his balance & fell on the bed.

Pratigya giggled- "Good Riddance" & ran out of the room.

Krishna frowned- "Wait till I get u"



After a while Krishna came looking for Pratigya. He was surprised to see the Mansion dimly lit with candles.

"Pratigya," he called out.

But there was no reply. He turned towards the door & found Pratigya's picture with the words-
"FOLLOW ME"

Her pictures were put up on the walls leading up to the terrace.

Krishna- "Whoa, looks like I'm on a scavenger's hunt."

The terrace was decorated like a bride. He loved it very much.

"Where are You Pratigya?" asked an impatient Krishna.

Pratigya slowly stepped out from behind- "Krishna"

Krishna- "Where were you? I'd been.."

She silenced him with her finger on his lips and took his hand, carefully placed it on her stomach & closed her eyes- "HAPPY BIRTHDAY KRISHNA"

Krishna didnt understand, "Are You alright Pratigya? What happened? Do U have a stomach ache?"

Pratigya laughed- "Krishna.."

Krishna- "Why are you giggling??"

Pratigya was frustrated- "I didnt know that the father of my child is so dumb."

It took a while for him to actually decipher what she meant.

"what????!!!!!!!!!" he jumped. "Im.. Im going to be a Dad. Is this our kid??"

"Krishna", she punched him lightly.

he was embarrassed- "oops.. Im mean.. umm.. jaye deo.. I LOVE YOU"
He hugged her tight & took her in his arms.

Pratigya- "Krishna.. what are you doing??"

But he ignored her and just walked towards their room. He carefully placed her on the bed and slid beside her. He looked at her lovingly and soon engaged in a passionate kiss. Pratigya responded with equal fervor. She hugged him tight as he moved towards her neck. He trailed his fingers up & down her arm & continued brushing his lips on her soft skin.

"thank you Pratigya.. this is the most precious gift you've given me. Thank you very much."

Pratigya lightly nibbled his lips- "Mr. Singh thanked me!! Am I dreaming??"

Krishna- "No you're not" & he began tickling her, making her squirm in his arms.


the end

Edited by KriYa_life - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice one - come on do not keep us in suspense yaar.
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I loved it...jaldi update d next part...plz...i hope ur duin it 2day itself onli😉
Edited by Eden_luvsKriya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww luvly dear n i like the welcome picture, really like ittt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
n keep it up, i luvd reading it my dearrr:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Bahut badiya Ramona...really luved his gift...he will be glad if he sees this.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely gift Ramona...
Awesum one...
continue soonnn...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Abey,werz d rest?i'l only coment wen u post the rest. .its a dhamki. .😆
sweetu,update jaldi da. .
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Ramzi my sweetheart.. It's awesome, fab gng... Cant wait... Update it soon.. Plz plz plz plz plz plz...

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