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Posted: 14 years ago
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Rani,u updatd aftr a long tym!yaay!it ws superbly awesm!it gave me goosebumps.bt y krishna is so naive?neways,waiting 4 d story to unfold to see more mystery. .al d bst 4 ur exams dr. .
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plllsss update faster😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey peeps!! so i have passed my 3rd sem!! yay, me!! lol...okay so comin to the show i have stopped watching it...n i will only resume when krishna will regret whatever he's done!! i do know wts goin on but it doesnt interest me anymore becuz 4 me the usp pf the show was his unconditional love for her but now that, thats missing..hmmm...anyhoo so i thought why not atleast try n make this forum more lively as it has clearly slipped in rankings in the past few months...so to do my bit, im updating again...so all you readers comment, like, criticise do wotevs u like but plz do sumfin..haa..lol!! enjoy..lovez!!
Chapter 6


"Oh my God!! I should have read these before!" she gasped. The messages stated that she meet him at civil lines in the morning, and much to her dismay, she unfortunately did! She tried calling Rolli but to no avail as her phone was switched off and Krishna who kept calling in the middle really didn't help her much. Pratigya thought of ways to get out of this situation but nothing even worked in her mind, let alone trying in the real life. "I have to face him and talk to him, it's the only way he will understand, or at least it's my best shot" she said to herself. So she picked up one of his calls and very uncomfortably asked to meet him the next day in uni. 'This ends now' she thought to herself.
As Krishna eagerly paced around in front of the main entrance of the uni, time just seemed to have stopped for him. He kept looking at his watch and then the gate. Finally after 3 n a half hours of waiting, she came. Krishna hadn't realized that he had arrived way before time. "Hey sweetheart, you look smashing but what happened to your new look?? I really liked..." said Krishna but was interrupted by Pratigya's hand signing him to stop. "Look Krishna, I've told you this before but I don't think you understood me very well. I do not love you!! Hell, I don't even like you for that matter, I have been taking all this silently till now but I won't anymore! So back off and stop all this nonsense. I hope I made myself clear this time and if you still don't get it, You and Me is never going to happen!!!!!" she said in a firm voice looking into his eyes every now and then. "Are you done?" Krishna asked seriously. She looked at him trying to keep a straight face and nodded yes. "Okay, glad that you're out with your frustration now come on, we have to go" he replied. She couldn't hide her emotions anymore and showed what she felt, utter shock. He almost dragged her to his car (yes he brought his car this time) when she finally pushed him away and blasted him again"What is wrong with you? I just said I don't want anything to do with you, don't you get it? " . With this she tried to go enter her university but Krishna wasn't in the mood to play anymore, he grabbed her hands, jerked her in his arms and lifted her up (bridal style) and put her in the front-seat of his car. He took her dupatta, tied her hands with it and fastened her seat-belt, "If you make any noise you have no idea what is going to happen to you! If you Don't trust me? Try me!" he threatened in a dead serious voice. This completely shut her up and she just looked through teary eyes as he proceeded to close her side of the door and walk towards his. Sad;y for Pratigya she picked a day and time when no one would be around in the fear of what he might say, but now she regretted not considering what he might do. Pratigya was sobbing uncontrollably by now and she looked at him with pleading eyes, "sit back we're moving", he informed her anger still clear in his voice. He drove the car very fast and Pratigya was scared to death, she didn't know what was going to happen and the reckless driving only added to it. They stopped in front of a great big mansion, he signed the gatekeepers, and they opened the gates. Krishna stopped right at the main door, picked her up again and moved towards the main door. She struggled a lot and kept looking at him with questioning eyes but he refused to acknowledge any of this. "Maa, bauji!! where is everyone?? Look whom I've brought!" he screamed loudly as he entered the mansion. It was a grand mansion unlike anything Pratigya had seen before, she didn't know what was happening and was confused as hell, even her crying stopped as she didn't know how to react to all this. He still had her in his arms and was standing in the middle of a great big hall with a smile on his face. A bunch of people came from different areas of the house and stood around him. An old man stepped forward ans asked him what the hell was all the ruckus about. "Arey bauji, look at this. I've brought someone very special to meet you guys" he happily replied. Seeing all those people there Pratigya started to struggle again and everyone noticed of course. "What is all this Krishna??" asked the old man (Sajjan Singh). "This bauji, is your daughter-in-law to be. Remember you told me I just have to point to the girl I want and you will get me married to her, well look I have made it so much easier for you, I have brought her here. Now everyone listen, this is Pratigya, Krishna Thakur's future wife!!" everyone was shocked because of what he just said, even Sajjan Singh had no idea one day he would just kidnap a girl and tell them she was to be their D.I.L. "That's all fine son but why have you tied her up? Let her go we all want to meet her!" he said happily. He asked Krishna's mom to bring the pooja stuff and prepare to welcome their newest family member. "Krishna was a little hesitant at first but when Sajjan Singh insisted, he untied her and put her down. But as soon as he did, she out of sheer rage slapped him hard (again..lol!). Everyone was shocked, no one had dared to even speak up in front of Krishna and this girl slapped him in his own house in front of his whole family. "How dare you??!" she roared. "How dare you do this to me? Who do you think you are? You think you own everyone around here, you can do whatever you want and no one will ever say anything to you?! You're wrong!! I won't let you ruin my life like this, don't take my silence for weakness." she kept on shouting at him while he just stood there staring at her, but finally Sajjan Singh interrupted her, "Hey girl! Do you have any idea what you are doing? How dare YOU slap my son??" he harshly inquired. "I'm sorry you had to see that but I had no option. Do you have any idea what he's been putting me through?? Hell he kidnapped me and brought me here!" she answered. Pratigya narrated the whole story to them and everyone was amazed, no one would've thought Krishna could do such things, his introvert nature was just not like this. "I know I probably should'nt slapped him that day but I swear I asked him to slap me back or whatever but leave me alone but he has made my life miserable since the day I met him. You please ask him to stop all this, you too have girls in your house, how would you feel if they were to be put through the same misery I was?" she vented all her anger and frustration. Pratigya quietened to listen to SS's response. He asked someone to give her water and seated her. "Krishna whatever you did was totally wrong, look at the poor girl, she's scared to death. Apologize right now!" he ordered. "Sorry!" muttered a moody Krishna. He wasn't that bothered about what she did, he was just too love-struck to see anything. His eyes just kept on staring her all the while and he admired how she had the guts to do what she did, truly she was meant to be his wife. SS explained Pratigya that he would not bother her again so she should just calm herself down and drink the glass of water she had in her hands. She felt relived and did the same, her breathing was still abrupt and quick due to all the crying. "Krishna don't you annoy her, what is wrong with you? Is this what I have taught you?? Don't you know we respect the women of our house? She is out future D.I.L so you have to respect her wishes too, am I clear?" he very calmly talked to him. Pratigya's eyes widened in shock and the glass fell from her hands, as it was glass it broke and a piece of it got to her foot and it started bleeding. "Are you happy now dear? I talked to him, now he will listen to whatever you say. Now come on stop crying!" SS tried to pacify her. Pratigya was shocked as hell, she didn't expect this to happen. "Now come on Krishna, show her your room, after all she should also have a say in how it's decorated. Tell Shakti all the changed she wants and he shall get it done. Now go you kids have fun!" he told Krishna. Hearing this Pratigya just made a run for it. "Hey Pratigya!! wait!" shouted Krishna as he chased her with a smile on his face. 'All these people are mad! I will go home and talk to papa right away. Oh God!! please help me get out of here' she kept muttering to herself.
Edited by rosh-star - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Me first. 😉 😆 .

First of all congrats for successfully passing your 3rd sem.
Nyc chapter. 😊. Poor prats. . Krishna's obsession is making her lose patience. 😆

SS and family aren't as rude as they appear in the show.

Nw eagerly waiting for their marriage 😳 which i hope will happen soon. 😳

And thanx for the pm. 😊
Edited by angel261992 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Krishna sounds too desperate...doing a good work...continue updating (regularly)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
omg,really all family member mad,more than show.what will prat do?plzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey peeps, surprised?? u must be, considering my recent history in updating, this is a rare event when i update this quickly...lol!! anyhoo comin to the chapter lemme just say this isnt one of my best works so plz bear wid me...but hey, sumfinz better than nothing rite? okayz so enjoy and comment plzzz...!!
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Chapter 7

Krishna chased after her till the main door but he got surprised to see a trail of little drops of blood she left after her. He figured it was the glass and was pissed at whoever gave her that glass. He shouted at the servants to get him the first aid kit and his heart fluttered thinking she was bleeding. Pratigya ran clutching her dupatta and her bag near her chest tightly. She was still crying and could barely see, much to her relief she made it to the road. In her efforts to see, she kept rubbing her eyes because they were clouded due to tears. In all this hassle she didn't see a car approaching her, as she walked amidst all that traffic she almost got hit by the car when someone pulled her in the nick of time. The car rushed passed so close to her that she felt the side mirror slightly brush against her, all this together got to her and she fainted in the persons arms. Pratigya stirred in her bed and led out a slight sigh as her head felt heavy, she slowly opened her eyes and noticed her being in a very big room which wasn't hers! She quickly got up and looked around. Her foot was neatly bandaged and all her stuff was kept on the bedside table. She hurriedly grabbed it, and slowly went towards the door, she tried to open it but it was locked. She kept on trying and trying till she heard someone from behind, "You scared me! I've been waiting for so long for you to wake up!" she slowly turned around and saw her worst fear come to life, it was Krishna! She was in his bedroom all alone, with no way out. "Why'd you bring me here? I want to go home!" she told him. "Relax sweetheart, you're amidst people who love you, and this is home too." he replied while calmly moving towards her. "Don't come near me!" she shouted.
"Shshshsh! Relax sweetheart, come on I'll show you your new room", said Krishna in a calm yet threatening tone. It completely shut her up and even though she wanted to argue back so much, she suddenly didn't have any courage at all. He gently tried to hold her hand but she backed off afraid of what was running through his mind. Krishna smiled at her fear too, and proceeded towards showing the room, "...and this is my CD collection. I have hand-picked every single one of these and don't let anyone touch them, well except for you, I guess." he said while running his hand down the back of his head and grinning. "And this is my closet, I know not as colorful as yours but this is how I like to dress. I like black mostly, as you can see and..." he continued to rant about his life, taste etc basically everything he did, dose or will do. In the meanwhile Pratigya just stood next to the door trying to think of what to do to get out of this mess. Her mind was riddled with thoughts of her parents and what they would do when they'd find out she was with a guy all this time, she just stared into space lost in her own worries when suddenly Krishna's snapped in front of her eyes and literally snapped her back into reality. "Where are you lost? I know!! You are thinking about what you need to change, isn't it? Well OK, tell me and I shall make our room just per your wishes, princess!" he beamed with happiness as he clearly marked her place in his life. "NO! Stop all this! I don't want anything to do with you or your family, do you get it? Now Open this damn door, my family must be getting worried." she screamed at the top of her lungs. This completely pissed him off, here he was trying to give her what every girl in his city would dream of and she gave him attitude? He grabbed her by the shoulders and pinned her against the door, "listen girl, I am going out of my way to be extra nice to you not because I have to, but because I would do whatever it takes to see you smile for once. But don't you for a second think I can't do anything worse than this. I can do whatever I want with you right here right now but I won't you know why? Because I want you to be my bride and come into my life, this room with all due respect that a girl gets when she gets married. I don't just want to have fun with you and discard you like a used tissue paper, I want you to stay with me forever. Why don't you believe me when I say I love you?" he inquired passionately. "Because this is all b**l s**t! And even of you do love me, I don't love you back so whatever your thinking is not possible. So why don't you let me go and move the hell on!?" she shouted back. Krishna smiled still looking deep into her eyes, "love is not business, it's doesn't necessarily have to be a two-way deal, I love you and that's enough for me. Now the sooner you realize your new fate the better it will be for both you and your family! This is not a just a threat, try to move away from me and you'll see what I mean!" he whispered to her. "Leave me!" was all she could say after that and tried to push him away but to no avail. On the other hand he got lost in her beauty again, her little red nose, her teary wet face, her doe y brown eyes brimming with tears, her quivering pink lips, her tiny fists bumping against his chest...everything about her took his breath away. He in the heat of the moment took her wrists in his hands and put them at her sides, she kept on screaming at him and struggling to get free but it seemed he didn't even hear her. Krishna leaned in closer and closer while Pratigya turned her face away in disgust.
Edited by rosh-star - 14 years ago
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Wow its too good i exited to know what happen next
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow the story is interseting and nice plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nyc one. Update soon
Edited by angel261992 - 14 years ago

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