Dosa's 1st FF.... Khabi na khabi - SEE P 24 - Page 21

Hey Cari......

Originally posted by: surbhisachwani

wowwww carsima diiii ....

nicee oneee ..i lubbed the way u describe their emotionsss ......so both are experiencingg some feelingss ..thats nicee

but krishna's reaction on listening her name was starnge ...kuchh toh haiii ........veryy eagerr to knowww ......

sis u r makingg this ff supernatural ???

update soon

thank you surbhi ji.. i was gonna update it today.. but then the news abt the promo threw me off.

Originally posted by: aleena1

Hey Cari......

Awesome update.......all i can say is.....

Keep it up👍🏼

Originally posted by: carisma2

thank you surbhi ji.. i was gonna update it today.. but then the news abt the promo threw me off.

Wonderful and supeerb update carisma
all feeling you shown your ff very nicely..loved it
pl update soon next part

Originally posted by: Deepali88

Wonderful and supeerb update carisma
all feeling you shown your ff very nicely..loved it
pl update soon next part

Thanks a lot yaar.

very nice story dii 😃😃😃 waiting for ur next update😊😊😊

Carisma diiiii........
jz read the update...im soooooooo happy that u decided to restart with ur ff....but this is not done......this update is toooooo short....😭..me want more.!!!!!!!!!!n moving to the update....
it was lyk seeing a sweet dream infront of my eyes...nw wat is this new chakkar about sax?is Krishna having any enmity towards Sax?um hmm..so the story is moving in a completely interesting n entertaining way......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
eagerly waiting for the nxt update.......plzzzzzz update soooooooooooon!!!

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa

Carisma diiiii........
jz read the update...im soooooooo happy that u decided to restart with ur ff....but this is not done......this update is toooooo short....😭..me want more.!!!!!!!!!!n moving to the update....
it was lyk seeing a sweet dream infront of my eyes...nw wat is this new chakkar about sax?is Krishna having any enmity towards Sax?um hmm..so the story is moving in a completely interesting n entertaining way......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
eagerly waiting for the nxt update.......plzzzzzz update soooooooooooon!!!

Thank uou - missed your clappers.

Originally posted by: carisma2

Thank uou - missed your clappers.

yup...... it will be intense and still romantic - don't worry.. bitter sweet is always a heart pounder!..

awww!!!1eagerly waiting for that intense n romantic one...😳😳😳😳...
@bold:well said!😉😳😆