Dosa's 1st FF.... Khabi na khabi - SEE P 24 - Page 16

Originally posted by: premprem1

LUB IT!!! mwuahzzzz

Thanks a lot glad u are liking it 😃

oye hoyeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😆🤣check them out eyeing each other🤣

lalantop beta⭐️👏 ab likhti rehye no turning back its even more good than vms i guess its like a novel once u read u want to read it till end but😭 its sooo short read it in 5 min write some more yaar😃 i am loving this prats uff mar mitti humray krishna baba par pehli baar main😆😆😆😆😆 its more like arja for me raher than kriya😉 got the point

Wowieeeee..... Carisma di........ kya update likhbo...

jz read the last 3 parts........i must say WOWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

lovely update dear..........👏 loved it......😛

Originally posted by: aleena1

oye hoyeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😆🤣check them out eyeing each other🤣

Awesome chapter....... 👏👏⭐️⭐️

Update soon..................... keep it up👍🏼

Thanks babe. yah man i thought i'll add a bit of romance in it . 😆😆

Originally posted by: telstra

lalantop beta⭐️👏 ab likhti rehye no turning back its even more good than vms i guess its like a novel once u read u want to read it till end but😭 its sooo short read it in 5 min write some more yaar😃 i am loving this prats uff mar mitti humray krishna baba par pehli baar main😆😆😆😆😆 its more like arja for me raher than kriya😉 got the point

heheheh, i see your point. babe what u read in 5 mins - takes me hours. 😳to write, - buh as i'll try wrting as much as poss. glad u enjoying it

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

Wowieeeee..... Carisma di........ kya update likhbo...

Baba staring at Babu... ☺️

Ab jaldi se next update karbo....

Thank you mate, as soon as i get more ideas - i'll sure update. So busy now - holidays over now am back at work. heheheheh glad u lubbed it.

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa

jz read the last 3 parts........i must say WOWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

i luuuuuuub ur language delivery!!!!!!kisi ki nazar na lag jaaye aap pe......clear depiction of each others feelings.....it is so interesting n im sooooo excited to read each chap..so KriYa r strongly attracted to each other,ryt?bt it seems lyk they dont rly understand the depth of it........waiting to read more.......

diiiiiiiiiii.........plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!

lub

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Thanks a lot - I wanna show thieir feeling of love from the inside - i WANNA WRITE AND THINK ABOUT EACH OF THEIR emotion that they feel............ sorry abt the caps.