a short FF : SHE LEFT ME!!! (updtd last chap pg 8) - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaasshh

it wud become a lil boring then...trust me the shock u will get at the end......๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰ yar this is a short story na.....๐Ÿ˜ณ

Oooooooooh!! Now you've got me all excited๐Ÿ˜ƒWhen are you updating next?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: shruthiR

Oooooooooh!! Now you've got me all excited๐Ÿ˜ƒWhen are you updating next?

in abt twenty minutes....dnt wry i will end it today itself....๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: kaasshh

in abt twenty minutes....dnt wry i will end it today itself....๐Ÿ˜Š

YAY!!! I am soooooooooooooooooooo looking forward to the next few chps๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
Lovely update sweety

Is krishna a ghost?????? Prat keeps getting images of krish getting hurt and her friends know something has happened....

Thanks for the update hun

can't wait for the next update.... Keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago
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chapter------4
pratigya cuddled closer to him....and placed her arm around his chest.....she loved to stay in this way.....in his arms...forevr.......
krishna wasnt asleep.... he turned his face to her and softly kissed her cheek.....
pratigya looked surprised------are...tum soye nhi abtak?
krishna----nhi...hume neend nhi aa rahi hain......
pratigya-----kyun? krishna...kal hume ghumne jana hain....tum so jao abhi.....
krishna pulled her closer to him and brushed his lips near her earlobe...she giggled-----kya kar rahe ho....sone do na.....
krishna----okay....okay....i wont disturb u....fine..... he looked away......
pratigya realised that he was offended... she pulled herself on top of him and looked down into his eyes-----kya baat hain krishna...? tum pareshan ho?
krishna sighed----nhi....aisi koi baat nhi hain....
pratigya studied his face carefully and said----nhi...kuch baat to zaroor hain...batao hume.....
krishna held her tightly against himself and said------pratigya....hume bht darr lag raha hain.....
pratigya-----daar? kis baat ka darr hain tumhe?
krishna-----tum...tum...firse hume chodkar to nhi jaogi na?
pratigya-----of ho krishna....kitni baar kahun tumse....agr tum humse thk tarah pesh ate ho......humpar chillate nhi ho....hume koi taklif na dete ho...to hum tumhe kyun chodkar jayenge...?
aur tumne to hume promise kiya hain ki tum dubara aisa nhi karoge.....
krishna----kabhi nhi......
pratigya smiled------to fir?
krishna------pata nhi pratigya....shayad tum....nhi samjhogi......
pratigya laid her head on his chest and smiled------hum sab samajhte hain krishna.....hum jante hain ki tum humse bht pyaar karte ho.....
few minutes passed away then suddenly krishna's voice changed....it sounded really pathetic and sorrowful-------i....i'm sorry pratigya........i....thot......u have left me.....for evr.....and.....i....i........
pratigya put her fingers on his lips------sshhh...aab so jao na plzzz...hume bht neend aa rahi hain.....
he sighed and patted her gently------thk hain........so jao..........
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vinay!----rolli asked him over the phone-----kuch pata chala pratigya ka?
vinay was in delhi,with jai and abhishek,searching for pratigya.... he replied-----nhi...abhi tak to nhi....
rolli-----hey bhagwan...plzz.....
vinay----tum plzz fikar mat karo...hum koshish kar rahe na....mil jayegi woh....yehi kahin hogi.......
rolli---plzz use wapas le aao...kisi bhi tarah.......ek min....----she remembered somethng suddenly------vinay...krishna ka ghar bhi delhi mein hi hain....kahin woh uske ghar mein to nhi hain?
vinay-----oh ya...u r ryt.....lekin uske ghar mein to abhi....u know wat......
rolli----fir bhi vinay...plzzz tum waha ekbar check kar lena......ho sakta hain woh wahi hain...aur shayad use sacchayi pata chal gayi ho....?
vinay-----okay.....i am checking it out....u dnt wry.....thk hain? be cool....
rolli-----thk hain...aur haan....plzz hume fon karte rehna......
vinay------sure.....
he cut the call......
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it really felt nice after the shower......pratigya came out of the bathroom,dripping water all over..... she luked sensuous and sizzling...... in the maroon bathrobe....... she had always been a really attractive grl and boys were crazily after...ryt frm her high scul... nobody wud believe that she was an indian..... she was soo fair, her faded brown eyes gave out a certain glow...... in other words,she was exquisitely beautiful....... that is why it was some kind of first sight love frm krishna's side wen he frst saw her in a business meeting...... she used to work with his partner then..... bt as they both grew fond of each other after a number of casual visits,she changed her office and shifted to his..... frm then on their love story started...... wen he proposed her to live with him...she agreed at once bt had to take a great deal in to convince her parents... they were kind of conservative.....and were totally against this thng of living together without the bond of marriage...... bt pratigya was desparate.... she quarrelled with her parents,took her thngs and stomped out of her house permanently.....and came over to krishna's......
she had always taken a lot for him......she didnt know why...bt she knew that it was impossible for her to live without him....so habituated she had become of him......
pratigya took her brush frm the dressing table and started combing her hair... water droplets flew in all directions and some sprinkled onto krishna's face......whu was sitiing on the bed,reading a magazine..... he turned at her......gazing at her angelic beauty.....
pratigya caught his expression in the mirror and smiled to herself...it was nothing new...... he got up and moved to her...bt she was just in time to slip away frm him.....
krishna was surprised as well as amused------oho....to ye baat hain.....
he darted towards her...to catch her while she agen ran away to the other corner of the room and giggled.------nhi krishna...itnin asani se nhi....they ran about the room......jumping over the bed....pulling down the bedsheets,knocking against the dressing table....ultimately pratigya became exhausted and stopped to take her breath...... krishna took this chance and pinned her to the wall with his hands...... he gave out a devil laugh------aab kaha jaogi jaaneman?
pratigya gasped for breath----ooff......kitna bhagate ho tum.....
krishna----tum itni bhagti kyu ho?
pratigya smiled and looked down...she felt shy...... a few moments,then suddenly her mouth gaped open as she felt his hands pulling at the thin waist belt....wich held her bathrobe around her body......
NO!!!!---she shouted and pushed him away...------krishna????
he had alredy been successful in opening the knot...she wrapped her bathrobe tightly around herself with one hand and with the other,she tried to tie the knot agen.....
krishna stood there watching,with a broad smile on his lips....-------dekha...humse bhagne ka anjaam?
pratigya-----tum pagal ho......
krishna laughed------woh to hun.......tumhare liye......
pratigya blushed and ran into his arms agen to hide her embarressment........
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they were walking along the pavement,hand in hand.... it was a vry romantic night so they had decided to walk a lil after having their dinner........
pratigya rested her head on his shoulder while walking and said------thnx for evrythng krishna.....
krishna-----that i shud tell you...for being with me still now.....
pratigya------hmm......
suddenly he stopped.......his facial expression changed........
pratigya-----krishna....kya hua?
krishna looked at her.......yet she felt that he was thnking deeply abt somethng else...... she became worried...god knows why....
pratigya-----krishna kya hua tumhe?
krishna released himself frm her embrace and said quickly------pratigya...hum....hume abhi jana hoga....
pratigya was stunned.......she dint know wat to say.....
krishna----hume...ghar jana hoga......abhi......
pratigya-----krishna...ghar? lekin kal ka meeting?
krishna----are baba....humara matlab hume mummy papa ke paas jana hoga abhi.....
pratigya----abhi? aisa kya ho gaya krishna? tum to subah bhi ja sakte ho?
krishna-----nhi.....hume abhi jana hoga...bht....zaroori hain...... he started walking in the other direction...pratigya ran after him...-----krishna!!!!! krishna.....ruko ek min plzz..... he walked so fast that she felt it hard to keep up with him..... she tripped and fell down on the pavement...------aahhh!!!
he stopped and turned.....ran over to her...... knelt down beside her......and helped her to get up.....
she had tears in her eyes...-----krishna.....tum firse.......
krishna cupped her face in his hands and gently kissed her tears away------nhi pratigya....hum tumhe chodkar nhi jaa rahe hain....hum wapas ayenge bht jald.......hum hamesha tumhare saath rahenge...chahe uslke liye hume kitni bhi taklif kyun na ho.......kyunki pratigya...tumhare bina...tumhare bina...hum chain see na jee sakte hain na mar sakte hain.........
he pulled her into his arms....kissing her repeatedly........ then slowly he let go of her.....and stepped back........pratigya stood where she was.....and gazed at him.......as he cntinued to walk away frm her.......
"krishna...plzz....", she let out a deep sob...........
god knows frm where a strange fog appeared between them and clouded her vision...... she tried to look through bt it was so thick....she was evn afraid to move........ wen it cleared...she looked in frnt and gasped......
KRISHNA WAS NT THERE.......!!!!!!!!
she called out to him,her voice choking with her tears-------krishna!!!!! krishna!!!!!!! krishna!!!!!............. the cold wind blew on her face......... making her shiver....... she ran here and there.....nt understanding how cud he get away so fast......!!! he dint evn have the car............
then suddenly she remembered------yes....he have gone to his home...to his mom dad...i have to go there too.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It was a very nice and intriguing chpโญ๏ธ.Wonder what Krishna is upto and why was there such a lot of mist and fog around once he left her๐Ÿ˜•.Looking forward to the next chp๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 15 years ago
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chapter-----5
she knew where krishna's house was..... it had started raining heavily... she got down frm the taxi a lil distance away frm the big house and paid it off.. then she ran towards it,sheltering herself frm the torrents of rain with her hand......
a number of cars were parked outside the house....
probably theres some kind of party going on----she thot.....
bt evrythng was so still......except frm the pitter patter of raindrops...there was no other sound...... no loud music,no clatter of laughter......nothing...it was pin drop silence.......
she slowly ascended the frnt stairs and walked towards the door...she cud see many people inside....talking to each other in low tones........
as she walked towards the door,a strange kind of fear wrapped her around......she felt she cudnt move....she felt as if someone held her back forcibly........someone didnt want her to enter........ someone...........?
she took a deep breath...and pushed open the big door------krishna?????
evryone turned around at her.......
she walked forward slowly....avoiding people's gazes.....and whispers... she caught some words like "there she is","u dnt know","she is the one "......
suddenly someone grabbed her arm...she turned-------tum? yahan?
vinay------pratigya chalo mere saath...he dragged her in the opposite direction....... she protested-----par....vinay....krishna...hume krishna sem milna hain...woh achanak yahan chala aya....usne kahan kuch zaroori kam hain....kahan hain woh?
vinay avoided her questions and cntinued to pull her......
the whispers around her increased...... someone clicked his tongue sympathetically......as she walked passed him.....she cudnt understand wat was going on bt then suddenly she released her hand frm vinay's grip with a jerk....--------leave me...... she shouted......
vinay stopped.....his face became pale..-------pratigya woh......
pratigya-------just shut up.....i said just shut up.... she turned arounbd to the other people------kya ho raha hain yahan? aur....aur....krishna kahan hain? usne humse khud kaha ki woh yahan aa raha hain....to fir....aaplog hume usse milne kyun nhi de rahe hain? KAHAN HAIN WOH?
vinay cudnt take it anymore...... he caught her arm and spun her around-------tumhe krishna se milna hain na? huh? aao mere saath..... he dragged her through the crowd.......which moved apart to give them space......
he stopped near the end of the hall and pointed in frnt-------woh raha krishna.....!!!
pratigya followed his gesture and looked in the direction.......... at frst she felt she cudnt feel anythng....her whole body froze at the sight before her eyes.........then slowly her legs started to tremble like a leaf........it cudnt support her body weight and she dropped down on the cool marble floor.......
covered with a white sheet,krishna lay on the floor.....his eyes closed.....shut forevr........ the blood stains had dried up on his face,a few rugged marks cud be seen near his eyes......... thru the curtain of tears.....she cud nt well make out wat they were....perhaps she knew wat they were..... she closed her eyes and recalled her dream...... his face and his whole body was pooled in blood....it looked like as if.....as if.......he had KILLED HIMSELF MERCILESSLY............
she started to feel giddy as she heard somethng like.........
"he was like this...we knew him vry well.....wen he lost his temper..he used to turn into a beast.."
"are wo to bachpan se hi aisa tha,"an old man said, "har baat pe kitna gussa ho jata tha...kaun keh sakta tha ki kabhi apne aap par istarah......." he sobbed.........
pratigya let out a painful groan and then evrythng went black...........
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rolli and vinay waited outside the ward.....rolli had arrived a few hours ago....vinay had called her up and told her the address of the hospital in wich pratigya was...... she was in the operation theatre.......
rolli was cntinuously weeping....while vinay tried to console her......
vinay----tum shant ho jao...aab sabkuch thk ho jayega..aab to pratigya mil chuki hain na?
rolli---lekin vinay....tum socho....aisa kaise ho sakta hain? he committed suicide on the same nyt she left his house....then....how cud she meet him evn after that....and...and....she evn came to delhi WITH him? tumne dekha na...tumne dekha na.....woh usse baat kar rahi thi...she was talking to him!!! bloody hell....hows it possible? do din woh yahan kiske saath thi? krishna ke saath? woh krishna jo tin din pehle mar chuka tha?
her hands turned cold at once------vinay kahi krishna.......
vinay-----just shut up rolli........kya bakwaas kar rahi ho......have u gone mad too?
rolli------lekin fir wo.....
vinay-----rolli...humne pratigya ke hotel manager se baat ki hain....usne waha khud room book ki thi...apne naam se... are yar....she loved him so much...maybe...she was just imagining him to be around her......bt u dnt wry...aab use sacchayi pata chal chuki hain na...she will be all ryt...she will be perfect...dnt wry.......
rolli was far frm being reassured------par uska woh sapna.......woh krishna ko us halat mein kaise dekh sakti hain....? that also in her imaginations? how wud she know?
before vinay cud reply,the doctor came out of the O.T. they rushed to him-------doctorsaab....pratigya thk to hain na?---asked rolli eagerly......
doctor------she is in a state of shock....bt dnt wry..she will be soon okay.....waise i need to talk to u...come over to my chamber.......
rolli and vinay followed the doctor to his chamber.... he told them to sit down and himself took his seat.....
rolli-----baat kya hain doctorsaab....?
the doctor-----dekhiye...humne uske bare mein suna.....ismein ghabrane wali koi baat nhi hain.....aisa hota hain kabhi kabhi..... ise hum hallucinations kehte hain...matlab hamari ankhen wohi dekhta hain jo hum dekhna chahte hain...... sometimes evn after death...we see the same person around her,smiling,laughing,singing...like he used to be....... these r just hallucinations....its nothing supernatural...so u dnt need to worry..... pratigya bht jald thk ho jayegi....aur ye sacchayi pata chalna uske liye bht important tha......aab use aisa kuch nhi dikhayi dega jo asal mein hain nhi...........
rolli heaved a sigh of relief and thanked the doctor...... vinay got up and shook hands with the doctor too,thanking him...... both of them came out of his chamber......luking vry relieved......
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rolli stepped into pratigya's chamber slowly... there she sat.....looking outside the window...... she came over to her and sat down on the chair beside her bed...the slight noise made her turn..... she smiled------hii rolli....
rolli was glad to see her smile-----pratigya woh...tumhare ghar mein fon kar diya hain humne....uncle aunty tumhe kuch hi der mein lene aa rahe hain......
pratigya-----thnk u rolli......u r truly my best frnd......
her sweet,innocent wrds brot tears in her eyes------pratigya....am....am so sorry......
pratigya put her hand on hers and pressed it gently-----dnt be.....it was nt UR fault....... she looked away-----it was mine...........
rolli-----no pratigya ismein tumhari koi galati nhi thi......tum to bas sabkuch thk karna chahti thi.....
pratigya-----kya farak padta hain....sabkuch galat ho gaya......
rolli was abt to say somethng more wen she stopped him-----rolli plzz kuch der ke liye hume akela chod do...hum thoda aram karna chahte hain....
she got up immediately----sure sure...tum aaram karo...hum vinay ke saath bahar baithe hain...jab tumhare mom dad ayenge hum tumhe jaga denge...
pratigya nodded and smiled...
rolli helped her lay down her head on the pillow and then she left.......
as she closed the door behind her......pratigya said-----tum sach keh rahe the.....koi hamara viswas nhi karega...... she turned towards the window and smiled at.............
KRISHNA...........................whu stood quietly with his back leaned against the window panes...........
he walked towards her and sat down beside her....-------humne kaha tha na tumse....ye baat tum kisiko bataogi to log tumhe pagal kahenge.......kahenge ki tumhara dimag kharab ho gaya hain...tum kuch bhi soch rahi ho....... he ran his fingers into her hair------aur fir wo sab hum dono ko alag kar denge.......kya tum aisa chahti ho?
pratigya clutched his hand tightly------nhi....kabhi nhi.......ekbar humne galati thi......tumhe chodkar chale aye.....woh galati hum dobara nhi karenge......hum tumse alag hokar nhi jee payenge krishna......
he smiled and stooped down to kiss her forehead.....-------humne bhi galati ki hain pratigya....humne socha tha ki tum humse pyaar nhi karti.........aur.... he sighed-----lekin aab sabkuch thk ho jayega...humne tumse waada kiya hain...hum kabhi tumhara saath nhi chodenge....hamesha rahenge tumhare saath...hamesha.........
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epilogue
pratigya was in her own home..with her parents.... she was under the treatment of Mrs gupta,the renowned psychiartrist...... and according to her she had started to improve a great deal......
she kept herself inside her room only and seldon used to go out...except for certain occasions wen he parents used to plead her...and she cudnt dishearten them......they were really vry happy to get their daughter back.....their cheerful,smiling pratigya....whum they had lost......
it had been a year since krishna's death.....and pratigya had got used to this terrible truth.....that he was DEAD......
yes,she was improving......why wudnt she?
krishna had kept his promise.....the promise wich he made to her after he died....... he was always there with her....evrywhere...evn in her room..... she talked with him......smiled with him,shared her food with him...slept in his arms........
if it wasnt for krishna......her state wud have nvr improved and she wud have ended in some mental asylum...... krishna had proved his love to her.......
EVN AFTER HIS DEATH...........................
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kyun? daar laga???????๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by kaasshh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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he he guys....do u want such a spooky lover?๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It was an awesome chpโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ.Woah! Krishna died three days before and she thought that he was still around.So was she really having hallucinations or was his spirit or whatever really around her?๐Ÿ˜•.It was a wonderful ff Kaash,well done๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Hopefully you will keep writing many more wonderful ffs like this๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: kaasshh

he he guys....do u want such a spooky lover?๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰

No way man!! I bet that would give everyone the creeps๐Ÿคข๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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