Behooda logon ka behooda chat thread # 14 - Page 97

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Thats what my plans were until friends wanted to go away 😆 Some want to go anywhere in europe and others to Brazil or Argentina

HAAHAHA Aaliya U Goin Wid out killin this 1 😕

Originally posted by: anchal2

@Ania:
I am reading mistrusted.. right now!! I was curious so started reading the last part...and I didn't wannt write this openly in the ff section, so thought this would be safer..lol
I am reading the second scene and may be I am biased or unfair because I've only read the first chps. but I am not really impressed with this chapter 😳 I don't know, one thing is that, it doesn't hold the reader's attention😳

edit...I am impressed but it's not the same😳 you know what I mean😳

Seriously though, even I wasn't much impressed with that chap....it was pretty rough...but I just wanted to make a start somehow and cont. the ff. I was writing after some 1 and 1/2 yrs...😆.....but next chap will be better fo sho! 😃 I m planning to write an intense scene....hehe....dunno how that will turn out

Originally posted by: ania_91

Awww.....I lubb you for being so honest, Anchal! 🤗

Seriously though, even I wasn't much impressed with that chap....it was pretty rough...but I just wanted to make a start somehow and cont. the ff. I was writing after some 1 and 1/2 yrs...😆.....but next chap will be better fo sho! 😃 I m planning to write an intense scene....hehe....dunno how that will turn out 😳

herez the precap I left at the end of the chap. abt it....let see how it turns out.....I have no faith in my capabilities afterall.😆

"So, you wanted to insult me by calling me here like this?" she shouted as if to compensate for the sudden urge to cry.

"Hey, you're taking it all wrong. It's nothing of that sort'", he explained once again but she wasn't ready to listen.

"Don't you dare throw that crap at me! I'm done here with you and your taunts on me'enough of your attempts at being the sacrificing angel who only cares about others. Show all that bull to someone who cares!" her voiced was miffed as a small sob penetrated through her.

"Would you listen to me for once?" he shook her shoulder stopping her from escaping.

"you're hurting me!" she cried.

Originally posted by: anchal2

ohh, I was afraid, that I was being harsh!!🤗 I really didn't mean to, and I was so gonna add that it's proly because you're writing the part after such a long time and it will take one or two chapters to get back into the groove, I completely understand that, but I was just writing what I had felt😳

hey!! I didn't mean to discourage, I have 100% faith in your capabilities, I am not your fan for nothing!! Like I've said, I am still impressed and I shouldn't even find any faults because I would be the worst writer on the face of this planet...WITHOUT A DOUBT! So don't I don't even bother trying!!
most importantly, no pressure to be better with the next part, don't try hard, it'll come naturally!!😆

I think you'll be an awesome writer and a good mod ....ferioufly .....hehe....yep, I'm hell bent on making you the mod here *looks around to see that no mods read it* I fear alien abduction 😆

Originally posted by: -Cwezy_Manoola-

hahahah Anchal & Ania Its Ur Job To Kil This thread Today :P