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Originally posted by: dkmystery

now the comment of the chapter.
It is just wonderful to read a story from Pratigya's perspective. glad u liked it😊 Do update soon... will update soon...

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Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

That was so cute thank u 😊 Love the banter between Krishna and Prats glad u liked it😊 Aww theyre going out Look forward to the next part

will update soooon.... thank u for ur lovely comments😊
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Originally posted by: shruthiR

Both the chps were wonderful 👏 thank u sooooo much😊

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great chap dear!!!!!!lbd it!! ! thank u soooo much😊[ /QUOTE]
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Originally posted by: yasemin

Very good job... I love it, and so eager to read and so very sweet... thank u sooooo much😊 Waiting anxiously...

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res hey tammy.... hi😊 so happy to see u here will be back.. waitin😊

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chapter 6
We drove to a lovely little restaurant and had dinner together.
"Thank you for that wonderful evening." I said, when he parked the car outside my flat.
"No, I have to thank you." he said soft.
"I wish you a good night." I was about to get out of the car, but krishna held me back.
"pratigya?" I turned suprised to him.
"Good night. May I call you? I mean, we are friends now, right?" he asked almost shy. I smiled and nodded.
"That would be great." With that I got out of the car.
From that day on, krishna and me began to spend alot of time with each other. We went out, had fun, laughed, danced or spend comfy evenings on the couch. I dont know why, but I began to really like krishna. He was so funny, so openminded and sweet. I enjoyed his company so much, that I managed the distance to Poo better than expected.

Dear Didi,
how are things going back at home? I hope you dont only work but also go out and enjoy being free and not having to care for your little sister anylonger ;)
Here everything is fine. Tanita and me still get along very well and we really enjoy being here. America is so big, loud, bright.. just wonderful. I absolutely love it and I cant thank you enough for letting me go.
So, how is krishna doing? From what you wrote, you seem to be real good friends now. Im really happy about that, and who knows, perhaps... :p Tell him I asked for him.

Oh, by the way, I met a guy. His name is Rishi (from kahin toh hoga) and he also studies here. Hes so intelligent and sweet and we get along really well...

Oops, sorry, I have to go. Rishi and me want to go to the next lesson together.

I talk to you later, love you,
Poo

I smiled to myself and shook my head.
"Why are you shaking your head?" asked a voice behind me, I jumped.
"God, krishna! Do you always have to scare me like that? I nearly got a heartattack." I said.
"Im sorry, but the door was open and you know that we wanted to spend the lunchbreak together." he apologised.
"Its ok, I was just in thoughts. Poo sent a email."
"Really? How is she?" he asked interested.
"Shes fine. You know, shes Poo. Always happy, no sorrows and always on the run." I giggled.
"She asked for you... and yes, she met a guy. She tells me hes only a friend, but I think hes more than that."
krishna listened and shot me an amused look.
"Well, seems like your little sister is growing up. Just wait a bit longer and shes engaged." I looked shocked at him.
"Poo?! No! Shes too young." I called out, but he only smiled ironic at me.
"Why? Pooja is 20, almost 21. When do you think will she be old enough..." I dont know why, but his words hurt me...perhaps he was so right.
"Ok, lets go or my break will be over before we left."
It was a nice and warm day, so we grabbed something to eat and walked to the park.
"Here, I met you the first time." I said looking around, he nodded seriously.
"Yes, exactly over there at the bench." He showed at the bench a few metres away from us. I shivered at the thought of that night.
"krishna? I know you for quiet a while now and you know about Poo and me, but I know nothing about you? I mean, who are you? How do you live, what about your family?" I asked careful as I knew that he never talked about himself. krishna looked suprised and also shocked at me. It was like he looked at me, but also like he didnt see me.
"Im sorry. I know that you dont like to talk about yourself." I apologised and started to walk again, but he grabbed my hand and held me back.
He still looked at the point, where I had be standing right before.
"You dont have to apologise. We are friends right? And friends tell each other about themselfes and are there for each other." I nodded.
"I live the way that I think I should live. Im a normal guy. My parents died a few years ago in a accident. Since that time I cared about my little brother. He also studies, like Poo. I had to quitt university and begin to work after my parents death to be able to care for him. Thats all about me. You see, our stories are similar." I looked sympathic at him, it was the first time that he was so honest to me and really told me about him. I took a step back to him and stroke softly his cheek.
I could see that he was fighting the tears, he wasnt able to look at me or to move.
"krishna...you are not alone. You are there for me everytime I need someone, please let me be there for you. We are friends, and friends care for each other." My voice was not more than a whisper now. He looked at me like a little child, then he hugged me tight, so tight I almost couldnt breath.
"Thank you, pratigya. Thank you for being my friend." he whispered with a shaky voice.
Dear Didi,
Wow I cant believe that Im here now for almost one year! Time flies by so fast. But Im soooo happy here. I still love America, I love the university, I love to be here with Tanita, I love you for letting me go and I love Rishi... Yes, you read right. Im in love with Rishi. Im sure that you already imagined that, but I wanted you to know it. Hes the best man in the world and I truly and deeply love him, believe me. I know that you think Im too young to think about a proper relationship, but Rishi and me want to get married after finishing university.
I just thought I warn you. Please think about it, Didi. And give Rishi a chance. Hes really a good man.

Ok, I have to go, we want to go out.

I love you and miss you,
Poo

I sat there in front of my computer, not able to move. Wow, my little Poo was really in love, unbelievable. Surely I was shocked that she wanted to get married, but from all what she had told me in the last months, Rishi was really a good guy.
The phone got me back to reality.
"Hello?"
"Hey, beautiful. Guess what?" asked krishna on the other side of the line. I had to giggle.
"What?"
"My brother fell in love, he wants to get married after university." he said proud.
"Wow, krishna! Thats wonderful! Im so happy for you." I called excited.
"We have to celebrate this. I invite you out for dinner."
"But krishna, you really dont have to do that." I hesitated. I didnt like it when krishna invited me out because we always went to fancy restaurants I couldnt affort.
"Oh yes, I have to do that, so hurry up." he answered.
"Why?" right then the doorbell rang.
"krishna, wait. I have to get the door." I put the receiver down.
"Because Im already here." he said as I opened the door. I looked suprised at him, but then I burst into laughter.
"You are impossible."
He grinned cheeky at me and came in.
"Thats why you love me." I blushed and turned away.
"Ok, where do you want to go?" I asked.
"Thats a suprise. Just get ready..." he smiled mysterious.
"Well... ok." I shrugged my shoulders.
"Oh, pratigya... please wear your Sari. You know the blue one." he added fast. I shot him a look, but as I knew there was no use in asking him I just got ready.

About half an hour later I was done.
krishna sat on my couch and switched through the channels.
"Ok, Im done. Lets go." I said coming out of my room.
krishna switched the tv off and watched me up and down, which made me feel uncomfortable.
"What? Is something wrong with the sari?" I asked getting nervous, but he only shook his head and smiled.
"No, everythings perfect. Lets go."
We drove to a lovely little restaurant, it was small but nice, very cosy and familial.
"krishna, its so lovely here." I said astonished, he only smiled.
"krishna, you here? What a suprise. And who is this beautiful lady by your side?" asked a middle aged man, coming to us. krishna hugged him.
"Good to see you. May I introduce? This lovely lady is my friend pratigya. pratigya, this is Rajev Uncle." I shot both of them a suprised look.
"Nice to meet you." I offered my hand, he took it and kissed it, which made me blush.
"Its a pleasure to meet you, Miss pratigya. I never thought that my nephew has such a beautiful girlfriend." I blushed even more and krishna cleared his throat.
"Oh no, Rajev Uncle. We are not..." But he didnt listen to krishna and walked us to a table a bit away from the others.
"Please take a seat." He said and gave us the menu.
"Choose whatever you want, its on the house." he added grinning.
"Oh no, we cant take this. Please not, Mr. Pratap." I said and looked begging at him. He shot me a suprised look and stroke my cheek.
"Dont worry, Miss pratigya. You can take it. And please call me Rajev Uncle." "Ok, Rajev Uncle." I answered smiling shy.
Rajev Uncle looked with so much sorrow at me, that I jumped. He had the same sorrow in his eyes like krishna.
But then he smiled and hit krishna playfully.
"Shes allright, krishna. But I really dont get how you got her." he giggled and left us.
"He likes you." concluded krishna smiling.
"I also like your uncle. He seems to be a good man." He nodded.
"Yes he is. Without him me and my brother wouldnt have made it." he said in thoughts. I put my hand on his and smiled.

"But now tell me about your brother. He wants to get married? When?" I asked courious. krishna smiled amused.
"Good youre not courious." I giggled.
"Ok, he met her at his university. They know each other for a few months now and they fell in love the first time they saw each other, but he waited till now to tell me. From what he wrote, shes really a sweet girl and he truly loves her." he told me excited.
"Thats so wonderful, krishna." I said honest. He winked at me.
"Thank you. When you say it I know that you really mean it." There was a strange silence between us. krishna looked so deep into my eyes, that I had the feeling he could see directly into my soul. My heart began to race again and I blushed.
"You know what? Pooja is also in love." I said, trying to fill the silence.
"Really?" he asked suprised.
"Yes, she met this guy at university...." suddenly I stopped and looked at suspicious at krishna.
"Your brother wrote you that he is in love?" he nodded.
"Yes, why?"
"That means he doesnt study here?"
"No, he studies in New York." I jumped.
"You never told me that he was in New York... Could it be that your brothers name is Rishi?" Now krishna looked suprised at me and nodded.
"Yes, where do you know from?" I hit my forehead and burst into laughter.
"Oh my god. Its Poo and Rishi. They are in love."
krishna looked at me like I had gone crazy.
"What are you talking about?"
"krishna, Rishi loves Poo... Poo wrote me right before you came that shes in love with a friend from her university... Rishi and that she wants to get married after university." I explained giggling.
krishna was still confused, but then it hit him.
"You mean... Pooja and Rishi??" I nodded, now he also burst into laughter.
"Well, I think fate doesnt only want us to be together, it also wants Rishi and Poo to be together."
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Posted: 15 years ago
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meeeeeeeeee first again... sixth time
umm KriYa became good friends.
aw..rishi is poo's new friend...i am sure this friendship will soon turn in to relationship...but not sure about KriYa friedship😕
omg! krishna has no parents...feel sorry for krishna.his only brother is his family...
aw...krishna hugged pratigya...that was a very emotional one😛
poo want to marry rishi...i knew that.i hope rishi dodn't have any grey shades.
krishna was talking to her on phone standing in front of her door!....thar was a very cute scene.
rajiv uncle looks seems to be a nice man.let us see.
oh! rishi's is krishna's brother?😲...unexpected twist!😃
great going tammana👏😃
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chapter 7
The evening was really great and I enjoyed myself very much. krishna always made me laugh and feel at ease when I was around him. And I was kind of proud that he had decided to show me a part of his world.
"Oh, do you really want to go?" Asked Rajev Uncle sad when we were about to leave.
"Yes, Rajev Uncle. We have to go. But thank you." answered krishna hugging him.
"Thank you for the delicious meal, Rajev Uncle." I bent down and touched his feet.
"You are really a good girl, Miss pratigya." He took my face in his hands and kissed my forehead.
"Hold her, krishna or shell leave you." He said to krishna who only nodded.
"I hope to see you again." I smiled.
"I hope so, too. Bye Rajev Uncle." We left the restaurant.
On the way home krishna was very quiet and lost in his thoughts.
"Are you ok, krishna?" I asked a bit concerned.
"Huh... umm.... yeah...sure... Im fine." he stuttered, but I knew he was lying.
"Here we are." right then he parked the car outside my house.
"krshna... We are friends, you cant hide your feelings from me..." I said soft and put my hand on his arm. He looked suprised, almost scared at me.
"I know that you are upset with something. Do you miss your parents?" He looked confused at me.
"Umm...yeah, yeah I miss my parents. Ok, its late. I wish you a good night." he said, I nodded and got out of the car.
"Good night, krishna." He drove very fast away without waiting till I was in the house. He was really strange today.

Der Didi,
How are you? How is your work, do you still have to cope with that old ugly Mr. Balank??? ;) I feel really sorry for you.
Im so sorry for not telling you that Rishi is krishnas brother, but we wanted to know how long it takes for you two to find it out :
Here is everything fine. I still love it, but Im really stressed at the moment. The final exams are in a few months and I have learn very much, but Rishi, Tanita, her boyfriend and me learn together... I know what you think, but we really work and dont only talk. :D

So, what about you and krishna now, ha? He went with you to Rajev Uncles restaurant. Wow, thats really a honour for you. Rishi told me that Rajev Uncle was like a father for them after their parents death and that krishna really lookes up to him. He also told me that Rajev Uncle doesnt like everybody. Hes very picky, but you stole his heart. That was so obvious... I mean you are my sister
So, you are an item now??? Im so happy for both of you, you are really a perfect match.

Ok, Didi. I have to go, class is calling.
Love you,
Poo

I was shocked. How could Poo think that krishna and me were in love? I mean, we are friends, but nothing more... Or was he more than a friend to me? He has been there for me no matter what, he always made me laugh, built me up, comforted me, showed me how to have fun...
I didnt know why, but suddenly I felt a strange feeling inside me. When I thought about krishna like that my heart began to race and I felt very warm.
"Ms. pratigya!" Mr. Balanks voice brought me back to reality. I hurried into his office.
"Yes, sir? What can I do for you?" I asked with a fake smile, how much I hated him. Sure he had given me a job after my parents death, but the salary was really bad and he treated me like a slave.
"Ms.pratigya. Im sorry to have to tell you that, but you are fired." he simply said. I was shocked.
"But sir... Why?" He looked at me, folded his hands and put them on the table.
"You have to know, the business isnt going too well in the last time and we have to safe money to be able to survive this crisis. Im really sorry, but you are too expensive for us. You can pack your stuff and leave." He explained, trying to sound sorry for me, but I knew he was lying.
"Now?" He only nodded. I was too shocked to say anything, so I just left and packed my stuff from my desk.
Right when I was about to leave I felt the anger rise inside me, so I stormed into Mr. Balanks office.
"You know what? I thank god that you fired me. Finally I get the opportunity to get out of this whole!" I called mad.
"Watch your mouth, Ms. pratigya!" he called back at me, but I only smiled.
"Why? What do you want to do? Fire me? Too late. I wish you all the best, Mr. Balank. May your business break down." With that I left.
"Hey, pratigya.... Its me... again... please call me back... what is with you? Come on..... If you dont call me back Ill call the police and..." BEEEEEEEP
I was sitting in my flat, crying my heart out. Mr. Balank had fired me a few days ago and I didnt know what to do. There was no proper joboffer for me, I was really devastated.
krishna had called at least 10 times to check on me in the past few days, but I didnt want to see or talk to him, I wasnt even able to tell him that I lost my job, so I just ignored him.
The phone rang again.
"Please leave a message after the Beep." I heard my own voice.
"pratigya, I am at your work right now and guess what your boss told me... Damn it, why didnt you tell me??? Ok, I come to you now and if you dont open the door Ill... Beeeeeeep." again the Beep interrupted him. He had sound really mad and yes... concerned. I decided to take a quick shower and get ready, because I didnt want him to see how bad I felt.
About half an hour later he rang the doorbell. I sighed deep, put on a smile and opened.
"Hey krishna, how are you?" I asked as cheerfull as possible.
"Damn it, pratigya. I was ill. Why didnt you answer my calls?" He asked mad. I only shrugged my shoulders and went into the kitchen.
"I didnt feel like answering. Do you want something to drink? Oh... Im sorry, I forgot to go shopping..." I looked into my empty fridge.
krishna had followed me and now stood right behind me.
"Are you ok?" he asked so soft that I shivered.
"Umm... sure, why do you ask?" I answered, pretending to know nothing.
"pratigya... we are friends. I know you and I know that you are not ok." he put his hand on my shoulder and tried to turn me to him, but I shook it off and walked into the livingroom where I began to tidy up.
"Damn, Its really messy here. I never thought that I could be like Poo." I tried to joke, but surely failed.
"pratigya pratigya." Dev only said over and over again, trying to stopp me, but I wouldnt let him.
"Damn it pratigya!" he called, walked over to me and pulled me in his arms.
"krishna, let me go! Im ok, really. I cant breathe." I tried to struggle free, but he wouldnt let me go.
"No, you are not ok." he whispered. The more I tried to struggle free, the more he held me. On one hand it felt good to be held like that, on the other hand I didnt want him to know how unhappy I was. Finally I gave up and let my tears flow.
"What am I going to do now, krishna? Ive lost my job and I cant find a new one." I cried and held onto him.
"Shhhh... We get this, believe me." It took a while till I had calmed down, but then I realised that I was still in krishnas arms and blushed.
"Ahm.... thank you.... I..." I stuttered and looked at the ground.
"Its ok.... You know what? Well go to Rajev Uncle. The way you look you havent eaten in days. So get ready." But I hesitated.
"No krishna, please not. Im not feeling so good and I look horrible. Please I dont want to go out now." I looked begging at him, but he didnt listen to me.
"No way, pratigya. We are going. Get ready or go like you are, thats also fine with me."

About an hour later, we entered Rajev Uncles restaurant.
"Ah, the sun is rising." he called when he saw us. I bent down to touch his feet, but he pulled me up and hugged me so heartly that I felt the tears welling up again.
"What is with you Miss pratigya? Why are you so sad?" he asked concerned.
"What did you to to her, krishna? Why is she crying?" he asked krishna mad.
"He did nothing, Rajev Uncle." I answered fast. He looked me and krishna up and down, then he nodded.
"Take a seat. Ill get you the menu. You lost weight, you need to eat." He simply said.
We sat down on "our" table.
"Why is he so nice to me?" I asked krishna.
"He likes you, very much. He thinks you are good for me." he explained. I shot him a suprised look.
"What do you mean?" But right when he was about to answer, Rajev Uncle came back with the menu. He grabbed a chair and took a seat.
"And now tell me, why are you so sad?" He looked intently at me. I sighed.
"She has lost her job and cant find a new one." answered krishna for me. I looked mad at him and kucked him under the table.
"Ouch... what?" he called rubbing his leg.
"Thank you very much, krishna. I think Rajev Uncle doesnt want to hear that." Rajev Uncle giggled.
"You are really a great couple.... But why did you get fired?" I looked suprised at him.
"Well, the office where I worked had to fire me because the business isnt going too well."
"Pardon? Your ex-boss kicked her out already she earned far too less. But she told him off!" Rajev Uncle laughed out loud and slapped his leg.
"I knew there is a fighter in you, Miss pratigya. But, tell me. What kind of work did you do in your office?" I had to giggle.
"Well, normal things like making appointments, doing the accountancy, organizing events..." I answered.
"Wow, you seem to be quiet good at what you do..." he said after a while, then he got up to fetch something.
"Ok, I need somebody to help me in the restaurant. That would mean doing the accountancy, organizing events, but also to help serving if we have a lot to do. I cant pay very much, but at least its a job. What do you think?" He wrote a number on a paper and handed it to me.
I looked at it and jumped.
"No, Rajev Uncle. I cant take this offer. Thats one third more than I earned till now." I explained. Now Rajev Uncles expression changed into suprise.
"You are kidding... Dont tell me you earned that less."
"No, Im not. But thats really too much. Thank you for your offer, Rajev Uncle. But no." I handed him the piece of paper.
"No way, Miss pratigya. I didnt make you an offer, I asked you for help. And friends help each other. Can you start tomorrow?"

Der Didi,
You have no idea how happy I am for you that you found that new job. And Im so proud of you that you told that old, ugly Mr. Balank what you thought. Very good. Seems like my Didi has started to live... finally.
The way you wrote, the work at the restaurant must be very good. You seem to have a lot of fun working there.
Im so courious to meet Rajev Uncle when we come back home.
Wow, only another 3 months and Ill be back home. I really cant believe that its almost 2 years that I am here. Time really flies by.
But now I have to concentrate on my studies. I dont want to fail with my exams.
I really cant wait to come home, Didi.

Love you,
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first me again...seventh time
rajiv told krishna Hold her or shell leave you."...hope he under stand what he means😃
yet another sweet mail from poo.very refreshing to read.
omg! she was fried from her job...but could not get the real reason behind it.😕
wow...krishna is so sweet.he came out with a solution for pratigya.
krishna said that rajiv thinks that she is good for him...aw...that was an indirect way of proposing pratigya.
aw...that was so sweet rajiv uncle offrred her a job with high salary...all is well😃
great to read that poo will be back after 3 months.
excellent work tammana👏. thanks for your up date😃
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