my real office work tension got relieved after reading this chapter- there is no words to describe it. Your writing skills is very neat and decent in language specially showing the innocence in pure love. In total it is awesomeπ. In mind i am thinking a lot but while writing this post i am not able to express it.
In addition, after reading your story i stop watching the vijay tv- office show- i feel that show is not good as such as your writing.
its another sooprb chapter sweet...lovd vr bondng...bt v shld nt hv convincd dat easily ha ha lol...karthik hw r u gonna convince raji????????/..really cnt wait sweety plz update fastπ
Karthik comes to the terrace and sees Raji leaning her hands on the terrace wall and looking downstairs towards the road. He comes quietly near her, hugs her from behind, whispers "I LOVE YOU" and kisses on her cheek. Raji remains silent and seeing no reaction from her, Karthik senses there's something wrong. He holds her shoulders and turns her towards him. Raji doesn't look at him. She stands still and quiet looking down.
Karthik lifts her chin up and says ..."ennai paaru ...Raji..." Raji looks at him and quickly tears roll down on her cheeks. Karthik gets worried, he wipes her tears and says.."enna Raji idhu??? ippo edhukku nee azhuthukittu irukke?" Raji still keeps quiet... Karthik: badhil sollu Raji... ippadi mounamaa irukkaadhe... Raji: enna sollanum? Karthik: yen ippadi ellaam nadandhukkare? konjam kooda maturity illaame... Raji: appuram??? Karthik: enna appuram? Raji: innum vera enna ellaam en kitta ille nnnu detail aah sollidu... Karthik: puriyalai... Raji: nee thaane sonne... enakku konjam kooda enga appaa vai pathi akkarai illai... mmm... enakku emotions illai... ippo sonniye maturity illai... nnu... idhu maathiri innum en kitta edhu ellaam missing nu therinjaa dhaane... nee paavam evvalo adjust pannikkare nnu theriyum...
Karthik stops her talking by placing his palm on her mouth... and when she tries to speak... Karthik: Shhh... innum oru vaarthai kooda nee pesa koodaadhu... ozhungaa naan solradhai kelu... Raji nods her head. Karthik doesn't remove his hand and continues ... Karthik: chummaa kindalukku solradhai ellaam ippadi serious aah eduthukittaa ... ippadi thaan edakku madakkaa thonum... free yaa iru... naaan kindal panradhu pidikkalai nnaa sollidu... niruthidaren... ille badhiluku neeyum kindal pannu... simple... adhai vittuttu... ippadi emotional aah sentiment aah ennai pottu thaakkure... Raji removes his hand and... Raji: enakku thaan emotions , sentiments edhuvume kidaiyaathe... Karthik: adhu Lakshmiya cool down panradhukku sonnadhu... Raji: appo vera orutharai convince pannanum naa avanga munnaadi ennai mattam thatti pesuviyaa? Karthik: kadavule... appadi illai... Raji... Raji: vera eppadi eduthukkanum nu neeye sollu...
Karthik: sari... ok... SORRY... Raji: edhukku? Karthik draws her closer to him, puts his hands around her waist , locks her in his arms, looking deep into her eyes... says..."I'm really sorry... please ...mannichidu .. thappu thaan oru vaarthai solradhukku munnaadi adhu unnai hurt pannumaa nnu yosichi irukkanum... sorry daa... " Raji keeps quiet... Karthik: naan senjadhu mannikka mudiyaadha alavukku periya thappaa? Raji: appo ... adhu unakku thappaave thonalai yaa? Karthik: Raji... thirumbavum modhalle irundhaa???? Raji smiles and says..."pozhaichu po..." Karthik: adippaavi...
Raji: sari ennai vidu... enakku thookkam varudhu... naan keezhe poren... Karthik: innum konja neram iren... Raji: edhukku? enakku bayangara tired aah irukku... Karthik: ore oru five minutes... Raji: sari ... ennannu sollu ... Karthik gets a gift wrapped beautifully that was kept on the staircase and gives it to her. Raji: enna idhu? Karthik: pirichu paaru... Raji unwraps the gift and it was a beautiful photo of a little girl and a little boy holding hands...marvellously framed... Raji is very happy to see that...
Karthik smiles ... Raji: enna sirippu? Karthik: nee onnum thara venaa... Raji: sari ok... Raji looks at the photo affectionately and kisses it... KArthik: adhai inga kudukkaradhu... Raji: romba thaan... adhellaam mudiyaadhu... Karthik: sari ... adhuvum naane tharen... Raji: ey... venaa... Raji tries to move from there but Karthik holds her firmly and kisses her. He passes the intensity and depth of his love into her with that kiss and as if she has understood that Raji hugs him back and gets still closer to him... Feeling shy to witness their romance and love the Moon hides behind the clouds...