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"Chaudani ka Chand"
Characters:
- Vikram – the best daddy in the world
- Shourya – the crazy wicked clown lover
- Agni – the hot passionate and romantic lover
- Niyati – the innocent, honest bholi bhali princess
- Dadisa – the caretaker…..
Story Writers:
Shariefah, Pc84, Ayeshag, Miss5stars, Diljaani, **Crazii_Me**, ~bella~, Lois_Lane.
Background:
Shourya & Niyati get married…Agni sacrifices his love…but niyati still loves agni and want to be with him…..
Important Note:
Thanks to Shazeen & Huma this story sometimes tend to be 18+..when they get in romantic mood they loose control 😛.....Also don't try to look for a logic in it….because you won't find it😆!! It was supposed to be a serious story…but turned out to be comedy!! A great comedy 😆
Let's start...............
Vikram suggests to have a small party in the evening....so they can celebrate the return of their true kulvaddhu,…
Shourya gives him a forced smile...."He looks around to find his true love and sees her standing arm in arm with Agni!! it is non other then......
" niyati!!!......he screams.....ye sab kya hai....we just got married and now you're back in his (agni's) arms already.....
Shourya's sweating...his head is aching..he looks on his watch..it's six o'clock in the morning..........."
Then he sleeps again…..
Next morning in the hall his path crosses with agni……
shourya thinks: Omg it was not a dream!!
Agni looks at shourya and laughs evilly... MUAHHHAHAHAHAHA!!!*** it was all a plan to make you suffer.. MUAHHAHAHA.. and now that it is out..
i will make you suffer.. HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! he takes niyati in his arms and kisses her!! hmmm.. strawberry lipstick.. my fav..
hmm..
shourya wakes up again!! drenched.. he didn't realize but he feel asleep again!! opps.. he then looks at niyati's pic and says:
thank god it was a dream after all….(a dream in a dream)
Next morning: Agni wakes up from his sleep smiling becuz he dreamt of Niyati and him marrying and they were happy, when suddenly he hears the door bell ring and Agni starts to.........
get up with his stick.. suddenly there is a rush of wind.. and agni's hair is swaying from side to side... while the music in the background starts to play "agni jyoti jyoti agni swahaa..." he smiles to myself.. looks at himself in the mirror.. and says "how can anyone looks so sexy.. that's right i am agni!!!.. yea baby.. you are sexy.."
another knock on the door.. he looks at the door and opens it..
Agni opens the door, shocked to find a girl bleeding from the head and swaying at the spot where she stood, when suddenly, without warning she falls into Agni's arms and then Agni yells 'NIYATI!!'
agni looks worried seeing her bleed like this..what happened.. should i call a doctor!!! nahi agni.. ma aap ko choor kar jarehe ho.. mujhe zaada miss nahi karna..
dun dun dun!!!!
agni looks at her.. with misty eyes.. and in a total filmy style goes "NAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!"
suddenly he hears a laughter.. he looks down and sees...
that Niyati is fainting and is abt to fall on the ground but Agni holds her in his arms…. he see Raj standing here laughing…
Agni gets angry,Raj is still laughing Agni whistles and his four dogs comes running towards him and he orders them"jao aur meri maa rajlaxmi ki bootiyaan noch lo!!
"raj''s color becomes peela she start running and dogs are after her she is screaming ,
meanwhile Niyati wakes up suddenly and smirks at Agni where raj bumps into the tree outside the house and faints and the dogs suddenly disappear
meanwhile Niyati gets back up and thanks Agni for saving her from RL.....it was all just an act becuz RL wanted to kidnap Niyati and when Agni hears this he......
has tears in his eyes.. dont worrie jaanu.. i'll protect youfrom that good for nothing-half-pierced-dimwitted woman i HAVE to call mother.. and no one will take you away from me..
aja.. meri bahoon mai!!! niyati is about to hug agni when shourya enters...
Shourya enters wearing a clown outfit and jumps up and down for joy saying that its his dream to perform as a joker at a wedding......he asks Agni and Niyati if he can have that honour (shourya says this looking all starry-eyed)Agni and Niyati look at each other and laugh our loud, then turn to Shourya and say:....
"of course you can" say's Niyati looking at Agni with pleading eyes...
" shourya the clown looks at happy agni & niyati and says.....yaaron is this some april fool....yaar niyati you are my wife....what are you doing in agni's arms?"
niyati will be like.....i m soo sryyy shouryaaa...agni is more hotter than uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
shourya: hhh hhh hotter than me....hurrr hurrr (naak pe gussa)....what do you find hot about him....that damn stick of his??? look at me ...how handsome i am "
niyati saidd...shourya you dont have any muscles....have u seen agni..w0www...he has an awesomee bodyy...oooolalalalalla
niyati further adds: oooalalala.. so shourya im gunna dump u .. you kno wht go jump in a lake jaaanuuu .. suddenlyyyyyy......
Shourya threathens to kill them both and niyati plans to run awayyy with agniiiiiiiiiiiiiii
while agni is gettin niyti ready 2 run away.... shourya comes in with a knife ..DUN DUN DUN
he tries to kill agnii..agni lies dead on the floor…and he is like..niyati is only mineeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Niyati smacks Shourya's face, which turns bright red like a tomato, but from behind a hand seizes Shourya's shoulder and its....
"Agni!!....agni!! says shourya and looks to the knife and back to agni....agni says: are fool! dont you know i have a wooden right leg!"
shourya looks at agni and lets out an evil laugh ***muahahahahahaha**** so what if you have a wooden leg.. i have a sharp knife.. agni looks at him and laughs.. haha.. who are you kidding.. the knife is plastic! shourya looks at agni and runs away.. agni advances towards niyati.. picks her up and looks at with lovingly.. Agni says.."
he says -niyati my love mai tumharai begair jee nahi sukta.....- hehhee
then... agni kisses niyti on the lips
(awwww) .... then all of a sudden vikram comes in n sees this..... n sayzzz.....
"vikram says: niyatiiiiiii!!! besharmi ke bhi hadh hoti hai!!! darwaza band kar ke kiya karo ye sab !!!""""
"vikram leaves and closes the door behind him......they are alone again....
agni starts singing.... **kiss me come quick....jaano jiya...kab se tera intezaar hai.....**
niyati sings: **lips on the lips ....mazaa aa gayaa ....mera bhi dil be karaar hai **......
Suddenly the lights go out and only Agni and Niyati are in the room....Agni snaps his fingers and at once, flames erupt onto the candle wicks and a heavenly glow blossoms in the darkened night......Theres pin-drop silence, both are close by, both inch towards each other and whisper:.........
they are inches away from each other.. both of them feeling their breathe on each other...
niyati realizing what she is doing.. and says….
"Agni tum bhi nah.... acha bus..."
but agni is in no mood for "nos"..
Agni says "nahi!!!! give me one more.. one more!!.. please.. "..
Niyati looking at his cute and pretty face.... moves close to him and says……agni…please….
"agni jaan aren't we moving too fast......agni looks at her eyes....they are directed towards the ground.....he thinks ....no i shouldnt force her to do anything she doesnt feel doing.....so he says: niyati raat bahut ho chuki hai tum change kar ke so jawo....kal subha baat karte hai "
as charming as agni is, he does understand niyatis real feelings and he respects her....
Agni mai....she looks in his eyes and gives him a kiss on the cheek, nods and leaves.In the hallway she starts thinking about Agni and suddenly bumps into someone......
she looks up too see who it is..."Dadisa aap yahan"...Dadisa look at Niyati frantically...
dadi sa: niyati tumhe itna khush dekh kar battoro bhi bahut khush ho rahi hogi...hamesha is tarha muskurate rehna....agni tumhe bahut chaahta hai....tum dono ki jodi hamesha salamat rahe......
niyati: haan dadisa....sirf agni hi nahi...hum bhi unse itna hi pyaar karti hoon....hum bhagwan se kahenge ke ki wo humari chote chote bachcho ko bhi agni ki tarha banaye...
dadisa: are nahi nahi niyati...agni ki tarha honge to woh bhi danda le kar chalenge
niyati: to kya huwa dadi sa.....un ka dil to agni ki tarha bada hoga aur un ke aankhein nasheeli honge aur un ki hasi mein ek ajeeb si kashis hogi
dadisa: bas kar ladki agni ki tareef...chal ja so ja....subjha jaldi tayyar hona hai
niyati: dadi-saas mujhe neend nahi aarahe hai.. mujhe ek gana sonao na
dadi-sa: oye ladki.. mujhe koi gana wana nahi aati.. agar.. agni ko bahut gaana aati hai.. ma usse bulati ho.. araah ooo agni.. sunti ho!!..
agni comes to the room....
agni: dadisa!! kya huwa....niyati ur still awake??
niyati: yes agni i couldnt fall a sleep and well u can sing very well so would u please sit next to me and sing till i fall a sleep??
agni: ofcourse meri jaan.... mausam bahut hi suhana hai……saawan ka mahina hai…piya saath mein hai….rab se ab kya shiqayat ho sakti hai ….let me think of a song
and looks at niyati and says: looks like the moon is lying in fron of me…so much brightness comes out of your face….niyati smiles and says: agni hume gaana sunawo na…
and agni starts singing:
"Chaudani ka chaand ho
" Ya aftaab ho"
"Jo bhi ho tum…khuda ke kasam"
"La jawaab ho"……….
-----The End----
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