Hum Aapke Hain Kaun (On-Hold)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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HUM AAPKE HAI KAUN?!!!

It's an FF on the present scenario. Taani is engaged to Vishesh and has left St. Louis and Rey, promising never to come back to St. Louis and into Rey's life again. Kriya is back to India and to St. Louis. SwaRon have broken-up their fight is never-ending.

Rey's P.O.V

Rey is happy to be with Kriya. After all, she is his first love. But... but Taani!!!!! She was different. He suffered the same way when Kriya had left him. And now she was back for him. But, is it the same way he is suffering for Taani?!!!! No. Kriya was like a drug to him; once addicted, could not come out of it but Taani was more natural; maybe his personal sun, who was a spark of light in his life. But she left him suffer with no hopes. No drug could make him feel better... will he ever be able to get the sunlight back in his life again or has he lost his sunlight forever????

Taani's P.O.V

Taani has supposedly moved on. After all, as she says, life is all about moving on. But has she really moved on? No. how could she? He was her first and last love. She had always felt safe with him. But she had to do this. She had to hurt him and herself, for his sake. Coz she couldn't confide her secret into him. Not even to her brother. So it was better if she stayed away from him. Only her Sharon bhabhi knew what the problem was, and she promised not to tell anyone. Will she be able to overcome her problems and go back her prince charming or does fate have something else for her???????

Pls tell me whether I should continue or not. If yes, then I shall give the character sketch and the storyline. Open to suggestions and criticism.

INDEX:

INTRO - ABOVE

STORYLINE - SCROLL DOWN

CHARACTER SKETCH - SCROLL DOWN

OTHER IMP. CHARACTERS - PAGE 14

CHAPTER 1 - PAGE 5

CHAPTER 2 - PAGE 8

CHAPTER 3 - PAGE 11

CHAPTER 4 - PAGE 14

CHAPTER 5 - PAGE 18

CHAPTER 6 - PAGE 21

PROMO 1 - PAGE 25

CHAPTER 7 - PAGE 28

CHAPTER 8 - PAGE 34

PROMO 2 - PAGE 38

CHAPTER 9 - PAGE 41

CHAPTER 10 - PAGE 45

CHAPTER 11 - PAGE 49






Edited by -CrazyNiru- - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nic concept.. can u tell on which couple is this stry ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept :)
Continue soon :)
PM me :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continue soon
Awesome concept
Pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Story line:-

Taani has left st.louis and is now in Delhi, studying in imperial college of fine arts. Kriya is back in Mumbai, back st.louis. Rey is now trying to get over the fact that Taani is no longer his and can never be. So, he is trying to devote more of his time to Kriya (his first love), as a friend, so that he can forget Taani. Swayam and Sharon have broken-up as in serial's present situation. Taani has hidden a very important secret from Reyam and the gang. Only Sharon knows about this. Sharon has promised Taani that she will not tell anybody about her secret.

Taani, on the other hand, is totally broken and lonely without Rey and SwaRon. She feels guilty about leaving Rey without giving him a proper answer. The only light and happiness and light in her life is her best friend, brother, almost everything to her... Prithvi and her gang in ICFA. Everything is back as before in St.louis. Rey is the GS, Kriya is the AGS, Sharon is the CS and Swayam is the ACS. The whole D3 gang has to go to ICFA for a month for a fest. There Taani and ShaReyAm meet.

What will be TaaRey's reaction when they meet?

Will Rey and Swayam get to know Taani's secret?

Will TaaRey and SwaRon become one again? Or is it fate which will make them stay away?

Presenting to you, the FF "HUM AAPKE HAI KAUN?" a heart-warming, romantic, funny and emotional story on the best couples TaaRey and SwaRon.

Edited by -CrazyNiru- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please continue soon!!
I love the concept!!
Dying to know taani's secret!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Character sketch:-

Taani Shekhawat:



The diva of ICFA. All the boys are totally fida on her. Loves Rey a lot even now. Supposedly engaged to Vishesh. For her, her best friend Prithvi is everything, the only reason holding her heart and mind in on piece. Sharon is her best friend and Bhabhi is st.louis. Loves her bhai a lot and will do anything for him. Has a dark secret hidden from everybody, except Sharon and Prithvi.

Reyaansh Singhania:



The cool dude and Casanova of st.louis. Loves Taani a lot and is trying to get over the fact that Taani is no longer his. Obsessed in patching up SwaRon. Kriya is his only reason to smile now. He is happy that she is back and both of them are getting along well together. Still craving for Taani's love and care. Still hopes that someday, she will come back for him.

Sharon Rai Prakash:



The diva of st.louis. Taani's so called bhabhi and best friend. The only person is st.louis who knows about Taani's secret and has promised her she won't tell anyone. Lonely after she left. Trying to be friends with Kriya for the sake of Rey and Swayam. Loves Swayam a lot, but has broken up lately and is trying her best to woo him.

Swayam Shekhawat:



Taani's loving bhai. Is totally confused at Taani's decision of getting engaged. Misses his sister very much and feels that his house and life seems totally empty without her. Still loves Sharon, but is trying to make her realize her mistake.

Prithvi Sanyal:


Taani's best friend, almost everything to her. The only person who knows Taani a-z. the rest of his character will unfold as the story goes on.

Kriya Ghai:



Rey's first love. She has come back from New York to Mumbai for his sake. Her character will unfold as the story goes on.

Edited by -CrazyNiru- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great story line up :)
Loved it :)
Continue soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept dear
Plz continue it n
Pm me when u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concept
what is T secret
waiting to know
update soon

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