ASYA: ON MY WEDDING DAY.... MARRIED A STRANGER INSTEAD OF MY BRIDE !! - Page 56

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing story
just read all the 7 chapters
superb work
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 8 :

varun n vanshika tell them about everything that has happened n how asya hate eachother

aditya( zoya's dad): so ... Now ... We should make them like eachother

Zoya's mom: ok ... Zoya doesn't know how to do any housework ... U know, we've brought her up like a boy n that too with lot of pampering ... But she knows everything about business, shares, n everything of that sort !!

She loves outdoor games n ... She plays volleyball n football very well !! she was an average student in studies, but sports champion of their clg !

Varun: that sounds grt !! ... Asad loves sports n also plays very well ... But he loves studies also !

Vanshika: wait a min. ... Varun, is that girl who defeated asad, ...might be zoya 😃!! ( she shouts in excitement )

Varun: don't be stupid vanshika, there wil be many girl's playing beach volleyball !!

Vanshika: ok, mr.aditya, can you recall the 2012 new year ? was zoya celebrating with you ?

Aditya: no, zoya celebrates all new year eve's with her friends n we even donno where she goes ...coz she hates being questioned 😉!!

Zoya's mom: since she doesn't like being questioned, u've stopped asking her 😆n see ...how she became ..., runs from her wedding n marries someone else ...n then she wants divorce !

Aditya: I know, I've over pampered her, but wat can I do ? I love her soo much that I can't stop giving her whatever she wants ...be it things, money, freedom or ...

Vanshika: divorce ! ...yeah ...or divorce😆, coz she wants it wholeheartedly !!

Aditya: I didn't mean that, but i can't see her sad or upset, but for her better future, I'll do it !

All the other three look at him unbelievably !!

Aditya: I swear ... I'll help you all tough she'll feel bad for it ...I swear on my zoya

All the four are now, set to arrange a volleyball match to bring asya closer !!

Zoya: mom n dad 😃? u came here ? ...what were you doing with uncle n aunty ?

Aditya: ( goes to zoya, hugs n kisses her forehead ... ) just wanted to see you ... I missed you zoya !

Zoya: missed you too dad ...love you !

Zoya's mom: how are you zoya ?

Zoya: I'm fine mom n how are you ? ...by the way, lemme guess ... U didn't miss me no ?

Zoya's mom: how much time did u spend with me before, so that I'll miss you badly zoya 😉?

Zoya: that's too much mom ...u should've atleast told me just like that !!

Zoya's mom: it's ur policy to talk straight... N if I do that, u r feeling bad ⭐️?

Aditya: please stop it ! don't say anything to my daughter😡 !

Zoya's mom: someone has promised something 😆!!

Zoya: wat promise dad ?

( she notices discomfort in aditya's face ... )

are you hiding anything from me ? ( he tries to act normal)

dad, u also changed ? ...i love you dad ...don't hide anything from me ...ur lil princess ... Something is going on for sure n even mom is acting, or I feel so 😭? ( she starts crying n hugs her dearest dad )

Varun: nothing like that zoya ! ...look at me, can I hide anything from you ? ... No ...right !

Stop crying now ... I've a surprise for my lil princess !

( he wipes her tears and n takes her to the car)

( asad observes all this n thinks to himself ... is this girl really soo sensitive 😲? ...but she doesn't seem so ! ...may be she'z too attached to her father, else, this girl will never cry !! )

Asad: dad, why did you ask me to take a leave ? are we going with them or they are taking zoya from here completely ?

Vanshika: does it matter to you, if they take her completely ? does it effect you as shez ur wife 😉😆?

Asad: mom ?😲😡

Varun: nothing like that asad, u need not feel bad or afraid, as they are not taking her with them 😉! ... We are all going for a picnic n that's final !

All get into the car n they reach the La Concha beach in spain which is one of the best city beaches in Europe.⭐️

Asad n zoya are surprised at the volleyball court with their friends waiting for them ... !

Zoya: dad, is this court for us ?

Aditya: yeah ... it's all for you !

Zoya: ( shouts running towards her friends ) thanks dad ...the best surprise ever ... Love you !!

Asad n zoya have a chat with their friends ... N asad gets a bit suspicious

Asad: dad, wat's all this ? why did u cal my friends for a match ?

Varun: zoya likes this game, n so, her dad wanted to surprise her n hence asked me to join to surprise you !

They all get ready to play ... Girls vs boys

The match is going on wonderfully ... zoya, playing in the centre position is catching all the attention from boys 😆... Especially his friend in centre position was just staring at her which didn't go unnoticed by asad 😉!!

It's a small break n as the boys gather together ...

Asad: from now, I'll take the centre place, n you ... Don't dare to look at that girl 😡!

Friend: why not ? ...she'z soo hot 🤢!

Asad: hot or cool, you shouldn't look at her coz shez my wife 😳!!

Friends ( all at a time ): ur wife 😲? you are married 😲😲?

Asad: yeah ... That was an emergency ... As aenna wanted to marry all of a sudden ...I didn't have time to invite anyone

Friend: but shez not aenna ... You ditched her 😕? ... I never expected this from you asad😲

Asad: neither did I expect that something like this would happen 😆!! ... ( he narrates them whatever has happened )... It's all my bad luck

Friend: not bad luck dude, it's called good luck !! ... Such a beautiful lady coming all of a sudden into ur life ... That's fantastic, I mean ... She looks much more better than aenna 😉!!

Asad: will you stop ur nonsense, aenna is the best for me

Friend: ok then, why don't you like us taking a chance with her 😉? ... Shez just a namesake wife afterall 👏!!

Asad: whatever it is, shez my wife n I've some responsibilities towards her n so ... U guys ... Stop staring her, ok ? ( asad doesn't like to disclose the fact of divorce even to his friends, coz he feels it too personal ) ... Now lets go n play

On the other side, zoya narrates whatever has happened to her friends including the divorce n her friends ask her ... " since you are going to divorce him, can we try him ? ... Hez soo handsome 😳!! "

Zoya: yeah ... u can try him, but he'll not fall coz he's already in love with his ex ... ms. Aenna n he really loves her a lot ... So, better drop ur plans right here

Come on girls, lets go !

They start the game with zoya n asad in centre position

Now it's asad's turn to be mesmerized by her beauty ...😆

He feels her moves familiar😳

He feels her face shining in the sun, more familiar ... not in the usual way😉😳

He feels the kicks familiar n finally ...

He felt her shot familiar😆 ... as the ball hit his face, he understood the similaries n finally, his mind confirmed ...

Yeah ... it's the same girl who blasted his face on jan 1, 2012 !!😆😆

He fell on the ground n his friends were helping him ... But his thoughts n eyes were fixed on zoya 😳😳!

He observed everything in slow motion ...

Zoya coming towards him, from beneath the net n lifting him up

Zoya: asad, are you ok ? did that hit you soo bad ? ... I'm sry !

Asad: yeah ... It's hurting soo much !

She takes the first aid kit from his friends hands n starts to do it

Asad's face in zoya's lap n she is blowing his eyes to clear them off the sand

all of their friends, n family leave the couple alone

zoya: i'm sry asad, I didn't know that I can also hit the ball soo hard😆

asad: but I knew it😡

zoya: how can you know ... Did u guess it ?😕

asad: no, it was from my past experience

zoya: wat 😲?

asad: yeah ... I remember ... it was my first new year with my friends in 2012 n we played exactly like this ... N at that time also, u hit me the same way 😆!!

zoya: I don't remember anything

asad: even I don't remember ur face, but the blow is not a thing which I can forget in my whole life🤢 !!

zoya: oh yeah ... I got it now ... U were that poor guy😲😆

asad: but the difference was ... At that time, u didn't even say sry, but now ... u're even doing first aid 😉!!

zoya: coz I donno who you were then, but now ... U r my husband n I've some responsibilities towards you though it's for few days😳😳

asad ( to himself ) : shez not that bad as she appears, n she too thinks of me as her responsibility... Same as I think abt her ⭐️!

asad: I love sports

zoya: even I love them ... N we both are excellent players as well !!

asad: so ... Such diverse people like us, can also have some similaries in interests n likes ... That's really nice to know 😃!

wait for next part to know aennas' introduction to zoya by asad himself n asya's bonding

isn't this going interesting ? ... Please lemme know clearly wateva you feel ... please be frank !


i want long comments for my long update


********** love ... reyna

This story will be updated every Thursday !!


my first story: BEST FRIENDS TO BEST LIFE PARTNERS

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3823857/best-friends-to-best-life-partners-upd-epilogue-11-2


Lemme know if u liked it !!

Buddy me for my pm's !!

I'll only pm to those who'll comment ... !!

reyna's index: fusion of ff's , girl's corner n kid's corner !!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3762857/reynas-index-fusion-of-ffs-girls-corner-n-kids-corner

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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it
its really interesting...
please continue soon😉
Edited by rockstar_16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely...
intresting story day by day

wait for next
Edited by 11sinal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome..
So the gir is Zoya ony..
I think the girl in the library woud be Aaena
Continue soon :D

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...nice update...
I just loved it...
its really interesting...
Pls cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey tis is amazing...
luv it...
its superb...
asya is so cute n luv the volleyball match...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update!!!
asya parents trapping them...good going!!!!
asad was so possessive about zoya...
and finally...zoya is the same girl from the diary!!! wow...their similar likes will bring them closer!!!
precap seems interesting!!
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
i m haopy dat atleast 1 thing s common between them
precap s intersting...cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
This part was awesome buddy..
I really really loved it..❤️
So cute asya parents😳
Loved aditya a lot...😃
Cutely they planned their mission👏
So zoya was the girl that asad mentioned in his dairy 👍🏼👍🏼 loved this twist..
Beach wala volley ball match was cute..
Loved asad possessiveness😳 & their responsibility towards eachother 👍🏼👍🏼
asad mesmerized by zoya's beauty😳
Zoya first aid my asad😳
Looking forward for the introduction
Awesome part.. Well written buddy👏
Ani❤️

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