VIRIKA: ON MY WEDDING DAY.... MARRIED A STRANGER INSTEAD OF MY BRIDE ! - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: reyna.


Thanks !!
U'll know that in next parts😉
Please don't hate my characters !
My stories will not have any negative characters !😳
Please don't thank me for PM's
OK😃


ohright
sorry
i like her den
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update
nice
fabulous
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
please update soon
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
heyyy amazing updates
viren parents r really cute and sweet
dey r helping virika to become together
continue soon
thanks for the pms
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Posted: 11 years ago
Don't mind you introducing that woman from his past to create some sort of jealousy or tension that will bring virika closer together! Keep me posted!




Edited by Surish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
but short
both the girls viren mentioned are different
is the first one jeevika
and the 2nd aenna
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Posted: 11 years ago
absolutely brilliant
totally loving this story
cannot wait for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey reyna a wonderful but short update though😉
Luving vanshika n varun!!!
Want virika scenes asap!!!😉
Just waiting forr them to fall in luv
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Posted: 11 years ago
just loved the update
though it was short
make it big next time
loving it yaar
totally
hope their efforts come fritfull
really waiting for the next
sorry for commenting too late
love u
update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

part 8 :

varun n vanshika tell them about everything that has happened n how virika hate eachother

aditya( jeevika's dad): so ... Now ... We should make them like eachother

Jeevika's mom: ok ... Jeevika doesn't know how to do any housework ... U know, we've brought her up like a boy n that too with lot of pampering ... But she knows everything about business, shares, n everything of that sort !!

She loves outdoor games n ... She plays volleyball n football very well !! she was an average student in studies, but sports champion of their clg !

Varun: that sounds grt !! ... Viren loves sports n also plays very well ... But he loves studies also !

Vanshika: wait a min. ... Varun, is that girl who defeated viren, ...might be jeevika 😃!! ( she shouts in excitement )

Varun: don't be stupid vanshika, there wil be many girl's playing beach volleyball !!

Vanshika: ok, mr.aditya, can you recall the 2012 new year ? was jeevika celebrating with you ?

Aditya: no, jeevika celebrates all new year eve's with her friends n we even donno where she goes ...coz she hates being questioned 😉!!

Jeevika's mom: since she doesn't like being questioned, u've stopped asking her😆 n see ...how she became ..., runs from her wedding n marries someone else ...n then she wants divorce !

Aditya: I know, I've over pampered her, but wat can I do ? I love her soo much that I can't stop giving her whatever she wants ...be it things, money, freedom or ...

Vanshika: divorce ! ...yeah ...or divorce😆, coz she wants it wholeheartedly !!

Aditya: I didn't mean that, but i can't see her sad or upset, but for her better future, I'll do it !

All the other three look at him unbelievably !!

Aditya: I swear ... I'll help you all tough she'll feel bad for it ...I swear on my jeevika

All the four are now, set to arrange a volleyball match to bring virika closer !!

Jeevika: mom n dad 😃? u came here ? ...what were you doing with uncle n aunty ?

Aditya: ( goes to jeevika, hugs n kisses her forehead ... ) just wanted to see you ... I missed you jeevika !

Jeevika: missed you too dad ...love you !

Jeevika's mom: how are you jeevika ?

Jeevika: I'm fine mom n how are you ? ...by the way, lemme guess ... U didn't miss me no ?

Jeevika's mom: how much time did u spend with me before, so that I'll miss you badly jeevika 😉?

Jeevika: that's too much mom ...u should've atleast told me just like that !!

Jeevika's mom: it's ur policy to talk straight... N if I do that, u r feeling bad ⭐️?

Aditya: please stop it ! don't say anything to my daughter 😡!

Jeevika's mom: someone has promised something 😆!!

Jeevika: wat promise dad ?

( she notices discomfort in aditya's face ... )

are you hiding anything from me ? ( he tries to act normal)

dad, u also changed ? ...i love you dad ...don't hide anything from me ...ur lil princess ... Something is going on for sure n even mom is acting, or I feel so 😭? ( she starts crying n hugs her dearest dad )

Varun: nothing like that jeevika ! ...look at me, can I hide anything from you ? ... No ...right !

Stop crying now ... I've a surprise for my lil princess !

( he wipes her tears and n takes her to the car)

( viren observes all this n thinks to himself ... is this girl really soo sensitive 😲? ...but she doesn't seem so ! ...may be she'z too attached to her father, else, this girl will never cry !! )

Viren: dad, why did you ask me to take a leave ? are we going with them or they are taking jeevika from here completely ?

Vanshika: does it matter to you, if they take her completely ? does it effect you as shez ur wife 😉😆?

Viren: mom ?😲😡

Varun: nothing like that viren, u need not feel bad or afraid, as they are not taking her with them 😉! ... We are all going for a picnic n that's final !

All get into the car n they reach the La Concha beach in spain which is one of the best city beaches in Europe.⭐️

Viren n jeevika are surprised at the volleyball court with their friends waiting for them ... !

Jeevika: dad, is this court for us ?

Aditya: yeah ... it's all for you !

Jeevika: ( shouts running towards her friends ) thanks dad ...the best surprise ever ... Love you !!

Viren n jeevika have a chat with their friends ... N viren gets a bit suspicious

Viren: dad, wat's all this ? why did u cal my friends for a match ?

Varun: jeevika likes this game, n so, her dad wanted to surprise her n hence asked me to join to surprise you !

They all get ready to play ... Girls vs boys

The match is going on wonderfully ... jeevika, playing in the centre position is catching all the attention from boys 😆... Especially his friend in centre position was just staring at her which didn't go unnoticed by viren 😉!!

It's a small break n as the boys gather together ...

Viren: from now, I'll take the centre place, n you ... Don't dare to look at that girl 😡!

Friend: why not ? ...she'z soo hot 🤢!

Viren: hot or cool, you shouldn't look at her coz shez my wife 😳!!

Friends ( all at a time ): ur wife 😲? you are married 😲😲?

Viren: yeah ... That was an emergency ... As aenna wanted to marry all of a sudden ...I didn't have time to invite anyone

Friend: but shez not aenna ... You ditched her 😕? ... I never expected this from you viren😲

Viren: neither did I expect that something like this would happen 😆!! ... ( he narrates them whatever has happened )... It's all my bad luck

Friend: not bad luck dude, it's called good luck !! ... Such a beautiful lady coming all of a sudden into ur life ... That's fantastic, I mean ... She looks much more better than aenna 😉!!

Viren: will you stop ur nonsense, aenna is the best for me

Friend: ok then, why don't you like us taking a chance with her 😉? ... Shez just a namesake wife afterall 👏!!

Viren: whatever it is, shez my wife n I've some responsibilities towards her n so ... U guys ... Stop staring her, ok ? ( viren doesn't like to disclose the fact of divorce even to his friends, coz he feels it too personal ) ... Now lets go n play

On the other side, jeevika narrates whatever has happened to her friends including the divorce n her friends ask her ... " since you are going to divorce him, can we try him ? ... Hez soo handsome 😳!! "

Jeevika: yeah ... u can try him, but he'll not fall coz he's already in love with his ex ... ms. Aenna n he really loves her a lot ... So, better drop ur plans right here

Come on girls, lets go !

They start the game with jeevika n viren in centre position

Now it's viren's turn to be mesmerized by her beauty ...😆

He feels her moves familiar😳

He feels her face shining in the sun, more familiar ... not in the usual way😉😳

He feels the kicks familiar n finally ...

He felt her shot familiar 😆... as the ball hit his face, he understood the similaries n finally, his mind confirmed ...

Yeah ... it's the same girl who blasted his face on jan 1, 2012 !!😆😆

He fell on the ground n his friends were helping him ... But his thoughts n eyes were fixed on jeevika 😳😳!

He observed everything in slow motion ...

Jeevika coming towards him, from beneath the net n lifting him up

Jeevika: viren, are you ok ? did that hit you soo bad ? ... I'm sry !

Viren: yeah ... It's hurting soo much !

She takes the first aid kit from his friends hands n starts to do it

Viren's face in jeevika's lap n she is blowing his eyes to clear them off the sand

all of their friends, n family leave the couple alone

jeevika: i'm sry viren, I didn't know that I can also hit the ball soo hard😆

viren: but I knew it😡

jeevika: how can you know ... Did u guess it 😕?

viren: no, it was from my past experience

jeevika: wat 😲?

viren: yeah ... I remember ... it was my first new year with my friends in 2012 n we played exactly like this ... N at that time also, u hit me the same way 😆!!

jeevika: I don't remember anything

viren: even I don't remember ur face, but the blow is not a thing which I can forget in my whole life 🤢!!

jeevika: oh yeah ... I got it now ... U were that poor guy😲😆

viren: but the difference was ... At that time, u didn't even say sry, but now ... u're even doing first aid 😉!!

jeevika: coz I donno who you were then, but now ... U r my husband n I've some responsibilities towards you though it's for few days😳😳

viren ( to himself ) : shez not that bad as she appears, n she too thinks of me as her responsibility... Same as I think abt her ⭐️!

viren: I love sports

jeevika: even I love them ... N we both are excellent players as well !!

viren: so ... Such diverse people like us, can also have some similaries in interests n likes ... That's really nice to know 😃!

wait for next part to know aennas' introduction to jeevika by viren himself n virika's bonding

isn't this going interesting ? ... Please lemme know clearly wateva you feel ... please be frank !


i want long comments for my long update


********** love ... reyna

This story will be updated every Thursday !!


my first story: BEST FRIENDS TO BEST LIFE PARTNERS

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3823857/best-friends-to-best-life-partners-upd-epilogue-11-2


Lemme know if u liked it !!

Buddy me for my pm's !!

I'll only pm to those who'll comment ... !!

reyna's index: fusion of ff's , girl's corner n kid's corner !!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3762857/reynas-index-fusion-of-ffs-girls-corner-n-kids-corner

Edited by reyna. - 11 years ago

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