(J of a Wife 4) Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Ghum ... Last Chapter - Page 146 - Page 106

Originally posted by: Udaylovie

yaayyy im frst one..
navi i promise ill write my comment tomorrow proise!
u see..i have to write a bigg comment ..!
sorry..
bt fr now.."res" ...!

navina!
I am soo sorry!
u want to kill me right..but here I am..!
to begin with i read three chapters together.
u see i saw that post where u said u wont b postin ur store on if anymore..so i used to login..like nd leave!
im really sorry!
now coming to the update..
You nailed it girl..
I dont think I really have words to just express that how much I love the updates nd how much i love the story nd yeahh..how much i love yuhh ... :* :* 😳 😳 ...!
"Paapa, Paapa! , Udita called to her father ... breaking his thoughts. Yes Baby. She made a fist at the end of her out-stretched hand and said : BOO! Uday was puzzled ... this was the first time, he saw such an action and had no idea what she meant. Paapa - BOO! , she told again, along with the action. Sweet-heart ... your Paapa doesn't know what you're talking about. Udita didn't know how to explain, but thankfully, Vijay did : Uday Banna , Baby has been watching a lot of TV lately; she's imitating the signature of BOOGIE-WOOGIE!"
these amzing father dauther moments...they just keep me mesmerised.. :)
love them.!

hai navi.how r u.

loging in after a long time.hehehe i am really enjoying udays attitude towards manyata.

but den i felt very sad for manveer for loosing their baby.u described their pain beautifully.

but i never felt sorry for manyata bearing udays anger.it was needed .may dis time god no hehehe writer give her some intelligence.

thoroughly enjoyed d update plz continue soon navi.

take care.bye.

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Hello navi Hi Sarah😛. how are u? Fine , and u? so finally i read this amazingly written chapter...I knew uday anger will increase with time and i was right Yep ... and his anger will increase more in the next chapter. i mean he is somewhere right not in the sense in hurting manyata through his behaviour but he is angry cox he lost his baby too so i wont blame uday... this behavior is natural... Correct! but i felt really bad for manyata she is suffering so much and now she is bearing uday anger too 😕 And she'll have something else to contend with after chapter 15. y i feel like upcoming chapters would be more heart wrenching... Because it will be😆. u described manyata and uday pain beautifully ... Thank you 🤗 ,n unnati plan on saving manveer relationship was good too...She's a smart girl😳. looking forward for next chapters 😊 Awww😳.

Originally posted by: ...anju...

hai navi. Hey Anju 😃. how r u. Good , and you?

loging in after a long time.I thought u left us😭. hehehe i am really enjoying udays attitude towards manyata. You're so bad Anju😆.

but den i felt very sad for manveer for loosing their baby.u described their pain beautifully. Thank you 🤗 .

but i never felt sorry for manyata bearing udays anger.it was needed . Exactly, it was her fault , so she needs to face the music! may dis time god no hehehe writer give her some intelligence. That's a very difficult job , I TELL U😉!

thoroughly enjoyed d update plz continue soon navi. Yep ... tomorrow night.

take care. U2 bye. Bye.

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Loved the comment Sarah ... thanks so much 🤗 .

your welcome <3 n m fit n fyn :D

Originally posted by: Udaylovie

navina! Yes😲!
I am soo sorry!
u want to kill me right..Wrong, but my readers wanted to kill you😆. but here I am..!
to begin with i read three chapters together.
Why😕? u see i saw that post where u said u wont b postin ur story on if anymore..so i used to login..like nd leave! OK
im really sorry! Aww, it's alright Vrinda😳.
now coming to the update..
You nailed it girl..
I dont think I really have words to just express that how much I love the updates nd how much i love the story nd yeahh..how much i love yuhh ... :* :* ...! I'm so pleased to know how much u love my ff ... & I love u too😳.

"

Paapa, Paapa! , Udita called to her father ... breaking his thoughts. Yes Baby. She made a fist at the end of her out-stretched hand and said : BOO! Uday was puzzled ... this was the first time, he saw such an action and had no idea what she meant. Paapa - BOO! , she told again, along with the action. Sweet-heart ... your Paapa doesn't know what you're talking about. Udita didn't know how to explain, but thankfully, Vijay did : Uday Banna , Baby has been watching a lot of TV lately; she's imitating the signature of BOOGIE-WOOGIE!"
these amzing father dauther moments...they just keep me mesmerised.. :)
love them.! I'm so happy😃.

Aap log andar jaa sakte ... she's just regained consciousness , a nurse informed the family and all rushed in at once. Where's my Baby? Where - where's my Son? I want to know, why aren't u saying anything? , Manyata was getting hysterical in the ward and demanded answers from the nurse that was on duty. She got out of her cot, but the severe pain in her abdomen didn't allow her to go far. Komal and Jai helped her get back into bed as she cried , frantically searching for Virat ... who, according to her, should've been in a cot next to her. They've done something to my Baby , Maa , Manyata wept on Komal's shoulder.

Beta, Virat is no more , you had a miscarriage , DS explained as gently as possible. NO! NO! You'll are lying. Virat was fine ... he was kicking me, I felt him. Ya , I -I - I know where he is , he was born prematurely na ... he must be in the incubator. I want to see him ... take me to him. DS held Manyata's hand in hers and shook her head : Beta , who ab iss duniya mein nahi rahe.

virat is gone? Yep
i mean...no...this is not possible...y did u.. I did nothing😲.
i mean..manveer.. Vrinda, you're blabbering😆.
u cant just seperate them navina...!!! Who said anything about SEPERATING THEM😲😕?
u have to do something abt it!! Don't I always😉?

finally just want to tell u something.. Go ahead , I'm listening.
wheather i cmmnt or not...i love ur story! Awww, so sweet ... u made my day😳.
nd jst remmber like sooo many others dere is a die hard fan of ur story..nd dat is me!
u r amazing...and for ur story!
seriously i am speechless.. Thank you 🤗
i said i would b writing a huge coomment...bt u see...when i sat to wite it..i had no words to express that i love u nd ur story! But the comment does look pretty large to me😉.
nd dat u r an amazing writer! Thanks dear 😃!

Hi navi,😃

How are you!!!! Finally after what seems like years, I managed to regain my place. Isn't that great?🤣

You know since the time you told me that manveer explosion would happen in this chapter, I was waiting for it, you know too sweet is not good, only bitterness would help us understand sweetness better. Manveer too needed their share of bitterness.

Now where did you send udita😭? I really missed her loads in this update, she has become an intergral part of this ff, that any update without us leaves a void, BUT, however this update I really felt: " thank god udita was not here"

When you said explosion, I had painted a bloody picture in my mind, like breaking furniture and all that stuff, but, you managed to make it heart touching without even raising a finger, good job navi!!!!!👏👏

The one thing that caught my attention was that manyata was not the damsel in distress, hearing and not reacting to uday's taunts, she too reacted back boldly, so that the fight was really even. The score board really did show equal points for both of them!!! I really did fear whether manyta would be like an ordinary girl who crucified herself. She did fight boldly👏. (I did feel that since the writer has a partiality for uday , maybe manyta would have been uday's punching bag, but surprisingly the writer managed to amaze me making manyta bold😳👏)

Many points uday told manyta was true, and I share my same opinion as uday has (refer my previous comment for reference, rofl)

Now I read mahi's comment where she asked me to finish uday for her. I would gladly do it 😉,(only that I would make it look like a murder to the outside world, and keep uday for myself) how is my evil plan navi???? 😉Bw I am not retired but looking for a suitable opportunity to bring out my "killing" habits...🤣

Ok, just wanted to know how that 😡**** bloody akash 😡came in this update??????? The writer is gonna answer me!!! I thought when manyta killed that "too good soul" akash, maybe we would not have to see him again, now thanks to the writer, akash came in between manveer. 😡😡WHYYY????????????????😡

Some of words uday used to describe manyta's character and her previous relation with akash really did cross a limit, and I did feel bad for manyta. However wrong manyta was, uday did not have any right to question manyta's character, when he himself was not a "saint" before marriage...i wont support uday in this matter.AND HE DID DESERVE THE SLAP😊

Now, coming to one important comment uday made here.(all thanks to the evil brain of the writer, otherwise, our manveer would have been a loving couple with their 2 kids, and more to come)it was about the ship wreck.. when uday asked manyta how she would have reacted if udita had died , my heart fell, he really told a fact. Manyta with her stubborn nature would never has forgiven him, but I still ask was uday to blame for the ship wreck navi???? Please answer 😕

Unnathi and uday!! such a good pair of brother and sister, loved uday's dialogue wondering who is elder among the two. Poor uday!! his mind knows the truth, yet he refuses to accept it!!!felt sad when he asked his mama for guidance.😭

Manyta too , how she told udita that her dad is angry, but cant stay angry for long. She hopes things would be normal among them soon, only IF SHE KNEW WHAT THE WRITER HAS IN HER EVIL MIND 😡😆. now they are gona lead a separate lives, god save then and bring them together soon. AND I WILL NOT TOLERATE IF UDAY GOES BACK TO HIS OLDWAYS!!!😡😡

Any way the chapter was superb!! Is the explosion over or is there aftermaths of this explosion????😳😲

Do continue soon navi😳

Thanks for the pm😃

Love you!!!❤️

So, first of all. hello Navina:)
I know I haven't commented for a few chapters and I am sorry, but I rather not comment than 'Res' :)
So coming to this chapter; I loved how you have written it!! Hats off girl!! AMAZING job!!! The whole Uday venting out his frustration at Manyata was amazingly well written. I know many will kill me, but I actually loved this chapter, because of the way you showed how Uday is feeling. The whole argument with Manyata, he finally vented out his frustration!!!
And he was so right, if Udita would have died because of him, Manyata would have never forgiven him!! I do feel bad for Manyata, but worse for Uday.
The bit after this, the conversation between Uday and his conscience was really good as well. He does love his princess to the extreme.
So separation haan, waiting to see that😉 Uday will be back!! The old one I mean. Anyways let's see what you have in store for us:)
WHOA!! Quite a long comment I must say:)
Anyways once again, good job!!
And update soon:)
Take care and best wishes:)

Edit: Thanks for the scrap:) I read the chappy before I got the scrap:P
Thanks anyways:)

navi thaaanks fr the double update!!!!😊😊 and i would admit dat i neither want to kill uday fr being mean,nor want to blame him fr being rude,his actions were justified!!!!!! uday always told manyata to take care of herself and virat bt she was so careless right frm chnging her room or taking a flight!!!!