NEW POEM : Every Sorrow Is The Same !

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi !
It's a long long time since i wrote a piece like this ... It's like when the mood strikes ... 😆
Anyways, tell me what you think of this ...


EVERY SORROW IS THE SAME

When the pain of sorrow strucks too fast
That it breaks you just like a glass
When your emotions make you melt like an ice
As your life has too much of spice
When eyes shed a big tear
Everything around is too dark to be clear
Then like a sprinter you run away from that sorrow
Hoping about that lost happiness you could borrow
"Leave me alone !" Says the heart
Conveys the brain "You gotta live till death tears you apart"
Then that practical brain
Wins over the clueless heart
You stand up letting your new journey start
Ahead there every situation is a different game
But when you look back
Every sorrow is the same



I know ... I know ...
It's like those silly depressing ones but still ...
Tell me what you thought of it !



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panchaali thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Vidhi, very deep your thought is..

I always see a wonderful poet/writer in you..

Thankz for the PM 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Vidhii!!!!!🤗
How have you been ??!!

and such a beautiful poem!❤️
wonderfull!👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u have a nyc creative mind...thnx for sharing a great poem with us ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb poem👏👏..brilliant Vidhi...Its a sad but beautiful...keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was absolutely great...
it just makes you realize that some may smile on top but no one will ever know what turmoil they face on the inside
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its emotional...
U r very good at writing poems...
MrsSSO thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Navi !
MrsSSO thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Karkit !
MrsSSO thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: panchaali

Awesome Vidhi, very deep your thought is..


I always see a wonderful poet/writer in you..

Thankz for the PM 😊


Thanks a lot, Panchaali Di !

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