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Posted: 11 years ago

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#442

G, thank you for Musing...thank you for this birthday gift...I could get nothing better from you...I love you...🤗

And Ms. Marple...👏

I remember that feeling, the goosebumps I felt when I read chapter 7...I re lived that experience again today..you are brilliant...with an eye for detail and the wit and the humour quotient you add to every Musing...

A apt tribute to a brilliant writer, a brave and beautiful person, my baby and someone who I love ...who I am proud of and have the honour of calling one of my best friends...Mints...

And G, you are back and how...this was incredible...funny and yes loved the references to each of her stories and the various genres...and to be able to tie them together comprehensively into this Musing was just genius.

The Mint chocolate Chip cookie...you just ruined it for me too..however the next time I see that be rest assured I am going to remember this ...

Poor Khushi mortified at the thought of Preeto knowing more than she would want or like her to and so innocently asking her ASR to ban the forum ...ha ha ha

And Preeto, and a baby named Mintu...

Ofcourse ASR would wonder what the 23 was...and of course he would not think it was her age...

I loved the moans and groans ...I see they are still sinfully or lust fully occupied...loved how you cited examples for every sin...from their life, this using that SS and it's seven sins ...master stroke...bringing back wonderful memories...

Loved the bal noch loongi one and the other references too..the sangeet and then both shutting up quietly as they realise that they are both as sinful as the other...the resignation scene and then he saying greed is actually lust as he only eats since she feeds him...that scene one of my favorites...

Trust them to make this a competition of sorts too...and that too to see who is more sinful...

I loved how NK is still fumbling in Hindi and how ASR wonders wittily why he is still unable to say Arnav and still idiotically continues to refer to him as Nanav which as a grown man he should be able to say ...and asks Khushi if NK is her reason to cry...ha ha

Loved how he says that even with a job he continues to find time to indulge in useless banter...and either needs a second job or a girlfriend...and as always is ready to commit a sin if left to listen to NK any longer...

I loved how ASR loved DKS. I could imagine hi relating to it...perfectly...

Her descriptions of countries from her last TS has had that effect on many...who want to plan a trip there...what Yash Chopra did for Switerzland in AD ...Mints23 has done for Seychelles on IF...

I loved how he reflects on himself reading Khamoshiyan...that was clever the way you brought that in...

I loved your dedication like the way Mints does it...ha ha I adore how you pick up every nuance about the author and use it so beautiful in your musings...

I could not be happier ...to get a musing and that too on mints...you are a gifted and talented writer and I hope you realise the unique brand of humour that you bring...

Loved the reference to ' Unspoken Love' too...nice touch...the dedication to C and me at the end...as does Mints...was icing on the cake or should I say on the cookie?

The entire reference to Preeto, whether she is having more babies and her time on IF after their birth...her not being too bright...her believing IF and thinking they are honeymooning and thinking Khushi is keeping secrets from her...they reference to Mints Seashores and Seashells were so well incorporated...

Arnav's sarcasm about Preeto being able to read English having witnessed her speak it was hilarious. But he could work on his timing...riling his already annoyed wife..who is mortified by the images of her in Preeto's mind from IF...

Preeto could be a stalker Mints...be careful...

I love that his way to shut up his wife and distract her remains effective and same...the moans and groans always a pleasure to read about ( pun intended )

Loved that they spend the night sinfully...

I am too guilty of some of one of these sins...greed for your writing ...currently topping the list...

I leave you with this sketch made by Mints...

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#443

Aaj mausam hai suhana, ASR ke musings ka hai bahaana!

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First things, first...laakhon sorry for the late unres, but just couldn't find the time to read this earlier

It is always a treat to read a musing, and one that has come after such a long time, makes the reading experience all the more better. But still there is this addtional push provided to it when the musing covers a writer who is versatile. The musing was an indication of that and hence was much liked owing to the way it was narrated.😊

There was an intermix of laughs and smiles and blushes and grins; I think if I were to make use of emoticons for this one, I would have utilized many. 👍🏼

It was good to have a musing; makes me say ASR ke musing mein der hai andher nahi😊

And it goes without saying that nothing like ASR's recommendation😉 to read Mints23's index.

P.S. Mints ji...the portrait was like👏

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celinawalter

@celinawalter

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Posted: 11 years ago

#444

this is the 1st time i am res-ing for musing of ASR. and that too on 1st page!!! VS 🤗😉

you are back G!!! I am all smiles for that ji!!!😃 (gin lo, puri battisi dikh rahi hai😆)
and what a comeback. there can't have been a better dedication.
Loved Arnavji's musing and it was beautifully written.

i am sure that Mints Chaklette Chips and its ingredients have been permanently engraved it my memory. No way in hell, am i going to forget this update while eating any of those chips!!!😆

oh and mints madness index has already been bookmarked by me. i haven't read all of the stories mentioned here, but a certain ones as in "The Seven Sin Series", "Di Ki Saut", and a few os-es. and they were phenomenally well written no doubt about that.⭐️ Also G, you have so rightly pointed out the examples from the IPK that justify the sins. loved it.

then ASR wondering about NK and his subhan-allah hindi and Nanav was all reminding the good old times. oh, and those UH... Umm.. AHEM... moans & Groans were sinfully sinful and Arnav being still the "same old same old" applied the best technique at hand either to distract Khushi or to have a sinfully lovely night were just awesome. loved it...

then about our own writer Mint23 ji, well, her works are just lovely and bold and emotional and hilarious and phenomenally well writen. i loved her stories that i have already read and has way more to read before i say about her other mentioned woks but after this update will have to just read them.!!!!👏

VS, again, i don't know what to say about her. she is the best thing happened to me since joining IF. a truly compassionate and lovely person that i have chanced upon to meet her. love you & happy B'day once again. 🤗

Happy New Year Gita and your comeback couldn't have been better than this. hope your life is now back to equilibrium and every things ok. 🤗❤️

love ASR's musing as in Mem1 and will be waiting for more of them...!!! looking forward to more of them. 😊

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PhoenixTears

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Posted: 11 years ago

#445

Oh my god... Its Musing Day 😲

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Thank you Memji for coming back and I totally understand how AD can be a pain, hope all is well at your side. And a big thank you and biggg hug for writing this... A beautiful dedication to an equally beautiful, talented, brave girl... I am sure you know how good you are in writing such awesome musings. Love the way you showed ASR as bechara son-in-law, fed up of over eating at their in-laws place.. So common atleast in my family 😆 And mints chaklate chips cookies were hilarious, buaji was not wrong at all, those were 3 main ingredients she used 🤣 No doubt, its no more their favorite. And ofcourse the way you incorporated Mints story with naughtiness and love, was just brilliant... Fantastic job dear, this was one of the most awaited musing for me and I got much more than expected... Simply Amazing 👏👏👏

Mints.. See I am not only one who is so proud of you... you are truly a Bhagat Singh for me and just like Khushi in this update, I am so in awe of you Mintsji 😉 I will surely call my future baby as Mintu (atleast for a day) 😆😆😆 so that he/she will have some talents like you. And this sketch is fantastic... you are an artist dear, immensely talented. Send this to Barun, he will personally come to you to say thank you 😳 God bless you my dear, keep rocking like this. 😃

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amus5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#446

first time ressing for ASR's musings ... hmmm 😳 and on the first page 😃

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Nandz

@Nandz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#447

First of all 'welcome back' geeta! You were badly missed! We all so needed dose of this humour!

I loved this musing! God Buaji 's recipe of Mint cookies was so hilarious! I was laughing out loud reading it! Poor Arnav, its goo that he was full else he would have to eat more of those cookies!!

Goodness how khushi and Arnav were competing with each other in order to decide who is more sinful or has more sins then the other and ended up spending a sinful night! :)

Coming to Mints and her stories then i. Have to say she is a master of short stories! She can write humour and serious stuff with equal ease! While seven series will bring a huge smile on your face, khamoshiyaan will bring a tears! Btw khamoshiyan is one of the best written stories on Arnav's redemption! It has everything that we so desperately wanted to see in serial but CV's had some other plans! She expressed emotions that characters were undergoing so well!!

N yes her Love is OS is one beautiful os! So romantic and full of love , that it never fails to leave a smile on my face!

There are a few stories n os that i havent read of her n i definitely intend to read them soon!!!

I dont know anything about her personal life but after reading your note m sure she is one hell of a brave woman and a wonderful human being!!
N yes absolutely amazing sketch Mints! M sure even barun will feel over the top seeing this! You are so talented ya!!! Thanks to vandana Di for putting it!

Loved the musing Geeta!! How we will get next musing soon!!!

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Mints23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#448

OH MY GOD!!! I am speechless!! Bas!

Gita... yeh tune kya kiya!!! It was absolutely fantastic... 🤗

Let me just revel in this spotlight and i shall be back after musing...

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First of all I cannot believe it even after reading this chapter twice. Gita, thank you for this lovely chapter... I absolutely loved how you have blended all my stories into the busy lives of ASR and Khushi... and to top it all, you have made Arnav Singh Raizada muse about me... Hayye!! How I wish this turned to reality... ❤️

Ok first let me apologize and admit that I haven't really followed musings lately... you know because there had been too many issues in my AD in the last 3-4 months... but yes... Bhagat Singh is back!!! This musing is truly humbling, as I genuinely feel that I am not in par with the amazing writers you have written so far. I myself, fangirl most of them. 😳

To begin with this chapter... What have you done with the poor Mint Chocolate Chip cookie? I was laughing out loud when I read its recipe. No wonder, poor Arnav had to stuff it into his pockets and take it back home. Amma aur Buaji ka pyaar can be really harmful for the stomach... but thankfully Khushi took pity on her husband... 😃

NK is way too funny and his Hindi speaking abilities can crack up anyone. Loved how you have mixed the Anurag part... I mean the Apradh part in it. And then comes in Preeto!! My biggest fan... I wonder if she is commenting on my stories under a pseudo name... I will have to look into the matter!! 😉

So IF is back into Arnav's life... and so is a writer called Mints23... well just to clear it out the gorgeous couple... that 23^rd March is my Birthdate... and Bhagat Singh was hanged on that same date... so that's the connection... and off course added are my revolutionary and patriotic beliefs. Although, how I wish... 'main 23 saal ki hoti!!' 😎

Ahhh!! So Arnav's attention has to first go to something extremely sinful... I absolutely loved how you have related all the stories to their current life scenarios... like Arnav wanting to whisk Khushi away to Seychelles or how reading Khamoshiyan made him feel a liitle scared... but Khushi hamesha Arnavji ke dil ka haal jaanti hai!! 👍🏼

Ohh and btw, this sketch is ekdum taaza maal!! Just finished it yesterday and its already famous... I am glad Khushi loved it... and I can very well be hired by ASR to do any kind of jobs!! And if he has loved DKS... then he should approach Gul to have a season 2 with Di being the lead... I am sure that show would go on forever on SP!!

Loved how you have brought in Monsoon Magic into their conversation and a poor shy Khushi blushing at the fact of her friend reading such stories... And then my first and favourite story... Seven Sins Series... Gita, you have perfectly added IPK instances to suit each of the sins... It was an amazing conversation between Arnav and Khushi... How can we not be greedy for such musings??

Loved how you ended it with 'Unspoken Love' and their sinful nights... The Note was just perfect... because none of my updates are complete without Vandana and Chitra... my motivators and my gurus. Thank you Gita, for all the praise, the admiration. It is really overwhelming to see appreciation of your work... especially because most of the times I wish, that I could write better. ☺️

I guess this has been the best way to start this New Year for me... as the last year was really terrible... Seems like this one is going to be all about smiles and happiness... for all of us. I know for sure, that this is the best gift you could have given Vandy... I know how thrilled she is and also know how much she means to a lot of people on IF. I am just glad that I got to meet her... thanks to IF!! 🤗

Gita... you are one extremely talented writer yourself... and I would someday like to read ASR musing on ASR musings!!! I think I have written too much... but I am just too excited and crazy!! May the musings continue... and once again HAPPY BIRTHDAY VANDY!! 🥳

Ok I still can't believe it!!! 😆

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ssyahoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Yay a musing on mints! She is truly a spectacular author and a fabulous person. So glad you chose to wrote about her.

Must say the musing was quite interesting. I learned something new about mints 😊 Loved how the Guptas attempted to make mint chocolate chip cookies for Arnav. Of course one of the key ingredients messed it up 😆

I liked how Preetho made an appearance and accused her dear friend of holding out! It was a enjoyable reminiscing through seven sins, khamoshiyan, and the other wonderful pieces of work that mints has written. Loved ASR sweating through Khamoshiyan too :)

All in all it was a wonderful and enjoyable musing! Thanks to Vandana for translating the Hindi parts for me so I could understand it fully :) You know i totally adore you mints ! 🤗
Mints so if anyone asks you about your cooking here's what you can tell them:

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#450

Badi behen its you😲

Res!

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What a pleasant surprise! Musing on my very own badi behen (virtually), mints di!😃

Mint chocolate chip cookies😆 How do you come up with such hilarious ideas?😆 And then his monologue about the username😆 Should I tell you why?😃 Its because its her birthday on 23rd of march 😉 And mints being her nick name, that you know😛

Now coming to her stories, well she has couple of them written brilliantly. When I'd stumbled upon her seven sin series, I was taken by the plot and her way of writing. It seriously didn't look like her new work, in any way. Then Didi ki saut, it left me ROFLing all the way as I finished reading that😆

Monsoon Rain☺️ I have no words for it😳

Khamoshiyaan😭 One of the best stories on Arnav's redemption! The play of emotions has been so beautifully expressed in that story. Though, I am yet to catch up on last few chapter, but its an amazing story!

Peek-A-boo, this story cannot get cuter than it already is. A journey of ArHi falling in love for the first time...😃

A well deserved praise. Badi behen, come here you 🤗

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