After Three Years..(an PariJat TS)CHAP3(LAST ONE) UPDATED - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Renu Awesome!!!! love it... i was completely lost in their love and confession!!! superb!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Renu Awesome!!!! love it... i was completely lost in their love and confession!!! superb!

Thank you ..!!!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wowww renu!!👏👏👏 Kya story hai!! Superbbb!! Read both the parts at one go..Loved it loved it loved it!😳 The first part was adventurous..😛 Quite a delight to read!😳 Omg! Second part hayyee😳 Just loved how Pari helped Rajat out of car..made lemonade..And omg omg omg..The "I LOVE YOU DAMN IT",..WOWOWWW!!!!!!!!!

"Am sorry..." he gently whispered moving close to her ears making her jerk for a moment...
looking at her confused expression he continued ."Waise mera kamra upar he hey.." he giggled as if this was the best joke ever
..😆 Cutest part ever😃😛
"Tumey pata hey...woh mera aur pari ka kamara hai...sirf humara...mein tumhe woh nahi dikha saktha...isseliye meney joot bola sorry " he said happily starring at the roof...Unknowingly a smile appeared on her face admitting so many worries she has...AWWW!!!!! You made me smile and blush renu.. Love you for this!😳
I don't Love Lavina ..I Love you damn it..." he held her shoulders tight and hissed in anger..Omg!!WOw!👏😳
He couldn't take it anymore...he opened the door with force and moved out in the rain. He found her crying near the car ..he moved towards her pulled by her wrist...She stumbled for a moment and landed crashing her chest with his...Both of them were soaking in the rain...😳😳😳Gosh..I m drooling on PariJat! All thanks to you Renu!😃
Loved the whole piece! Plz updte 3rd part asap...aur ek thappad marungi agar isse shit kaha to😡 This was MINDBLOWING!!👏⭐️👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

Wowww renu!!👏👏👏 Kya story hai!! Superbbb!! Read both the parts at one go..Loved it loved it loved it!😳 The first part was adventurous..😛 Quite a delight to read!😳 Omg! Second part hayyee😳 Just loved how Pari helped Rajat out of car..made lemonade..And omg omg omg..The "I LOVE YOU DAMN IT",..WOWOWWW!!!!!!!!!

"Am sorry..." he gently whispered moving close to her ears making her jerk for a moment...
looking at her confused expression he continued ."Waise mera kamra upar he hey.." he giggled as if this was the best joke ever
..😆 Cutest part ever😃😛

"Tumey pata hey...woh mera aur pari ka kamara hai...sirf humara...mein tumhe woh nahi dikha saktha...isseliye meney joot bola sorry " he said happily starring at the roof...Unknowingly a smile appeared on her face admitting so many worries she has...AWWW!!!!! You made me smile and blush renu.. Love you for this!😳
I don't Love Lavina ..I Love you damn it..." he held her shoulders tight and hissed in anger..Omg!!WOw!👏😳
He couldn't take it anymore...he opened the door with force and moved out in the rain. He found her crying near the car ..he moved towards her pulled by her wrist...She stumbled for a moment and landed crashing her chest with his...Both of them were soaking in the rain...😳Gosh..I m drooling on PariJat! All thanks to you Renu!😃
Loved the whole piece! Plz updte 3rd part asap...aur ek thappad marungi agar isse shit kaha to😡 This was MINDBLOWING!!👏⭐️👏

Thank you Nancy ..and yup pher se kab iss shit nahi kahungi...

will update it in few hours...😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you ..!!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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will update in few hours...😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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CH3 : No ,I LOVE YOU THE MOST...!!
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He couldn't take it anymore...he opened the door with force and moved out in the rain. He found her crying near the car ..he moved towards her pulled by her wrist...She stumbled for a moment and landed crashing her chest with his...Both of them were soaking in the rain...He cupped her face and looked in to her eyes which where filled with lots of love for him"am sorry raj ...par aapne bhi tho mujhse sach chupaye..." she whispered words rarely coming out of her mouth...
The next moment he pinned her to the car and moved closer to her...

"Tum tho hamesha meri aanke pad lethi thi...Tho iss baar tumhe kuch samaj mey kyu nahi aaya.." he whispered moving close to her...The rain droplets from his wet hair and fell on her face...
"Mujhe aapka pyaar ka ehsaas hua Rajat...par jab mujhe Lavina key baare mein pata chala tho...pata nahi mujhe aisa kyun laga...but I thought ki..." her words struggled to come out.

"Tumhe kya laga tum Lavina ko lekar aaogi aur main tumhe chodkar phirse lavina se pyaar karunga...Kya mera pyaar tum ladkiyo ko koi mazaak lagtha hai???" His grip got tighter oh her shoulders and he moved even more closer to her almost imposing his entire body on her..."i can forgive her pari ...because she was helpless ...but tum..??.tum tho ek smart decision maker ho...dusron ko ache se samamjthi ho...tumne bhi yahi kiya?? Mei tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karunga Pari..." he whispered with angry filled in his voice ...

"Am sorry"was the only word that made its way from her lips.
"Kyun...tumne aisa kyun kiya???"rajat asked with an teary eyes.

"Mujhe nahi pata...mujhe bas itna pata hai ki...ethaney din mei bass sasa le rahi thi ..per je nahi rahi thi"she replied
A tear escaped both their eyes and they looked at each other...

"Mei tumarey bina nahi je saktha pari"he confessed
"Mei with nahi"she replied with same amount of affection in eyes which he had
with out waste even one sec he captured her into his arms...he hugged her so tight that no one in this world could separate them...after an long hugging section .he broke the hug and cupped her face .. rested his fore head on hers and close his eyes ..and confessed his feeling ..

" I don't know when I fell for you..i really don't ..after My breakup Lavina..I've always chose to stay away from everyone...I always made sure that I wasn't emotionally attached to anyone...I always preferred to keep myself busy so that I could stay away from everyone...But when you came into my life, things started getting complicated..Tum hamesha mere position ko ,feeling ko samaj jaathi thi..that what really use to surprise me...and that what made me too emotionally attached to you ...after ages i started trusted some ..and that was you pari...you are angle of my love pari..agra tum meri life nahi aathi tho i would have lost trust in love ,affection and care...aur tumey pata hey???mei tum kisi aur ladke key sat baat karte dheka tha hum tho muje bohat jealous hothi thi...agra tum kis aur ladikey ko hug karthi thi tho muje bohat ghusa atha...muje tab nahi pata tha ki ye sab kya hey ..per aaj i know it ..it was L-O-V-E...i just wanna say ki "he open his eyes and look deep into her eyes which already were filled with tears ...there was pin drop silence..but both of them at once confessed it out "I LOVE YOU PARI/RAJAT"unknowingly a smile crept on their face..
"But I love you more"said rajat caressing her hair
"No i love you the most "she said placing her hand on his check
"I said i love you the most ..don't you get it?"he said ..
"No..i love the most..."she said ..
"" I can even throw an open challenge..about this.' he said
"Okay ..challenge accepted..."she whispered
"soch lo...har javogiand as far as i know my wife doesn't like to lose..."he said
"soch lo...haar javogi and as far as i know the women in front of me hates to lose challenges..."he said
"yup ...but this time i will love to lose..." she whispered in his ears
"And trust me... mei tumhe kabhi haarne nahi dunga..." he said.

he hugged her tight .. she received it .. she reciprocated what he did she hugged him with all his might, they plastered themselves into each other squeezing each other..he broke the hug and cupped her face .. leaned forward and he caught her lips in his and smooched it hard. She joined wholeheartedly their tongues embraced each other entwined with each other. Gasping for breath they were living the most precious moment of their life..

They broke the kiss once they felt hard to breathe he cupped her face and she did the same.. tears rolled down their faces they tried to smile at each other through their sobs He pulled her more close to himself and placed wet kisses on her forehead , Eyes, Cheeks..her hands trailed his back ..caressing him . Driving him towards her .he rubbed his stubble on her tender cheeks, spreading a soft crimson over her wheatish tenderness.she tightened her grip on his back clutching his shirt .her partially sealed brown lashes seemed to stir his adrenalin , he brushed down her cheeks with his hard stubble ,she pulled him more towards her.. she moved her palm towards his head running her fingers through his mushy strands lowering his head more towards her .his hard skin now brushing her nape.. his wet tongue tickling her sending instant currents down her spine. the sweet aroma of flowers in the garden filled in the soft night breeze increased the toxicity of the moment.the moon and the stars hid themselves amongst the clouds peeping out naughtily in periods to see the loving souls

he lifted her in his arms and took her inside.. The lovely couple made love all night

They lived happily ever after...

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Pheww katam hogai...so here is the last chap of this TS ..well phele hi bata rahi hu ..romance is not at all my cup of my tea ...so if all the chap didn't reach your expectation am really sorry ...ye last chap hey tho ye mat samj na ki comment nahi karogey tho bhi chalega aisa kuch bhi nahi ..aapko comment karana hi hoga...please yaar comment kardo...😆.i hope you people will enjoy this...please give your feedback please do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment...ignore typos ,criticism and suggestions are most welcomed ..Happy Reading..!!!!!
Love,
Renu

Edited by ...Renu... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful update Renu!!
Just loved it!!
Now update your other SS!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing update...bt khatam ho gyi😭. i loved it. u r brillaint writer nd yes it took only 1 min. to cmnt😆.

plz clr my doubt y jodha thought dt rajat loves lavina. i thnk they were married (bcz they were sharing a room) then y she left him.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you ..😃

Thank you ..!!!

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