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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: lujeyn9

update was really awesome!!!!! loved it thanx 4 pm continue sooon



Thank u soo much 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

oww wow thats great part again
finally the biggest truth abt manvis cd came out
and now there are no misunderstandings between them
and finally virman are back togather
so much happy to see them back again
hope nothing will go wrong now
bt now rishabh is coming back then how can everything goes welll
cont soon
thanx for the pm
nd yeah congos for the sixth thread



Thank u shivali... Glad u liked it...
Stayed tuned... Lots more coming up... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Nice update di!😛

lOVe u!❤️

The most awaited update😛

Take care!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats on new thread! 😊 I was waiting for the past few days y u didn't update...today only i noticed that u have started a new thread anyways the update was superb...i read it again n again 😊 continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelrj

congrats on new thread!😊I was waiting for the past few days y u didn't update...today only i noticed that u have started a new threadanyways the update was superb...i read it again n again😊continue soon and pm me




Aww thank u soo much... 😊 i think u arent in my buddy list... Will add u n will pm u... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
update do comment lo😆😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u khyati for this wonderful banner... i love it re... ❤️
CHAPTER 71
~~ pyaar ka bandhan...
(this one for u aenna... i hope u know why... sorry mujhe time nahi mila aaj bilkul bhi... sorry again... )

can life be any better... virat and manvi both thought to themselves. one moment they thought everything between them is finished forever... and then when least expected, happiness knocked on their door. the cruel fate suddenly became kind on them... this was the test of their love and as a result, it has helped them come more closer to each other and become more strong as individuals... this test strengthened their relationship, their love and most of all their trust on each other.

getting back together... woww what a feeling...!!! even millions of words faul to explain this emotion. getting back the thing you loved the most. which you once lost is just... its just soo amazing... so amazing that the world suddenly seems like the best place, the world becomes more beautiful... more beautiful than it was ever before.

manvi smiled in her sleep and shifted close to virat. once in his arms again, she hided herself in his chest and after sometime opened her eyes and looked at her husband. she missed this feeling of waking up next to him and that too in his arms.
manvi : good morning...
manvi shifted a little and shook virat.
manvi : get up... virat...
virat slightly opened his eyes and smiled looking at manvi and then shifted a little placing his head on her lap.
virat : good morning beautiful...
manvi : morning handsome...
manvi brushed her fingers in his hair and virat again closed his eyes.
manvi : i love you...
virat : hmm...
manvi : are you listening...???
virat : hmm...
manvi : you love me naa...
virat : hmm...
manvi : tum crack ho bilkul... hai na... (stretching the last two words because she knew virat isnt listening to her)
virat : hmm...
manvi burst into laughter listening to his last hmm that was very obvious.
virat : why are you laughing...??? (getting irritated but soon he smiled listening to her giggling... he at last brought a smile on her face)
manvi : nothing...
virat : tell me...
manvi : hehe... no... let it be...
virat : cmon...
virat tried getting up but manvi stopped him and lightly kissed his forehead.
manvi : i said you are crack... mental... absolutely a gone case and you agreed.
virat : no ways...
manvi : you did...
virat : no manvi... you are cooking stories...
manvi : no... ask the baby... tell dad sweetheart... (placing her hand on her stomach)
virat : baby meri side pe hai manvi ji...
manvi : no tell you love mumma more...
virat looked up at manvi and nodded his head in negative.
manvi : no mr. vadera... no... he loves me more...
virat : ohh hello... aisa bilkul nahi hai...
virat got up and kissed manvi's stomach making shivers run down her spine.
virat : tell mumma you love me more... bta meri jaan...
manvi : virat...
virat : what virat...?? bol meri aankhon ke taare... (placing his hand on manvi's stomach)
manvi : acha theek hai... bol diya usne... hato ab...
manvi smiled to herself and got up from the bed.
virat : arrey suno to...
manvi : kasak ka school hai... mere paas nahi hai faltu...
virat : ohh ab main faltu hoon...
manvi : i never said anything like that...
virat : jao jao... tumhe baad mein dekh lunga...
manvi giggled and made her way to her darling kasu.

manvi smiled and touched kasak's forehead. the moment she touched her head, she found that kasak was burning in fever. manvi felt so guilty and blamed herself for not checking on kasak last night. she was too busy in solving the problem of er life that she ignored her child.
manvi : i am sorry... kasak... jaanu...
manvi lightly shook kasak and kissed her forehead.
kasak : mumma... school...
manvi : no baby... mela baby aaj rest karega...
manvi quickly brought a thermometer and checked her temperature. manvi was in tears and gave kasak some medicine.
kasak : mumma kya hua...??
manvi : kasu ko fever ho gya aur mumma ko pta bhi nahi chala... mumma careless ho gayi baby...
kasak : no mumma... fever morning mein hua hoga...
manvi : pta nahi baby... now try to sleep honey...
kasak : no crying mumma... strong girls
manvi : dont cry... i know... (trying to smile)
kasak : yess... ab main neeni kar loon...
manvi : hmm...

manvi came back to the room and got into the bed hiding her face in the pillow.
virat : what happened...???
manvi : kuch nahi...
virat leaving the newspaper he was reading, went and sat near manvi.
virat : manvi... jaan...
manvi this time didnt say a word but all virat could hear was the sound of her sobbing.
virat : whats wrong manvi...?? kya hua..?? look at me...
virat turned manvi around and made her look at him.
virat : i am asking you something manvi...
manvi : virat i.. i...
virat : manvi speak up please...
manvi : i am very bad virat... i am not a good mother...
virat : what are you saying...?? you are the best mother our children can have... best... just amazing... superb... out of the world...
manvi : liarrr... (still crying)
virat : no... i meant it...
manvi : virat i... i am very bad...
virat lose his calm and held manvi with a strong grip demanding to know whats going on in her mind.
manvi : i ignored kasak... this is not done...
virat : you ignored kasak... you ignoring me or for that matter your health is what i can believe...
manvi jerked his hand away and looked irritatedly at virat...
manvi : stop complaining... okk...??
virat : atleast tell me what happened...
manvi : i was so involved in US that i... no we ignored kasak... we should have atleast checked her once last night.. she is burning in fever... second time in last 15 days...
virat massaged his forehead and looked at manvi.
virat : thats it...
manvi : what...?? you find it thats it thing... isnt it a big thing...??
virat : no... bachi hai.. thand lag gayi hogi... issue kyun bna rahi ho iska...
manvi : you are impossible... meri bachi ko bukhar hai aur tum...
virat : but its not because of your carelessness... are you understanding my point manvi...???
manvi : no... because you are talking pointless...
virat : manvi you cant keep blaming yourself for everything and not in this condition from now on...
manvi : thats what i am worried about...
virat : what...??
manvi : virat... virat i... i told kasak about me joining office yesterday...
virat : okk... so how did she react...??
manvi : she got scared... she dont want me to work... isi liye she is having fever... all because of me, she is unwell... because of me n my silly dreams...
virat : dont say like that... she will understand... we should give her some time manvi... she will be fine...
manvi : no... she will not... she needs me...
virat : she has you... 24*7 she has you manvi...
manvi : no virat... you are not understanding... a thought of being away from me has affected her... she is in fever...
virat : ohh god manvi... i do understand what you are feeling and thinking but cmon when you want to do something in your life, so you have to really ignore such small small things... kasak will adapt to this change... trust me she will...
manvi : small thing... what are you saying virat...??
virat : you only said you want to have your own individuality...
manvi : i cant sacrifice my child's happiness...
virat : so that means you will forget your dreams... you just want to play a role of a mother... is it...??
manvi : may be yes...
virat : may be...???
manvi : i need to think...
virat : take your time...

scene shifts
pragati : bhai what is wrong...
mohit : nothing...
pragati : why are you working with that rishabh...???
mohit : that is none of your business...
pragati : its is my business... i cant see you like this bhai... i want my brother back...
mohit : stop it... okkk...
pragati : bhai please... is there anything we should know...??
mohit : yes... you need to know that i want to move on in life and i am trying...
pragati : trying while working with mr. rishabh singhania... working with the man who is the cause of everything that happened with you... with us...
mohit : pragati please... just understand its my way to deal with it...
pragati : no... i cant believe it... you are lying...
mohit : i am running late... i have to go and handle everything...
pragati : okk then just tell me why were you going through HER profile last night... your laptop was on when i last night came to your room... you still love her... dont you...??
mohit : bye...
pragati closed her eyes stopping the tears that were about to roll down her cheeks. she knew something or the other is wrong. her brother is working with the brother of his ex... his ex whom he is trying hard to forget... in all these days, she and swamini really thought that mohit was getting over naina and he was trying to move on with his life but no he wasnt... last night, seeing naina's profile on mohit's laptop and the stain of tears on his face was not a good sign... it clearly pointed towards one thing that he is still not over her... seeing naina move on in her life, is hurting him like hell... he is unable to see her with somebody else... he is dying inside... now pragati was even more worried for her brother...

pragati : i hope you are not doing anything wrong bhai... i really hope...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
AWWW THIS WAS FOR ME ??
EEKKSSS m sooo happyyy nainu...
Nd its ok I dont mind ok..??
I can wait... nd I loved d updateee
Lolzzz dat crack part was hilarious. ...
Oye hoye shiver ran down her spine wen he touched her woow
Mjhe romantic update chahiye. Plzzz.. :/
Aww manvi is an awesome mom
Plz update asap cant wait for it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
I m second yaaayyy lol
Update soon..nainu

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