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Posted: 11 years ago
parts 78 and 79

Nice , painful parts ...

thnx for pms dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
finaally shekawat's in jail..how long can maan keep them there
hope geet comes out of her depression soon..poor sweety
precap..interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome, emotional, heart wrenching part
though vicky loves geet as his own sis but still they interfere so much between maaneet's life when needed they didn't n now n maan's dad hide n now all blaming maan
feel sad for maaneet
they r suffering armaan is suffering
hope geet will come out from the depression soon
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago


Amazing update !! loved it !!

So maan & yash planned everything n nw shekhawat's are under police custody for drugs smugling ..

Feeling really bad for sweety ..geet is nt reacting to him also other then feeding him ..

maan is breaking seeing geet like this totally numb to her surrounding n sweety missing his mom ..

Waiting to see hw geet will bring geet back & his nxt move against shekhawats ..
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Posted: 11 years ago



Maan should make such a plan for Shekhawat so that he should be killed like a stray dog...kutte ki maut mare...chun chun kar badla lena hai usse...

Geet is in so much of shock and depression and Maan is so worried for her...

very emotional update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
lovly update. I hope maan vl make shikwat life hell.. Remove this shikwat character yaar becz of them ly the hapy moment of maaneet had destoryd.. I hope that geet vl cme out of the depresion.. Continue soon waiting..
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Posted: 11 years ago

OMG di me sooo happy ke I feel ke I'll cry right now😭😊 but di me dyingly waiting for the update😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 80


The painful screams did have some effect on Maan but he was not convinced nor satisfied with that. He had witnessed much more and just the mere torture on those Shikawat's would not let him be happy. He wanted the most dreadful death but still he was tied by his father but being the Maan Singh Khuranna he had his own way. He knew wat he had to do and now Vicky being with him he could do wat he wanted and Maan was successful in having them captive under a secret cell where he could get easy access.


You he smirked as he saw Rajveer Shikawat looking at him with murderous eyes. Prem Juneja oops Rajveer Shikawat... yahi asli naam hain na tera nay a woh bhi galat hain. Rajveer and Jairaj were furious but helpless as they were tied up.


Kamine sunna tha ki Khuranna's mein himmat bahut hoti hain but looks like tat strength is only used on the women who beds with you at nights and Rajveer smirked seeing change of expressions on Maan's face. Gussa aa raha hain Khuranna... but isn't it the truth he said evilly.

Why don't you get the pleasure to sleep with anyone.. Oh yeah how can I forget tat b****** like you only f*** wh**** in life Maan said as if it does not affect wat Rajveer said. Sunna hain ki tere ish baap ne tumari Maa ko chodke kisi aur ke saath shaadi karne chala tha... ek baat batao Rajveer shikawat are you really his son or someone who does not know whose bloody blood flows in your veins.. kya hain na I doubt your identity now after all kitne saare naam hain tumare.


You b***** how dare you Jairaj struggled but was held back by his mens while the officers were away right now. Itni hi himmat hain tho leave us and show.. ya apne baap ki tarah kamzoori dekhna chahta hain.


Leave them they were shocked to hear Maan ordering his men's to free them. There was an evil smirk on their faces but they forgot that they were dealing with Maan Singh Khuranna who was ruthless then wat they were. He was not a fool that he would leave them so easily and he proved the moment Jairaj tired to pouch on him.


B***** Jairaj moaned as he held his shoulder tat was bleeding due the the gun shot tat passed through him hitting him slightly. How could you think tat I would be leaving you Jairaj... ghayal sher bhi yeh galthi nahi karta. Maan smirked as he saw Rajveer's expressions changing each moment. Wats wrong Prem oops Rajveer..kahi purani dosti yaad aa gayi.


Yeah.. after all Geet ki barbaadi jo likhi thi maine woh bhi tumare haatho.. sachi Maan I really felt so pity for tat girl but kamini thi socha ki tumse cheen kar teri barbaadi likhonga but she did not let me and finally teri hi behan ne muaka diya... sunna hai ki bahut badi saaza di tumne apni Geet ko his each word was not less than any acid burning his body but he knew he had to play smart here. He could not let those old bitter memories to affect his mind and anger in anyway.


Sunna tho maine bhi bahut Maan smirked evilly still pointing the gun towards them. Heard tat your bloody brother Raj Saxena na na.. Ranveer Shikawat died a bloody dreadful death... and trust me I would have given the worst bloodied death for him par phir bhi kamine ko itni aasaan maut mili..


Maan Rajveer yelled but tat did not affect Maan anywhere. Gusaa aa raha hain,, come on Rajveer now when your brother trades girls for prostitution he will deserve such death na.. waise bhi sunna hain ki usne apni biwi ko bhi ushi ki deal ka hissa banaya tha ek baar. Maan narrowed his eyes as they kept staring at him. Don't stress yourself so much Shikawat... waise sunna hain ki there's no one who has come to claim his dirty body... Canada jaane wale the na.. par yaha kaise.. omg.. kya hoga ab.. who will burn tat bloody body of your son Jairaj... aur woh Sameera...sunna hain ki uski bhi body nahi mili tum logo ko..


Sameera their voices echoed in the closed room while Maan just smirked hearing them. Now don't say tat you don't know she was your sister Rajveer... Bataya nahi kya tere ish so called Dad ne tat Sameera was your so called sister whom he had sold when she was just 2 years old.. Poor baby rajveer so many years she was right in front of you and you did not even know tat she was your sister.. oops kya destiny hain na... your father sold her but she came back into your life still she was far away.. dekho na ab bhai behan ki muat aise hui jaha you could not even claim their bodies.


How do you know about Sameera Jairaj asked Maan and in return he got only a smile. Do you think tat Maan Singh Khuranna is just a destroyer of his wife Shikawat...Tumari puri kundali nikal di hain maine shikawat.. I even know wat you got in return of her... bahut paise mile the na tumhe.. par poor girk khoon ka asli rang deekha hi diya ushne when she killed her so called parents for money and flew off to get married to the old man.. Sunna hain tat you did not even get the body of hers when you went to claim her.. poor soul na beti na ab bte ki body milegi.. haan time laga mujhe but atlast got to know whose dirty blood was tat Sameera.


But you cant do anything Khuranna.. na baap kar saka na beta kar payega.. you know wat and before he could even say anything he felt himself suffocated with the force Mana used to hold his neck. Jairaj's eyes burnt with the pain as Maan put more force to strangle him by his neck while his men's held Rajveer. Don't... you haven't seen wat Maan Singh Khuranna can do Jairaj.. mere bte ko chune ki saaza shayad kam padi tat you dare to speak again.. yaad rakha Jairaj Shikawat tat m not Yash Singh Khuranna who would only put your behind bars and forget about it.. Maan Singh Khuranna tera naamo nishaan mitadega aur duniya ko pata bhi nahi chalega and he threw his half dead body on the floor.


Chalo wil give you both a chance Maan said turning back to Rajveer who was scared seeing the way Maan was in front of him. Though he knew his anger but had seen him so violent for the very first time. Don't be so scared Rajveer.. Maar nahi dalunga.. after all Khuranna's give a fair chance to everyone.. tum jaise peeche se waar nahi karta Maan Singh Khuranna.. yaad hain the accident. Maan' eyes burnt as he remembered the words he had given to Geet after he returned from the hospital. His anger and hatred for this Shikawat had given the same pain for his Geet who was now going away from his reach. He wanted to rip and tear them but he wanted to give them slow death... leave them so alone tat they don't even get any other chance to stand in their life. He looked back at Jairaj and Rajveer and said chalo will let one of the leave for Canada to claim the body par haan you decide.. dekho Rajveer if you go theni suppose they may even imprison you for involving in the flesh trade par agar tera baap jaaye tho ho saktha hain tat the Canadian police has some mercy on the hold men and give leave..m just saying you both decide.. waise bhi I can bail only one on the terms of humanity..kya hain na drugs ka case hain so I cant do much in it.



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Maan and Vicky watched as Jairaj left with his car towards the airport. Finally they smirked seeing their plan getting success. Rajveer was taken back to the jail while Jairaj was left on the bail tat Maan had asked one of his men to give him but poor Jairaj did not know tat he was heading towards his death. Is everything set Vicky Maan asked as he clenched his fist on the steering wheel of the car. He wanted to kill tat man for the torture he had given to his sweety but every time he failed as but today he would be happy seeing him die in front of his eyes. He would finally give some relief to his Dad who always held himself responsible for Simran's death.


Yes bro.. he is all set with the truck Vicky grinned as he remembered how Maan had disclosed about his plan. He was very happy tat their second enemy would get his death and no one would be able to save. Though he knew tat they were wrong but they had to as the Shikawat had crossed all their limits from the time Jiaraj had entered their life. lets go Bro and Maan drove towards the highway tat was leading towards the airport.


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Jairaj sweated as he tried the car break again but it did not. He could not handle the car in such a speed and he started to shiver as he tried to keep himself under control seeing the fast moving vehicles on the highway and most were those heavy trucks. He wanted to scream but he could not as his voice was choked fearing for his death. He tried to operate his mobile but his hands refused to leave the wheel and touch the mobile. He looked behind and sideways but he could not call anyone for help as his car lost its balance and next second his eyes filled with horror as he saw a big heavy loaded trust approaching him. he honked but the truck just sped coming closer and next second Jairaj and the car were flying high as the car slid off the road and then were screams and noises as the truck hit to the large tree halting the traffic on the highway while other side there was a big sound of something bursting.


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We did it bro Vicky hugged Maan showing how happy he was. We kept Dad's words and did want we wanted.. at last humari jeet ho gayi.


Not yet Vicky.. abhi Rajveer baki hain and I wont give him such easy death Maan said looking straight at the burning car along with Jairaj whose body wont even be found as it was turning into ash. He sighed for sometime as he finally could see the one who tortured his Sweety tat he had reached to hospital and now Jairaj wont even get one. Wats the plan for him Bro Vicky asked Maan but said looked at him and walked back towards his car saying Wait for Annie, Vicky.


Precap: I think you all can guess from the last words tat Maan said.



Will end this FF very soon now.. Probably the villains end will be by next two updates and then 2-3 updates on Maaneet and then the epilogue. Don't ask me why m doing it as I will not answer any of the questions related to the end and yeah don't complain for no maaneet as this is wat everyone wanted from me. So m going accordingly to your wish seeing how some readers enjoy the updates but don't want to like and comment on it.

Do like and comment

Edited by sdlife19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally jairaj mar gaya uff that was what i was waiting for till now didu!! the way maan had tortured them omg!! that was the highlight of the update!!

how dare he sell his own daughter for money😡 jo apni beti ki izzat nahi kar sakta toh kisi aur ko kya karega??

feeling sad for Geet's brother bechara aniee ke naam par usko bhi bohut kuch sehna pada missing armaaneet didu and like you said i knew isme woh log nahi honge!!

ending itni jaldi?? 😭 aapko advice nahi dongi bt please rethink di
Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago

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