Short Story(FF)-toot te-ban te rishtey - Page 5

Originally posted by: mahimn

Swati,
Munna se inti dushmani. Bechare ne kya bigada hai. Your FF was interesting no doubt but it depressed me. And yes I will not miss out on my favorite part, Bani killing Pia.

sorry yaar that u felt depressed after reading this part, but i promise that next time u will be elated to read and there is no particular dushmani with ur munna, but now a days i am in a mood to rather bash bani, which i don't want to do so i have started doing this now.

it will be great if JB together make a plan in real KS and get rid of reptile and TS and then new characters, new storyline revolving around them will be great.

swati

Originally posted by: kripa0521

Bichara Jai...but a good concept really enjoyed reading it. 😳

thanx dear that u liked the concept

swati

Originally posted by: minks

hiiiiii sawti, hiiiii dear mahima,

it was a gr8 story and luved bani's revenge atleast she was not miss goody 2 shoes and most of all i luved the fact that bani killed pia that made me really happy 😃 here but wat did poor jai ever did to u???????????????? thanx for liking the story dear, but yaar i wanted to write something different so i have made jai the bad guy who knows that in real KS buka man is none other than JW😉

after reading ur ff i finally realized just how much u trully "love" jai walia. hahahahahabut i still dont understand how can u bash such a cutie pie as him. 😕

yaar u can ask anyone who is writing ff for sometime my true love for JW so finally u have realized my true love for that elephant and this is my love only which wants him to keep him in a zoo 😆 yaar i am not bashing cutie pie, but i am bashing haathi😆 😆


and how could u make him like pia 🤢 over bani 😡 😡only a mad man can do it and my jai walia is notttt mad lol

who knows the true of JW what will happen dear if this story comes out true in real KS (don't worry it won't come true) yaar actually i promised one of my dear friend on IF or rather accepted challenge of her to write a story in which JW is killed and i have won that challenge, u know i love challenges.

hey i would luv to read more of ur ff's u do write wonderfully so will u be writing more in the near future and will u not bash jai in it too then i would luvvvvvv to read more of ur writings. 😃

dear if u r really a pia hater and wants to read something related to giving her a lesson of life then i am writing one ff and link for that is https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/562177/ff-we-sow-is-what-we-reap-pt12-p44 do read that when u have time, and i will try not to kill or show ur Jw bad in that.

luv ya lods thanx dear

luv,

swati
mahima

Originally posted by: ovaltine

so swati, how many jhootas and belans were thrown at you? 😉

dear oval i now i am having a collection of all types of J&B see JB= jootas and belans for me😉 and i just loved collecting them
novel idea and gutsy (you know how many JW fans out there
will make minced keema out of you), knew that guy was too
good to be true. Had a good laugh. great effort and again
ingenious idea. 👏 👏 thanx dear this idea just came into my mind and i thought of writing it as FF, but to take care that u people don't make my keema i will soon write one more short story and hope that will add water to their anger.

swati

Originally posted by: Je_aime

Hey swati,

hi meena,

I loved the story. I simply LOVED it.

thanx yaar

Jai as a villian...did not bother me that much...I like it 😆

thanx dear u r the second one who don't have any objection against this otherwise i have collectd a lot of jootas and belans with me for doing that.

I loved Bani's revenge...cool.. 😆

Pia is dead...need I say..It was fantastic...😛

yaar i want her dead in any situation

I think you should write more short stories... 😃

thanx i will try.

Besides, when are you updating you FF? 😊

most probably tomorrow with the ut most torture of reptile with lesson of her life.

Cheers,

thanx dear u just made my day by not throwing any joota for making jai villain.

swati
Meena

Originally posted by: swatinarang