~~*My Apology Gift.... Akdha OS-Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai~~Updated pg-4

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: srividhya68
awesome update
but it ended so soon 😭😭😭
i loved this story

Originally posted by: bioinfo
lovely update ...nice recreation of the scene ...pls update soon

...heyy buddies...thanks a ton...😃😃

...so sorry to disappoint u that it was just an OS...but maybe I will try to turn this into an FF...😛😛lets see...😛😛

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rose11691

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: JAN_SA
awesome update rose, kash eyh serial mei hota hai☺️

hii...thanks dear...😃😃

...but achcha hi hai serial me nahi hua...warna how cud we get to see such cute jealousy scenes between our Akdha??😳😳

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Indhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: rose11691

...yup dearu...will try writing one...n this time...will try to write up a sizzling OS...😃😃with kisses n mushy moments...😉😉

omg...sounds..too good..pls write fast dear..waiting for that😃😃

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Nancy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Hello Rose!😊

Well I just read your work and Omg! what the ! Wowww!!!!!!!👏👏👏👏

I don't have words to praise your excellent work!!! Simply awesome!!⭐️⭐️⭐️

Amazing!! The way you described and took the story ahead was really brilliant!Well written!👏😳

The emotions were so well portrayed !😃👏 Totally loved reading it !👏⭐️👏

Cheapuddin was amazingly taken care of by Jalal 😉😆

Amazing is the only word I have for your word!! Superbbb!!!!👏⭐️👏

Jalal's and Jodha's emotions and dialogues - BANG ON!!!😳😳

So You have one more fan of your writing - Nancy😛😉

Looking forward to more of your work!!😳

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Viji Sridhar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Very beautifully written "Gulabi" - hehe you hv your member name as Rose, so am calling you so in hindi 😉

You hv a very articulate way of writing those feelings and what a lovely use of hindi and Urdu ... Uff very nice.

Keep writing

Viji

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rose11691

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy
Hello Rose!😊

Well I just read your work and Omg! what the ! Wowww!!!!!!!👏

I don't have words to praise your excellent work!!! Simply awesome!!⭐️⭐️⭐️

Amazing!! The way you described and took the story ahead was really brilliant!Well written!👏😳

The emotions were so well portrayed !😃👏 Totally loved reading it !👏⭐️👏

Cheapuddin was amazingly taken care of by Jalal 😉😆

Amazing is the only word I have for your word!! Superbbb!!!!👏⭐️👏

Jalal's and Jodha's emotions and dialogues - BANG ON!!!😳😳

So You have one more fan of your writing - Nancy😛😉

Looking forward to more of your work!!😳

...hii Nancy...😛😛

...glad to see your comment...😃😃

...many many thanks for all the appreciation...😳😳m so happy...😃😃

...regards...n a hug too...🤗

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rose11691

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: daisydee425
wonderful

..thanks dear...😃😃

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rose11691

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: vijisridhar
Very beautifully written "Gulabi" - hehe you hv your member name as Rose, so am calling you so in hindi 😉
You hv a very articulate way of writing those feelings and what a lovely use of hindi and Urdu ... Uff very nice.

Keep writing

Viji

...Ohh!!...to ab samajh aaya 'Gulabi' ka raaz...😆😆

...heyy u can call me that...I don't mind...😉😉

...thankyou for such a lovely comment...😳😳.yes serial dekh dekh ke hindi n urdu dono ki vocab. me expert ho rahi hoon...😛😛

..thanks a lott...😃😃

luv u...❤️