Swaron OS: Come Back!! [Sanskriti's Bday Gift]

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

wow dear. its awesome.
loved swaron nd their come back

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

ooohhh!!!

how nicely that was written.

perfect.

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@Death_Memories

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

i would just say that this OS was perfect.Absolutely perfect.
I just wanted it to go on and on.Loved it like anything
Perfect OS

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

another one on her birthday

OMG!

guys mera bhi birthday aise banao na... 😛

phir toh main everyday celebrate karungi 😆😆

now coming to the OS

haii!! MAAR DALA! 😳

it was THE BEST OS

it was so well thought and really well penned down.. and the challenge was really well justified..

well done..

Sanskriti ki toh nikal padi...

beautiful

thanks for the PM

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Gunika Mehta

@Thats.me.Guni

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Amazing os.
D ending ws fab.

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Muskan Verma

@Muskan_SwaRon

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Amazing OS
I loved that Swayam - Guy scene 🤣
SwaRon cute convo 😳
Their romance 😳
And the ending was just fab 😳
i loved it.
You are growing as a wonderful writer day by day Tanvish 👏

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kapoormenka

@kapoormenka

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Wow what a beautiful OS really loving and beautiful gift for sanskriti on her b'day

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

I know I'm super duper late in commenting on this work of your a but better late then never right??😊.

Anyways coming to this OS i loved it and since it was written by you i have to love it coz you're a brilliant writer and your concepts are always different and fresh and it is always good to read them..😃.

I liked how you started this one showing shocked Swaron but then i was shocked after reading that they're married and my curiosity only grew to know the reason why they were behaving in such a hostile manner towards each other...

The jungle sequence was super fun to read a perfect combo of fun and romance hayee you rock tannu..❤️. Then i loved the flashback you gave and the way it was penned down by you makes me want to say only one thing "awesome" take a bow for that part..😊.

Then the patch up between them made me really happy..😊. The intense and angry young man Swayam was awesome and super fun to read kya dhamki di yaar super..🤣.

The ending was picturesque and very very perfect in all a very pleasing read keep up the good work..😊.

Love,

Kashmi🤗.