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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice update.
Now Arnav knew about the dept of Ansh love towards Khushi..
Does he still want to take revenge on Khushi?
Hope DM and BJ will be free soon to give us another update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
You are one amazing writer. You know exactly when to catch the readers attention. Every time I read your ff, I am always amazed by your writing style. Please continue to update as often as you can. Thank you for such a great ff.😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome meenu
thank u for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome and fab update.
loved reading ansh response towards khushi gift
and their bonding is sooo lovely and cute.
arnav is hell surprised to see all this.
amazing part
continue sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
such a perfect update.. but i have a complaint... its too short!!!!
nice parts like this should b a bit longer...
i loved the bonding between Ansh and Khushi... its the real mother-son deal... it was so sweet and cute and just perfect... and Arnav being a witness just makes it the more perfect.. thanks for the pm, dear... and update soon,, please a longer update this time ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Good one! Thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
just caught up with the last few updates (5)

love the bond the kids have with Khushi, especially Ansh

it is said if a child likes someone then that someone is a good person
and if a child do not like someone then that person is a bad person

I hope Arnav gets that from his son reaction to Khushi
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Posted: 11 years ago

Update from Myself DEVIL
Enjoy READING😃

PART 30

DM and BJ walked into their room with hands on the waist of the other. BJ nudged DM closer making her blush and asked.

BJ: Devi, Shall we start?

DM: Dhat Besharam

She slapped his arms.

BJ: What the! I am talking about the monitors. We have to know Aman's Haal.

DM glared at him and switched on the monitor. She landed on the love seat with BJ sitting close to him.

EARTH, INDIA, 3:00 pm

Nicky was shocked and confused. She was shocked to see that her imaginary powers have gone beyond sanity that she imagined Aman knocking her door and standing there. She was Confused as she dint know if she was really insane to imagine such things to such level.

Meenu: buri Phassi!! 😆

Then she saw him all drenched top to bottom clutching envelop in hands and realized to her nightmare that he was really standing at her door.

Ever speaking shimla express of Aman was standing still with wide open mouth and atlast she spoke.

Nicky: Mr. Mathur!! What are you doing? I mean..

Aman, forwarded envelop to her and smiled more wide showing his 32.

DM: Aman ke Toothpaste mein Namak Hai

Aman's toothpaste has salt.

She said cheekily.

BJ: What the?

DM: What? Look at his smile. Its size is keep on increasing. Looks like you have to increase his teeth number from 32 to 64.

It was BJ's turn to glare at his wife.

Meenu: Wah BJ! At last you did it. You can also stand up to your Hot DM. Enjoy. 😆

Aman: Ms. Vadera. You are appointed as The Chief in AR Supervisory department.

Nicky urgently opened the envelop and read with her eyes in saucer size.

Nicky: Unbelievable.

Aman(Smiling more): Really it is.

Nicky: What The!!

Aman: I mean.. I am giving you such a news and you instead of jumping in excitement and get me sweets you are rolling your eyes. Moreover I am still at your doors.

Nicky: What do you expect me to give a postman like you? Huh. I mean when did the GM of AR deliver appointment letter in person?

Aman: Research zaruri hai kya? Andar bitake coffee toh pilayiye apne senior ko.

Why researching? Take me in and get me coffee.

DM rolled her eyes at this new sadak chap Romeo giri of Aman. BJ bit his lips trying to control his laugh.

Meenu: Laughing🤣

Nicky: Come in .

Aman nodded his head and entered her small flat's living room. But when she asked him to sit she noticed that he was still dripping. She panicked and made him sit on her bamboo chair and started drying his hair with her towel that she brought from her wardrobe. And Aman was enjoying it with his closed eyes.

Nicky: I just gave an interview in the morning and by the evening I am appointed. Seriously Mr. Mathur?

Aman: Call me by my name and I will also call you nicky. ASR doesn't like missing good employees so you are appointed in jet speed.

Nicky(Thoughtfull): Okaaaiii. But why are you wet? Did it rain in Snowing Shimla just for Amanji of AR?

Aman(Laughing): I fell in the swimming pool before coming here.

Nicky(Panic): Are you Mad? You should at least changed and come na. I was not running away.

Aman(Stuttered): Err. Nicky.. Erm.. I wanted to see you and dint want to wasted time to do it.

Nicky's hands stopped from drying his hair.

Nicky: SEE ME?

Aman: Yes. I mean No. I mean, the letter. I mean ASR. Err. I better go now. See you tomorrow at 7:30 in morning at AR. Bye.

Phatak.. Phurrr... Go.. Went... GONE!!!

Nicky watched him going out almost running out of door with her mouth and eyes wide open.

Nicky(Chuckling): buddhu Mathur.

Meenu: One more name for him *Rolling eyes*

Nicky: Why cant he say it? He wanted to see me? So. Spark is not single sided. So, Ms. Vadera, you fell in love at first sight with such a Dhakkan. Looks like there is more hard work to be done. Hey Babaji, yeh kesa aadmi ke saath phasa diya menu? Where have you stuck me, with such man?

BJ n DM: Beta, You are out only hope. Only you can save us from this nosy mathur, so that even we can do some Maahi ve and Rabba ve. ENJOY.

Meenu: Unbelievable!!!

AT AR.

Khushi and Ansh entered Aditya's kitchen cabinet which was free now as he had off this day.

Khushi: ADITYA GUPTA.

Adi jumped at him being addressed as he cleaned the counter. He turned to see his Jiji and Ansh in her arms smiling in his new dress that his jiji bought.

Adi: Jiji, you scared me. What are you doing here?

Ansh: Adi bhaiyya, I am also here.

Adi: Oh Yes Prince ASR. Adi at your service. What can I do for you?

Adi bowed his head dramatically making them giggle.

Khushi: Enough of nautanki. Can I cook some jalebis in your cabinet.

Aditya scrunched his brows seeing which Khushi whispered everything in his ears making Ansh sit on the counter. Adi understood as even they both never wanted birthdays after their parents death. He moved leaving Khushi to work with all the ingredients and started observing her along with Ansh.

They saw Khushi mixing the batter and weaving the coils in oil and dipping them in sugar syrup and building Jalebi mountain in minutes. Sanaah came sniffing and called Adi.

Sanaah: Adi, Hmmm.. smells heavenly. What is going on?

Ansh: Sanaah, Khushi is making Jalebi for my birthday.

He said beaming happily. Sanaah was first stunned but then smiled seeing his happiness. Arnav who came behind her had tears in his eyes seeing his son all happy like other kids on his birthday. The smell of Khushi's Jalebi in air took him 4 years back.

Night 11: 45 pm, Khushi's home backside garden, Arnav on phone.

Arnav: Khushi come to the garden now. No excuses. Else I will jump into your Nanhe's room n wake him up.

Khushi frowned at her mobile muttering LAAD GOVERNOR as she can never against her love. Khushi sneaked into the garden after sometime.

Khushi: You LAAD GOVERNOR are one stubborn human being.

She said folding her arms above her white night suit clas chest. Arnav neared her checking his watch. 11:59 pm.

Arnav silently took her left hand in his and gestured like inserting a ring in her ring finger looking into her saucer like eyes and bent down, kissed it. He saw her face and gave his dashing smile.

Arnav: HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO QUEEN OF MY HEART. I know its too early for you to accept a proposal as its just been few days since we are seeing each other. So no risks. But couldn't help this. Till you become mine completely, accept this invisible ring of mine.

Khushi rolled her eyes and hit his arms.

Khushi: Say it straight that you forgot a gift. Laad governor kahi ke. You say me Nautanki. But see you are the Dramebaz. And what was that? Difficult for me to accept? Seeing for few days? Idiot its been a YEAR since you were staring at me in that coffee shop and I was glaring at you thinking you to be a rogue checking me.

She hit him again.

Arnav(Pouting): Ok Ok. Calm down. But I want you to be with me always. Its not easy.

Khushi: hmm.. Yes. But what to do? I have one more year of studies and Nanhe has to get a job and you have a business to look after. First duty Mr. Raizada.

Arnav: You are MORE STUBBORN THAT ME. FINE. And I know you wont like all those expensive gifts. So here you go. Have these Lucknowi Samosa. The Weird birthday I ever gave to someone.

Khushi(Laughing and eating and feeding him): Kya kren. You the Shehzada of Dilli fell in love with this Middle class Jhalli Khushi. So Ajeeb shajeeb is there in our love. It happens Arnav Singh Raizada. So Have some sweet on this. Jalebis cooked by this magical hands.

Khushi opened her box and gave him a jalebi. He enjoyed and fed her too. Sugar syrup stuck to her lips. When she was about to wipe it, Arnav rubbed it with his fingers and smirked seeing her breathless state.

Arnav: Don't bother your lips. Its my job. Vese I got to taste the Jalebi. When will I get to those juicy lip...

Khushi threw her box on him which he narrowly escaped. She chased him around the tree in the garden and both laughed panting.

Khushi: I thought you to be son of a businessman with sharp n smart brain. But you are a Gutter mind. Your battery is always charged.

Arnav: Only to my Jhalli Jalebi Rani I am like this.

Their laughed heart out and reluctantly left each other. But everything changed after that.

PAPA.

His son's call brought him back to present. Arnav bent to Ansh and took him in his arms eating the jalebi Ansh brought for him. His mind recognized her cooking.

Ansh: Papa, how is it? Khushi made it for my birthday.

Arnav(Smiling): Its nice. You like it na? That's it. So can I wish my son HAPPY BIRTHDAY?

Ansh hugged him tightly and smiled wide.

Ansh: Haan papa. I will celebrate. You happy me happy. But don't have party and cake. I like only my family. But call Adi bhaiyya n Khushi. Ok Papa. Now I will go and give Tasty jalebi to Guddu.

At this Meetthi came running to him with a rose.

Meetthi: An Bha AN Bha. Appir Bathde(Birthday).

Ansh smiled giving her jalebi and hugged her and also Anjali and Yash who came running behind Meetthi.

Meetthi: Bha.. AAA

She opened her mouth for jalebi making other laugh. Ansh held her hand and walked to cabinet.

Ansh: Come lets go to Khushi. She is making them. She will give you.

Meetthi smiled wide and ran in calling USHI USHI with Ansh running behind her leaving others with a satisfied smile.

DM: What is the consequence?

BJ smiled Devilishly.

BJ: Honth Raseele tere... Honth Raseele😉

DM: WHAT THE!!!!!!

Meenu: Hai Re Nandakisooorrreee!!!!!!



Meenu Running away now..

Decode BJ's Words in the end for precap..

HELLO HI BYE BYE

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Edited by MeenuArshiCrazy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago



BEAUTIFUL UPDATE



MANIC PAIR OMG DON'T KNOW HOW PAGAL PAIR BOTH



MADE FOR EACH OTHER



AMAN JI WITHOUT WIPING HIM CAME TO MEET HIS LOVE NICK LOL



DON'T KNOW WHEN MY NICKY BECAME MORE INTELLIGENT



SHE FIND AMAJI LOVE HA HA HA



YA WHEN AMAN BEHAVE LIKE BHUTHU OPPOSITE ONE HAVE BEHAVE SHARPER NA



BUT STILL I CAN'T BELIEVE MY BABY VOICE NICKY BECAME BRILLIANT



HM IN LOVE IT HAPPEN RIGHT NICKY



NOW MY PRAYER TIME



HI DM JI DO SOMETHING BUT PLZ DON'T SHOW MY COMMENT TO PAGAL NIDI



OTHERWISE I CAN'T HIDE FROM HER SHY WALA FACE AND SANDALS



FINALLY ALL THE BEST TO TWO PAGAL SORRY SORRY PYAARI MANIC PAIR



IN ARSHI MATTER ANSH CELEBRATE BIRTHDAY WITH ARSHI AND WHOLE FAMILY



HOW CUTE FAMILY HOPE THE JOIN ONE



OYE YOU GIVE ONE PROMO STILL NOT IT CAME



ARE YOU SLEEPING PAGAL DUFFER WHERE IT



ARSHI CUTE FB LOVED IT



ARNAV BEHAVE MORE CHILDISH THAN ANSH



THAT'S Y KUSHI EASILY HANDLING ANSH



OMG MY COMMENT BECAME BIG ONE



WHAT TO DO THAT PAGAL PAIR MANIC MAKE ME PAGAL GOD PREVENT ME



WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE



UPDATE SOON DUFFER



Edited by vijiasr08 - 11 years ago

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