'WHY ME?' NEW SS, promo pg 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi everyone😃, I had this concept in my mind for a long time and I had asked you all in a poll if you wanted TSS 2... After much thought, I decided to change uday's character from a super villain Mr Shark to someone more better, uday is a businessman and not a serial killer, but there is some mystery about him. it is the only similarity this story would have with The Second shadow. And I am trying my hand in romance for this story, and the mystery element would be very little in this story.😭

So I can say, there is a bit of politics, a little mystery, a family whose future gets tossed in between and finally loads and loads of romance😳

I need your support
😃 so here I present you all my new adventure

WHY ME?????

Prologue

"I thought you would never say this to me" she purred, looking at uday who was on his feet holding a ring

" I was waiting for the right time, you know" he said with so much love in his eyes

"this ring looks so beautiful"

" not as beautiful as you are" and he scooped her in his arms

" I love you uday" she said as she slipped her arms around his neck

" I love you too" and uday kissed her

Character sketch and chapter one is posted below
Index

Chapter 1 - scroll below

chapter 2- pg 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Character sketch

Uday Gupta: 28 year old , business man, he is handsome and soft spoken, with a temper. His eyes holds a lot of mystery. He is settled in Delhi, but has come to Mumbai to start a new business venture

Manyata sinha: 22 year old, daughter of the home minister of Maharashtra, Devraj Sinha. She works as a temporary manager in ABC company. She is a lovable person and believes in true love.

Nazriya Latheef: 23 year old journalist. A very efficient and hardworking girl. Has a boyfriend and has a live in relation with her

Devraj Sinha: 56 year old, home minister of Maharashtra. Has a great support among people . is totally against live in relationships, homosexuality and his party workers see to the moral policing in that state. Can be defined as ruthless

Sandeep Sinha: 30 year old , son of Devraj sinha. Runs a fashion boutique

more characters as the story progress!!!😃

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Chapter 1

Manyta cursed silently as she heard the alarm blare and disturb her sleep. She had slept late last night after watching a movie. Her head was aching as she did not get her 8 hours sleep. She wanted to sleep more, but then her father had asked her to visit him early morning, and he was not a patient man. She had moved out of his home when she was 18 and now for the last 3 years she was living in a small 2 room apartment. This place was her home, her life. It gave her freedom and peace. She quickly freshened herself, made a quick breakfast and got ready to meet her father.

TRING!!!!

"who is calling at this moment?" she cried angrily

"hallo?"

" manyta! Bring that sk pharmacy file when you come, and don't forget to pick up the necessary things from our stock room"

"yes sir"

" and don't come late, or I will cut your pay"

" yes sir"

That hell of a boss was making her life miserable. She sometimes wished that she should have told her father how she was made to work like a slave, her father would know how to show her boss his proper place. But then she decided against it. she wanted to live her life in her terms and not bother her father, no one at work knew she was the daughter of such a influential man. And she liked it that way

Manyta decided to pick up the thinks from the stock room before meeting her father. She spent a good 15 minutes waiting for the papers to be set before she could carry it.

Her cell phone rang and she picked it up, it was her father

" dad! Sorry I would be there in say 5 minutes, I just..."

But he cut her in between " better be on time or..." and cut the call before she could answer

She walked very fast and the heavy packets in her hands were not helping her. She could not see anything in front as she tried to balance these heavy bags in her hand

BANG!!

And she landed on the floor, the contents In her bag had fallen away and there was a man in front of her screaming at her

" what the... cant you watch where you are going? Do you have any idea what would have happen if I had broken my back or..."

Manyta found her temper rising" look mister, I could not see ..."

"so you are blind, what a helpless girl" his voice dipped in sarcasm

" I just.."

" I don't have time for your rubbish , next time look and walk. Just be glad I am not suing you, escuse me (takes his cell as it rings) yes , its uday"and that man left leaving a angry manyta behind

As manyta gathered all her things in her bag she wondered what that man was thinking!! Was he out of his mind? Who would sue someone for bumping and falling on the floor? Could not he see she was coming? Was did he blame her as if she had committed the worst crime in the world?

As she walked to her father's place, she just could not take her mind away from his chocolate brown eyes, and his aristocratic nose. He was handsome. Wait!!! What was she thinking? And she mentally scolded herself

As she entered her father's home , she groaned, now she would have to hear another lecture about punctuality and all that

She placed her things on the sofa and went to meet him, he was having his breakfast with her brother sandeep.

Devraj:" late again!! I just don't know how you would ever succeed in life if you took things lightly "

M:" am sorry dad, I fell.."

D: " excuses, excuses!!! I had enough. There is a cheque on that table, just sign it and leave"

Manyta took her pen and was about to sign when she noticed that it was a cheque for 20 lakhs

M: "dad, this much money!!! But.."

Sandeep answered her" I want to expand our family business so I need the capital, that's why"

D:" just sign it and go and why do you want to work somewhere else when you brother has his own company?"

Manyta looked at sandeep and saw him smirk evily, he also asked" why manyta, I would take good care of you, if you worked for me"

M: (smiling dryly) : I know, but I just don't want any preferential treatment that s why I am not working, you both know that!!!

M: anyway bye, I have work to do, unlike some others here (looking at sandeeep)

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Manyta was busy at the office. She was running around doing errands, she had not got a moment to rest since she had come in the morning. Some big shot was visiting their office. She was in the MD'S cabin arranging some flowers. She had done it beautifully and was about to leave when she again banged into a hard frame and fell down on her butt

She looked up and saw it was the same handsome, rude man she had met in the morning, wait!! Did she just say handsome? Gr!!!! She cursed herself

Uday gupta had come to there to meet manyta's boss mr khana for a business deal, mr khanna had asked him to be seated in his office and he would join uday in a moment as he had some work to do. So he had come to the room when the girl had collided and fallen on the ground. He did not stop her from falling. And he recognized the girl

U: do you always have to bump into people!!! This is the second time today that you are doing it, are you doing it purposely?

M: look sir, I really don't know you,, and why for god's sake should I purposely bump into you?

U: you may have some hidden agenda.

Manyta stood there open mouthed, she had met this fellow for the first time in her life and he was accusing her

Before she could say anything Mr khana can in that moment and asked : is everything alright here, mr uday?

U: yes, I think

Mr khanna: you can leave manyta.

M: yes sir

"manyta" what a lovely name, uday thought and a smile crept on his face.

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Manyta was tossing and turning, she could not sleep. His face kept appearing ,every now and then. Why would anyone be so grumpy? But those chocolate brown eyes had attracted her greatly. She never knew why...

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Promo

U: once again we meet, miss clumsy

M: my name is not ms clumsy

U: but you always fall around , don't you? Or is it only in front of me?

M: just leave me alone, will you?

M: not so soon miss clumsy..

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That's all for today😃

I dont know if you'll would like it😕

If you want me to continue, I would otherwise I will discontinue😳

Do comment your thoughts and hit the like button

Edited by andy.a - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice concept...
Count me in for a romantic ride😉...
1st part was fab..
Waiting for precap...
Update soon..
Thnx for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jenn1

Very nice concept...
Count me in for a romantic ride😉...
1st part was fab..
Waiting for precap...
Update soon..
Thnx for pm..


Yipieee!!
I'm the first one to comment!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very exciting start Andy! The prologue,cs and chappy 1, were all very interesting including the precap.

You are an amazing thriller writer so am sure your romantic layout will also be a good one. Do continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesommmeee!!!!
Amazing prologue, cs and update!
Loved it to thee core
Manyata lives separately that's nice
Her bro sandeep is one evil I guess.
Lovee grumpy yet handsome uday
Manyata bumped with him twice ahahaha
I really loved their interaction
The next promo looks fabulous
He called her miss clumsy ahahaha
I'm really eager to read more
So continue asap
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Andy 😃. Surprised to see a comment from me , right😉? Well, it's my FIRST & LAST ... u know the reasons why. I just what to congratulate you on for an awesome start .
BTW - the title is awesome👏 ... much better than what we were coming up with 🤣!
Good luck with the SS ...
no doubt , it'll be superb😳!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey jiji,
Happy New Year
It is really a start of an awesome SS
I am really looking forward to read more of it
I liked the independence nature of Manyata
Her brother seems very fishy too me
OMG looked their meet
Thanks for the pm
Do update asap
huggs
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very interesting concept and great prologue...👏👏..Bt what happened to TSS last chaps?..u were abt to complete it na?😕...

anyways Ress for Chap 1..will read n comment soon..promise😳

RESS Edited***

Great start Andy...Manyata's character is interesting...good to see the change as she is not a princess in this story but a person who wants to work and be independent..Even Uday's character seems interesting and the way ManVeer met was nice..I liked when he said that Manyata must have had a hidden agenda...
Edited by sweet_gargi - 11 years ago

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