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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm happy dat i added u n got to read this wonderful story
trust me i'm such a lazy bug not to comment,check pm's n reply scraps
n i'l realy rejoice it that i read this beautiful story
never read any work other KriYaansh one's but this realy took my heart
the best story i have read yet
i never get emotional ever reading story but this was an exeption,last part made me cry
it was a bliss n such an amazing experience to read it all once n this late around 1 am at nite.
Freaking loved it
beautifully written
will be waiting for ur pm
thank u very much to u,that i got to read such an ahmazing story
this would be my longest comment ever
it would be so unfair if i don't comment
so sorry for being so late n i realy feel pity fr me to read this story so late
lots of love n respect for u for maintaing the esence of the story perfectly
Edited by RiyaArShaKapoor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
aaj 9 bhi ho gayi...
mujhe lagta hai meko tera calendar ban jana chahiye
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Posted: 11 years ago
array meri maa, i reached today morning only.. fir bhi sabse pehle [ that is after watching all episodes of d3 ] i started writing! so here is the update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank You everyone for all the love and appreciation 🤗
here is the next update.. and please note.. after this there will be a epilogue and we shall all bid adieus to my dearest story :)

thank you :*
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Posted: 11 years ago


Part 16 : The AfterMath

*Dedicated to Roshni Ahmed - May your soul rest in peace! *


The moon was sleeping. It was early dawn. The new day was about to begin.. and the first ray of light fell inside the dark room, slowly smoothing its light particles on her sleeping form. She was clad in a thick blanket and sounds of machines played along with the rhythm of her pulse.


As the ray of light started stroking her pale face, blur vision trailed infront of her eyes, shaking her from her deep slumber. And then her mind took her to that devastating moment of her life where- She found herself carving for more oxygen amidst those pieces of the building. blood flowing out of her body like water in the old tap. She wanted to flee and be able to breathe again. But her limbs were numb, so numb that she couldn't feel the pain of the heavy rock that was fallen on her ankle. She knew she wont last longer, but strangely she wanted to! So desperately that for the first time in that night, she was ready to fight for herself.


And then came a wish, a wish she wished taking heavy breaths. A wish that every little girl was told stories about! A wish that some prince would come and sweep her off her feet and take her to the land of love! Surprisingly, she wanted her prince to come.


She never knew God could hear her, she never knew there would be a day when her wish would come true! When she was thirteen, she had wished seeing a shooting star, that someday her soulmate shall come and carry her away from the danger in the bridal style. Such a stupid wish, she had once thought. But today she wished the same wish again. And may be it was time for it to come true.


Because when she blinked her eyes, she saw light and he emerged out of nowhere. He hurried towards her throwing off all the things that made her bleed and she stared deeply into those eyes. Those almond eyes, which were very hypnotizing! Before she went blank, she felt herself being lifted in the arms of that man.


Nandini opened her eyes suddenly. Her body was in deep pain, and she could finally feel it. She couldn't get up, her abdomen held a huge bandage and she felt there might be a deep cut there. And then she noticed a head that was rested on her bed, to her right. Unknowingly a smile crept on her lips, stroking his silky hair she smiled again. It wasn't a dream, it was reality. He had infact saved her! like a damsel in distress, she had been in his arms.


Cold palm running through his hair, made him jerk from his sleep. His eyes flew open to see another pair of eyes doting on him. He wanted to scream, yell, hug her! he wanted to hold her so tight that he would never let her go, or let her get hurt. The smile in their faces was enough to convey the promise, a promise to stay together-forever.


She hadn't realized that she had been sleeping for 7 days, he hadn't realized that he didn't eat in 7 days. Everyone had left hopes of her survival, afterall who would survive after being buried under the fallen building? but she did! when he had found her, all he could see was her eyes that were blinking at him; asking him to save her, to take her away from all the pain her body and mind was enduring. And he had done just that. But she never cared to acknowledge his efforts, for she had been in so deep slumber that she lost her touch to the world. And they said, she was in coma.


He had cried so badly previous night when doctors had told she wont survive, he too somewhere had lost the hopes until first time in his life he had a made wish. A wish that, she would see him again! He had promised to himself that he would lock her in his eyes and never let her go away. And that's exactly what had happened!

x-x-x-x-x


Hello everyone.


first of all, i had recieved few good news and few bad news as soon as i came back to my house from my vacation. good news were many, but a single bad news can make u go philosophical and wonder 'how important a life is!'

this update is dedicated to Roshni Ahmed, who died in a car accident. she is one of our fellow member in india forums too and one my dear friend too. I dont know how to react or what to say, frankly i haven't spoken to her much, but due to our common fandom, we knew each other. i knew her existence and also that she was a sweetheart!

With all my heart wish her soul Rests in peace, Dear Roshni you shall be missed! May god give strength to your family to bare your physical absense! you will always be in our hearts.

I am sorry if you guys felt a little odd about my lil speech, but those words were what came from my heart.

you may know her, or may not, please give her a silent prayer from your side? *request*


x-x-x-x


so the next update is gonna be the Epilogue, and then lets bid bye to my dearest story! 😊


oh and then do guess who is the "man" in nandini's life! 😉

@chetu : in last update nandini was lying somewere near the falling building only as she couldnt move due to her injuries. and she had a mobile with her. remember she had called fire extinguisher and she lost the network later? so yeah. she did have a mobile which started working once she found a place to lie in the 'sand heap'


with love

nams! 😳


Edited by ..nams.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

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RIP ROSHNI
U WILL BE ALWAYS REMEMBERED


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sorry is post mein meri himmat ni hui ki main yaha chapter ke baare mein likhu
see next post for comment
Edited by crazysky - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res main phir se first..
i shud be awarded with bestest stalker of u award in the world

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unres

well am in AWEEE with this chapter
so beautiful chapter
this ss will be always close to my heart
i think at a point of time .. its a inner wish of a girl to be carried like a bridal way by her soulmate
u very beautifully portrayed this wish
its really really really damn beautiful like using shooting star thing wow..
i really loved it
now i'll surely wait for stars to fall he he
but kya karu delhi mein itna pollution hai stars ni dikhte
moon dikhta hai balcony se.. moon girne ki wish karungi toh
NASA WALE MUJH PE CHAD JAYENGE


i am in love WITH this adhish and nandu
i wish u to get a man like adhish he he 😉
i also want to mention that i will really miss this ss
infact i never thought this ss will ever become one of my fav n
now its the best non fan fiction work u have written
i really loved the scenes u used in this ss
i never thought that any small scene can be beautifully shown
all the more one thing i wud like to mention that
this ss didnt contained any intimate scenes between hero-adhish and heroin-nandu
yet i fell in love with them
specially i never fell for any characters
love them...

chal ab epilogue de dena

and also tu chahe yeh story khatam bhi kar degi toh mujhe koi fark ni padega
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coz
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whenever i will feel romantic or will meet my next crush
somewhere then i'll surely be back here in this thread to read this again

and also i wud like to mention that ..
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yaar dimag mein kuch aya tha bolna tha bhul gayi jab yaad ayega toh bata dungi😵

oh yes !! yaad aya
1 more reason i loved this ss
coz
initially when i read the title
i thought its some pyscho killer story
(he he 😆 marna mat)

then when i read prologue then i thought
shit!! i dont want character tani(no offense to dawda lovers) on nandu
and i was like "kya yaar ab is kahani mein hoga ki nandu will come close to yash and he will like nandu and happily after types"
(i may have mentioned it one of my comments also)
but then u replied to my comment and i was like lets see and give it a chance

then when i started reading ur updates ..
i was waiting for the scene of prologue to occur
u know yash yelling at nandu

and then yash's elder bro entered
and that scene happened
i was like may be he is the correct pair and he is in love with nandu from his school times
i know adhish and yash entered at the same time in ur story
but
it never clicked in my CID mind that he is in love with her when i read that update for the first time
but then i as me always use to read ur chapters untill the next chapter comes
well then it clicked me that may be adhish is the correct pair for her

i loved this ss coz
initially i always thought as per the title yash to be nandu's addiction but when i travelled through your ss , i came to know the real meaning of the title of your story and whats the real indication of word "ADDICTION" meant in your story..

the thing is that am in love with this coz this ss contained those incidents and turns which i had never expected to happen
and these "never expected" things binded me to this story till the end


😊
jyada lamba bol gayi na?
chal koi baat ni jhel le aaj ke din

Edited by crazysky - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
RIP Roshni...

we will all miss you..
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Posted: 11 years ago
First and foremost.. i am really feeling very sad as u have come to the end of this wonderful SS...

bahut bura lag raha hai...


as usual the update was just perfect..
loved it to the core
it was way to awsome..
the way u have described everything was superb..
it was like everything was happening in front of my eyes ..
outstanding...

finally nandini is saved like the dream she has seen that someday her mr perfect will come and take her away..

but i think the man was not Adhish...

he can yash or deepak..may be main wrong ho sakti hoon.
(as nams my dear.. u r very much unpredictable regarding twists)

so i m telling yeh deepak aur yash dono mein se koi ek ho sakta hai...

well well well... update it soon
as waiting for the update is nxt to impossible

till then
bye
take care



with lots and lots of love
moumita
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Posted: 11 years ago
R.I.P Rosh, i still can't belive she isn't here anymore

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