#4, My Heart whispers, but I cant hear..Epilogue in new Thread... - Page 22

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Thanks everybody who are new one here and olders... for your response on my story...today is going to be last part...i am also emotionally attached to it...let's see how end turns out...i am myself not clear yet... will update in one hour...

jeenia dear 1hr finished 😕
waiting

awesome update
loved it
I totally expected this when you said big shock... But I didn't tell you before
that's y I said cruel jeenia ...😆 lol
how will I get sleep... My mind will be running around this only till Tuesday😕
coming o the update
beautiful
super



Next day Shlok got up and found Astha was not on bed, she had already been awake...
He got up form bed and went to washroom, as he entered, he was shocked to see...
He immediately went to his room, second room, its washroom... Everywhere In house and finally to kitchen where Astha was cooking food for them...
Astha... he spoke..
She turned with a smiling face and placed a peck on his lips wrapping her arms around his neck as if nothing has happened at night...good morning sweetheart...
Good morning...but...Shlok spoke...
But what jaan? She smiled again kissing on his cheek...
Astha...he pulled her apart, where are all mirrors of house? He spoke irritatingly...
Those were not looking nice at their places, so I removed them...Astha made a puppy face...
Or you removed them because...he stopped midway...Astha's expression changed to serious from smiling...Shlok...everything that gives you pain, has no place in our life...saying she hugged him...Shlok too hugged her with teary eyes...he wiped his tears controlling his pain and brought a faded smile taking her out of hug and spoke...umm...mere to chal jayega, I don't have to comb now...what about you? How will you survive without mirror?
I can see myself in your eyes...Astha cupped his face in her hands...
Listening Shlok hugged her tight wiping each other's tears... just few time Shlok, everything will be fine...Astha spoke...
Suddenly Astha stepped away from Shlok...
What? Shlok asked...
Hey, see our baby is kicking me...she smiled...
Really? Shlok was surprised...show me too...
Astha took his hand and placed it on her tummy...after few moments,, Shlok too felt baby kick...
Really...Shlok too jumped with happiness...wow...it feels so lovely...
Yup..Astha spoke holding his hand while he was still feeling baby kicks at times...suddenly he became sad removing his hand...
What Shlok? She asked...
Astha, will I see our baby? He spoke with teary eyes...
Of course Shlok...you will not only see, but will play with our baby, teach it and even marry our baby...she caressed his face pulling him for a hug...


the mirror part is superb
and the baby kick part is superb
such a wonderful feeling to feel the first kick of the baby
beautiful part

Few days had passed like this, When Varun and Gauri too had come there very happily...
Ahan? Looking happy? Some good news? Astha smiled...
How did you guess? Gauri spoke shyly...
Your glow is telling sweetie...Astha caressed her face..and hugged her ..congratulations...
What are you talking about? Shlok asked stupidly...
And other three laughed...Shlok, soon you are going to be pap, still so stupid...Varun chided him...
Will you tell me directly? Shlok was irritated...
Gauri is expecting...finally Varun said...
Really? Shlok jumped with joy hugging them both...
Hey I have an idea...Varun spoke suddenly ...
Bolo... Astha said...umm...if you have a baby boy and we have baby girl, we will get them married...
Ya, you are right...Shlok too spoke with happiness... And if I have a baby girl and you have baby boy, even then we will get them married...
But...Astha spoke...if we both have baby girls or baby boys?
Umm...Shlok smiled naughtily...then we will ask them...we don't have any objection, if they don't mind...and he winked to Varun giving him hi five... And they shared a high laughter...


liked this part


Suddenly while laughing Shlok felt breathless and almost fell on floor...
Shlok...they shouted and took him to doctor...
As they reached there, Shlok was almost unconscious...doctors took him to ICU and started treatment...
Astha was crying badly while Gauri and Anjali were handling her...
One hour had passed like this...when doctor came outside...
Doctor how is he? Niranjan asked...
Its serious...doctor spoke... I think, you should admit him in hospital now...he need continuous treatment...
Can I see him doctor? Astha asked...
I am sorry Mrs. Agnihotri...I can't allow you to meet him in this condition, its dangerous for you and your baby...doctor spoke...
But...Astha tried to intervene,. When Anjali caressed her shoulder...he is right Astha... During pregnancy, you may get infections very soon...
But ayii...how can I stay away from him? Astha broke down...
For him only beta, he will never wish any harm to you or your baby...Anjali spoke with tears...
But mrs Agnihotri...doctor referred to Astha...you may see him from outside through window, even he may also see you form there...
Listening, she wiped her tears and went near window, while Anjali had been inside to meet him...from there she saw Shlok resting on the bed and Anjali to signaled Shlok to see Astha telling him the situation...he looked towards Astha, gave her a fade smile signaling he is fine...Astha too smiled... he signaled her to take care of her and baby... Astha nodded in yes with teary eyes...
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Days were passing like this...Astha used to see him from the glass window of ICU while Shlok was losing his consciousness day by day...
Day and night, they all were praying to give him strength for just few more days as Astha's pregnancy's eighth month was going on... Astha had been staying there only all the time. very rare moments were when Gauri or Anjali stressed her to go at home to take rest...Kalindi and Avdhoot were also visiting again and again...worried for Shlok, they all were equally worried for Astha now...
It was early in the morning one day, when nurse shouted immediately for doctor...
Varun was at hospital with Astha, listening nurse voice, they ran towards ICU...Shlok was breathing with quite difficulty...
Nurse, oxygen mask...hurry up doctor shouted...and they started treating him...
Doctor had asked Varun to take Astha away from there as anything could happen that she could not handle...
All had reached there and almost three hours had passed...doctor came and spoke to Niranjan... Case is going out of hand Mr. Agnihotri, we need donor immediately...
But how is it possible doctor, its yet few days pending for her delivery...Niranjan pleaded, please arrange some donor...
We are trying our best Mr. Agnihotri... But let's see ...Doctor spoke...
Doctor, only one week is pending in starting of my ninth month...i may get operated...Astha poke with a hope...
No...not at all Mrs. Agnihotri...firstly...eighth month is quite critical for mother as well as baby secondly... we operate only in case of emergency... Don't worry, we are trying our best...saying doctor left from there...
While Astha broke down and Gauri was handling her...
No Astha everything will be fine...Gauri tried to handle her...
But my heart is sinking Gauri...i don't want to lose Shlok...
No, not at all Astha, we will not lose him...saying Gauri pulled Astha for hug and both were crying badly...
After some time, Astha wiped her tears...
Gauri, take care of Shlok...
Hum...Gauri asked...
Nothing...Astha smiled a bit...and left for washrooms...
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Few moments had passed...
Gauri, where is Astha...don't leave her alone...Varun spoke coming...
Ya, I am with her, she is in washroom...Gauri spoke...any progress?
No...Varun nodded...doctors are trying their best to get donor...but...
Suddenly a staff lady shouted from washroom...sister come soon...a lady has cut her nerve in washroom...
What? Both Gauri and Varun were shocked...Astha? Coming to their mind, they ran towards washroom...their instinct was right, she was lying on the floor in the pool of blood... Gauri ran to Astha.. what's all this? She cried hugging her...
doctor had told na, they may operate only in critical conditions...tell them I am in critical condition now...save my baby and Shlok...she spoke with painful smile...when doctor had also reached...
Gauri told him complete situation and they called shlok's and Astha's doctors for treatment...
As they were taking Atsha to operation theater...
We fear we will be able to save one from mother and baby...doctors discussed with each other...
While Atsha was saying to doctor...doctor, don't worry about me...save my baby...
Shlok was brought there on wheel chair, as he had listened unconsciously discussing someone and he had insisted doctor to let him meet once to Astha...
Astha...he spoke with difficulty...why?
Because I love you stupid...she smiled painfully...
But if something happens to you...Shlok caressed her face...
But you will live...Shlok promise me...you will live and give all happiness to our baby...
No...Shlok nodded in no...either we both live or...
No Shlok..Promise me... You will live...
Why do you always win from me Astha? Shlok cried badly...I love you...
I love you more...Astha spoke leaving...
Mr Agnihotri we have to take her soon...she is losing blood...saying doctor took Astha to operation theater...
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They all were now more in pain...and moreover Shlok had denied to go inside the ICU till any news for Astha...
One hour had passed, when doctor came... it's a baby girl... and completely safe...
Good, Mr. Agnihotri..we have to take you for surgery now...shlok's doctor spoke coming there
But Astha? Shlok asked...
Astha...doctor paused lowering his eyes...


the whole above part... Feeling sad for everyone ... Mostly astha and shlok
how the happy moment turned into a sad one in seconds
I know she will do something to herself to save shlok
hope she is fine... Don't do any thing to her dear ..plz
the happy part is its a GIRL

Originally posted by: niki795

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first read it...you will love it...

believe me jeenia,iam crying...