VIRIKA: ON MY WEDDING DAY.... MARRIED A STRANGER INSTEAD OF MY BRIDE ! - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: foam

amazing amazing!!!!!!! this the only reaction i give when i read ur updates plzzz tell me how do u have such a great talent i mean i m so jealous of u i wish i cud have a talent of writing stories like u.

ANYWAYZ had a great time reading reading the update n
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO U TOO HAVE A GREAT YEAR AHEAD
GOD BLESS U😊😊😊


thanks !!
thanks a lott ...it means a lot to me !
r u seriously telling that u envy me ? ...i don't think i write that well😉
i just love u for that dear !!😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Duggukede

happy new year

loved all of it
amazing update
continue soon
thanks for the pm


thanks !!
ok😉
please don't thank me for pm's !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kryanvirikafan

only one word 2 say amazing luved the update hope 2 read the next part soon want 2 know abt the mission soon


thanks !!
ok😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sumayyah1

res
unres
amazing
superb
just fantastic
it was long
loves it totally
epic
just loved the convo between varun and vanshika
it was funny
thnx for the pm
cont soon
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO U 2


thanks !!
ok😉
please don't thank me for pm's !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: suju143

Amazing
great
fabulous update
love virika convo
thanks for the pm
continue soon


thanks !!
ok 😉
please don't thank me for pm's !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Surish

Nuanced interactions between romantic couples continue to captivate me! Absolutely fantastic!


thanks suri !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AmmuKryan

Omg!!!!!!! I'm still laughing like a crazy girl🤣

Vanshika!!!!!!!!🤣
Her character is just too adorable n hilarious!!!!
I luvd each n every part,especially...

Jeevika: see aunty, ur son is not letting me sleep ... !!

Vanshika: how can he let u sleep?😲 ... It's ur first night after all😉

Complaining like a small kid ... Don't u know that u r not going to sleep on ur wedding night😡

U have other imp. Works to do other than sleeping, my dear😳😆😆 !!

To viren ... U carry on my son, this time I'll support u 😆!!

Viren: mom ?😲😡

Jeevika: aunty ... He's not letting me sleep on the bed 😡!!

Vanshika: it's upto u guys to sleep on bed or not😆😆, u both decide it ... How can we tel u ?

Oh reyna!!! it's really wonderful n pls do update soon!!!!

Luv,Ammu...😃


thanks ammu !
yeah shez very funny😆
ok😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cuty_piee

OMG reyna update for me!! Really it means a lot!! Thnxxx n thnxx for the wishes!!
Coming to update!!
Awesum update again no words for u!!
Ooo mission for virika friendship wow!!
N vanshika is really much advance!!
Awesum update as i alreasy said u are awesum writer!!
Love u
Take care!!


yeah ... it's for u dear !
no mention !
thanks !
yeah 😆
ok😉
love u tooo ...tc !
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: virikamaliha

Awesome update...
Heheh jai ho vanshika ji ki..lolz
she is just out of the wrd in this update...just love her...
Last part is just wow...
Hopfully they'll become frnds and after that cute couple...
Superb excited for mission one..
Update soon..


thanks !
i donno hindi ...sry😭
yeah 😆
ok😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 7:


( if u like my story, please do share it with ur buddy's as the response is very very less for 350 pm's !! u can check the last part likes n comments to know it better ... i'm really upset, but thanks to all those who like n comment !! )


vanshika: here are viren's diaries ... !

she hands him a set of them ... He takes out 2013 diary, and starts to read it

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jan 1, 2013

Happy new year to me ... It's a surprise start for this year !! I donno from where all these things happened, but ...out of blue, aenna proposed me today !

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

varun stopped reading it n went for 2012 diary ...

vanshika: why did u stop ?

varun: coz , this diary didn't have their first meeting !

may be ... they met even before 2013 ! we'll read from start abt them !

he opens the 2012 diary ...

Vanshika: now, are we going to read his whole diary for her info ?

Varun: just wait ... We'll see the first day of each month ... if aenna's name will be there ... we'll know wen she met him from the before month !

He is checking first day's of every month ...

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jan 1, 2012

Happy new year to me ... For the first time, I'm welcoming new year with friends rather than with family ...thanks to mom !

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Vanshika: how sweet !! ...see ... This is my son ! ... He even thanks me in his diaries !

Varun: wait vanshi ... Who knows wat all he has written abt u wen he didn't accept for his marriage ?

Vanshika shuts her mouth n lets him continue ...

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Today, we went to beach and played beach volleyball ... it was fantastic at first ... But ended on a serious note for our team !

After certain maches, we heard a female voice calling us ... N we turned around

The girl said us that they don't have a team to play against n hence asked us to play with them !

I was the first one to reject, but wat to do ? ... My other fellows were soo desperate to play with girls, that I had to agree !

We started the match, everyone in their positions n they served first !

We've let the game as loosely as possible coz ...after all they were girls ... N we didn't want to disappoint them !

As the game was progressing ...i found that centre position girl was doing extremely gud n they were not leaving any chances to win the game rightfully !

As it was going out of our hands ...we've decided to play hard on them n then began the original game !!

That was almost going to be a draw wen that centre girl hit the ball to straightly punch on my face n we lost the game !

I wanted to meet her n really appreciate her for her play, but I was angry on her

I never thought I can have a grudge on anyone ... but now, I really n strongly have a grudge on that girl whom I even donno !

One day, I should give her hit, back !!

I saw that girl going ... I wanted to talk with her or thought to atleast ask her name n address so that I can play again against her, but I couldn't !!

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Varun: boys lost to girls ? ... How shame !!

Vanshika: don't underestimate girls varun ...see ... ur son has paid that price

Varun: vanshi ...it's our son !

Vanshika: ok, our son !! but, ... is this girl aenna ?

Varun: how can I know ? ... even he doesn't know her name ! we'll read feb 1st n if there is her name, then we can confirm that this girl is aenna !

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Mar 1, 2012

Once in four years came yesterday ... 29 th feb !!

I'm glad that this day has come ...coz, I've met one of the most brilliant n stupid mind of my clg today !

I've seen her name almost everytime in notice board beside mine in the toppers list ! she is the topper of their branch ... N I always wanted to meet her n have a chat with her ... As I wanted to know how she thinks n how her ideas are !!

there was a call for scholarship application ... N I went to library to fill it n handover !

I saw this girl sitting beside me, and seriously filling the form as if she was in her exam !

Though I never initiate conversations, I couldn't stop myself ...as it has been many days that I wanted to talk with her atleast once ...n I didn't want to leave this opportunity !

I was trying to recollect her name, which I saw on notice board many times, but didn't register in my mind !

before I could get her name, she stood up to submit her form !

as sharp as eagle, my eyes caught the wrong date on her application n I immediately spoke ... excuse me, u wrote the wrong date !

she answered back ... " wats yesterday's date ? "

I said 29th

She said ... " that's wat makes today 30th !! ... Don't try to talk with me uselessly ...I've been observing u from quite a while ... ur observation is close to me n far from ur application ... It'll be nice if u concentrate on that poor application than me ! "

I was shocked at that !

How can she think soo low of me ? ... I let her go as she'll herself find her mistake a while later !

I expected her to come back n apologise me, but that didn't happen !

I was disappointed , but submitted the form n left the library !

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Vanshika: is this girl eanna ?

Varun: will you stop it vanshi ? how can I know ? ... Are you letting me complete this or not ?

Vanshika: ok, carry on ! ... but like this, it'll take a lot of time ... N before we can set them up, they'll become miles apart !!

Varun: then wat can we do ?

vanshika: first start mission 1 ... N wen that's going on, we'll read these diaries n remove aenna !

varun: yeah ... this is right ...as we don't have soo much time also !

vanshika: to make them friends, they should atleast like eachother !!

varun: to like eachother ... They should know eachother's positive points

vanshika: yeah ... we know about viren, but about jeevika ?

varun: we'll ask her parents ! ...he calls her parents n they all assemble in jeevika's house ...asx viren's house has both viren n jeevika as obstacles !

varun n vanshika tell them about everything that has happened n how they both hate eachother

aditya( jeevika's dad): so ... Now ... We should make them like eachother

Jeevika's mom: ok ... Jeevika doesn't know how to do any housework ... U know, we've brought her up like a boy n that too with lot of pampering ... But she knows everything about business, shares, n everything of that sort !!

From here onwards, the story will run ... With each character's depth n understanding !!

Wait for aenna's, viren's n jeevika's complete past to unfold in next 3 parts !!

i want long comments for my long update


********** love ... reyna

This story will be updated every Thursday !!


my first story: BEST FRIENDS TO BEST LIFE PARTNERS

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3823857/best-friends-to-best-life-partners-upd-epilogue-11-2


Lemme know if u liked it !!

Buddy me for my pm's !!

I'll only pm to those who'll comment ... !!

reyna's index: fusion of ff's , girl's corner n kid's corner !!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3762857/reynas-index-fusion-of-ffs-girls-corner-n-kids-corner

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