VIOLIN~RHYTHM OF ROMANCE # 4 love punishment page 62/ 8th january - Page 33

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iska update bhi dedo poo
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iska update bhi dedo poo


from this i got idea for next update masha allah thnks laks for the pic

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VIOLIN RYTHYM OF ROMANCE









thanks to shruthe di for the banner







thanks to jadu aka maya rhea for the benner








@ kutti and sampa your comments were just wonderful specially shongo thanks for taking pain to give wonderful comment
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All asking one question Here is the answer for your question why geet is like that



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As he passed by maan met with his company receptionist pinky who greeted him with trembled voice. Pinky is hell scared of maan for his short temper otherwise respects maan very much. Maan rolled his eyes for pinky's reaction but greeted with smile.
"Geet mam aaj bhi nahi aaya sir ab kya kare" said pinky after maan left to recording room.
"What but you said they will come today" shouted Aks who is waiting there patiently from morning.

Adi and pinky exchanged there looks with blank faces. Before aks continue with her talk they heard maan's high pitch voice which shakes entire building along with some noises.
The room was is in total mess thing shattered here and there while maan shouting at someone with high voice. Maan jus closed his ears with both hands as the music playing his each nerve going out of control. Many memories dancing in front of his eyes maan shutted them tight to get away from all these. Aks just stood there watching all these shock was evident in her face not only aks all who presented there stood in their places dumb stuck with turn of events.


Adi signaled crew to left them alone except maan's very closed one's all stood there all of sudden maan trashed sound box on floor with bang sound. The beat still going on in another box maan was going mad for that.


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"Geet just pray to god" the words still ecoching in geet ears. God the word she all ways worshiped, still also how long she cay deny but at corner of her heart she knows she won't be able to live without praying to god. The whole world fighting with each other in name of religion and caste but here she belongs to which religion? For geet these are just materialistic things she believe in herself. If all will say human must have religion what they will say after knowing about her life.


She is Hindu when is born, she is Christian when she fell in love with maan. Yes you heard it right she belongs to no religion then but her religion is love where the question of religion won't be arising in any means. Geet just kept walking on the road she is fully engrossed on her thoughts but her feet makes a halt in front on one building without her will.

Geet stood in front of Paris famous church Cathedrale Notre Dame which was built in typical gothic style.








It is the most ancestor church which is located in near metro. She is blankly looking at that building people were busy in praying to Jesus. Mocked smile played on her lips he is the one who had given her this life and also he is the same one who crushed it. Still she cont hate him as he is her mother favorite god. He is the savior of her mother life even hers. Taking long steps geet entered in to the church covering her head with scarf closing her eyes stood in front of Jesus statue.


Geet don't know when her legs given up kneeled down in front of Jesus with complaining look. Tear escaped from her hazels thinking about maan. She loves him crazily she cont even imagine one second without his presence. But her mother one word just shook her existence.

Geet baby don't trust anyone in your life
The music in sin not magic
It will kill your breathe every second

But her mother don't know music is her breathe it's her soul. How one can live without soul but she is proof for that. Maan is the word itself music like some romantic melody for her, every breathe she is taking mingled with tune of maan's music only. Maan's geet is not there in her body her soul died long back but she cont crush her heart right it is already fell for him. He is her musician who drew colors in her life he is her everything. If he is soul for music then she is his breathe.
She is scared of being in love her mother faced many hurdles for loving someone. Her mother didn't know she is already in love irrecoverably. She cont blame anyone nor her mother or god just it's her fate. She accepted that but what's the mistake of maan here he is the suffering a lot in all these. It just killing her she is helpless now.
"I love you maan please don't punish yourself for me. Without music maan is nothing plz don't kill that. Violin is witness of our love; your way of keeping alive your love in violin beat. It's me who crushed your dreams. God forgive me for this big grave mistake" confessed geet thinking about their days. They were beautiful just like blossomed rose petal un touched dreams of both hearts.

Geet smiled with moisted eyes with memories of their days they were happy want to fly over sky with open wings. But every good thing has to end one day right play of god they parted away. Strom wiped away their dreams from calendar but not from their hearts they are still fresh in there crazy hearts.
Gathering all her energy Geet left from there giving one last glance to Jesus smiling at him. All know her because of her past record but geet loves to live her life just like normal girl. When she met MD of company which she is working for that old man welcomed her with warm smile. It is really surprising thing for him Geet working for him as he know she is talented in her own field. The look of geet eyes didn't given courage to him to ask anything. He cont interfere in personal matters just given her job. But it's been two months things are still same geet all ways kept her aloof from every one.
Geet also thankful to every one for not questioning for anything she came across many gossiping about her but she simply ignored that. Keep herself busy in best option this is what geet know she will just do her work.
"How many times I told you not to play this tune of mine wont you get things straightly?" shouted maan throwing everything from table trashing it on ground. "Sir by mistake it came here I am sorry sir" apologized Vinnet(Vin) with trembling voice hanging his head down.

Vin crew member of maan company who is looking over every album they are taking up. He is highly horrified with maan's anger this is very rare thing happen with maan losing his temper is what maan don't do. After geet left them things were going away from their hands especially with maan he is losing his temper all ways. Lovely and bubbly maan is the one all knew but the one who they are watching is MSK.
"No excuses just trash them in fire right now" shouted maan grabbing adi's attention who is lost in his thoughts totally. "Sir what you are saying" asked Adi not believing his ears.

"Don't you get what I am saying then just watch what I am going to do now" said maan with cold tone.


Grabbing every record that contain there tunes which both prepared maan dumped all in ground. Taking match box from side table maan is about to lighten the fire but one hand stopped him from doing that. Maan glanced at that hand then at owner of that person raising his head Aks stood there with questioning looks. Adi, Pinky and Vin stood there like statues watching all these they are hell scared and shocked for maan's behavior.
Maan's one look shaken Aks body his eyes were looking like volcano but apart from that she can see pain is his eyes. "Pain but for why for what?" question ringing in her mind. She don't know what he going through but what he doing is not good thing that's what she knew.
"Are you out of your mind or what Mr.Khurana" shouted aks looking straight in to maan's eyes. maan glared at her with high intensity but Aks didn't budge from her place at least.

"Do you know the value of memory" asked Aks glaring at maan with same intensity like maan. Maan snapped away his hand from her hold "Except me who can know the value of memory" thought maan painfully. He is angry on himself for being this much helpless for getting punishment like this without his mistakes. He want to shout high from his lungs out but he cont. loving her was the beautiful thing he did in his life. But it is making him helpless making him loss himself for her denial.


"It's none of your business Ms.Singhania" said maan not even facing her just left from there. Aks can see he is suffering for something in his life. His eyes showing agony and pain his hazels are mirror to his heart. She know Maan from many days hot and handsome hunk these are the words magazines all ways write about him but no news came to view about his personal life. She thought he like to maintain professionalism but things are not at all looking good here. His constant denial for doing album and Geet absence giving her different thoughts for her.


"Sorry mam for all these sudden turn of events" apologized Adi he is truly feeling sorry for this. It is nth time aks asking to do album for her company but maan not accepting that.

Aks nodded her head negatively no one are at blaming zone now all she got to know is that is maan facing something big problem.


Taking turn Aks about to take leave but her eyes fell on book lying on the ground lifelessly in the mess. It attracted her book is not looking normal one like she felt like some hidden secrets are there in that bundle of papers book. Clearing mess away from that book Aks taken that in to her hands. As she thought it was prepared with at most concentration it contained combination of red blue words about that pad imprinted with gold color letters. She had strange belief it will lead her to some hidden secrets. Aks carefully glance at trio Adi, pinky and Vin who are busy in setting the room talking to each other with serious faces.
Signing in relief Aks read the words loud that were engraved on the pad

VIOLIN RYTHYM OF ROMANCE

Below that Maaneet with small letters.
Aks stared at the book for brief seconds then she get it is definitely belongs to maan and geet only. She want to see what is there in that book silently hiding that book in her bag left from there glancing at recording room one last time. She had that fear they won't allow her take that book if they found that with her.
But she don't know no one knows about that except maaneet.






So here is the next part this story will end in quite few parts only

Sparkle







dedicating this ss to most imp persons of my
IF life
"baby doll" aka "maangeet forever"
and
"praff ji" aka " reachsky_2011"
so tell me who wonna be in this romantic journey of maaneet with me



Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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kaunsa ganna hai...
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Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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😛
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I am in office & sound is mute 😛
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Originally posted by: Jeevana.

I am in office & sound is mute 😛


i have less time this is playing with me its not playing grrr
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abhi thik hai pooja...
konsa song hai ye

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