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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi guys.I decide to write a fanfic about Manthan and Eklavya.Because i love their their character.This story is about how both of them fight with their destiny and how their lives change.And how they experience true love.Hope you all enjoy.

I am starting this from today's episodewhen tanya told bhoomi about manthan being in jail.

Eklavya was listening all this.Tanya and bhoomi went to jail to get manthon bailed.

Tanya:Inspector I am Mrs Tanya Virani.I am here to get my son bailed.Here are the papers.

Inspector: ok Constable go and get Manthan Virani.

Tanya : Manthan how are you.Let's go home and we will talk there.

Manthan: No mom i am not coming.And i am not going to leave that Tulsi and KT.

Bhoomi:What does that Tulsi think of herself.Why doesn't she let us live in peace.If you are not coming home then where are you going.

Manthan: I don't know.

Suddenly Eklavya come there.

Eklavya:Manthan i know what you are going through because same thing happen to me .I think you need to come home and prove your innocence to that tulsi.I am also going to take revenge on what sha did to my father.

Tanya:Eklavya what are you talking about Tulsi ma didn't do anything.I will tell you everything about your father.And then Tanya told everything to eklavya bhoomi and manthan about ansh.

Eklavya didn't know what to do.He was just listening to mandira.

Eklavya:Now i know what happen to my dad.But i won't become like my dad. I don't want history to repeate but still i won't forgive that Tulsi for what she did to me.I came to SN as Ansh.I am going to leave that house because i don't want to take revenge.But i will never forgive them for what they did to me.When i needed my family they left me alone.

Tanya:I am proud of you eklavya that you didn't become like ansh.I think Karan was always right about you that you are not ansh you are eklavya who have a heart ,who knows the meaning of relationships even after getting betrayed by them.

Eklavya: Thanks chachi.Manthan if you are leaving that house you can come with me.

Manthan: I don't know about that.

Bhoomi:Yes manthan go with eklavya.

Tanya:I think bhoomi is right , and you can also decide what do you want to do in future.And eklavya beta please take care of manthan

Eklavya: Of course chachi i will.Let's go manthan.

Please comment and let me know if i shold continue this or not.And sorry about the mistakes.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow.. i like it.. 😳
COntinue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 You should continue! It was an amazing part! I can't guess what's going to be next in your FF.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice prediction but i don't think Eklavya n Bhoomi will know the truth of Ansh this much fast..U know this i Ekta' serials so it's gonna take a long time to show Bhomi n Eklavya knowing the truth abt Ansh...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2

Manthan and Eklavya went to eklavya's house.Tanya and bhoomi went to SN.Tanya was sad about manthan.But she was going to out who raped kt.She also thought why did damini lied about manthan.

when manthan and eklavya reached home eklavya told manthan to take rest and they will talk later.But manthan wanted to talk right now
Eklavya:ok manthan.What do you want to do?
Manthan:I don't know.But for right now i just need a job.
Eklavya:ok i will find a job for you.But you need your graduation paper.
Manthan:but they are at home.Don't worry i will ask mom or bhoomi to come and give it to me.Don't give me job in family buisness.I don't need it.
Eklavya: Don't worry i also left the family buisness i want to do something on my own.
Manthan:That's great. If you want to do something on your own i want to help.Let me give you a idea.Let's start our own buisness and i will help you.
Eklavya:That's a great idea.But you know it's not easy as you think.
Manthan: I know but we don't have to start our buisness here we can start it anywhere.I just want to go from here.
Eklavya: I think you are right.I was going to USA you can come with me.We can also start our buisness there.Is that ok with you.
Manthan:That's fine with me.
Eklavya:ok go and get rest. Our flight is at night.And also tell your mom and bhoomi about it.
Manthan:ok and manthan called his mom.
Tanya:hello
Manthan:Hello mom it's me manthan.Me and eklavya are going yo USA.
Tanya:But manthan why are you going?
Manthan: Please mom you want to see your son sucessfull then let me go.
Tanya:ok but please take care of yourself.
Manthan:Don't worry i will.
Tanya:And i will try to find who rape KT.ok bye beta.
Manthan: Bye mom.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Please Comment. And let me know if i should cont or not.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Of course continue... Its a splendid track... Looking fwd to reading more parts... And I'm sure everyone else will be hooked soon too...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3

Manthan and eklavya both reach U.S.A.They started their buisness.One day eklavya was singing and manthan ask him to sing because he had a great voice.After a lot of hesitation he agreed.He started to sing and became a sucessfull singer
2 year leap
We see a man singing on a stage.His fans are shouting his name.Then we see his face.He is eklavya.He is not the same eklavya anymore.he is hot, handsome, dashing, arrogant.He is very popular and well known rockstar all around the world.He is caring,soft,sweet for only one person that is manthan.He loves manthan alot.These two years he and manthan have come really close.Both of them started to understand each other.They started to share their lonliness.Now both of them love each other like real brothers.They both were happy with their life,and they also knew that both of them will be always there for each other.
Next we see a man sitting in his office.He turn his chair around and we see his face.He is manthan.He is also handsome, dashing and a very popular fashion designer.Manthan and Eklavya own a company named Global Stars.Both of them are very sucessfull buisnessman.They are millionaires.Loads of girls are after them, but they always ignore them.In these two years manthan always kept in touch with his mom and bhoomi.

We see eklavya coming into the office.
Eklavya: Hi manthan
Manthan:Hi bhayia.How was your concert.
Eklavya:Well it was great like always.
Manthan:Bhayia for the new project we have to go to india.
Eklavya:We will go manthan and we will win this project too.Are you ready to go and face them?
Manthan:Yes bhayia.I knew one day this day will come and i already prepared myself for this.
Eklavya:Ok. Let's go home.One more thing when are we going ?
Manthan:Tommorrow bhayia.

Next day manthan and eklavya reach india.They got the project.So they decided to throw a party to celebrate.
They also think that it was time to come in front of everybody.
At the party everybody came .Virani's were also invited.Everybody was thinking about the two new buisnessman,and who were they.Manthan and Eklavya make their entry and everyone was shocked to see them after two years.The went to the stage and talked about their company and thanked everybody for comming to the party.Virani's were shocked once again that
manthan and Eklavya were those two buisnessman they were thinking about.But Manthan and Eklavya were enjoying the looks of their faces
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Posted: 18 years ago
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pls continue
is good! really good!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~khola~

Part 3

Manthan and eklavya both reach U.S.A.They started their buisness.One day eklavya was singing and manthan ask him to sing because he had a great voice.After a lot of hesitation he agreed.He started to sing and became a sucessfull singer
2 year leap
We see a man singing on a stage.His fans are shouting his name.Then we see his face.He is eklavya.He is not the same eklavya anymore.he is hot, handsome, dashing, arrogant.He is very popular and well known rockstar all around the world.He is caring,soft,sweet for only one person that is manthan.He loves manthan alot.These two years he and manthan have come really close.Both of them started to understand each other.They started to share their lonliness.Now both of them love each other like real brothers.They both were happy with their life,and they also knew that both of them will be always there for each other.
Next we see a man sitting in his office.He turn his chair around and we see his face.He is manthan.He is also handsome, dashing and a very popular fashion designer.Manthan and Eklavya own a company named Global Stars.Both of them are very sucessfull buisnessman.They are millionaires.Loads of girls are after them, but they always ignore them.In these two years manthan always kept in touch with his mom and bhoomi.

We see eklavya coming into the office.
Eklavya: Hi manthan
Manthan:Hi bhayia.How was your concert.
Eklavya:Well it was great like always.
Manthan:Bhayia for the new project we have to go to india.
Eklavya:We will go manthan and we will win this project too.Are you ready to go and face them?
Manthan:Yes bhayia.I knew one day this day will come and i already prepared myself for this.
Eklavya:Ok. Let's go home.One more thing when are we going ?
Manthan:Tommorrow bhayia.

Next day manthan and eklavya reach india.They got the project.So they decided to throw a party to celebrate.
They also think that it was time to come in front of everybody.
At the party everybody came .Virani's were also invited.Everybody was thinking about the two new buisnessman,and who were they.Manthan and Eklavya make their entry and everyone was shocked to see them after two years.The went to the stage and talked about their company and thanked everybody for comming to the party.Virani's were shocked once again that
manthan and Eklavya were those two buisnessman they were thinking about.But Manthan and Eklavya were enjoying the looks of their faces

Plz comment if i should cont this or not.

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