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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6



Ali to himself - Aagaya hitler...ek woh hitler tha jo sab ka jeena haram kiya...aur yeh MSK meri zindagi ka hitler...mera jeena mushkil kardeta hain...He looked up and started cursing his grandfather...who worked for khuranas...tu marr gaya aur mujhe yaha marne chodke chala gaya

OMG...🤣🤣...sach mein yaar first time feelings of MSK servants are shown in perfect words in this IF history...

very interesting update...

...Maan is married to Meera...Meera met with an accident...so she is not proper healthy...

one thing is confusing me--from the conversation between Daadi and Anu it seems Maan loves Meera and from the accident day he lost his smile...but here Maan's behavior with her suggest opposite... if Maan-Meera are married and she is suffering then why they are living in separate rooms...Maan should be with her to take care of her...if she can't go up to their original room then he can shift down...he should have checked Meera how is she but he didn't even asked daadi about her health...

he is going on trip but he can't inform her himself instead he told Daadi to inform her about his trip...this is really very weird...

waiting for next part...




Thanks for liking it ...



All your doubts will be cleared in the coming updates...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 1
awesome...
was very funny...
Ali's part took everything in this part...
hes damn funny...
Meera had accident and Maan has changed after that...
whats Geet's equation here?
cont soon dear...



Thanks Deepa...


Yes Maan has changes after Meera's accident...Geet is comming😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting start!!😊
Par ye meera ka chakar kuch samj nahi aya..
Jo b ho waiting for geet😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fariya20

prologue ka first part acha tha but maan maried to mera

yyy
what happen to mera ????????




Thanks...

Meera had an accident...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ghsp2fan

interesting start...

yes...waiting for Geet...
update soon...



Thanks...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Interesting start!!😊

Par ye meera ka chakar kuch samj nahi aya..
Jo b ho waiting for geet😃



Thanks...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



u didnt include ali in CS😔




ALi ko CS mein issiliye include nahi kiya kyunki uske chehre ko imagine karna mere liye musg kil hain😆
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Posted: 11 years ago





Thanks for all the likes and comments...
I have replied to all your Comments...

I have Updated CS...Plz Check on first page...

A very big thank you again for loving Ali...I was very nervous...as I am trying some thing comic...

Thank you Priya for the Banner and Rashmi for the Title...

Here is the Next Part

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Next Day...


Maan went away early...Meera was disappointed that Maan didn't inform her...Dadi consoled her saying that she was sleeping with medicines effect and Maan doesn't want to disturb her...and he will be back soon...


All were having BF and Dadi's mobile Rang...She looked at the Caller...And excused her from the table and went away to talk...


After some few minutes she came back...


Dadi - Veer abhi Amritsar se call aaya hai...I have to leave for Amritsar...Aap plz arrangements kar dijiye...


Veer - Haa dadi lekin itna achanak se...kiska call aaya...


Dadi - Woh hoshiyarpur ki meri dost haina ...jo ab Amritsar mein rehte hain...unka call aaya...Gayatri ki tabiyat kharab hain...mujhe jaana hain...aap jaldi se koi arrangement karr dijiye...main packing karleti hoon...

Naina - Main aap ki madad karderti hoon...


Dadi and Naina went from there...In no time she left to Amritsar...Ali too went with her...as Veer didn't want her to go alone...


A week passed by...


Naina and Anu are waiting for Dadi...as she is coming that day...Soon dadi came and /naina took her blessings and Anu hugged her and said...Missed u Dadi...


Dadi - Naina...Aarti lekar aao...Koi aur bhi aaya hain hamare saath...Pehli baar aayi hain...unka swagath kijiye...


Naina left from there to get Aarthi thal...


Anu -Kaun aaya hain dadi...mujhe toh koi nazar nahi aaraha hain...


Dadi - Naina ko aane tak wait karo...aur...Maan aagaye Anu...Mumbai se...


Anu - Nahi dadi...aaaj aane wale hain... bhabhi aagayi...


Dadi asks naina to be ready to take the aarthi...and then she calls...GEET beta aajayiye...


Then the door of the Car opened and came down a Girl, in her early twenties...clad in a simple anarkali suit with braided hair...with a smile on her face...but she looked nervous too...


She came forward and stood at the entrance...


Naina took her aarti...and was welcoming her with flowers... Angel shouted from behind...Dadi aap aagayi...Naina turned around and said Angel beta dheere se...aap girjaayengi...


Naina and others haven't paid attention but at the same time Maan came and entered the same moment with Geet...and naina showered flowers on him too...


Meera had seen this and called Maan...


All looked back at the entrance and stood still...


Naina - Yeh kya hogaya...Dadi maine Maan ko nahi dekha...


Maan and geet looked at each other...Both were silent...didn't know what to say...


Dadi sensed this.


Dadi - Koi baat nahi naina...kabhi kabhi hojata hain...chaliye sab andar chaliye...


Maan straightaway went to his room...Meera tried to stop him but...he left...


Meera felt Bad...coz she didn't had a typical grihapravesh with Maan after their wedding coz of her accident...after seeing Geet and Maan at the doorstep and the later proceedings...she felt she missed the most beautiful moment of her life...


Dadi slightly patted meera and asked her to join them...Meera nodded and joined them...


Anu - Toh dadi yeh kaun hain...


Dadi - Yeh Geet hain, Gayatri ki poti hain,isse delhi mein kuch kaam tha toh hum inhe apne saath le aaye...


Dadi introduced geet to every one...


Anu - Toh Geet kya kaam hai tumhara yahan...


Geet - Ji mujhe university se apne certificates collect karna hain...


Anu - Oh..Good...kaunsi uni...


Geet - Ji delhi university, Maine waha apna PG kiya hain...


Anu - Wow...Maine bhi wahi se padhayi ki...Maine waha se apni graduation ki...tum kaunsi stream mein ho...


Geet - Ji Finance...


Anu - Good mera bhi Finance hi hain...


Seeing them engrossed Naina, Dadi and Meera left...


Within an hour, Anu and Geet were talking as if two best friends met after a long time...


Dadi came and interrupted their conversation...and asked Anu to show Geet her Room...


Anu took Geet upstairs and showed her the Guest Room which is adjacent to her Room...


Anu - Tum fresh hoke aajao, hum sab milke dinner karenge...

Dinner Table...

All were having dinner...Naina is feeding angel and as usual she is being naughty...She is running around the table and eating from everyone's plate and naina is behind her trying to catch her...


Anu and Geet are having a fun time encouraging Angel...


Naina had enough and she came and sat down near Veer...I can't run behind her anymore...


Geet asked ...Naina ji Main try karoon...


Naina - Tumse nahi hoga Geet...woh bohut naughty hain...


Dadi - Try karne do Naina...Geet beta aap khilao usse...

Geet went behind Angel...Angel ran away...After a little try , she could catch her and told something in her ears...Angel...looked at Geet and thought for a while and said Ok...Main aappki baat maanungi...

All wondered what geet said to her...


Naina asked her...Angel told her it's a secret between her and Geet...


Angel had her food from Geet and Geet told silly jokes of ant and elephant and Angel laughed a Lot...


Naina was happy as Angel had her food fully...


Dadi - Geet beta aapko uni kab jana hai?


Geet - dadi Maine pehle hi baat karli hain, main parson jaoongi...few hours of work dadi...uske baad main free hoon...


Veer - Geet aap aage kya karr rahi hain...matlab koi job ya phir shaadi...


Geet smiled a bit...Shaadi toh babaji ki marzi hain...aur main job dhoonda chahti hoon...kuch din kaam karna chahti hoon...


Veer - Acha...tumhara main kya hain ...


Geet - Ji finance...


All finished their food and sat in the Garden for some time...


Veer and Geet continued talking...


Veer - Toh kahi job ke apply kiya...


Geet - Nahi ji, abhi uni se certificates collect karke...apply karoongi...


Veer told about the job opputunites in the field of finance...


Anu - Bhai aap plz kuch aur baat karo...Office ki baatein yaha mat karo...


Mean while Naina took angel as she is sleepy...Dadi asked Meera also to take rest...Meera agreed and went away...Dadi said Good night and went away...


Now only Veer, Anu and Geet are there...Maan went away to study after dinner as he has some work...


Veer suddenly Said...Geet tum hame kyun nahi join karleti...waise bhi hum naye staff ke liye dhoond rahe hain...


Anu suddenly seemed interested...Haaa Geet tum join karo...tum aur main office main bhi masti karenge...warna main toh pak jaati hoon akele...


Geet - Aise kaise ho sakta hain...App log kuch nahi jaante mere acedemics ke bare mein...


Veer - Woh toh waise bhi pata chal jaayega geet...parson...Tum uni se seedha office aajao...baaki ka main sambhal loonga...


Anu - haa Geet, Main bhi chalungi tumhare saath...aur hum waha se office jaaenge...


Geet - Maina dadi se poochti hoon...


Veer - Ok Girls GN...Geet bhul na mat...


Geet said GN and veer wnet away...


Anu and Geet talked for a while.


While returning to her room...Geet came across the study and stopped to see Maan working...She looked him and she remembers the scene where they entered the house at the same time...Maan also sensed someone at the Door and looked up...He found Geet there...Immediately he also remember their encounter... Their eyes met and both were in a different world...both couldn't break their eye lock...Maan's phone rang breaking their revive...Geet went away from there...Maan took the call...and continued his work...




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Here is Part 2 Friends...Plz tell me how is it...


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Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Me first

nice part di
dadi HP ja rahi hai as her friend's health is not good
geet is her pothi so dadi knows about geet.😃
wah kya entry kiya maaneet ne dono ek saath
meera thinking about her grihapravesh
maan meera ko avoid karth hai aur meera feeling sad about it
geet is going to do her PG and veer asked her to join their office
so ab maaneet office mai ek saath kaam karenge😳
jaldi se ye meera ki mystery kol do di why maan married her plz😕
waiitng for next part
jaldi dena Tom ji
Edited by valli30 - 11 years ago

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