ASYA FF: BEST FRIENDS TO BEST LIFE PARTNERS # thread 2 # epilogue upd. - Page 31

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

so waiting for romance update... it will be
their space after the confession...


OK!😉
Yeah... A personal space😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 23:


asad n zoya: gud night

viana, julie n jannet: gud night n sweet dreams ... they giggle n leave

zoya first goes into the room n waits aside ... asad gets in n locks the room !

their hearts pick up pace as the door is locked

asad slowly goes n sits on the bed

asad: zoe ... why are u standing there ? come here !

zoya slowly moves towards the bed ... shez feeling very shy ☺️

asad was amused at this sight ... his zoe ... soo shy, coz of him 😲?

he never even in his dreams imagined such a situation would arise in his own life ... n hez loving it 😳😆!!

zoya comes n sits on the bed

asad: u can see me zoe, i'm not that bad looking 😉!!

zoya: chuckles ... stop it asad !!

asad: wat to stop ? my boasting ? ... isn't it true ?

zoya: ok, u r very gud looking n handsome ... now satisfied ? ... u want me to praise u right ?

asad: no, my actual intention is to make u talk ... u are acting as if this is our first night 😉😆!!

zoya: asad 😡? she hits him with the pillow... n he tries to escape

he runs n shez behind him

he suddenly stops n turns towards running zoya ... n she collides with him ... his strong arms n rooted legs managed to stop her running !

now they are just few inches apart ... their bodies trembling at the closeness ... zoya lowers her gaze 😳

asad: ( he whispered into her ears )why are u feeling so shy zoya ? ... u were not this before 😕!

zoya didn't answer ... he takes her to bed n makes her sit

zoya: i donno asad ... i'm feeling all tensed n something is different !

asad: i loved that zoya whoz always fighting with me n too comfortable with me 😳

zoya: even now i'm comfortable asad !!

asad: wat comfortable ? ... he leans closer to her n takes her hand in his

zoya turns her head as he leans onto her n hesitates wen he takes her hand

asad: see ... is this called comfort 😡? ... u were even comfortable sleeping with me 😉n now ... u r uncomfortable at small closeness !

i want that zoya who hugs me, kisses me n sleeps with me without inhibitions !!😳😳

zoya: this is not discomfort asad, but i'm getting tensed n new feelings are arising within myself which i'm not understading

asad: i know that equation btw us has changed from friends to lovers, but that doesn't mean ...u've to change ... for this new relation btw us !

i'm not asking u to be romantic n neither i'm going to be romantic ... ok ?⭐️


so, feel free as before ... u'll feel different for sure, but enjoy it like me😉


come ... lets sleep ... it's been soo many days that i've not slept properly !

( i know ... i'm a killer of romance ...😆😆 but wat to do ? i don't think i'm doing a better job in writing romance, so ... i had cut it

but if u guys feel that this is nice, i'll try to improve myself ...really !! ... n i'll write romantic updates as everything has sttled for our couple to romance 😉😳😳 )

zoya: why didn't u sleep well ?

asad: coz u were coming in my dreams !!😳

zoya: wat is that ? ... a compliment or a sarcasm ?😉

asad: watever u think !😆

zoya: u stupid 😡!!

asad: ok done ... i got my scoldings ... so, shall we sleep now ?😉

zoya: ok

they both sleep ... n asad was back hugging zoya ... a smile of content on their lips !

zoya wakes up the next day to find herself in his arms

she held herself above him n kisses on his forehead😳

asad immediately opens his eyes

zoya was shocked n tries to get up ... But he holds her

asad: where are u going ?

zoya: please leave asad, we should go

asad: how many times wil u kiss me while sleeping ? kiss me wen I'm awake !😉

zoya: wat 😲?

asad: I know that u kissed me in our room that morning😆

zoya closes her face with her palms suddenly, making her fall on him completely !

asad: if u hide like this, then I'll give my return gift wherever I want😳😳😆

zoya: shut up asad ! ( she gets up) ... How did u know that I kissed u 😡?

asad: coz ... ur lipstick made it's mark n all ur efforts were in vain !😆

but wat u donno is ... I returned that kiss also, but u donno as u were really asleep then 😉!

zoya: wat ...? U kissed me wen I was asleep ? how could u asad ? ... We were friends right ... How can u kiss a friend whoz sleeping n trusts u soo much 😲?

asad: wait wait !! ... Then wat were u doing with me on that day ?😆

zoya: u r a boy n I'm a girl asad ... !😡

asad: but we both have same feelings for eachother even then ! ... It just took time to realize 😉!

also ... I just kissed u once while u were sleeping, but who knows how many times u've kissed me while I was sleeping ? ... Poor me, missed all those 😆!

it was my gud luck that I was awake that day ... Else, who'll know that this girl can actually kiss her best friend 😳?

zoya: it's soo mean ... Asad !! I also kissed u only once !

asad: wat abt now ?

zoya: ok, twice 🤢!!

they both freshen up n bid farewell to viana, Julie n jannet !

they later met suresh n then in train to be back to their homes

zoya: r u sure they'll be fine with us ?

asad: zoe, wat they all wanted was to get us married n we are ok with it ... So, they'll accept us, don't worry !!

they reach the station n then in their home ...

They both stand in the hall n their parents sit opposite to them !

Questioning session starts ...

Parents: where did u both go ?

Zoya: actually, we both went to delhi to avoid our marriage !

Parents: we know that ... Tel us where u went

Asad: actually, we went to delhi n also met our old friends there !

Zoya's mom: we have taken another decision for you both n this time ... U both wil just love it !! ... It's a surprise for u both !!

Zoya: mopm, does that mean ... U all are not angry with us ?

Parents: not at all ... We've understood that we should not have forced u both to marry eachother, else ... All these would not have happened !!

Asad n zoya: it's ok dad n mom, u know wat ... this has helped us a lot n we should thank u to do this !

Parents: are u both ready for the surprise ?

Asad: actually, we both also have a surprise for u all !

Zoya: first we'll tell the surprise !

Parents: no, since we've hurt u, we'll mend it first !

Asad n zoya: ok !😃

Parents ... here u go ... They raise the curtain

Zoya n asad were just looking at the surprise !

Wait till next Monday for the surprise to reveal 😉!

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this story wil be updated every monday !!
check out my new story ...

On my wedding day ...
Married a stranger instead of my bride !!

Lemme know if u liked it !!

Buddy me for my pm's !!

I'll only pm to those who'll comment and like ... !!


reyna

reyna's index: fusion of ff's , girl's corner n kid's corner !!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3762857/reynas-index-fusion-of-ffs-girls-corner-n-kids-corner


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Posted: 11 years ago
yupe...me first on your update🥳
its just awesome 👏👏

but you cut off romance part😭😭

i love the romance part😳😳

as asad teasing zoya😆😆 in the morning 😉😉

loved it😃

as now they happy to share these news with their parents😃😃 but finger cross 😕😕 hope they not got surprise from their parents😆😆

i think u think to add new twist😉😉 hai na😆😆

ok over all its just lovely update😊

love you

ruhi😃
Edited by 11sinal - 11 years ago
ruhiluvzaya thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
rockstar_16 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...
awesome
i loved it
whats the surprise ????? tell me ...tell me...
i m so excited😉
please continue soon
Edited by rockstar_16 - 11 years ago
shreya11mehra thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Surprise. ..
Tell me na


AWESOME UPDATE
ankitabaran thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG!! whole one week...such a long time yr for the surprise.
Ok thanks for pm and pm me next one.

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow an interesting update..
wonder wat is the surprise...
luv it...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update!!
u shud have continued the romance part..it was adorable!
asad teasing zoya was cute!
wat is that surprise now?..dont tell me the parents decided that they shud marry someone else!😲
eager to know!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey awesome update...
Was waoting for ot..
I just loved it..
Specially the morning teasing... nah even u cut off d romance it looked good..
Why is zoya scared? I like them wen they rin friendly mood..
Okat so dey r back to their homes...
Now will they surprise them or their parents...
I cant predict anything coz u r just mastermind, coz i remember wen it was abt the truth revealed to vianna , v all expected it to b bitter but it turned to be the sweetest...
Reyna u shud have not id it cliffy, miss cliffy princess...
Now i will have to wait for a week..
O god wats wrong wid u reyna..
Now i will have to wait..
Update soonishest

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