MG NEW SS SHATTERED HEART, PT-10,PG -64, MAR'22,2015 - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the innocent geet nice part dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
feel bad for her...

nobody is there for her...except maan of course...
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved both the parts
geet is in love with maan but dont want him to know as she think she is not worth him
hate that maya and simi😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
plz update soon di 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nalini
Please update it soon
I m waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
poor geet she was feeling so uncomfortable in the office
its so sad that people never try to be considerate or helpful towards someone new instead try n insult n humiliate that person

but maan saved her but then again even he removed his anger on her without listening to her

waiting to see what he does now n will geet meet yash or not???
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Posted: 11 years ago
please update this one too Nalini
please😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
I like ff geet is very innocent maan as alwys
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Posted: 11 years ago





THANKU FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS AND LIKES FRIENDS..LOVE U ALL



SORY FOR TE DELAY
Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago
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-7


GEET was sitting in te garden after her dinner, as she don't have any work nor any one to talk, so she just sat on te swing thinking abt her life and her brother how she will search him, she want to go from here at any cost, she cant live her like a stranger and more over She cant face Maan . she was lost in her thought


She saw Maan's car enter, BG open te car and driver took him out, Nakul came rushing to hold him. Geet was confused to see everyone trying to hold him, she got worried thinking he got injuryed, she rush to see him, but shocked to see a drunken Maan who was not in conscious


Nakul : we will take him to outhouse

They took him to out house, Geet too followed him, she really didt think Maan will drink, she only saw a well mannered and responsible person, but now , wat made him to drink or he Is like tis is she have assumed him wrong, she just followed them

Nakul took him to one of te room and lyed him on te bed , removing his shoes. Maan was blabbering something

Maan : Im sory Geet, I should't have shouted at u

Geet was shocked to hear her name

Maan : uncle Im sory , I didt keep ur promise

Geet know he was thinking abt te incident wat happen in kc, and felt bad for him, her angry and hurt was vanish in air seing him

Nakul patted him : it ok Maan babu Geet didt took it bad , u sleep

Maan : no she is hurt I saw in her eyes

Nakul : no baba she is not now u sleep

Maan : no she is she is, blabbering he slept

Nakul covered him with te duvet, off te light , closed te door and both went out

Geet : Nakul kaka Maan sir will drink

Nakul signed : no baby till he lost Drasti baby, he was not like tis

Geet : drasti , she heard tis name wen she came to km, and today in kc too tat lawyer said abt tis name, they sat on te steps

Geet : who is drasti

Nakul : she is Raj sir and , looking at Geet , Sonali mam's daughter


Geet : were is she

Nakul : she is no more

Geet got shocked : wat

Nakul : yes baby she is no more, she died in a car accident two month before Raj sir came to meet u

Geet :wat

Nakul : yes baby , Maan sir loved Drasti


Geet was shocked and heart broken into pieces hearing tis news , he loved Drasti , tears welled up but she hide it before Nakul saw her

Nakul : Maan baba lost his parents wen he was 5 years and from tat time Raj sir and Sonali mam only took care him

Geet felt bad for him

Nakul : wen sonali became pregnant, Maan baba will hold her tummy and talk to te baby for hrs, after she born, he is te one who hold her first as Sonali mam was unconscious . He love her so much, he pampered her , And Drasti too was so much attached to him, for each and everything she will cum to Maan baba. They grow and Maan baba's love for her also growed Seeing they bonding, all thought to tie them and Maan baba went to london for his studies , tat time Drasti baby changed a lot

Geet : wat happen to her

Nakul : coz of her friends circle she became a total spoil brat , till Maan baba was there no one came near her,were she goes Maan baba will take her but after he left she became lonely and her friends took advantage of it and drag her to party , disc and made her to drink. She will drink and cum home late. Dadimaa hide all her mistakes from Raj sir and she too totally spoiled

Nakul : then one day Maan baba came ,and he was so much excited to see Drasti but she started to avoid him and insult him and slowly slowly she breaks his heart. She will say he is not upto her status and Maan baba changed himself for her

Geet felt sad for him, she know how it will pain wen one's love didt have value for te other

Nakul : she had many bfs, and Maan baba thought to go away from her life for her good, Raj sir want her to do medicine but she was not interested and they will be always arugment between Raj sir and Drasti baby , and one day, his heart chocked

Geet : kaka

Nakul : one day there was a big fight between Raj sir and Drasti baby, as she was in love with some one and Raj sir denied saying he is not a good person, but Drasti baby left te house and after some time we got a call from Drasti baby , she said tat her bf rohan have betrayed her and she asked sory to everyone and Raj sir asked her to cum home, but destinty have took her away from us, she have meet with an accident and died

Tears were flowing from Geet's eyes hearing tis, she felt bad for all , not only her even Maan ,sir , Sonali mam all have went through so much, but they hide they pain and behaving normally with her ,



Nakul : from tat day Maan sir engrossed himself in his work and started to drink, he cant forget Drasti baby , he loves her so much. seeing him Sonali mam and Raj sir cried thinking they have spoiled Maan baba's life , Raj sir cant see Maan baba like tis, so he went out and one day he came to meet u and after tat u know wat happen

Nakul too cried thinking tat horrible day: Maan baba loves Raj uncle so much, he have did everything for him and Maan baba too loves him and his one word is his life..

Geet consoled him : kaka

Nakul : I dont know baby wen will km get his light, it lost its happiness , all living just for name sake, all are burden with they pain, wen it will cum to end I don't know .

Geet : kaka I didt think they went through so much, I thought only my pain is bigger but they lost everything and Maan sir lost his parents in his childhood , how painful it will for him

Nakul : yes baby and pls don't think bad abt dadimaa she is a very good person, she only brought up Raj sir, she loves him more than her own kids but wen she came to know he betrayed her daughter she cant bear it tats why she is showing her frustration on u

Geet : I know kaka , If I was in her place I will also behave like her, who can bear her daughter's sautan daughter , no one, I know wat is going in her heart

Nakul smile at her : ok cum lets go to sleep

Geet : kaka whose house is tis

Nakul : tis is outhouse baby, if any guest comes, they will stay and most of time Maan baba will stay her wen he is working late night or wen he is drunk

Geet : hmm, she saw a small room there and went out

Geet in her room and thinking abt wat nakul said, she cant sleep thinking wat they all went through, yes she too lost so much in her life. Till now she thought rich peoples will not have any pain, but here, she was feeling sad for Maan how he have beared everything she know its wrong to think abt him, but wat can she do wen her heart again and again roaming around him.


Wen she heard abt Maan , she felt like hugging him and take away all his pain, but she cant she was helpless, tears wet her face, and she was crying for him, who have touched her heart for te first and last time. yes he still love Drasti tats why he is like tis , but tat day he said ok to Dadi, or im assuming , but wat ever he loves Drasti..her heart was paining thinking abt it

Even in his unconscious mind he is thinking tat he hurt her, and asking sory how nice he is , why Babaji u testing nice peoples always. Yes she have decided she will do wat ever he say , even it give pain to her , till she stays her, but after tat she will live in his memories. She wipe her tears and went to sleep praying for Maan's good

Morning,

Geet wake up as some knocking her door, she took her duppatta and covers her As she opens te door she was confuse to see servant enter her room with so many sets of dresse

Geet : wat is tis

Servant : Maan sir ask us to keep tis in ur room

Geet : hmm,

Servant : mam tis one sir ask u to wear today

Geet : wat is tis

Servant : don't know mam

Geet : ok, they left

Geet saw her wardrobe have fully arranged with new dresses, she know it will be very costly, she have not imagined like tis dresses in her dream too, she don't know tat like tis dresses are there in real. In her childhood too she craved to wear new dresses as her friends will be wearing on occasion, they are not rich but compare to her they were, for birthdays and festival they will be wearing new dresses but she only wear faded uniform, many times she will be crying and her mom will console saying angels wont wear new dress , she will accept, but later wen she grows she understand wat her mom is trying to say and she also didt ask her any things and buried all her wishes inside her heart


she went and sat on te bed and looking at te packet Maan gave, she opens it and saw a brown sari, she was confused to see it , why Maan brought all tis for her, is he thinking he have hurt me , but how I will wear tis dress, some one knocked her door again, she open and saw Maan standing with his head down

Geet : sir u

Maan : can I cum in

Geet : ji , wo and she moved and Maan came inside

Maan : Geet im sory for yesterday

Geet didt let him speak : Maan sir I know why u shouted seeing me in torn dress u have reacted , u said naa im ur family so wen ur family members get hurt we will get worry so I didt feel bad,


Maan was shock to hear her words here he is trying to apologed her but she, made him relax , his heart soothed hearing her words

Maan : really u were not anger on me

Geet : no Maan sir

Maan : Geet thanku so much

Geet : its ok sir

Maan hesitated : wo , Geet today there is a party u have to attend

Geet : party but how I , wo I mean they will ask me

Maan : Geet tis party is for u, I want to announce u as raj uncle ki beti to te world

Geet was shocked and her face became pale thinking she have to face te world : no Maan sir pls im not cuming


Maan look at her and was felt bad to see fear in her face: Geet

Geet : psl Maan sir I will do anything for u, but not tis pls, I cant face te world as Handa , which only gave me pain nothing else

Maan : psl Geet

Geet : no sir pls no she turned her face


Maan came before her and hold her face in his palms, Geet closed her eyes tears were flowing from her eyes , Maan wipe it with his thumb

Maan : Geet look at me

Geet open her eyes and saw him, his eyes which was full of care and concern

Maan : do u trust me

Geet node yes, she don't know why she accept it ,but she just drown in his eyes and node wat ever he said

Maan : then pls once u listen to me, nothing will happen, I want to give a name to u, and urmila aunty pls

Geet felt overwhelmed hearing urmila from his mouth, and she felt happy, yes she always want to give her mom her identity but she cant , and now Maan is saying he will get tat and she just hugs him, crying. Maan was shocked wen she hug him but he know wat is going through her, he just hugs her and sooth her back, her tears wet his shirt but he just left her to cry till she subside. they were hugging each other and soothing each others pain, why they don't know but they love to be in each other arms, even Maan felt some thing holding her in his arms.


They both felt familiar with they touch, as they both belongs there . They don't want to broke te hug, Geet snuggle more inside him and Maan hold too tightened After some time Geet realize wat she is doing , at once she pulled herself away from him, Maan too don't know why he hugs her, he pushed his hair back,

Geet : im sory wo

Maan : im sory

Both smiled

Maan smiled : no problem Geet I know , get ready by 7 I will cum to take u, and ur dresses are there, saying he turn to leave

Geet wo ji

Maan turn : wat Geet

Geet : I don't want tis dresses

Maan : why Geet

Geet : psl Maan sir

Maan glared at her

Geet : do u feel im not worth in my dresses

Maan got shocked hearing : Geet how can u say like

Geet : then why u brought all tis

Maan : Geet I wont value people with they looks but we have to change to show our confidence

Geet : so if we change our look , a person can be confident

Maan : tis is not te main thing, but one of te thing which shows our confident

Geet staring at him

Maan : Geet any how u have to buy dresses then why u not accepting

Geet : becoz I have not seen like tis dresses even in my dreams , how can I wear tis

Maan closed his eyes thinking tat : Geet, pls wear it for sonali maa, or atleast for me u can do tis naa

Geet look at him, for him, yes she can anything for him, she just nodes her head

Maan :wear tat sari for te party

Geet : no I

Maan got angry : wat, but before he open his mouth, Geet close his mouth


Both were looking at each , her touch on his mouth send shivers to him, she too felt current pass through her, she at once took her hand , fridgetting her duppatta

Geet : wo wo

Maan was watching her

Geet took a long breath : I don't know to wear sari

Maan wants to laugh but controlled and chuckled , Geet showed her puppy face

Maan : no problem Geet I will arrange some one, be ready at 7

Geet node and Maan left smiling

Maan went to dadi's room

Dadi was shocked and angry hearing abt te party and Maan going to announce abt Geet and Urmila

Dadi : who gave u permission to do all tis Maan, don't forget still im te md of kc

Maan : dadi in office work I have not taken any decision without consulting u

Dadi : so u r saying tis is personal so don't interfere , the why u saying tis to me, she was really hurt

Maan sat beside : dadi pls tis is Raj uncle's wish, and Sonali maa also wants tis, she have to get her identity

Dadi : then wat will happen to my daughter's identity

Maan : dadi

Dadi : im not cuming Maan to announce tat tat woman's daughter as my family , who knows she will be also like her mother who waiting to trap u and before she continue

Maan yells at her : Dadi


Dadi was shock to see Maan : tis wat she did, till now u wont talk back to me , but now u see

Maan : im sory dadi

Dadi : u do wat ever u want

Maan : dadi

Dadi turned her face , Maan left her room

Dadi was seeing her retreating figure and crying, why u did tis Raj wat have I done to u , ur punishing my daughter why

Simran's room, Maya came

Maya : simi u too get ready we have to go for party

Simi : party

Maya : yes Maan was arranging a party for tat Geet

Simi : wat party for tat maid

Maya : he is going to announce her as handa

Simi : sow at we are going to there

Maya : hare bagwan ki kasam, tis girl, u will get a chance to be close with Maan, and I will look after her

It was evening, Geet took bath and came out, and some one knocked her door

Geet open and saw two girs standing there

Geet : ji app

Girl1 : Mana sir have sent us to make u ready for te party

Geet got confuse : ready


Girl : yes mam, they enter inside and started to make up Geet. Geet was seeing new new things in her life, she was scratching her head seeing all tis. wen they applied te lipstick, she tasted which was yuck

She was watching them, atlast they asked her to look at te mirror and Geet was numbstuck seeing herself I ten mirror. She was thinking is tis Geet, she was tracing her fingers in te mirror on her image

Girl : mam u r looking so beautiful, actually u don't need any makeup, as ur natural beauty but we just did outline u r looking gorgeous

Geet smiled : thanku

They left, driver came

Driver : mam sir is calling

Geet : hmm,


Geet came out, Maan was shock to see Geet in white sari , he forgot to blink his eyes, he was staring at her,she was walking like angel in white


Geet was feeling nervous In front of him, she pulled her pallu,she cleared her throat ,

Geet : ji

Maan felt embrassed thinking he have been watching her without blinking : hmm lets go

Geet nodes

They left , after some time Maya and simi came and went out

Driver : mam sir ask u to cum in tis car

Simi : wat he left

Driver : yes with Geet mam

Simi and Maya fumed hearing tis, they got into te car and left

PRECAP : PARTY

NEXT PART : 8, PG 49




PRACHI DEAR I HAVE UPDATE TIS SS ..LOVE U DEAR


Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago

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