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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice preview..
Aww Meethi- Priya's bond is very spl..
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice preview... waiting on full update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Superbb update..
Priya na chahte hue bhi Ram se jud rahi hai dobara or kareeb arhi hai uske..Ram's effort nd always trying to be with her nd to see her smiling..good move
Loved Priya- Ram- Meethi's scene..very sweet
Ram is getting jealous too though he didnt noticed that..they re getting close again..
Loved reading it nd progression in the story..
Superbly executed..
Thanx for pm..
Sry for late..




thanks for commenting😊, Ram is falling for her but still couldn't get that emotion, let's see how he get to understand his feelings for Priya, pleasure is all mine
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Posted: 11 years ago
update will be on tomorrow
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hello everyone, ready for RaYa love story?, then here it comes the next part, hope you all will enjoy.


recap

Ram - Priya, kya aaj main tumhe office drop kar sakta hoon? He was dying to hear YES' from her.

Priya thinks for a moment and then said theek hain.




Hearing this Ram smiled and he became very happy. Priya looked at him and can see his glowing face, Ram's face is very transparent and Priya can read him very well. Ahista ahista inn dono me dosti ho rahi hain, Ram ek mauka nahi chhorta hain yeh jata ne ka ke Priya uski dost hain, aajkal toh janaab Priya ka bohot khayal bhi rakhhte hain, uski har ek chhoti chhoti baat ko dekhte hain, now everyday he drops her in the Hotel, har roz lunch ke waqt phone bhi karta hain, kabhi kabhi toh apne favourite dish ka order bhi karte hain lunch box ke liye, Priya ko yeh bohot achha lagta hain, woh yehi toh chahti thi ke Ram usse kuch bhi cheez haq se maange tabhi toh ek rishta aage barr sakta hain. Uss din dinner ke baad Hotel me sabko pata chal gaya hain ki Priya is Mrs. Priya Ram Kapoor. Next day jab woh office gayi toh sab usse aise dekh rahe the jaise ke pehele kabhi nahi dekha, she was feeling little awkward lekin woh samajh gayi ke baat kya hain. She was working in her laptop when Rishi entered along with others and they stand in front of her, Priya samajh gayi yeh log kyun aaye hain, Priya was about to say when Anjali said,


Anjali - tumne yeh baat humse kyun chhupayi?


Lily - I still can't believe this


Rishi - yaar tum toh matlab...


Disha - tumne toh Sir ko bhi nahi bataaya hain?


Shaheen - peheli hi din se I was just thinking ke maine tumhe kahaan dekha hain, lekin I couldn't make it out


Rohan - Priya, this was indeed a big surprise for us


Priya was just listening to all of them, they were saying turn by turn, and was not giving her chance to speak, after Rohan completed Priya said


Priya - ab main kuch bolu?


Rishi - tumhe abhi bhi kuch bolna baaki hain?


Priya - haan, after some pause she said, guys maine kuch nahi chhupaya tumlogon se, tum logon ne mujhse kabhi poocha nahi aur maine isi liye kuch bataaya nahi, bas that's it.


Shaheen - I saw you on the news, we saw you and Mr. Kapoor in your reception party, that is why I was wondering ke I have seen you before.


Anjali - guys I still can't believe that we are having Mrs. Ram Kapoor with us...


Priya - its true that I am Mrs. Ram Kapoor, but in my work place am just Priya Kapoor who is an employee of this Hotel, nothing more. Guys please aisa kuch bhi mat sochna, am still your one of the team members and a friend to you all, bas.


Lily - Priya, I want to know the story, tum aur Mr. Kapoor, I mean how did your story started?


Disha - me too wanted to know


Rohan - usse pehele we all want a treat from you, itni badi baat hum sabko na bataane ki punishment hain yeh treat, manzoor hain?


Priya smiled and said, okay manzoor hain lekin usske liye mujhe thoda waqt chahiye, treat agar kal mile toh chalega?


Rishi - kyun?, kal kya khaas hain?


Priya - kuch khaas nahi hain, bas main ghar se kuch banake laungi


Lily - splendid, mere liye toh daudega


Disha - theek hain done, lekin story aaj hi sunani paregi


Priya again smiled and said theek hain lunch me bataayungi lekin ab thoda kaam karle hum sab?


All laughed and went back to their respective work.


Bas Priya ki zindagi aise hi chal rahi hain, office, kaam, colleagues, presentations, ghar, family ke sab log aur RAM, yes ahista ahista Ram bhi Priya ke raang me apne aap ko raang rahe hain. Aajkal woh kamra chhup nahi rehta hain, hamesha inn dono ki baatein uss kamre me sunaayi deti hain, Ram ko kabhi bhi itni care pasand nahi tha, lekin Priya ki chhoti chhoti cheezon ko leke care karna usse achha lagta hain, Ram ko aaj bhi kabhi kabhi late ho jate hain lekin koshish karte hain ki late na ho. Priya waits for him aur yeh baat Ram ko kahin na achha lagta hain, though he himself asked Priya not to wait but still he liked her concern. Abhi bhi Priya bohot kam bolti hain par unn dono me baatein hoti rehti hain.


Amidst all these Neha came to Kapoor Mansion, in fact Natasha ko help chahiye thi toh she came for that and she stayed for couple of days here. Iss baar Neha ne Ram aur Priya ki rishte me badlaav dekha aur usse bohot achha laga yeh dekh ke. She saw Ram's care and concern for Priya. Neha ko bhi fursaat nahi thi baatein karne ki lekin usse Priya se bohot baatein karni hain toh on that weekend both of them thought for spending some time together aur Priya bohot ache se janti hain ki Neha loves shopping toh both decided they are going to meet in Bloopers Mall. Priya came out a bit early on that day and waited for her in the caf word of the mall. After 15 minutes of her wait Neha appeared and before they can hit both hugged each other tightly. Pehele din se hi inn dono me ek ajeeb bond ho gaya tha, jitna Neha Priya ko like karti hain utna hi Priya Neha ko dost manti hain, they never behave like a bhabhi-nanad way, Neha se yeh hota hi nahi aur Priya ne bhi kabhi iss bare me socha nahi. Yeh dono aise gale mil rahe hain jaise maano saadiyon ke baad mil rahe hain, ghar par toh roz mulaqaat hoti hain lekin nahi usse indono ka jee nahi bharta hain, Gawwwd! they are both CRAZY.


Neha - yaar kitne dino baad hum dono yun akele mil rahe hain


Priya - aisa mat bolo Neha, agar sab sunenge toh kya kahenge, hum dono roz ek dusre ko milte hain...


Neha - milte hain lekin aise toh nahi na


Priya laughed at her sweetly.


Neha - chalo, pehele shopping karte hain, mujhe kuch branded sarees khareedni hain, tumhare liye bhi


Priya - areee mujhe nahi chahiye, already mere paas bohot hain


Neha - toh kya hua, aaj main keh rahi hoon toh tum logi, bas


Priya - yaad hain Amritsar me bhi tumne aise hi kiya tha


Neha - yaad hain aur yeh bhi yaad hain ke tumhe manane ke liye mujhe kitni koshish karni padi thi, lekin iss baar bhi main kuch sunnewali hoon nahi, areee common yaar Kunal aur Meesha ki shaadi ka anniversary hain toh we all need to look gorgeous na


Priya - kiski anniversary?


Neha - Kunal aur Meesha, ohhh ho!, arrree yaar yeh log mere aur fatty ke dost the college me aur phir baad me business ke silsile me hum logon ne saath saath kaam kiye hain, aaj hi invitation aaya hain, fatty ke paas, next Wednesday is the party, toh am staying back aur waise bhi mera abhi kuch kaam baaki hain.


Priya - that's good news ke tum abhi bhi ek haafta aur ho lekin Vikram ka kya hoga?, this she said her teasingly


Neha - don't worry he is not in town, he has gone to Goa, aane me abhi bhi waqt hain.


Priya - kahin se missing dearly ki smell aa rahi hain


Neha's face frowns and she said haan yaar, am missing him very much, next moment she understood Priya's teasing and said in pseudo anger toh kya agar main apne husband ko miss kar rahi hoon, haq banta hain mera


Priya came and hugged her lightly and said, tum aise sad face me bilkul achhi nahi lagti


Neha smiled and said, janti hoon aur isi liye toh shopping aayi hoon, toh agar aapka ho gaya hain madam toh kya hum chale


Priya smiled and took her arms in her and said ab chalo, saying both laughed unanimously.


Neha and Priya came to a branded garments shop, actually as Neha deals with garments section of KI, she has the knowledge of the texture and material. Both Neha and Priya were gowing through designer sarees, while Neha chooses for herself she did for Priya too, but Priya was very much apprehensive about it, not exactly the saree but of its blouse but Neha is after all Neha, she convinced her and they bought that. After few more rounds of shopping and window shopping they came to the cafeteria and had a cup of coffee and then came back to KM.


On the dinner table Ram told everyone about the invitation and Neha said that she will be staying another week to help Natasha for the project. Rishabh said that he will not be there as he has some other plans that evening, so as Natasha too backed out.


Ram - Neha tu toh chalegi na?


Neha - haan I will come, aur Priya bhi hamare saath hi chalegi, Kunal ne toh with spouse invite kiya hain na?


Ram - haan, I wish Vikram yahan hota


Krishnaji - Neha, Vikram wapaas ka baa raha hain?


Neha - kuch kahan nahi exactly


Priya - tum ek baar call kar ke dekh lo


Neha - karungi.


Ram - ok then its final Wednesday sharp @8.


After the dinner Priya was in the room making the bed when Ram came out from the washroom saw Priya was preparing her couch


Ram - tum kyun uss couch pe soti ho?, tumne hi toh kahan tha ki tum mujhe trust karti ho, toh phir...


Priya turned to him and said main abhi bhi aap ko trust karti hoon lekin mujhse iss bed pe soya nahi jayega


Ram - kyun? Priya hum dono dost hain hain toh kya bed share nahi kar sakte hain?


Priya - nahi...hearing her Ram looked at her, but Priya changed her way and said, mera matlab hain ki baat woh nahi hain, its just am not comfortable on the bed.


Ram sighed and said jaise tumhe theek lage, waise thanks tumne haan kahan party me aane ke liye


Priya - Neha keh rahi thi ke Kunal aur Meesha aap dono ki college ke dost hain


Ram - haan actually dost toh mere the lekin Neha ke saath sabki dosti thi khaas kar ke mere saare dost uske bhi the.


Priya - Neha ne mujhe bataya hain ke kaise aap college me uska khayaal rakhhte the


Ram looked at Priya and said Priya I believe to treasure women, to treat them with the utmost care and love, they are the most prescious one in a man's life.


Priya upon hearing him looked at him and saw something else in his eyes, some very deep and serene. For moments she kept looking at him and then came to the washroom. They both drifted but Priya kept thinking about his last words.


Next day was Sunday, toh Ram and Priya were in Pune, and they are invited by Rajat and Shruthi over lunch, so both of them has left for Pune in early morning. Shruthi was in her last trimester, she wanted to meet Priya so she invited Ram and Priya in lunch. Priya too wanted to meet her but ho nahi paa raha tha toh isi lunch ke bahane usse mulaqaat bhi ho jayegi. It was a sunny morning, the weather was cool outside, the car was going through National Highway, Priya was wearing a lemon yellow coloured salwar kameez. Ram was wearing black jeans with white shirt, his eye gear was on. Both of them weren't chatting, Priya was in her own mind and Ram was driving and looking front, but his mind was all about Priya. After some time he said,


Ram - agar main music on karu, will you have any problem?


Priya was enjoying the scenes outside, turned to him and saw Ram was waiting for her answer, she nodded her head.


Ram tuned the music player and his favourite song started to play. Ram wanted to talk to her but can't understand what to start with?, after some moments he asked,


Ram - tumhara favourite singer kaun hain?


Priya looked at him and said Kishore Kumar, Mohd. Rafi aur Manna Dey


Ram - aur females me?


Priya - Lataji, Ashaji aur Shreya Ghoshal


Ram - tumhara aur mera list kaafi similar hain, after some moments he again said purane film songs ki baat hi kuch aur thi, mujhe toh bohot pasand hain


Priya didn't say anything.


Ram again lost his words, Priya kuch bol hi nahi rahi hain, he wanted to know about her but she isn't opening her up. He wanted to know her likes, dislikes, her choices, her favourites and wanted to share his too but she is not in mood to open up.


They came in Pune and Priya asked him to stop the car.


Ram - kyun?, tumhe kuch chahiye kya?


Priya - mujhe Shruthi ke liye kuch lena hain, main abhi aati hoon, saying this she came out from car.


Ram - I will also come with you


Both RaYa came in Kakatiya Halwai, one of the famous sweetshop in Pune. Shruthi loves to have sweets specially kaju katli, so Priya packed some of her favourite sweets and some naamkins also. They came back in the car and they came straight to Little Angels. The children were very happy seeing their Priya di along with Golu uncle. While Ram played with them, Priya came inside to meet Meethi. She was playing with her doll when Priya came to her; she jumped and came to her. Priya scooped her in her arms and kissed her cheeks then made her sit on her lap.


Priya - meri Meethi kaisi hain?


Meethi - main achhi hoon, Golu uncle nahi aaye?


Priya - aaye hain, aapne apna homework kiya?


Meethi - kiya


Priya - toh phir dikhao?


Meethi came down from her lap and brings her copy and gave to Priya. She took the copy and again placed Meethi on her lap and opened the copy. Apne chhote chhote haathon se Meethi ne bade pyaar se likha hain alphabets ko. Priya was checking her copy when Ram came inside, seeing him Meethi came running to her Golu uncle, Ram scooped her in his hug.


Ram - aapki di kya kar rahi hain?


Meethi - Priya di ne mujhe home home home and Meethi stammers couldn't pronounce it


Ram smiled and said home work


Meethi - haan homework diya tha


Ram came close to her ear and said aapne finish kiya hain na?


Meethi - haan kiya


Ram - very good girl saying this he took out the chocolate and gave her.


Meethi in return gave him a sloppy kiss on his cheeks.


Priya - Meethi idhar aao


Ram put down her and she came to Priya.


Priya caressed her silky her and said aapne toh bohot achha homework kiya hain, very good.


Meethi gave her a mesmerizing smile. Priya took her in her hug and keep loving. Ram saw both of them and he smiled in his heart.


Meethi - Priya di kya shaadi ke baad ladkiyon ko chale jaana parta hain?


Priya for moments kept looking at her and then said aapko kisne bataaya?


Meethi - Ranjita di bata rahi thi, meri gudiya ki shaadi hain toh bol rahi thi ke woh mujhe chhod ke chali jayegi, kya sach me chali jaati hain?


Priya makes Meethi sit on her lap again and said haan Meethi har ladki ko shaadi ke baad apne saasural jana parta hain, apne ma papa ko chhod ke


Meethi - aap bhi chhod ke chali gayi ho?


Priya - haan main bhi gayi hoon


Meethi - par main apni gudiyan ko nahi bhejungi kahin


Priya - yeh reet hain Meethi, har ladki ko jana parta hain, ek din tumhe bhi jana parega.


Meethi hugged her tightly and said main nahi jayungi aap ko chhod ke saying this she started to cry. She normally doesn't cry but today felt fear of loosing her Priya di. Ram was listening to them and he slowly came and took Meethi in his arm and made her sit on his lap and said,


Ram - Meethi hum na aapke rajkumar ko yahin le aayenge aur unhe kahin nahin jaane denge, theek hain


Meethi was still crying but was listening to Ram with her big eyes.


Ram - aap nahi jayengi balki woh rahega aapke saath yahan, tab toh chalega na


Meethi smiled though her eyes were still full of tears, she said aap sachhi bol rahe ho?


Ram - sachhi muchhi, ab aap rona band karo saying this he wiped her tears.


Meethi - mera rajkumar kaisa hoga? she asked innocently to Priya.


Priya smiled out heartily and kissed her small palms and said bohot achha hoga.


Meethi - Golu uncle ke jaisa?


Priya for moments kept looking at Meethi and then said haan aapke uncle ke jaisa.


Ram immediately says nahi Meethi aapke rajkumar mujhse bhi achha hoga.


Meethi - sachhi, lekin aapse achha kaise hoga, aap toh sabse ache ho, saying this kept her small head on his chest and tried to embrace him in her small hug, Ram tighten his arms around her and said Meethi, I will pray that you get best in your life, saying this he placed a soft kiss on her silky hair.


Priya watched them, jab bhi woh Ram ke saath Little Angels aati hain usse Ram ka ek alag hi roop dekhne ko milta hain, bohot ajeeb lagta hain usse, Priya yeh do Ram ko compare nahi kar pati hain, ek alag insaan maano lagta hain aankhon ke samne aa jata hain, ek hi insaan itna alag kaise ho sakta hain, yehi baat woh soch rahi thi when they came in Rajat and Shruthi's house. With the sudden jerk of the car, Priya came out of her trance and saw they have reached Rajat's house. Ram came out while Priya too came out and they both came inside the house. Rajat and Shruthi were waiting for them, they welcomed Ram and Priya.





Guys in the previous part RaYa ki honeymoon ki baat chheri gayi hain, so I want from you all the destination name, suggest some places, where should we sent our RaYa for their honeymoon, kya pata isi bahane Ram propose bhi kar de apni ladylove ko?, so guys plz help me in this. If you all like the part then do hit the "LIKE" button and leave your valuable comments.
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Posted: 11 years ago
sweet updt dear 😛
the relation is progressing so beautfully
ram is trying to find out her likes and dislikes madam ji
is dodging him 😉
achaa hain aur bhi satao ram ko
uske baad pyaar hona chahiye 😛
cont soon😃
Edited by .sangs123. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb part...!!!!
love ram's character when he's in little angels...!!

good to see raya bond growing...!!!
meethi again a show-stealer...!!! 😛

contn soon...!!!
thnx fr the pm...!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thx for the pm.
Dheere dhheere dheeme dheeme baat aage badh rhi hai, well good progression.
Loved priya n neha bond, priya and her college's bond too and their curiousity.
Loved reading priya n meethi scenes, its really adorable n altogether a different ram jo khulke bahar aata hai ram , ram kapor ke andar se. Meethi k cute innocent question s muvvvahhh.
Kahi na kahi priya ram me bass chuki wo kuch bhi karein usse bhaag nhi sakti, kyunki ram k har choti move mein wo usko bahot kareeb aur apna mehsoos karti hai.
I loved the sentence where ram expressed his respect n care for women, isse priya ko toh zaahir si baat hai she feels proud to be being such person's wife ya friend job bhi ho, aise log k saath apna naam judta hai kisi bhi form mein toh one will b proud.
Wo choti choti points where u wrote about halwayi, kaju katli, designer blouse and ram insisting priya to sleep on the bed, and priya telling her collegues she will give treat but it would be her preparation, n homework so much beauty it added loved.


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Posted: 11 years ago
Very cute and lovely update. Good bonding btwn Priya and Neha. As usual Meethi is a star.⭐️ Found Ram a bit emotional with Meethi. Kuch alag sa laga mujhe. I cant pinpoint what it is!
Please continue soon.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
continue soon
thanks for pm

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