Secrets du coeur ||Swaron FF|| Update page 21 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
beautiful start to the ff ...i really loved the chapter...emtions were,beautifully penned ...sharon cheated on swayam.swayam still loves her...waiting for the update ...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
wowww... its superb... interesting... plz update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
I liked the concept of this SS 😛. The prologue Sharon betrayed Swayam and kissed some other guy . Chapter 1st was amazing, Swayam still loves her And the ending dude 😲 I hope sharon is fine. P.S. Thanks for the pm. I really appreciate it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Awesome nicely expressed their POV'S
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Nice start...
Waiting to read further.
Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is amazing story...i can speak many great things about this but words are just not enough to praise you...you know i want updates on this work at rapid pace because as soon as ch 1 ended i felt damm i want more...great work...i bow down to you...

Do update soon...

Pratik...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank You Everyone For Your comments...they mean a lot..:D The second chapter is in process. Please do share this ff with your friends..
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#38
Interesting story...
Please update soon.
Can i get pm's
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Awesome update
Swayam stills love her...
and cliffhanger 😕
pm me for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A/N - Since there are hardly any swaron fans in my pm list , please someone who has time send out the pms on my behalf. :) And yes do comment and like it means a lot. Plus thanks a lot for everyone who commented. I loved your comments.


Part 2


"It's so much darker when a light goes out than it would have been if it had never shone."
John Steinbeck

Swayam was in his cabin , he somehow was feeling restless from the past 3 hours. As if something happened to someone close to his heart. His heart pained as if the old Swayam was going to wake up. He closed his eyes and Sharon's images came in his mind.

He groaned in frustration , and took out his laptop , and started working trying to shrug off the feelings which were arising in his heart. He couldn't concentrate and called Rey to ask him about some work.

Only if he knew that that one call would make him feel as if he did the biggest mistake of calling , bigger than his mistake of falling in love with Sharon. (For him haan not in real)

---

"Rey."

"Re-Swayam! I-I'll ca-call yo-you la-later."

"Dude , what's wrong?"

Before Rey could reply , Swayam heard Kria's crying voice.

"Rey , Please take out the car , the ambulance's going to take a hell lot of time. Please."

Her pleading voice could clearly make anyone understand that how helpless she was feeling , how broken she was. As if she was losing someone close to her , as if someone close to her was dying.

"Swayam! I'll tell you everything later."

Saying this the line went dead.

---

Swayam was restless would be a very big understatement , he couldn't describe his feelings. His mind cried that the person for whom Kria was crying helplessly was Sharon , but his heart it did not believe it , well it did believe but he wasn't at all ready to accept his thoughts.

No matter what Sharon does , even if she stabs him , which she indirectly did , without the physical damage but emotional damage , he can never see her hurt. And he wasn't ready to accept the harsh fact that his mind screamed that Sharon was the person.

He threw the vase on his table harshly. He wanted to scream , wanted to break everything and anything , do whatever he could just to make his mind and heart believe that the person wasn't Sharon.

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For Kria , her breath had come to a big stand still , her best friend lay under the tree , almost dead. She couldn't help but shout and hug Rey. Rey was also numb.

Getting out of the shock , Kria pulled back and ran to Sharon. Sharon's face was bruised , her hands had blue marks on them , her feet almost burned , her clothes tattered , her lip bleeding. It seemed as if her hand was fractured.

"Rey , call the ambulance please!"

They waited for 10 minutes during which Swayam's call came. Losing his patience , Rey picked Sharon up. He then took her to the car , Kria followed him , crying badly. Rey had to keep his calm right now , it was difficult for him to see his sister in this state but if he broke , he wouldn't know what to do.

Placing her behind. And making sure that Kria sat , he started the car , and drove it till the hospital . Picking Sharon up , he entered , from where she was taken to the I.C.U .

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Three hours had passed by since that time , the doctors had been aiding Sharon's bruises and checking how many injuries were there. Rey gave Kria a cup of coffee.

"Why her?"

"Huh?"

"Why does god make her suffer the most. Ussne aaj tak kissi ka bura nahi chaha , and usske saath aaj tak sirf bura hua hain. Why is life so un fair to her Rey? It's all cause of that bloody bas***d! I'll kill him Rey."

"What do you mean Kria?"

Kria realized that she was almost going to blurt out the secret . She shrugged.

"No-nothing. Sw-Rey when will the doctors come out?"

"How do I know sweetheart . Don't worry Sharon will be fine."

"Sure?"

"Of course , she is a fighter na."

Kria nods. Rey knew she was hiding something but shrugged the thought , as he didn't want to bother her as of now. The doctor came.

"Doctor?"

"I am sorry , your friend has been brutally raped by someone and tortured. She has been beaten repeatedly . Her foot is burned , it would be okay within few days , her arm's broken , she has suffered injuries and needs complete rest , medicines will aid these physical injuries , but she is mentally disturbed , either she has been forced to take sleeping pills or she has taken them to die. Make sure you guys keep her happy. I am calling the police."

For Kria , it was as if the cold history was repeating itself , the words the doctor said , they were familiar she had heard them once a bit altered though. But this time , she was very much shook , her best friend had suffered so much.

Rey didn't know what to say as a matter of fact how to even react in this situation. The girl whom he treated as his sister was so brutally treated. Even the thought of someone hurting his sister made his heart boil. As of now he knew one thing , they had to bring her out of the trauma , by hook or by crook.

His thoughts were broken by the sound of his phone ringing. He looked at his phone , and saw Swayam's no flashing. He just couldn't speak to him now , but with all the joules of energy left in him he picked the call.

"Yes Swayam?"

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Swayam was getting impatient . He couldn't comprehend why he felt so restless , maybe the thought that lingered in his mind , of Sharon being hurt. He looked at the clock. It had been 1 hour since Rey's call had come.

He picked his phone , and dialed Rey's number , his fingers somehow didn't want to press the call button. His mind was skeptical about calling Rey now . Cause he was too scared , too scared to let his thoughts come true.

He wanted to confirm that his mind and heart was wrong , but was too scared with the thought that maybe they weren't. He wanted to shout loud . He looked around the cabin , it was all messed up . He took a deep breath , and trying to shrug off her thoughts , he started clearing the things.

2 hours passed , Swayam's patience was at peak , now he didn't care a damn about his thought. He just took his phone praying to God that it wasn't Sharon.

"Yes Swayam?"

"Who was that person whom Kria was talking about?"

He asked in a breath , sweat beds formed on his forehead , he waited for the answer . Rey's silence was killing him.

"Rey say!"

Finally losing his patience. And after hearing his answer , he knew one thing , god could never be fair with him.

"Sharon."

Swayam's eyes closed , it seemed as if the whole world was revolving around him . The time stopped for him. Rey's voice echoed in his ears. The phone in his hand fell down , and soon he was on the ground , wishing that it was a nightmare , and he would wake up soon.

But it wasn't and he knew it.

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Hope you all liked this update.

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