ASYA FF: BEST FRIENDS TO BEST LIFE PARTNERS # thread 2 # epilogue upd. - Page 24

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 22:

viana: i love you asad ! will u marry me ?

asad: but i need to tel u something viana !

zoya immediately rushes out of her room

zoya: asad !!

all the three are shocked as she shouted his name !

zoya: shut up asad ! what else you wanna tell her ... When she loves you soo much and you yourself are more in love with her !!

asad: who did tell you that I'm in love with her ? is it all your wish to attach me with anyone you want ?

zoya: don't talk rubbish asad !

viana: what's going on here ?

zoya: just give us five min.s in personal viana !!

asad: why are you asking her, if you want 5 min.s in private with me ? come with me ... He drags her into the room and locks it

zoya is still crying but trying a lot to hide her tears

asad: don't ... Don't try to hide them ... Atleast from me ... I can notice them even when they are in your eyes , somewhere hidden !

zoya: you like and love viana a lott ... u are just not understanding it properly asad, ... U love her and I know it better than you ... You get it ?

asad: u are mad ... U are unable to understand ur own feelings on me ... N telling me that I don't know anything !!

zoya: wat does that mean ?

asad: you first tell me ... Why are you crying now ?

zoya: coz u are not listening to me

asad: I'm asking u ... ( angrily ) why were u crying wen u came out of the room ?

zoya was silent

asad: ok, tell me ... Why were you getting jealous of viana ? ... Why did u miss me soo much though I was with u all through the day ? ... Why don't u like wen I praise viana ? answer me ...dammit !!

zoya: yeah ... ( sobs ) yeah ... I was jealous of her, but not anymore ... I was afraid that she'll take my best friend away from me ... But now I realized that u both love eachother n should get married !!

n on that day, I was missing u coz u were only talking with her ... since I used to be there in her place before, I missed u n even today I cried of happiness ... Satisfied ? ... Got all ur answers ?

asad: unbelievable zoe ...!! Wen did u learn to tell soo many lies ?

zoya: these r not lies asad ! ... U tell me , ... It was me who said u to love priya ...right ? ... I was never jealous of her, then why do u think now that I'm jealous of viana ?

asad: I'm not thinking ... It's true !!

u were not jealous of priya coz u know that I don't love her, but u were jealous of sashi and viana as u know that I like them ... N just coz I talk with them closely, u feel that I like them n so ... U r insecure that I might fall in love with them !!

zoya was now realizing that she indeed loved him n wat he said was right, she was crying bitterly now

zoya: so ... u re...really didn't ... lov ... love viaannaa ?

asad: ( a smile creeped on his face ) no zoe, I don't love her ... !!

zoya: ( clearing her eyes from tears ... ) do u love anyone else ?

asad: yeah ... My zoe now came to the point !!

zoya: whom do u love ?

asad: is it necessary to say ? ( he smirks )

zoya: be serious asad, I really want to know whom you love ... !!

asad immediately seales her lips with his ... A new sensation engulfed them ... They were just kissing eachother ...savouring the feelings n the moment !!

asad broke apart ... N looked at zoya who was now as red as tomato !!

asad: did u understand whom I love, or should I get more serious ? ... Is this seriousness sufficient ?

zoya was unable to look at him, this was the first time she ever thought abt something like this n that too with asad ... !!

this is the first time a man, other than her father hadlip lock ... N it was with... Asad, her childhood best friend !

asad: zoe, please look up ... I wanna see ur face ( he chuckles )

zoya feels extremely shy n hides in his chest !

asad hugs her close n they feel comfort in eachother arms !!

a knock at the door disturbs them ... Yeah ... it's viana !

zoya gets sad ...

zoya: it was all my mistake, I did all this ...so, I'll go n apologise n tel her everything !

asad: just shut ur mouth n stand beside me, I'll tell her !

they both go outside to find viana extremely angry

viana: wat were u both doing in the room ?

asad: actually, viana ... I don't love you ... It was a bet btw me n zoya to make u love me !

zoya: I'm extremely sry ... now, I've understood how it feels to be in love n how bad we'll feel if we get rejected, as I experienced it ! ... I'm really really sry for everything viana !

this was never to hurt u, but things turned out like this !

viana: wat ? u've experienced rejection ? ... Didn't asad accept u ?

asad n zoya was shocked at this !

asad: u know that we both love eachother ?

viana: yeah ... I came to know that u were friends wen I saw u dropping zoya near my hotel ... that day I saw u from balcony, but was waiting for u both to brake the ice which none of u did !!

that night itself ... I understood that zoya loves u, but I wantd her to realize on her own ... I liked u asad, but I never loved u !

even now, u r just my friend ... Zoya madam required this much time to realize her love

asad: even now, it was me who made her realize, else, she was thinking that I love u ! I'm really sry viana !

viana: no need to be sry, as I'm really glad to meet such wonderful couple n besties ... I noticed each n every small reactions of u guys !

asad: like ?

viana: someone is too curious to know !!

asad: yeah

viana: that day, u were signaling her if she'z feeling better or not, then the childhood incident, n yeah ... Saree ... I saw u trying to give it to zoya, but I intentionally grabbed it !!

I thought that she'll be out that day itself ...

Trust me zoya, I felt soo sad seeing u cry, n then ... I couldn't stop laughing as u said him that u missed him crying like a small girl !

Zoya: u heard them ? ( shocked )

Viana: I saw them also ... Hihi !! I thought that ... u'll say I love u n u said I miss u !!

Finaaly today, it happened ... else, I should have gone till the wedding cards !

Asad: I wouldn't have given u the chance, as i can never think of taking the huge step without zoya !

Viana: someone is looking like scarlet !!

Viana n asad were amused at this new zoya !

Zoya immediately ran into her room !

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Evening zoya was ready in the same pink saree n asad in his cool jeans, t-shirt n a blazer !!

Viana: u both look so perfect together ... perfect pair !

Asad: thanks dear ! bye ...

They leave for the party of reunion ...

Suresh: hi asad, soo late ? left the room soo early in mornig ...wat did u do till now dude ?

Asad: ( looks at jeeviak beside him ) ... Shall I tell ?

Zoya bends her head n sqeezes his hand ... N then nods her head in negative

Suresh observed this !

Asad: nothing just went out ! lets meet our friends ... why r we wasting our time at the entrance ?

They proceed in ... n meet their old friends ... happiness all around ... Asad n zoya go to their respective friends !

Suresh drags asad to a side ... " wat happened asad ? looking more handsome today ... a new glow in ur's n zoya's face ? "

Asad blushes ...

Suresh: so ... Asad also knows how to blush ... Nice to know ... So ... U r love birds or more than that ?

Asad: thanks suresh ... U made me realize the value of most precious thing in my life ... my zoe !

Suresh: I want to hear it from u also zoya !

Zoya was standing behind asad ... N she immediately goes to the centre of hall calling all the attention

Zoya: hello friends !! it's been a long time we've met n I'm really happy to see u all today ... I know that everyone is very happy, but today ... No one in the world would have been soo happy !

The fear of loosing someone closest to ur heart is deadly n today, I got rid of that ... All thanks to my special friend viana !!

Shez not in this party, but still I wanna say this ... love u viana ... Thanks for givingme my life back ... U'll always be remembered by me forever !!

All the people applause, but 3 people only knew wat she was talking abt ... Asad, suresh n zoya herself !

They enjoy a lott, have dinner n come back to viana's room ...

Viana: how was ur first day as couple ?

Zoya n asad was confused at her question ... " it was nice " asad replied

Viana: oh god ... Don't tell me that no one of ur friends knew that u r a couple !!

Asad: one of my friends know that we r couple, but wats the big deal in it ?

Viana: u both are soo stupid ... U've left a grt opportunity to tell the world abt ur relation, but no worry, as u'll get married ... then they'll know !

Julie n jannet congratulate them

Julie: viana always wanted this ... n we r happy for u both

Jannet: n since it's ur last day in delhi, u both will stay here only ... !

Zoya: ok

They chitchat till 9 pm n so, they all retire to bed

Viana asks asad n zoya to share zoya's room

I'm really sry for the delay ... I missed one Monday update ... So ... I've given u all ... A very long update of the story !!

I guess, many of u knew that I'm a Christian ... N chritsmas is the biggest one for us ... I enjoyed the whole Christmas week n hence the delay !!

My apologies !!

Precap:

Romance ... As per the wish of many of my readers ... !!

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this story wil be updated every monday !!
check out my new story ...

On my wedding day ...
Married a stranger instead of my bride !!

Lemme know if u liked it !!

Buddy me for my pm's !!

I'll only pm to those who'll comment and like ... !!


reyna

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Edited by reyna. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it dear...! It was fab... nd its nt a problem abt d delay...!! Bt v juz loved it...!! nd m surprised by viana...! I thought things will get ugly bt m glad she turned out to be sweet...! Finally they admitted to each other their love...!
eagerly w8in fr ur next update...! Nd a happy new year to u..! 😳

aashka

PS: 😉
ooo cool...! M first...! this is d first tym i've been first in commenting on nything...! 😆
Edited by asyafreva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally ASYA are together... and these 2 silly souls do not understand that their parents realized their love earlier... 😊...
Good you enjoyed Christmas week... Happy New Year in advance...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

waiting for monday...


i've updated !!
enjoy it !
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Orchids--

too gud.. too gud.. too gud.. too gud..

juz luvd d update sooo muchh...👏👏

plzz cont. soon..


thank you !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niyati789

Update !!update !! Update !! Update !! Update !! 😆


sry for delay !
i've updated
have a look 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...😊
tnx 4 the pm...

Happy new year dear...🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Komal_gill

hey reyna...i'm really very-very sorry for commenting late...but what to do...didn't get much time ... it's ok, i understand as i also get late 😆

anyways the update was awesome...u r doing a great job reyna...i'm totally loving this ff...everything about this ff is perfect- the storyline, the dialogues, the variations in characters, the friendship bonding, the ASYA chemistry...everything holds a proper meaning👏 ...thanks a lott !!😳😳
PART 21
OMG viana gave that baby pink saree of asad's choice to zoya...that was totally destined to go to zoya...obviously everything of asad's choice belongs to zoya😉 ...yeah , u got me 😉
i'm damn sure zoya must b looking so pretty..just like a Greek Goddess...I actually searched for some pics of Surbhi in pink saree so as to imagine her better...my god!!! she's so gorgeous😳

oh ! that's grt !
aww zoya ran away blushing...so adorable
I totally loved asad's POV...he truly loves her a lot😳
then arrived the tough situation...to choose among zoya & viana that who's looking better...poor asad😭
and then ASYA's thoughts contradicted...zoya thought that he should choose the one whom he loves..and he thought to say viana's name so as to find if zoya loves him
awww zoya was crying...asad should have hugged her at that mere instant...she must b feeling very bad ... but he can't do that soo easily 😉
I just hope that asad tells the whole truth to viana and ASYA get reunite soon...but that doesn't mean that u r allowed to end this ff any sooner...I want to read it more n more n more...😆 ... i'll try to take it further 😉
in short I loved everything about this update thanks !
update soon
love u😳
love u too ... 😳
reyna

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Update na pls waiting...

Dying to read... pls update reyna...
Its wedesday today .. u update monday na.. cmmon update


sry for late update !
i was celebrating chritmas !
but now, i've updated a very long one 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ramlath

pls pls pls Update soon...
Dying to read... 😭
pls update na dear pls 😭


sry for late update !
i was celebrating chritmas !
but now, i've updated a very long one 😃

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