*SAATHIYA* #3 PART - 37 UPDATED ON 5/1/2014 - Pg 110 - Page 36

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Posted: 11 years ago
ohh no.maanya is kidnepd.precep is too scary. Hope she is f9.maan surely make dt b*** pay 4 snatching his lyf.do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic updates :)
really sad for all three...

hope sab thik ho jaye..
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Posted: 11 years ago
so he is using maanya to get geet...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superbbb updates..
Aayan is back & he wnts Geet to come back to him..
But just loved the way Geet answered him..
Wht the hell..iss kaminene Maanya ko kidnap kiya..
Ab Maan usse nahi chhodega..
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART - 35


MAAN and Geet both broked badly with the kidnap of there Angel. Tears are not leaving eyes just for once. Gloominess today clutches the air of KM. No one will breathing in a peace. Maanya's blabbering, her giggles, her try to speak some broken words, her smile, her kisses and hugs to her papa, her tantrum while eating from Geet,every little memory of Maanya make grew their pain. Geet was shattred and turn lifeless. Maan will also not in different condition,but he have to behave strong for Geet and Dadima to support them. Or else only his heart knows how he will breathing. Some cruel hands snatch his life and now he only wants to reach that man at any cost. Maan leave Geet half concious and call inspector again. He threat him to death and shower his frustration on him. Maan also call comissioner to take fast action. Whole police force came in action on comissioner's order. When he was busy on call Geet's phone buzzed. She have no concious but unwillingly she ans the call.

Loud cry sound knocked her all senses. She came alive again. ''Maanu mera baby. Nahi shona pls dont cry.'' Geet's talk over phone to Maanya.her heart winced in sore. Her part is crying and she wont even able to make her calm.

'sunn liya ya abi or tadpana hai isko?' a strong threatning male voice make Geet's eyes widened.

'Aayan...' her lips droodled and she covered her mouth in shock.

'good that u still remember. Now listen me very carefully if u want to see her alive. Chupchap abi KM se nikalo. Baki inst main deta rahunga and remeber dont tell Maan or else you wont see her again.' Aayan threatened Geet dreadfully and he sucedded in that. Geet falls on floor and pleading for mercy. Aayan cuts the call.


Geet was in trauma. What she do now. For sake of Maanya she decided to go where he summoed her. Mother inside her win over wife and she ran without taking Maan in confidence. Maan came back to room and found her vanish. He turn more tense. Maan calls her but no reply. He search her in whole KM and ask to dadima. No one knows where she is. Maan head is sinning. He already tensed for Maanya now Geet is vanish too. Suddenly he recieve a call from a stranger. Maan's fists tighten and viens in his bieceps become more prominent. His nostrils fluffered. His grip on his phone is increasing like he crushed it any time. Before he utter something call ends. Maan too move in a pace moment outside of the house.

In half an hour Geet reached to a address on which Aayan calls her. She went inside the flat. There was a complete silent and darkness. As she entered a small lamp shade is switch on from a corner and a human figure appered from that side. Geet cleared her vision and glance him.

Geet moved towards him ragefully and trying to slap him but he held her hands in between. He twisted it on her back and tagged her to him. Geet is wriggling. His touch gave her detest feeling. 'where is my daughter Aayan? I came for her only.' Geet asked strongly.

'what so hurry Geet? We met after a long time. Wont you miss me?' Aayan diverting the converstaion with his rubbish talk but having no effect on Geet.

'i said where is my maanu? I have no time for your rubbisht talk and wanna warn you what you have done to Maanya will cost you high. Maan will not leave you.' Geet wont scared and snap him back in recent tone.

Suddenly he turned her and embraced forcily. Geet was in shock what he exactly trying to do. She is shoving him away but he tighten his gripn and whispered if she wont support he will harm Maanya for sure. Geet scared and stop wriggling. Aayan is giving wrong image to Maan. Geet wasnt aware that Maan is exact standing behind her back and watching all this. He called Maan here to create missunderstanding between both so Maan himself leave Geet forever.

'are Maan tum yaha. Chalo achha hai. You saw everything from your eyes. Now there is no need to pretend. Geet still loves me.' Aayan said shamelessly his wicked smile irritates Maan ore. His whole body is burning in anger. Geet wanted to say something but words wouldnt come out. Instead she kept staring at him with her innocent eyes and empty eyes. Maan step ahead. His eyes were never as dark as this time. His stern face and tighten jaw is killing Geet and Aayan smiled wickedly over his win. Maan clenched her arm hardly and pulled her back.

Next he kicked Aayan and make him falls away. He hit gainst the side table and his nose bleeds. Geet scared and Maan hugged her from side.

'Maan main...' Geet wants to clear herself but Maan wont allowed her.

'Geet jaldi se Maanu ko dhoondo is k**** ko main sambhalta hu.' he commands her and she nodded in yes. Before Aayan create trouble for Geet or Maanya Maan again grab him to teach him better.
Edited by richadhami - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART - 36


MAAN pulled him up and pushed aginst the wall. Maan puched him hard on his abdomen. 'tujhe kya laga tu kuch b bolega or main maan jaunga. I trust Geet more then myself. Main samjh gaya tha agr Geet bina btaye yaha aai hai to zarur Maanya tere hi paas hogi.'' Maan revelaed and punched his face. He now pulled him and threw on floor. Maan kicked him hardly till he hears a scream of Geet. Meanwhile police to came there and held Aayan in their captative. Geet come out her eyes sheddin tears more speedily. Maan ran towards her. She is holding Maanya in her arms.


'kya hua Geet tum ro kyu rahi hu?' Maan asked fearly. His heart skips many beats at once.

'Maan maanu jaag nahi rai ye dekhiye na. Ise uthaiye Maan.' Geet shaking her daughter softly. She felt so scared at that moment. Maan quickly take unconcious maanu in his arms.

'wake up baby,see papa aa gaye. Maanu maanu.' Maan snuggled her tightly. He too tried but Maanya's body turn stiffed. She wont make any moment. Maan checked her little feet and and hands but no momnt at all.

'sir aap baby ko hospital le jiaye iski khabar hum lete hai.' Inspector came and suggest them.

Maan took her out furiously,followed by shattred Geet. Both took her hospital speedily. As soon they reached doc took her from them and start their treatment. Maanya wont able to breath properly. Little life bear so much torture from past sevral hours. She was hungry since morning and dont even drink a sip of water for whole day. Aayan make her cried for hours till Geet heared her voice. Maan and Geet seeing thier Angel through glass window. Their eyes swelled seeing Maanaya. Doc made her breath through artificial sources.



Maan embraced Geet to sooth her pain and stregthen her. 'kuchh nahi hoga Geet bhrosa rakho. Kuchh nahi hoga humari Angel ko. We never done wrong to anyone so god will not punish us.' Maan pretending strong but deeply he also scared alot. His every fibre only praying for Maanya's recovery. Doc's gave many injections to her. Maan clenched his eyes in sore. His chest is drenched by Geet's eyes. Doc come out her face dont gave them relief.

'doc how is my daughter?' both asked together.

'dekhiye aap dono pls himmat rakhiye. Hum puri koshish kar rae hai. Kiddnaper ne may b koi intoxic medi.di hai bachhi ko jiske overdose ki wajhse uski jaan pe bann aai hai.' she said in a low voice making long face.

'pls doc i beg u save my daughter.'Geet pleading joining her hands in front of doc,while Maan gesturen turn dreadful suddenly. He leave Geet and an outside. Geet felt scared of him at the moment. She ran behind him but he was waving like wild strom. Geet ran madly but hold by Dadima and Avika.

'beta rukiye kaha bhagi ja rai hai aap or kaha hai humari bachhi?' Dadima asked worriedly.

See her she hugged Dadima. 'dadima maanu I.C.U me hai.' Geet pointed and all 3 ran towrds the ward. Dadima broked down saw her baby going through like this. Dadima hugged Geet and stroked her back. She trying to calming her. 'Geet bete Maan kaha hai?' dadima asked and Geet told her everything. Dadima too turn worried more. There fear is not baseless. Maan do exactly the same that all 3 ladies guessing.

Maan entred in a poloce station like a mad stroam who only leads destruction. He kicked of the gate of lock up where insp.interrogating Aayan. Maan signaled him going out. He bowed in front of him and leave him with Aayan. Maan glared him with his furious eyes and burst on him like volcano. Maan is like a wounded lion this time. He start beating him widly. He clenched his head and hit aginst the bars again and again. He pulled him down and and kick his abdomen brutually. Maan is almost in amood of killing him. 'how dare you torture my angel. Kya bigada tha us nanhi si jaan ne tera. But this was ur last mistake. I wont spare you.' Maan broked almost every bone of Aayan. Insp interfare to save Aayan. His full force intrupts to parted them. Maan is completely out of control. Dadima's phone divert his attention and they suceeded in parting him. Dadima told him about Maanya. Her conditiong going more worst. Maan's feels as someone snatch land bneath his feet. He waved out to see his daughter. He was crying while driving. Suddenly he hear a voice of pray coming from mosque and he stop his car. Maan wants to pray for her. He step towards and saw many ppl were running on fire balls. He astonoished and asked from local man. He told him about the ritual. If some one wants to fulfill his spl wish then he have to walk bare feet on these fire balls. A ray of hope enlightened his heart. He determined to walk on these fire balls for her life's sake. Maan remove his shoes and start waliking on red hot fire balls.



Its paining and burning his feet but least he bother for his pain. Only Maanya's face is swimming in his mind. With every step he took only pray for her life.

In hospital Geet,Dadima and Avika too prayed for their little angel...

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Edited by richadhami - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sooo emotional
Aryan is bas***d
Maanya will be saved her parents love will make her live a long and hapoy life
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Posted: 11 years ago
Emotional part
Poor maanu
Aayan wanted to create mu between maaneet...lekin maan ne usse jail beja
Maan at darga
Hope maanu will be fine soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Too emotional update! Hope Maanya is ok...
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Posted: 11 years ago
35
i should have known it
k******** K****** teri toh
how dare he try to make geet look bad
iss toh chodna mat maan
and geet i know you are a mother sweetie
but what would have happened had maan not come
tell man every thing
how would that creep know if maan knew or not
after all maan can do thing from behind the scenes too
dont spare him maan

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