#T2 ASYA ff:vishwaas note pg93 22/5/14 - Page 41

Created

Last reply

Replies

632

Views

92.2k

Users

46

Likes

917

Frequent Posters

Linsie thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ASYA4eveAAA


kitni baar update bhaiyaa ?




not enough more 👏
Linsie thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ASYA4eveAAA


why u all r thinking only zoya poor infact asad is equaly the convict of situations...look like otherway round...
nope not other way... how can you forget your pregg wife with his first child... so asad love not stronge enough

that day when anah came to KM he treated her formally but when he saw zoya showing attitude and their personal fights to any outsider he became angry ... nope when she needed him the most he show his care to her more then his pregg wife

in this update asad remained angry with zo coz she spoke asad doesn't love her he loves anah n that is wht he cn neva think bout !... well he give chance to zoya think like that... coz for the first time zoya saw asad lied to her...

he only loves zoya thats y he got angry ... but action giving less meaning .. he show anger first and then he apologies... never understand from her POV...

n even zoya keeps behaving like a moody person all the time ...
though shes preggy i cant put whole blame on asad !...
80% i blame asad... only 20% zoya... that also
coz of asad...

zoya shud even understaand him he cares fr her and loves her but she has a doubt that he loves anahida so what asad can do ? ... women insting.. coz the way he behave with his friend much more caring then his wife...

HAINA ?... never agree 😛 😛


now tell me ! .. tell ready




when you lie... you only going to create more problem



Linsie thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago



dont just admit do something...
EuphoricDamsel thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago

PART : 37 :~

she cried in rain ...and saw the car diappearing in those web of roads she stood there crying in rain eyes swollen tears clearly visible even in the rain she was shivering coz of the coldness she felt she was standing there in order to catch a taxi or an auto so that she can get back home ...

she stood there for an hour but seeing that no sine of anyone she went at the side of the road it was a highway actually she sat on the railing and looked down as if she had nothing to do with this world ...

___________________________________________


ASAD'S POV ...


Meanwhile asad was driving like a maniac still angry at zoya images of their fights were continuosly playing in his head he was furious so furious that he didn't even realise that he had left his life his zoya back in rain he was upset that was his love so low or so fragile that one person only his friend whom he met after many years can shatter it ...

wait ! she ? anahida was she evn coming in between them ?...
he thought and at that moment he felt digusting thinking about how low can his love his zoya think ?...
why she was so possessive about him he thought was it only anahida or was zoya scared about loosing him again maybe she was afraid of loosing him NO his mind shouted ...

she was just trying to put a seed of hatred between him and anahida but his heart felt just the opposite of what his mind was thinking ...

and he was taken out of his world of thoughts as he reached his house he knew that zoya must have reached home by now she was capable of returning home in 2 and a half hours ...

he entered his room and started to search for his clothes but couldn't as zoya only knew where his ironed clothes are kept he was irritated and after some time he called for zoya ...

A:" zoya !... zoya !!! mere kapde kha hai ... "

getting no reply he searched for her in the room she was nowhere to be found he came down and checked the house she stil wasn't there he looked here and there and realisation dawned him he rushed towards the dinning table got his car keys and rushed out ..

he sat in the car and started driving as fast as he could worry careness , was quite visible on his face but one more thing was the most on his face and that was guilt ...

he suddenly remembered that zoya hadn't eaten anything for quite long and now it's been 3 hrs and still she was there standing in rain because of him he rubbed his temples in anger and speeded up the car ...

___________________________________________


Here zoya was standing in rain her vision and eyes both giving up cos of the tears her eyes had huge bags under them she didn't even cry now tears were drained from her eyes and that was clearly visible her tear stained face was just opposite of what she her face was some days back ...

her knees were giving up she was not able to stand any more she was sure that if she din't go home she'd be dying of

"Pneumonia "



Asad finally reached the place where he left zoya but she wasn't there he looked here and there and then he found zoya at the corner of the highway just one step ahead of railing ...

he sighed in relief and jumped out of the car but before he could reach there he stopped in between he saw that she clutched her head with one hand and the other hand was on her lower tummy he felt thousand stabs through his heart and the moment he gained attention was when zoya was about to collapse on the ground ...

he rushed towards her and caught her she was completely wet and was shivering like a thin leaf in wind...

Asad caught her and picked her up in bridal style and placed her gently in the car he occupied the seat next to her and switched on the heater he placed his blazer on zoya's back and drove as fast as he could ...

_________________________________________


He placed zoya down on the couch and switched on the geaser he then took her in the bathroom and slowly pulled of her white saree that was now totally in brown color cos of dirt of the rain and wind ...

he twisted the knob of the shower and and hugged zoya tight so that she didn't fall hot water cleaned her and she opened her eyes to get a blur vision of what was happening she was able to make out that she was in her bathroom with asad she let out a silent cry and tried to push asad away this didn't go unnotice by asad he felt as if he didn't deserve zoya ...

he closed the tap and rubbed her body with a clean white towel and took her out he boltted the door and came back to bed kissed zoya's forehead and murmmerred a short sorry while crying zoya was listening to all this she was not in her complete senses but she was able to make out a bit...

he changed zoya's clothes slowly and HESITANTLY as he felt he was wrong that he left her on the road ...

he made zoya wear a salwaar kameez whose back was dangerously low with two doris the cut of the back almost came till her waist ...

New Salwar Kameez, Salwar Kameez Material, Silk Salwar Kameez Online, Punjabi Bridal Salwar Kameez, Girls Salwar Kameez Online, Online Salwar Kameez, Manish Malhotra Salwar Kameez, Salwar Kameez Virginia, Ready made Salwar Kameez, Salwar Kameez Buy Online, Buy Pakistani Salwar Kameez Online, Salwar Kameez Shopping, Churidar Salwar Kameez, Indian Wedding Salwar Kameez, Ready Made Salwar Kameez Online, White Salwar Kameez For Women, Salwar Kameez Men, Fancy Salwar Kameez, Salwar Kameez For Men, Salwar Kameez Designs 2010, Latest Salwar Kameez 2011, Patiala.

he too changed in his tracks and shirt and came and lied beside her he cares her cheek and felt that it was extreamely hot he was sure that she was very cold and was running through fever he immediately took a thermometer and took her tmp. it 102 and she was cold really cold ...

he placed the blacket over her and started to rub her hands and and feet after sometime feeling that she was still cold he had n other option he wentt inside the blanket made zoya face him her eyes were closed now he held zoya close to his and opened the doris of her kurti with shivering hands he rubbedd her back as fast as he could and even her arms after sometime he felt she was warm a bit so he left her and soon sleep took over him and he ...

slept with zoya in his arms in an intimidate position...

Edited by ASYA4eveAAA - 11 years ago
EuphoricDamsel thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago
important note :

GUYsss as u all know that our beloved ksg

has left the show qubool hai i am totally shattered...

after this news thats y i gave a crappy update ...

but i felt i was blank so i'll complete this story soon...

as i promised but i 'll have to think if i can start a new one

i had 6 - 7 conceppts for the new ff ...

but seeing KSG leaving the show my mind is now completely diverted ...

please motivate me to write more ...

i'll try my best if i can start a story sooon...

IN NEW YEAR !...

and ya please rmember if anyone is writing and ff its a request from me and all forum members please consider KSG as asad !...

till then byeee !

try to be happy !
nilusoni thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
plzzz pm me for updates of your ffs
continue soon
and i agree with you that for us asad is always ksg
plzzz write your new ff also
plzzz pm me for parts
maha2012 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update😊
ksg leaving is really difficult for us😭
for me he's only asad..
plzz continue writing
Linsie thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the pm...




Linsie thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Karan Singh Grover@Asad Ahmed Khan always
EuphoricDamsel thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

Karan Singh Grover@Asad Ahmed Khan always


ALWAYSSS !

Related Topics

Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove

2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor *New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

1 years ago

AsYa FF ~ Broken Ties (chapter 5 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: ExoticDisaster

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Unfolding Yesterday

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts. AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts.

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's day contest - A Bag full of love. cover : oh_nakhrewaali | writer : missFiesty_69 |...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

6 months ago

AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's Day contest - A bag full of love . cover : ExoticDisaster aka Shiri | writer :...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".