season 2Thread 1vaderasehgal sons daughter story. Completed

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prolouge
this story is about four vadera cousins who love their cousins like real sibling ,


who resemble to their parent in every way


like


lookafter eachother in thick & thin


like


sacrifice for eachother if needed


like


get happy in other happiness


like


fulfilling relation like real sibling


after getting raunaq-ranvir-gunjan-madhu as their life-partner their love for each-other will change.


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Maansi- virika's elder daughter , vivaan's elder sister, raunaq's wife.(just like virika)
Jaanvi-virman's elder daughter , vihaan's elder sister, ranvir's wife.(just like virman)
raunaq-mr.&mrs sehgal elder son, ranvir;s elder bro, maansi's husband.
ranvir-mr.&mrs sehgal younger son, raunaq,s younger bro, jaanvi's husband.
vivaan- virika son, maansi's younger brother, gunjan's husband.(just like virika)
vihaan- virman son, jaanvi's younger brother, madhu's husband.(just like virman)
gunjan- mr. & mrs seth, elder daughter, madhu's elder sister, vivaan's wife.
madhu- mr. & mrs seth, younger daughter, gunjan's younger sister, vihaan's wife.



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hmmm
intresting...
Please try to gave prolouge soon...
Little long one...
Likw it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 1
Jeevika aur manvi sabku food serve kar re hi hote hain tabhi viren ku call aate hai aur woh usse attend karne ke liye chala jata hai.
Jeevika : paata nahi kiska call hai jo attend karne ke liye dinner chod gaye viren ji,
Maanvi: aare di koi cilent ka call hoga aap doubt kyun kar rahi hai,
Virat: maanvi sab wifes tumhari tarah doubt karne wale nahi hote,
Maanvi: virat tum kehna chaahate ho ke main doubt karti hun tumpe,
Jaanvi: aare mumma aap baar-baar papa se fight kyun karti hai,
Maanvi: jaanvi tum toh baas apne papa ke team mein ho ek baar vihan ko ajane do phir dekhte hain,
Jaanvi aare mumma ku kya hua?
Virat: not to fear when virat is here main dekh aata hun ,
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Virat: aare yeh andhera kyun kar diya maanvi ne?
Virat: aare maanvi main toh bas maazak kar ra tha sach kahun toh tum aur bhabhi mujhpe aur bhai pe full trust karte ho ab chup hojao na maanvi. ,
Maanvi: nahi virat tum ya jaanvi mujhe hurt nahi kiya bas vihaan ki yaad agayi jab maine uski baat ki aur mere ankhon main ansu agaye,
Virat: sach main na yahi baat hai?
Maanvi: haan woh kuch saal pehle naraz hoke humse se dur chale gaya tha tab se usne apne mumma papa ku avoid kardiya, paata nahi woh kaise hoga? agar vivan nahi hota toh humara vihan akela rehjata,
Virat: haan maanvi tum sahi ho vivan ek dam bhai pe gaya hai jo apne bhai ko akela nahi hone dega,
Maanvi: haan virat vivaan sirf 12 sall ka tha aur woh vihan ke saath chale gaye pehle boarding phir U.S,
Virat: haan maanvi main aur vihan bahot lucky ha jo mujhe bhai mile aur vihan ko vivaan mila,
Maanvi: haan aur main jaanvi bhi jo mujhe aur jaanvi ko jeevika di aur maansi jaise behenein mile haina, Virat: sach main hum hai lucky.
Edited by ayesharose - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2
Viren: jeevika maanvi virat bahar aana ek goodnews hai,
Virat : bhabhi maanvi chalo pata nahi kya goodnews hai bhai ke paas?
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Virat: bhai kahin apko fir se award toh nahi milra best lawyer ka hhmm?
Viren: nahi virat woh baat nahi hai, woh mujhe na vivaan ne call kiya aur kaha ke woh aur vihaan kal 11baje ki flight se india aare hain,
Maanvi: kya? Hamare vivaan aur vihaan aare hain yeh sach haina jiju?
Viren: haan maanvi tumhare vivaan vihaan aare hain,
Virat: dekha maanvi maine kaha tha sab theek hoga toh dekho hogayi na tumhari wish poori, Maanvi: haan virat u r right , Virat: aare wah tum toh lucky ho jo mangti ho mil jata hai, mujhe toh lagta hum sabko tumse wish karani chahiye,
Maanvi: hahaha tum old hogaye ho virat magar baatein bachon jaisi karte ho
, Virat: pretending as he is hurt with maaanvi words,
Maanvi: oops lagta virat ku bura laga, maanvi stops him by holding his hands and turn him to face her and say Maanvi: virat I'm sorry woh main mazak kar ri thi humesha ki tarah tum koi old nahi ho balki tum mere young and cute pati ho I love u,
Virat: hahaha aare mujhe pehle paata hota toh tum yeh 3words kahogi mujhe manane ke liye toh main baar-baar naraz hunga.
Maanvi: virat u liar, Virat: no maanvi I am not liar but I am family member of lawyers samjhi , Maanvi: main bhi ,
Jeevika: Oh ho tum dono do bachon ke parents bangaye ho par ab bhi bachche ho pata nahi as grandparents kaise hoge?
Viren: ofcourse tab bhi aise hi rahenge ,
VirMan : aap bhi shy couple rahoge,
Virika: became serious , VirMan: Together hum solid gaye, VirMan: sorry bhai/di,
Virika: laugh and say buddhu banaya bada maazaa aya hahahahaha
Edited by ayesharose - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Great
like it
awesome starts...
Plz do ur work what u like...
Nd
change the tittle nd make intresting...
That people can saw intrest to open this post..
Nd
also add on tittle which part u updated...
Its just suggesion...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3
Jeemaan in kitchen,
Jeevika: mannu chal hum jaldi se do ghante mein vivaan vihaan ki fav dishes banalete hain, Maanvi: jee di, 2hrs later,
Jeevika: lo sab kuch 1:30 ghante mein bangaya,
Maanvi: so to hai di,
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Virat: bhai aapko koi smell aari hai?
Viren: aare haan chalo check karte,
Virat: haan chalo,
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Jeevika: aap do yahan kya kar re hai,
Maanvi: yeh virat hi jiju ku pakad ke le aya hoga di,
Virat: let's see bhabhi kya kehti hai iss bare main, Maanvi: y not sure,
Jeevika: mujhe lagta hai dono bhai khaane hi ayega hunge,
Virat: dekha bhabhi ne kya answer diya hai,
Maanvi: aap bhaiyon ke chakkar hum jhagda kar baithenge is toh achcha aap dono yahaan se apne-apne khane k plates le jaiye,
Viren-Virat: let's go from here,
Jaanvi: Maansi di sorry main next time se uski harkatein avoid karne ki try karungi ,
Virman-Virika: yeh kya hua?
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Maansi: Jaanvi 8saal ki age se tu promise karti rehti hai but nibhati nahi,
Virat: Maansi beta kya hua?
Maansi: chachu Jaanvi ne ek biker ko dhakka marke gira diye,
Viren: Jaanvi ne kuch kiya hai toh kuch reason toh hoga hi,
Jaanvi: haan bade papa reason toh hai,
Viren: haan toh batao Jaanvi,
flashback Jaanvi: maansi di aj kitni shopping ki na humne haina?
Maansi: haan sach aap chalen late hora hai,
Jaanvi: haan chalo, Maanvi: ouch mera pair,
Jaanvi: Maansi di pain hora hai? Is idiot ki wajah meri behen ko dard hora aur ankhon main aanu ayega na ab toh is bhi pain hoga aur yeh roega an then she push his bike and he falls, Viren: hahahaha Maansi beta Jaanvi ko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha but tum bhi sumjho uska pyar jo woh tumhe dard main nahi dekh payi aur usne usse girah giya,
Maansi:(she cries) I know papa but agar us biker ne Jaanvi ko mara hota toh?
, Jaanvi: aare di sorry but plz aap ro nahi,
Virat & Viren: ek aur sherni & fikarminister,
Maanvi & Jeevika: kya kaha? Aap logon ne humko?
Edited by ayesharose - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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my story will be similar to ehmmbh show
Edited by ayesharose - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4
Maanvi: kya kaha?
Virat : they are reflection of you and bhabhi, anyway aap dono ke bete aate hunge is ghar ke advocate and musician season 2,
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Vivaan & Vihaan: hum aagaye,
Viren: badimaa maa chachi chachu Jaanvi maansi ,
Viren: agaye dono bhai ? Vivaan vihaan hugs everyone and vihaan leaves from there and goes to his room which make maanvi upset but she ignore it,
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Vivaan: Mannu maasi kya hua aapke ankhon main ansoo kyun aaye?
Maanvi: tum dono ko itne saalon baad dekha na isliye
, Vivaan: aap charon ka beta hun main aap kehti ho? Toh phir kyun apni taklif chupa ke mujhe jaata ri ho aap ke main aapka bhanja aur virat chachu ka bhatija hoon,
Virat: kya baatein hori hain aap dono ke bich?
Maanvi: yeh mere aur mere chutku ki baat hai tum mat pado bich main ok, Vivaan: ha ha ha, Virat : pehli baat yeh bachcha nahi raha jo tum usse chutku bolri ho aur dusri baat as a vivaan's chachu mera bhi right hai uspe ok ,
Maanvi: tum toh chachu ho but main maasi aur chachi hoon uski,
Virat: bcoz of me only
, Vivaan: arre maannu maasi virat chachu stop fighting aur maannu maasi I promise u both ke aap dono aur vihaan ke bich ki distance main humesha ke liye mita dunge so mannu maasi no weeping only smiling ok acha main fresh hoke aata hoon,
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Virat: yeh vivaan kya kehra tha tumhe no weeping only smiling tum ro rahi thi kya?
Maanvi: haan woh vihaan bin mile chale gaya tha toh meri ankhon main anso aagaye,
Virat: maanvi sab time ke saath theek ho jayega par tum roke weak mat banau khud ko, jaise pehle haaste muskurate thi toh waise hi raho samjhi meri sherni biwi,
Maanvi: sochlo virat agar main sherni avtar main agayi to tum bura phasoge ,
Virat: y fear when my Jaanvi is here
Edited by ayesharose - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Precap:Vivaan: akhir kab tak easy log apne parents ko haan? Vihaan: main kyun milun un parents se jinke liye mein good for nothing hoon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey
too good
like it
getting fab
but u need more readers...
Plz send pm to others to read ur stories...

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