VIRIKA-TrUeLy MadLy DeepLy In LOVE with U.... -up(pg-114)

sweet_aayushi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So guys here is my very first attempt on a story i read stories

but not write this is the first time i m writing .hope its good i know its not
but still hoping from u guys to read it.thank u to RIDDHI for helping me.it means a lot to me this is only for u and
also REYNA to whom i promised i will
be writing a story when my exams will b over.so gyus please take sometime from
your bust schedule and read my story.Its a story on virika how they meet ,fall
in love with each other and their journey...

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One beautiful morning with a sweet chanting of birds, cold breeze with
sunrays falling straight to the window of a beautiful princess disturbing her
beautiful sleep.she woke up squeezing her eyes saying good morning to herself
and kissing her cute pink teddy bear to which she was cuddled with she saw the
clock and it was 10'o clock her eyes just poped out ,like really she slept for
14 hours??? She questioned herself and went to washroom to freshen up. she went
to their main hall where she saw her mom talking in phone her dad doing some
work on computer and her sister dancing and humming a tune.she could feel
something strange in the atmosphere of her house it was so clean and tidy
predicting that anyone is really coming at her house to visit but who??.she
went near her sister asking who is coming today?</font>

Jeevika - good morning piya!!!(she said in sleepy voice)

Piya - (no response)<

Jeevika - piya???

Piya - (still no response)

As she was in her own world listening to songs on her earphones and
dancing like mad she didnt listen to jeevika and jeevika was irritated by this

Jeevika - (in an angry tone)
piya??? What the hell r u doing???can't u listen I m calling u since 5 min.

Piya - ohhh... i m sorry di calm

down i was just listening to my favorite songs n enjoying u too come and join
me.(she said in a calm tone)

Jeevika - no i am fine u carry on with ur mad dancing reall u dance like
crazy animals.

Piya - (shocked) di don't call me animal i dance really well i have won 3
dance competition(she said proudly sticking her tongue out).i really dance well
that u also know and appreciate.

Jeevika - fine now tell me something..is anyone coming at our place
today??

Piya - di r u a astrologer!! How can u always guess it right all the time.

Jeevika - (htting piya's head slightly)now tell me who is coming and stop
praising me.

Piya - so listen our both aunty and uncle are coming with their children

to stay with us for few days.and with them one more family is coming i donno
who they r but mom said this and they will also stay with us.

Jeevika - O god!!! Who r they?? But its gonna be fun to see them and meet
our cousins we will pull there legs(she said laughing and giving hi5 to her
sister).when they are arriving?

Piya - at 2pm most probably. Our cousins will come first and then they
will arrive.u know they r 2 brothers and 1 sister. one is viren who is doing
engineering like u but is in his last year,yash who is in 1st year doing
fashion designing and the smallest one is payal who is in school in 9th
standard like me.and uncle is a top businessman of delhi and his wife is a
painter+housewife.di u know they are great people.aunty paints so well like our
mom she teaches also.

Jeevika - My god u have whole biography of that family but i have a ques
why r they coming at our place?

Piya - di u know me they r coming at our place i should know all things
about them.and i too dont know why r they coming they r good friend of our
uncle mom said that's why i think...

Jeevika - ok so what's for breakfast today?? I m hungry give me some food.

Piya - go and have it by urself i m not giving let me enjoy my music (she
said sticking her tongue out).

She went to have breakfast and then to
her mom to help her in work. All of them were done with arrangements and was
just waiting them to arrive.

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So guys this was it. My very first attempt i know it was boring and but tell me i
should continue or not and all suggestion are welcomed. Please take a few
minutes from ur busy time and comment and like.it really feels gr8 when u guys
like and comment.thank u for reading and tolerating me.

chapter 1- page 1 ~

chapter 2 -page 5

chapter 3 - page 9

chapter 4 - page 14

chapter 5 - page 20

chapter 6 - page-27

chapter 7 - page-32

chapter 8 - page -39

note - page -42

chapter 9 - page 45

chapter 10 - page 50

chapter 11 - page -54

chapter 12 - page -60

chapter 13 - page -68

chapter 14 - page -71

chapter 15 - page - 76

chapter 16 - page 81

chapter 17 - page 85

chapter 18 - page 87

chapter 19 - page 91

chapter 20 - page 95

chapter 21-page 101

chapter 22 - page 112

chapter 23 - page 114

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-Haju- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Okay this is amazing
And you are gooddd
Why didn't you tried before?
Man I love this
Please continue so and thanks of the pm
Riddhi_S thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Aayuuu!!!! 😃 Sweetie Pie You Write So Well!! I Swear You're Awesome!!!! 😆
Now Update The Story Already!! 🥱 I'M So Excited To Read Further That I Can't Wait Any More!!! 😆 😉

Love The Concept So Much!!! 😛 Haye...Waiting For Them To Meet Now!!! 😃 😳

Ufff! You're Killing Me!! 🤢 😆
Superb Superb Superb!!! 😉 😃 ❤️

Update Fast!! 😆 🤣

And One More Thing Don't Say A Word About Your Story!! 😡 Or I'll Kill Yo In Your Dreams!! 🤢 😆 You're Just Awesome!! 😉
Just Keep Writing More And More And More!! 😃 😛

Take Care!! ❤️
Edited by RiddhiTacker - 11 years ago
sushmakryan thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update ya it didnt look like u are writting first time come to the story how jeevika sister dancing like mental and she dont want join her and another family is viren so ous hero is coming to meet his heroine love the update continue soon thanks for the pm
sumayyah1 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
awesome
superb
amazing
just fab
epic
lovely
cant wait for more
ayushi i want an update now
update a.s.a.p

avni_19 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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reallyy cute and sweett startt... lovedd itt.. keepp continuinggg..
eagr to read the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Grt strt...
Love the concept...
It was sooo sweet+cute...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Splendid Bravoo update
I really liked it
Superb update and story
Continue ASAP
And pm me for sure
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
it was a great concept continue soon dear
suju143 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Superb concept
amazing start
thank for the pm
continue soon

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