OS MERI ZINDAAGI TUM HI HOO pg 47 updt - Page 33

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hi friends
merry christmas to all of u all 🤗
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this is the last part of this os hope u all enjoy it


part1 😛

part2 😛
part3 😛

part4 😛


Part 5:

Pihu was remembering all the time where her mother would do to her how she would make her bath and make her dress and make her study

Ryan and prem wants to see their mother so they were talking to shwetha in skype video chat pradeep was shifted to us best hospitals for best treatment so shwetha is also with him in us he is in coma and he is in medication

Shwetha was talking to ryan and prem and kids were asking for their father

Shwetha:prem ryan papa naa office main hain isliye woh aab aapse baat nahi kar sakthe

Prem:paar mainey papa ko kitna dhin se nahi dekhi

And kept a puppy face

Ryan:haan mumma mujhey abhi dekhnaa hain papa ko

Nurse came and asked shwetha to meet doctor

Shwetha left becoz it was an emergency matter so shwetha left without explaining anything to kids

The skype chat was closed and ryan and prem started crying so loudly that their chubby cheeks became so crimson

Priya:prem ryan hum naa hide and seek khelenge

Ryan:nahi mujhey papa mumma chahiye

Priya:hm woh ajayenge agar aap happy se hide and seek khelenge toh

Prem:saachi

Prem was seeing ryan for answer with eyes expressions

Priya also gave signals to both of them with her beautiful expressions

Priya:hm saachi

Ryan and prem again looked each other and said in unison

Promise

Priya:hm promise

Priya placed her palm on their tiny palms and said promise bending her head to right side

Ram was watching priya intently thinking this is the magic of priya she will make everyone smile with her charm

Ram also decided that he will play with kids so that he can stay for some time with priya

Kids along with priya went to lawn to play

Priya tied a black cloth for prem and slowly rotated him round round and then and ryan and priya were about to hide ryan ran away to hide in the lawn ,

Priya was calling ryan halu se varna chot ayegi

But suddenly some one placed hand on priya shoulder

She turned to other side it was ram

The back ground music bade ache lagte hain was playing

Ram holded her right hand and was taking her somewhere

Priya:mr.kapoor mera haath chodiye

Ram:priya jaldi avoo varna prem ajayega

Priya after hearing this words was smiling to ram, he also smiled to her

Ram took priya to corner they both kneel down hiding beside the shrubs

Prem was searching for priya and ryan and finally prem caught ryan and here priya hair was open and it was splaying along the cool breeze in the lawn ram was just dumbstruck looking at his beautiful wife and mesmerised at her everlasting beauty

Priya got up when ryan shouted

Prem :maine pakad liye

Saying this he was jumping he caught ram becoz ram was hiding there lost in priya's beauty but priya went to some other place when ram was lost in her beauty

Ram made a puppy face

Priya and ryan came out when prem shouted pakad liya

Priya was laughing naughtily at ram seeing his puppy face

Ram was kept a pout when priya was laughing

Myra and pari were watching how priya was playing with ryan and prem they were remembering when priya used to play with them

Prem and ryan were forcing priya to seat for some more time in the lawn

Ram was worried becoz very cool breeze was flowing and it might effect priya's health

Immediately he ran away to green room bought a chocolate colour shall to priya

Priya was seating there with prem and ryan on her 2 sides

Ram came and slowly wrapped priya with chocolate shall and kids with red shall and all the 4 were seating on a metal sofa placed in the lawn

Ram was reminiscing the past days where priya and he were walking in the lawn at night

Kids slept off and priya was carrying ryan on her shoulder when she got up she felt her pallu is caught by someone

She turned back and

Priya:mr.kapoor plz chodiye

She turned back

Prem was holding her pallu and sleeping on ram's lap

Ram just slowly removed pallu tip from prem hand and just smiled at priya even priya smiled at ram.

Both priya and ram carried kids to their green room and priya was sleeping on the bed with kids and ram on the couch

Myra pari and pihu were burning in jealousy they could not digest the fact that her mom was dodging them and being close to other kids

They too some extent realised what priya was hurt but could not realise what their mom went through when they were calling juhi as maa becoz know they are also going through the same phase which priya went through.

They regretted that becoz of them their mom is hurt but did not know what was their mistake

Few days passed the same way priya and ram relation was becoming a bit normal and pihu pari and myra were burning in jealousy and could not see their mother being close to some one else

Even khush joined the kids raya kids and khush had a wonderful time

One day night priya went to freshen up and kids insisted ram to tell a story

Priya was coming out of washroom holding a white towel and gently drying her face with the cloth

Ram was telling raya love story

Ram:ye kahani main ek raj kumar hain aur ek raj kumari hain

Ye raj kumar ke paas naa koi goda hain ya palace baas sirf kuch cars aur ek mansion hain

Aur raj kumari ke paas naa zyada paisa nahi hain paar uski behaviour aur uski saacha dil se woh raj kumari hain

Ek dhin

He started narrating the car accident where they both and continued the story

Ryan and prem were listening very interestingly the story and asking ram many questions

Priya was listening to ram and looking intently at ram when he was narrating the story

Ram stopped the story when priya was clearing her throat

Priya:continue kijiye

Ram even more interestingly narrated the story blushing at his love

Ram was about to leave to sleep on couch when kids forced him to sleep on the bed

Ram ryan prem and priya 4 were sleeping on the bed and ryan and prem have a habbit of placing some one hands on their tummy and sleep

So prem and ryan placed priya and ram hands on their tummy and went to deep slumber

Prem and ryan woke up soon and raya were sleeping

Ryan and prem slowly left the room closing the green room door

Ram hands were in priya palm and they were sleeping peacefully

Priya slowly woke up when the sun was peeping through her window to say good morning to the lovely couple

Ram also woke up when they saw that they were sleeping holding each other hands

They smiled and left to freshen up slowly

Days passed when ram almost succeed in winning priya heart and trust which he lost

One day priya was walking in the lawn and she was about to step on a thorn ram placed his hand and he got bruises and blood was flowing from his hand

Priya:mr.kapoor aap ne isaa kyu kiya aapko khoon aaraa ha hain

She was taking out her handkey and tieing around ram hand

Ram: hm main bardaash nahi kaar pathi agar ye thorn tujhey lagee aur tujhey chot aye

Priya eyes became wet and was recollecting how ram took a bullet for her

Seeing raya juhi realised that they were made for each other and she came in between them and their family

Raya went inside priya was cleaning and first aid with ram hand

Ram was getting pain and the wound was burning when she was cleaning with dettol

Priya was blowing with her mouth slowly when she was cleaning

Priya:aapko zyada dard horaa hain kyaa

Ram:nahi tum hare liye main kuch bhi kaaru mujhey dard nahi hoga priya

Priya was again regaining the sweet memories and was forgetting the bitter truth which happened to their life few months back

Ryan and prem became so close to priya within these 2 months as shwetha did not come online becoz she was busy with her job and taking care of pradeep

One day ryan and prem called priya as maa

Priya smiled and took both the kiddos in her lap and explained them something

Priya:achaa baas kuch dhin maine aapka khayal rakhaa tho main aapki maa bangaayi

Ryan and prem said hm

Priya:baache isaa nahi hain

Maa ka placekoi nahi le saktha joh bhi log humara khayal rakthe woh maa ka roop hotha hain paar maa nahi

Mother figure hothe hain paar mumma nahi

Mumma ne tho itne saal aapka khayal rakha sirf main tho 2months se aapki khayal rakhi thi tho

Aap aapne mumma ka place mujhey dedengey

Ye galat hain naa

Aapki mom aap se bohut pyaar karthi hain tho agar mumma ko patha chale ki aap mujhey maa bhularee tho unhe bura lagega naa

Ryan and prem were listening to priya very carefully

And nodding their head

Priya:hm agar aapke mumma ko aap dono ke ilava kisi aur maa bhulayega toh aapko bura lagega ya nahi

Ryan and prem said hm in unison

Tho main aapki hamesha priya aunty rahengey aur aapka mumma hi aapki maa hogi

Aur kabhi bhi aap aapne mumma ka place kisi ko nahi dena chahiye

Ryan and prem understood everything

Pihu paari and myra juhi was listening to all these things they realised their mistake

Ram came and took pari myra and pihu to their room

Ram: dekho bache main jaanthi hoo

Hum sab ke beech main kuch tensions chalre

Maine ek galthi ki aur aaj main usey sudarna chahti hoo

Mujhey pehle hi aapko samjana tha ki juhi ki maa bhulane se rokhna thaa

I know juhi did a lot of favours to us when priya was not there

Juhi and u all are related by heart i can understand but i can even understand how priya feels when u all call juhi as mom

Jaise app ko priya prem aur ryan se close hotho aapko jho dard hora hain waise hi dard priya ko hora tha jab aap juhi ko mom bulare the

Mujhsey ek galthi hui thi mujhey pehle hi ye sab ke bare main sonchnaa tha

Aap sab ko patha hoya naa hoo

Meri aur priya ki shaadi meri early 40 aur priya ki early 30 main hui

Priya ne mujhse paanch saal dhoor thi humari shaadi ke baad

Thab pihu tum mom ke saath thi

Priya ke paas zyada paisa nahi tha paar phir bhi woh tumhari hare k zidd puri karne ki koshish karthi thi

Pihu was recollecting how her mom fulfilled her snow park wish and how she bought her dresses her allu ke parathe and all

Myra and pari

Tum dono priya ko late 30 main paida hui thi

Us umar main birth dena bohut mushkil ka kaam tha bohut saare complication thi pregnancy main priya ki jaan bhi katre main rehsakthi thi paar woh aapni jaan ki bina parwah kaare tum dono ko janam diya

Kyunki tum dono aur pihu humari pyaar ki nishani woh aap sab se zyada zyada mathlab uski jaan se zyada pyaar karthi hain

Main priya ko insist ki second pregnancy ko abort karne ke liye paar woh nahi maani kyunki woh aapse pyaar karthi hain

Priya tum sab ko aur mujhey uski jaan se zyada pyaar karthi hain

I just hope that i explained u what is priya value in ur life

Ek maa kyaa hothi hain ye main aapko samjaya hoga

Papa am sorry hum ne bohut galthi ki hain

Kisi aur ko hum mumma ka place dena chahre the

They ran to priya in the room and said

Mumma humey maaf kardoo

We are very sorry humne aapki jagah kisi aur ko dena chahthe aab samaj main ayaa ki hum ne kyaa kiya

We are sorry mom so sorry

Juhi came inside this when everyone were talking and she heard all their conversations and realised her mistake

Juhi:am sorry to interrupt ur conversation but

Yes what priya told is right know am able to understand what priya is going through if i were in priya position like coma and my kids would call someone else mom how bad i would feel

I am realising now

From now onwards plz call me juhi aunty

I will be a mother figure to u forever we are related by heart but yes we will be close like before but just that ur mother will be priya and only priya

Pihu myra and pari thank u so much juhi aunty

They hugged her

Priya became emotional

Tears rolled down her beautiful eyes making her face crimson

Rajeev came and shouted juhi ...

Juhi

Juhi and all came out to living room

Rajeev:juhi am so sorry plz forgive me

Plz give me another chance to live without u

Rajeev actually realised that he made a mistake that he cared more for money and left juhi and his kid

He realised his mistake and wanted another chance to live with her

Juhi also realised that ram can never be hers and priya also gave a chance to ram so juhi also went along with Rajeev and naina to Singapore to start a new commencement

Pihu pari and kids realised priya pain and they regretted

And all in unison hugged priya and cried saying sorry

Priya also got tears seeing her kids

She is happy that her kids realised their mistakes and also respect her

Priya: ram thank u so much aaj mere dil main trust aur pyaar dono ko win kiya

Ram smiled and said sorry priya

Priya:sorry kyuu

Ram:aaj tujhey iss situation ki wajah main hoo aur main promise karthi hoo ki main ye galthi kabhi nahi karungi

Even kids said the same things

They all hugged raya with kids

Hugged each other

Kids went off and raya in green room

Ram: priya iss nayi shuruwath se pehle ek chota sa issue maine tumse chupayi

Priya:hm boliye

Ram:priya ye prem aur ryan ye dono mere dosth ke baache hain main indono humari ghar isliye laaye kyunki main kids ko realise karwana chahti ki teri un ke zindaagi main kyaa hain isliye

Woh accident ka natak pradeep ka aur ye sab kuch kiya

Am sorry priya

Main sirf kuch achaa cheez ke liye ye natak kiye

Priya hugged ram and said thank u for coming into my life

Sid and khush were going out they found so much traffic jam

Some lady was lying on the road they went and saw it was Ayesha

Mom

Ayesha

Sid and khush uttered in unison

They took her to hospital and she became normal

Ayesha and sid both apologized to each other and to khush

They started their own paradise and lived in usa

Raya went to eat chat on roads

The chat fellow was keeping pani puri

Ram pani puri fell down from his hand priya was laughing seeing

Ram:kyuu haasri hoo

Priya was laughing more naughtily

Priya:isliye ki the ram kapoor ko pani puri khana bhi nahi araa

Priya gave her pani puri and they both were enjoying each other company

They went to beech and started walking holding each other hands

Their sweet journey continues


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Edited by .sangs123. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was really a nice happy ending.good job.thanks sangeetha for the PM.
Merry X'Mas.
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Posted: 11 years ago
merry Christmas
awesome update
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update Sangs, perfect ending, all of them realise their mistake, Ram's plan was superb,thx 4 PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
all mu is sorted out between raya love the happy ending and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thx for the pm.
Three families united, wow.
Oh it's ram's idea to bring kids close to priya and learn her importance in their lives.
Happy ending.
Good one.

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