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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello buddies...aftr a while m posting sumthing...n its a OS...i had written it a while ago n i completely forgot abt it n my tests being d whole n sole reason😛 so while i was luking for sumthng in d document folder... i found it...well its d vry first thing dat i wrote in pure hindi as all this while i hv been writing merely in engilsh.. jst a try to try sumthing new... jst hope u guys like it...😊😳



Navya's POV

Who jar aha tha..mujhse dur..mujhe juda hokar...me use rokna cahati thi ..uske saath baatein karnaa chahti thi , use satana cahti thi , use ek tight sa hug dena cahti thi ..ekdum pehle ki tarah...par kya kehkar rokti...shayad hum par bhi samay ne apna khel khel diya tha..aisa lag rha tha ki who mera dil apne saath le kar ja hai...haan yeh sach hai ki maine usse pyar kiya tha..aur ab bhi karti hun..ur shayad hamesha karti rahungi...tum mere pehle pyaar the...aur pehla pyaar insaan chah kar bhi bhool nhi skta...jaise tum ja rhe the,,mujhe aisa laga jaise tum mujhe apne saath le jaa rhe ho... iss duniya me har sawal ka jawab nhi hota..aur mujhe nhi pata ki aaj mera haath tumhare haath me kyu nhi hai...shayad taqdeer me hamara saath nhi likha tha...par mukkadar bhi mujhe tumhara pyaar nhi bhula sakti..tumne mujhe sacch pyar kiya tha..aur saacha pyaar mar kar bhi amar rehta hai...tum shayad abhi ja rhe ho par hum jald hi milenge..bt ek baat ka dukh hmesha rahega ki hum ek na ho sake..mujh par kya beeti sirf me janti hun..aankhe rona cahti thi par dil khush tha...ki tum apne sapne ke karib jar he ho...who sapna jo sirf tumne dekhaa tha..maine nhi..aur me tumhare sapne ko adhura nhi dekh skti thi...agar me tumhri zindgi hun toh who sapna bhi tumhri jaan hai...yehi soch kar apne zindagi ki sbse bdi kurbani de di..apne pyaar ki ..apne pyaar ke liye..

Ananth's POV-

maine hi uska haath kisi aur ke haath me thama diya..par apna dil usi ke paas chod aaya..heer ranjhana , romeo Juliet neb hi toh mohabbat ki thi..pr who bhi nhi mil paye the..me nhi chahta tha ki humari luv story incomplete ho..par uski khushi ke liye me usse dur raha..shayad yeh hi pyaar hai..maine humesha hi khuda se yeh manga hi who mujhe mil jaye..khuda ne meri dua qubool bhi ki..par fark sirf itna hai ki who mere saath mere dil me dil hai..kehte hai ki use bhoolana jisse tumne pyaar kiya tha waisa hi hota hai jaise use yaad karma jise hum kabhi mile hi nhi..par dil humesha yeh soch kar kush rahega ki tum kush ho..shayad khuda ne tumhe kisi aur ke liye banaya tha..par ab tumhari khushi ke liye me apna spna pura karunga...




agar bakwas laga toh sry..😳 bt do comment...feel free to point out my mistakes ...n plss hit LIKE..😊

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navya19 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely dear :)) par kya I ska next part hain ya sirf POV???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely emotional u pdate :)) can we get complete story ????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice dear..:) do cont soon..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fantastic...nicely expressed d dil ki baat :):):) do continue :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Meri maa pov dekhe chod diya 😡 puri story chahiye mujhe 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: __Neha__

Meri maa pov dekhe chod diya 😡 puri story chahiye mujhe 😆

mjhe lagta hai bus yeh hi hai...😕 aish storyy btaa na...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -meru-

mjhe lagta hai bus yeh hi hai...😕 aish storyy btaa na...😆

pagal 😆😆 yeh toh sirf trailer tha 😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: __Neha__

pagal 😆😆 yeh toh sirf trailer tha 😆😆

😆 but uss ne likha kyun nhi cont karun gii...😕 os bhi hai yeh???😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing one aish 😛It's quite interesting i feel 😛 but will u cont. this OS or only this much? 😕 Plz do cont. if u can.. 😊

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